Got some work done and did more designing. But when I saw Lizzie kill Mika it just made me drop my pencil. Damn that episode was sad. That was probably the first time I shed a tear while watching the show.
BlazBlue Alter Memory, unfortunately it lacks the majority of the story, I prefer playing the games if you want to understand. Otherwise you'll just be dumbfounded about what the hell is going on lol.
Wow, you'd be an awesome villain! I mean, at first, i thought you were only, like, in between, that maybe you're gonna change and all that, because that's what i was expecting. But you were amazing anyway, because you caught me by surprise there!
Well, since everyone is doing a backstory, here is mine. Probably not as good as your ones, but better than nothing, right? BEWARE: LONG-ASS… more TEXT!
I started off like everyone else these days. I was a student at school, had my friends, had a girlfriend. I simply lived my life the way everyone did. And I was content. However, things changed once a mysterious virus appeared out of nowhere and started killing off people left and right. Before I knew it, the city I lived in was put into quarantine and sealed off from the rest of the world. Suddenly there was no more food, water and medicine supply. We were cut off from the internet without the option of even contacting friends and families outside the quarantine zone. Suddenly, we became prisoners in our own city. And things didn't just stop there.
With every passing day, the military started shrinking the quarantine zone by a couple of meters, killing anyone in their way, believing they… [view original content]
Thank viva le lee for patience finally finished his character after months of drawing on paint found easy thanks to such great character description hope you enjoy
Thank viva le lee for patience finally finished his character after months of drawing on paint found easy thanks to such great character description hope you enjoy
I've hated Lizzie since the beginning, and when she said, "I know what I have to do now" I was like shit she's gonna kill someone. Then she did and I was pissed, but I'm just happy she got what she had coming to her.
Serious Review lets just get supa duper serious right now
I loved this story at first looked at length and though should i read but i did and i'm im glad i did not just did you entertain me thorough but with story of such high quality actually felt short and story of that length seems impossible just so exciting to read with such depth to each point i applaud you for the effort.
Pros
Realistic
It's evil with many kills i like this
Has villain who might actually be hero depend on the readers perceptive that's very hard to write but you succeed love the antihero
Psychology and systems are very intelligent could imagine the tactic working and successful in circumstances i like this
Like my own story ended on point showing your evil but very understandable people you protected betrayed you so begs question what is evil? love that one of same morals of my story
Cons
No markd4547 easter egg at end i had you lol
Maybe length but enjoyed whole thing
Would of liked actually war be expanded so show tactically how you won and how use your powers to take out lots of men
Well, since everyone is doing a backstory, here is mine. Probably not as good as your ones, but better than nothing, right? BEWARE: LONG-ASS… more TEXT!
I started off like everyone else these days. I was a student at school, had my friends, had a girlfriend. I simply lived my life the way everyone did. And I was content. However, things changed once a mysterious virus appeared out of nowhere and started killing off people left and right. Before I knew it, the city I lived in was put into quarantine and sealed off from the rest of the world. Suddenly there was no more food, water and medicine supply. We were cut off from the internet without the option of even contacting friends and families outside the quarantine zone. Suddenly, we became prisoners in our own city. And things didn't just stop there.
With every passing day, the military started shrinking the quarantine zone by a couple of meters, killing anyone in their way, believing they… [view original content]
Serious Review lets just get supa duper serious right now
I loved this story at first looked at length and though should i read but i did… more and i'm im glad i did not just did you entertain me thorough but with story of such high quality actually felt short and story of that length seems impossible just so exciting to read with such depth to each point i applaud you for the effort.
Pros
Realistic
It's evil with many kills i like this
Has villain who might actually be hero depend on the readers perceptive that's very hard to write but you succeed love the antihero
Psychology and systems are very intelligent could imagine the tactic working and successful in circumstances i like this
Like my own story ended on point showing your evil but very understandable people you protected betrayed you so begs question what is evil? love that one of same morals of my story
Cons
No markd4547 easter egg at end i had you lol
Maybe l… [view original content]
BlazBlue Alter Memory, unfortunately it lacks the majority of the story, I prefer playing the games if you want to understand. Otherwise you'll just be dumbfounded about what the hell is going on lol.
