Don't let fools and trolls get you down, people are always going to dislike and try to stop your efforts. But in the end, the only opinion that matters is your own.
Thanks. But because of that, some people would hate for that; take a look at my posts, a lot have plenty of downvotes on me. And I was just being myself.
Don't let fools and trolls get you down, people are always going to dislike and try to stop your efforts. But in the end, the only opinion that matters is your own.
Okay so do you guys want me to make a second version of this, possibly better? If so upvote as a yes, and downvote as a no.
EDIT: I will make one later on.
Hmm... I searched your name in the credits of TWD and nothing (sorry if I am being creepy about that but I was curious of what department yo… moreu come from). But there's one name that was similar, If I get rid of the period between G and R and add "man", I would get Grossman.... You wouldn't happened to be the Director of Writing, aren't you?
I kinda like it, but Nick shares a bed with Luke.. so... it'll be kinda squishy on the couch for both of them. I'm pretty sure she got to sleep on the couch anyway.
O_O You're a Director/Lead in Cinematic Art....... OH HOLY OF ALL THAT'S MIGHTY! This is awesome! I may have a few problems with it but it was an overall awesome episode. Sorry if the compliment was slightly offensive, just showing pure honesty.
Still, I am shocked even further it's insane I never had this kind of recognition before. My body is shaking. Nice to meet you Graham Ross! Sorry for the confusion. I'm glad this could help your company's work.
BTW if you guys are doing a third season of TWD, I actually got good ideas for it. Like for the first 3 episodes of it, maybe I could draw out an event of one my ideas and show you guys via email. I'm always willing to help now as I now know a little on what it's like to make stories since I started my comic series on this forum. Maybe someday I can work as a Lead Writer there for the third season, unfortunately I'm paranoid of flight and I'm scared of the gun control in US. Anyway I'm always willing to support the story if needed, here's some examples on my writing...
I am also experienced in writing alternative choices and events. This may really help get recognized in my career path to manga since I like making stories and drawing them out. Sorry if I sounded like an egotistical maniac, I just like helping out with ideas. Anyway nice to meet you!
Ah she could be pressured into doing it, too! Somebody could snap at her or she could be interrogated and they ask her "All those people that died at your side. You couldn't possibly have stopped their deaths from happening, right?"
Then as Clementine, you remember if you left/saved Christa, left/saved Pete, had Walter forgive Nick, watch Carver die, and chop off Sarita's arm. Then she makes some sort of decision based on her survivalism.
Maybe they are wanting to make something in the end like that, she has passed for so many things, and remembering all of them, depending on decisions, she may want to kill herself or keep living.
I kinda like it, but Nick shares a bed with Luke.. so... it'll be kinda squishy on the couch for both of them. I'm pretty sure she got to sleep on the couch anyway.
I kinda like it, but Nick shares a bed with Luke.. so... it'll be kinda squishy on the couch for both of them. I'm pretty sure she got to sleep on the couch anyway.
Luke: Move over, Nick.
Nick: Stop being an asshole, I'm hanging off the fuckin' couch.
Luke: Don't be like that, man.
Clementine (NO, NOT ON THE COUCH WITH THEM, BUT SHE CAME DOWN STAIRS, K?): Will you both shut up! glares
Okie dokie guys! Thanks for bumping this thread back up again! I couldn't find the damn thing once I figured my altered version of this. Well without further a due here it is!
When Rebecca leaves the kitchen, Clem would finish her food then get up to put the bowl in the sink. So the gameplay starts where you can walk around the kitchen inspecting everything, you can even look out the window. Now if Sarah lend you her book you have the option to grab it so you can around with Clem holding the book, this would be kinda important. So after you're done all that you can leave the kitchen.
In the main room you can see Luke sitting with Rebecca on the couch, Alvin and Carlos will be talking by the wall. By the door where Carver first arrives you can see Pete looking out, you can ask him how is it out there, and you talk to him about the idea of chopping her arm off from before. You can try to talk to Alvin but Bec would glare at him so he ignores Clem, unintentionally. For Carlos you can talk to him about the shed, his doctor experience(these first two is only available if Clem apologized to him) and you can give him the book Sarah gave you(optional if you grabbed it) he would appreciate this. Now you can go to Luke and Bec where you can hear Luke telling Bec to give Clem a chance at least. Clem will ask where she can sleep so Luke will lead her upstairs.
