My advice to you is this. If you want to write dialogue for an 11 year-old girl, you have to know her. Since Clementine is your favourite character, I assume you know pretty much everything there is to know about her. If not, maybe this can help:
Before the walkers, she was a sweet, kind, gentle-hearted girl who occasionally gets into some mischief. During the apocalypse, she had to rely on Lee to look after her but she also shows that she can be somewhat independent. Like when she survived in her treehouse. Of course, when it comes to witnessing something traumatic (Shawn's death, Carley/Doug's death, Larry's Death, Duck's Death, the list goes on...) it affects her greatly but through each death, she slowly starts to except that bad things can happen.
Even though Lee was her most trusted friend, she started trying to get things done by herself (going through doors, leaving the mansion, leaving the command centre to save Molly, and of course...going to the Stranger). When she's rescued and realizes that Lee was on the brink of death because of her, she feels incredibly guilty and is now forced to take everything he learned from him and use it for her survival. She still shows some of what she used to be in Season one, but now she shows that in the worst of a situation she stands her ground.
Hopefully this helped. I actually did some fan-fic not too long. It's set after Omid's death. If you want to check them out for reference, link's below. Anyways, good luck writing your story!
Why do people keep replying to this guy ? He is enjoying the last few minutes he has left before he gets banned so just go on with your lives and ignore this "thing" !
Why do people keep replying to this guy ? He is enjoying the last few minutes he has left before he gets banned so just go on with your lives and ignore this "thing" !
Thank you! I appreciate the support and advice. I actually never even thought about posting it anywhere. I have always had poor grammar, and i get nervous just posting disscusions and comments. But maybe I should post it....
Good look i luck forward to reading sure do great job. Only advice is write a story you would want to read and every story must have killer … morestart,middle and end as for advice every writer is different follow your instincts personally helps when i go though my whole story in my head before i write and some big scenes i want. Always try to have a villain but who has point and could see why they do there actions also through your actions sometimes you make bad moral decisions to show there's no villains but survivors. Anyway probably said to much good luck and i'll be first to read
I agree with you. Writing dialogue for an adult character is a lot easier since there are less boundaries and it's more free. However, for C… morelementine to be as a kid she must retain some of her childish personality which can also be used to manipulate others to be lenient on her. This would be a much more difficult task for them to make it still feel like the Walking Dead and not like a children's show. Props indeed.
Thank you! I will definatly take a look at your story. I think my biggest fear for writing for her is that I am going to change her. I know she has changed but i dont want that change to come too fast. Like one second she is seson one clem, then the next she is season two clem.
My advice to you is this. If you want to write dialogue for an 11 year-old girl, you have to know her. Since Clementine is your favourite ch… morearacter, I assume you know pretty much everything there is to know about her. If not, maybe this can help:
Before the walkers, she was a sweet, kind, gentle-hearted girl who occasionally gets into some mischief. During the apocalypse, she had to rely on Lee to look after her but she also shows that she can be somewhat independent. Like when she survived in her treehouse. Of course, when it comes to witnessing something traumatic (Shawn's death, Carley/Doug's death, Larry's Death, Duck's Death, the list goes on...) it affects her greatly but through each death, she slowly starts to except that bad things can happen.
Even though Lee was her most trusted friend, she started trying to get things done by herself (going through doors, leaving the mansion, leaving the command centre to save Molly, and of c… [view original content]
I know that you're not suppose to feed trolls but thanks to everyone who called him out. It felt like you were defending my honor or something . I usually ignore them but this is my first discussion to get trolled. You are life long internet friends!!
I know that you're not suppose to feed trolls but thanks to everyone who called him out. It felt like you were defending my honor or somethi… moreng . I usually ignore them but this is my first discussion to get trolled. You are life long internet friends!!
Another thing you could do is slowly change her personality from S1 to S2. That's what I'm doing in my story. It's tough writing stories about characters that weren't made by you but once you get the hang of it, you'll love the results.
Thank you! I will definatly take a look at your story. I think my biggest fear for writing for her is that I am going to change her. I know … moreshe has changed but i dont want that change to come too fast. Like one second she is seson one clem, then the next she is season two clem.
Are you writing about season 1 or season 2 Clem. They have a lot of differences. If you want, message me on fanfictionl.net with a brief synopsis of your story. I'm currently writing a fic centered around clementine as well, we can help each other out.
My username over there is Michael7123, my story is called Reasons for Living.
Another thing you could do is slowly change her personality from S1 to S2. That's what I'm doing in my story. It's tough writing stories about characters that weren't made by you but once you get the hang of it, you'll love the results.
I'm actually doing the 16 month time gap in season two.
It's going to be ( if it goes the way I want ) VERY long. I'm thinking about doing some oneshots about Clem's thoughts through out season two. I would love to talk with you I'll make an account and PM you as soon as possible!
Are you writing about season 1 or season 2 Clem. They have a lot of differences. If you want, message me on fanfictionl.net with a brief syn… moreopsis of your story. I'm currently writing a fic centered around clementine as well, we can help each other out.
My username over there is Michael7123, my story is called Reasons for Living.
I wish you the best of luck!