That's actually a good idea, like they can mention other people that didn't get to be in it like "Yeah, I once had someone named _______ in our group" etc.
That's actually a good idea, like they can mention other people that didn't get to be in it like "Yeah, I once had someone named _______ in our group" etc.
Comments
Got some work done and did more designing. But when I saw Lizzie kill Mika it just made me drop my pencil. Damn that episode was sad. That was probably the first time I shed a tear while watching the show.
BlazBlue Alter Memory, unfortunately it lacks the majority of the story, I prefer playing the games if you want to understand. Otherwise you'll just be dumbfounded about what the hell is going on lol.
What made it sadder was that Mika reminded me of Clementine for some reason.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S6OifhQ64EM
Sick in the head im not no im not
http://27.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lf74okfwaf1qcupmyo1_500.gif
Wow, you'd be an awesome villain! I mean, at first, i thought you were only, like, in between, that maybe you're gonna change and all that, because that's what i was expecting. But you were amazing anyway, because you caught me by surprise there!
I LOVE me some creepy shit.
Fantastic
Thank viva le lee for patience finally finished his character after months of drawing on paint found easy thanks to such great character description hope you enjoy
Now I have to check under my bed again.
FUCK! That scared me.
...
I think i'd better take a LONG break from the forums for a while.
oh, that's nice.
lol so out of 10 viva was dying to see his character see this will suit him for now
Oh, i know :P
Still, that's art right there.
Scared me too when I saw it first time.. Lot of creepy shit on internet.
I've hated Lizzie since the beginning, and when she said, "I know what I have to do now" I was like shit she's gonna kill someone. Then she did and I was pissed, but I'm just happy she got what she had coming to her.
Serious Review lets just get supa duper serious right now
I loved this story at first looked at length and though should i read but i did and i'm im glad i did not just did you entertain me thorough but with story of such high quality actually felt short and story of that length seems impossible just so exciting to read with such depth to each point i applaud you for the effort.
Pros
Realistic
It's evil with many kills i like this
Has villain who might actually be hero depend on the readers perceptive that's very hard to write but you succeed love the antihero
Psychology and systems are very intelligent could imagine the tactic working and successful in circumstances i like this
Like my own story ended on point showing your evil but very understandable people you protected betrayed you so begs question what is evil? love that one of same morals of my story
Cons
No markd4547 easter egg at end i had you lol
Maybe length but enjoyed whole thing
Would of liked actually war be expanded so show tactically how you won and how use your powers to take out lots of men
Overall 9/10
Aw, shit. you had a backstory, too? Damnit, I think I must have missed it. Sorry man. I would have included you if I had known.
He started the trend actually. Him and Azlyn wanted me to write so one so I did too, and it took off from there.
I don't know a thing about Blazblue, but dat evil grin...fantastic.
Yeah have read of it tell what think king really love to know
That's actually a good idea, like they can mention other people that didn't get to be in it like "Yeah, I once had someone named _______ in our group" etc.
You just revived a cool idea. Long live you
Wait, Azlyn is a girl?
You know it's impossible... You're already chained.
The chapters should be named A New Thread, Disliked for Help, Long Chat Ahead, Around Every Comment, and No Users Left.
I like it.
Thanks, man
Omg...why did i open that shit! lol
A tribute to Greg Miller!
indeed, man. That's what makes them awesome, haha
OOOooohhh I enjoyed that.
XD
That made me laugh!Heheh, yeah, i'm a girl. How come most people don't get my gender from my username? Oh, well.
GHHHH
*struggles, trying to get out of the chains *
Is it pronounced "Az Lin" or "Az Lan" or what?
Well, it's kinda how you pronounce "Lynn", only you add "Az" in front of it, and take away one "l", so it's "Az Lyn".