Up here Luke will stand by the door where it has Pete's watch is(or was), there will be a small hub moment. If you still have the book Luke will mention Clem should probably give it back to Sarah. Here you can go to Sarah's room and see her, there won't be any dialogue choices though UNLESS you have Sarah's book in your hands still. Clem will give Sarah the book back and she'll ask how Clem liked it where you have several dialogue choices, followed by another before you leave where you can say [Thank you] [Goodnight Sarah] [Silent]. After that you will go to Luke and he'll knock the door, Nick will open it and Luke will ask if Clem can sleep on his bed. Nick's decision will be based on your forgiveness choice earlier on.
If you denied his apology will say no cause he's a little pissed still, Luke would argue with him for a sec but Nick will then shut the door. You will see Carlos coming up and going into Sarah's room; Luke will take Clem downstairs so she can sleep on the couch(which Luke sleeps on). Luke and Clem will be downstairs where you can see Pete going into the kitchen to sleep, Luke will sit on the chair and Clem will sit on the couch. Luke will blow out the candles when Clem takes off her hat. Luke will then joke how messy Clem's hair is, Clem would get a little insulted but then smile after realizing he's just teasing. Luke would apologize about Nick and Clem can say [It's alright] [Nick is kind of a dick] [I think I should've been a little nicer that moment.]. For special responses if you choose [Nick is kind of a dick] Luke would laugh and partially agree but he's a real good guy at heart, give him time. If you choose [I think I should've been a little nicer that moment], he'll say there's nothing she can do, just try to make up for it I guess. Clem can agree or say same goes for him too. Afterwards Luke will go to sleep and Clem will lay down, and look at her hat and have a sad look on her before going to sleep.
If you forgave him, Nick will let Clem come in, Luke will then leave. Nick tells Clem she can sleep on his bed, Clem can say [Okay, thanks.] [What about you?]. A little special dialogue with Nick will appear if you ask [What about you?], he'll say he'll sleep on the floor, he can't stand sleeping on chairs. Anyway Clem will take off her hat and it on the side then she'll lay down on the bed and Nick will lay on the floor, Nick will comment her hat, she'll compliment his. They'll talk about how they got their hats, you learn Nick got his in the arcade when he an Luke went to high school. Nick will then go to sleep and you can see Clem looking at her hat, remembering Lee and her family, she'll cry a little before she goes to sleep.
SCENE! Well that's all! Hope you enjoyed it! Tell me you're thoughts, some feedback would be great as I might do another one like this in the future. It was actually pretty fun typing this! Anyway I'll put this in the OP as well.
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Don't let fools and trolls get you down, people are always going to dislike and try to stop your efforts. But in the end, the only opinion that matters is your own.
True dat!
Hell yeah!
nope
I kinda like it, but Nick shares a bed with Luke.. so... it'll be kinda squishy on the couch for both of them. I'm pretty sure she got to sleep on the couch anyway.
This is why we love you guys, even when the wait drives us up the wall.
You are Gross.
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O_O You're a Director/Lead in Cinematic Art....... OH HOLY OF ALL THAT'S MIGHTY! This is awesome! I may have a few problems with it but it was an overall awesome episode. Sorry if the compliment was slightly offensive, just showing pure honesty.
Still, I am shocked even further it's insane I never had this kind of recognition before. My body is shaking. Nice to meet you Graham Ross! Sorry for the confusion. I'm glad this could help your company's work.
BTW if you guys are doing a third season of TWD, I actually got good ideas for it. Like for the first 3 episodes of it, maybe I could draw out an event of one my ideas and show you guys via email. I'm always willing to help now as I now know a little on what it's like to make stories since I started my comic series on this forum. Maybe someday I can work as a Lead Writer there for the third season, unfortunately I'm paranoid of flight and I'm scared of the gun control in US. Anyway I'm always willing to support the story if needed, here's some examples on my writing...
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/64369/official-create-your-own-twd-story-or-fanfic/p15 (FIRST ONE ON IT)
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/64369/official-create-your-own-twd-story-or-fanfic/p17 (NEAR THE BOTTOM)
I am also experienced in writing alternative choices and events. This may really help get recognized in my career path to manga since I like making stories and drawing them out. Sorry if I sounded like an egotistical maniac, I just like helping out with ideas. Anyway nice to meet you!
Ah she could be pressured into doing it, too! Somebody could snap at her or she could be interrogated and they ask her "All those people that died at your side. You couldn't possibly have stopped their deaths from happening, right?"
Then as Clementine, you remember if you left/saved Christa, left/saved Pete, had Walter forgive Nick, watch Carver die, and chop off Sarita's arm. Then she makes some sort of decision based on her survivalism.
That wasn't confirmed though, as maybe oen of them already slept on the couch, or they took turns with the floor.