Thank you! I appreciate the support and advice. I actually never even thought about posting it anywhere. I have always had poor grammar, and i get nervous just posting disscusions and comments. But maybe I should post it....
i think you should wait until the finish of season 2 to have a full compare about her is s1 and s2,maybe she had changed in s2 but who knwos what that little girl will do
Well, I just post my predictions/theories based on important stuff or news. I posted a discussion on Telltale's twitter discussions and when I thought the release date was going to be. It got around 3K views and like 20 upvotes and 2 downvotes...and then got taken down by a moderator. D= But just put effort into the post and expect good response. But then there's always that troll who downvotes everything.
I'm doing a story which is like a novelization of season 2, with some changes. I don't want to spoil them here, but I would suggest you check out my story if you want some examples of good Clementine writing.
I'm actually doing the 16 month time gap in season two.
It's going to be ( if it goes the way I want ) VERY long. I'm thinking about doin… moreg some oneshots about Clem's thoughts through out season two. I would love to talk with you I'll make an account and PM you as soon as possible!
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My interpretation:
My advice to you is this. If you want to write dialogue for an 11 year-old girl, you have to know her. Since Clementine is your favourite character, I assume you know pretty much everything there is to know about her. If not, maybe this can help:
Before the walkers, she was a sweet, kind, gentle-hearted girl who occasionally gets into some mischief. During the apocalypse, she had to rely on Lee to look after her but she also shows that she can be somewhat independent. Like when she survived in her treehouse. Of course, when it comes to witnessing something traumatic (Shawn's death, Carley/Doug's death, Larry's Death, Duck's Death, the list goes on...) it affects her greatly but through each death, she slowly starts to except that bad things can happen.
Even though Lee was her most trusted friend, she started trying to get things done by herself (going through doors, leaving the mansion, leaving the command centre to save Molly, and of course...going to the Stranger). When she's rescued and realizes that Lee was on the brink of death because of her, she feels incredibly guilty and is now forced to take everything he learned from him and use it for her survival. She still shows some of what she used to be in Season one, but now she shows that in the worst of a situation she stands her ground.
Hopefully this helped. I actually did some fan-fic not too long. It's set after Omid's death. If you want to check them out for reference, link's below. Anyways, good luck writing your story!
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/60200/the-walking-dead-a-saving-grace-part-1-fan-made
I wont tell...
Are you a woman or am I being hit on by a man?
Both
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I hope you share the finish product. Good luck! and I look forward to reading it
Why do people keep replying to this guy ? He is enjoying the last few minutes he has left before he gets banned so just go on with your lives and ignore this "thing" !
Does not work
You replied to him too, bro.
Yeah once, But im not gonna feed him everytime he decides to open his mouth
W- why?
Because I am the Thing
You aren't my thing as long as you continue using that.... that.... that
I am everybodies thing.
You find me everywhere.
I find you everywhere.
Thank you! I appreciate the support and advice. I actually never even thought about posting it anywhere. I have always had poor grammar, and i get nervous just posting disscusions and comments. But maybe I should post it....
Definatly! Just what I thought!
scoots away
Why do I always attract the weirdest women?
Thank you! I will definatly take a look at your story. I think my biggest fear for writing for her is that I am going to change her. I know she has changed but i dont want that change to come too fast. Like one second she is seson one clem, then the next she is season two clem.
He made me laugh, and as a result, he tried to avoid me since I actually enjoyed his trolling.
"That's some kind of something."
I know that you're not suppose to feed trolls but thanks to everyone who called him out. It felt like you were defending my honor or something
. I usually ignore them but this is my first discussion to get trolled. You are life long internet friends!!
We are having fun with him and he thinks he is having fun. So...yeah...We are feeding the troll but it doesnt hurt nobody.
Oh yeah definatly! It dosent hurt anyone and it felt like you guys were defending me from his trolling.
Another thing you could do is slowly change her personality from S1 to S2. That's what I'm doing in my story. It's tough writing stories about characters that weren't made by you but once you get the hang of it, you'll love the results.
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Are you writing about season 1 or season 2 Clem. They have a lot of differences. If you want, message me on fanfictionl.net with a brief synopsis of your story. I'm currently writing a fic centered around clementine as well, we can help each other out.
My username over there is Michael7123, my story is called Reasons for Living.
I wish you the best of luck!
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I know right! Good luck!
I'm actually doing the 16 month time gap in season two.
It's going to be ( if it goes the way I want ) VERY long. I'm thinking about doing some oneshots about Clem's thoughts through out season two. I would love to talk with you I'll make an account and PM you as soon as possible!
I feel you with the discussions. I have this MASSIVE fear that I'm going to open a discussion, get trolled, and then get it closed. Then look stupid.
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i think you should wait until the finish of season 2 to have a full compare about her is s1 and s2,maybe she had changed in s2 but who knwos what that little girl will do
I have the troll in my sights. You can't hide from me, coward!
Well, I just post my predictions/theories based on important stuff or news. I posted a discussion on Telltale's twitter discussions and when I thought the release date was going to be. It got around 3K views and like 20 upvotes and 2 downvotes...and then got taken down by a moderator. D= But just put effort into the post and expect good response. But then there's always that troll who downvotes everything.
LOL. I laugh at your stupidity. You ARE right about the fat part. I COULD lose some weight. Thanks.
I'm doing a story which is like a novelization of season 2, with some changes. I don't want to spoil them here, but I would suggest you check out my story if you want some examples of good Clementine writing.
I look forward to talking to you.