OwO I'm flattered. If Telltale let's me, I would gladly write Season 3. Depending how Episode 5 goes that is, I already have a good idea on what it could be like in the first 3 episodes. But I do have a story I'm typing that could be entertaining. Head over to Markd4547's thread http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/64369/official-create-your-own-twd-story-or-fanfic
It's in page 15 and 17 for the first two chapters made so far. Hope you like them.
Can you imagine Luke and Nick's struggle on a couch together?
I can.
I thought Luke or Nick say that or something? I just remember one of them saying it in the game, or maybe I'm wrong.
Luke: Move over, Nick.
Nick: Stop being an asshole, I'm hanging off the fuckin' couch.
Luke: Don't be like that, man.
Clementine (NO, NOT ON THE COUCH WITH THEM, BUT SHE CAME DOWN STAIRS, K?): Will you both shut up! glares
I'm sorry.
Oh come now...crying characters are the best parts of our games!
Good point. I mostly said that to avoid people downvoting me for enjoying children tears.
Okie dokie guys! Thanks for bumping this thread back up again! I couldn't find the damn thing once I figured my altered version of this. Well without further a due here it is!
When Rebecca leaves the kitchen, Clem would finish her food then get up to put the bowl in the sink. So the gameplay starts where you can walk around the kitchen inspecting everything, you can even look out the window. Now if Sarah lend you her book you have the option to grab it so you can around with Clem holding the book, this would be kinda important. So after you're done all that you can leave the kitchen.
In the main room you can see Luke sitting with Rebecca on the couch, Alvin and Carlos will be talking by the wall. By the door where Carver first arrives you can see Pete looking out, you can ask him how is it out there, and you talk to him about the idea of chopping her arm off from before. You can try to talk to Alvin but Bec would glare at him so he ignores Clem, unintentionally. For Carlos you can talk to him about the shed, his doctor experience(these first two is only available if Clem apologized to him) and you can give him the book Sarah gave you(optional if you grabbed it) he would appreciate this. Now you can go to Luke and Bec where you can hear Luke telling Bec to give Clem a chance at least. Clem will ask where she can sleep so Luke will lead her upstairs.
Up here Luke will stand by the door where it has Pete's watch is(or was), there will be a small hub moment. If you still have the book Luke will mention Clem should probably give it back to Sarah. Here you can go to Sarah's room and see her, there won't be any dialogue choices though UNLESS you have Sarah's book in your hands still. Clem will give Sarah the book back and she'll ask how Clem liked it where you have several dialogue choices, followed by another before you leave where you can say [Thank you] [Goodnight Sarah] [Silent]. After that you will go to Luke and he'll knock the door, Nick will open it and Luke will ask if Clem can sleep on his bed. Nick's decision will be based on your forgiveness choice earlier on.
If you denied his apology will say no cause he's a little pissed still, Luke would argue with him for a sec but Nick will then shut the door. You will see Carlos coming up and going into Sarah's room; Luke will take Clem downstairs so she can sleep on the couch(which Luke sleeps on). Luke and Clem will be downstairs where you can see Pete going into the kitchen to sleep, Luke will sit on the chair and Clem will sit on the couch. Luke will blow out the candles when Clem takes off her hat. Luke will then joke how messy Clem's hair is, Clem would get a little insulted but then smile after realizing he's just teasing. Luke would apologize about Nick and Clem can say [It's alright] [Nick is kind of a dick] [I think I should've been a little nicer that moment.]. For special responses if you choose [Nick is kind of a dick] Luke would laugh and partially agree but he's a real good guy at heart, give him time. If you choose [I think I should've been a little nicer that moment], he'll say there's nothing she can do, just try to make up for it I guess. Clem can agree or say same goes for him too. Afterwards Luke will go to sleep and Clem will lay down, and look at her hat and have a sad look on her before going to sleep.
If you forgave him, Nick will let Clem come in, Luke will then leave. Nick tells Clem she can sleep on his bed, Clem can say [Okay, thanks.] [What about you?]. A little special dialogue with Nick will appear if you ask [What about you?], he'll say he'll sleep on the floor, he can't stand sleeping on chairs. Anyway Clem will take off her hat and it on the side then she'll lay down on the bed and Nick will lay on the floor, Nick will comment her hat, she'll compliment his. They'll talk about how they got their hats, you learn Nick got his in the arcade when he an Luke went to high school. Nick will then go to sleep and you can see Clem looking at her hat, remembering Lee and her family, she'll cry a little before she goes to sleep.
SCENE! Well that's all! Hope you enjoyed it! Tell me you're thoughts, some feedback would be great as I might do another one like this in the future. It was actually pretty fun typing this! Anyway I'll put this in the OP as well.