S02E03: In which Pierre Shorette cleans up Nick Breckon's mess

edited May 2014 in The Walking Dead
Knew it even before I saw the credits: the tone, characterizations, and overall mentality are all obvious signs that it wasn't written by the same person. Pierre's writing is a lot more straightforward than Nick's, but it lacks the kind of stupid shit found in Ep. 2 (doors left unlocked, convenient zombies, not taking warnings seriously, USE KEY ON KEYHOLE). Every zombie attack was obvious: "There's the breach, here come the walkers." Carver was a straight-up prison-warden psycho who sounded like most people's impressions of Hitler, but then again, Carver always was a psycho.

Walter warned Clem that there would be "politics", but there are no politics to be found in Ep. 3, except for convincing Bonnie that hey, yeah, this guy really is a violent lunatic. The 400 Days optional characters were set aside, as Pierre clearly did not have time for them. Basically, Nick handed Pierre a gigantic tangled mess of fishing line, and Pierre broke out the scissors.

Was it good? Yes. Was it better than last episode? Definitely. Could it have been better? Probably. If Pierre is going to write Ep. 4, he needs to start finding new and interesting things for the characters to do.

Comments

  • edited May 2014
    Nick Breckon is going to write the finale, which makes me nervous. (He said so in an earlier Playing Dead)

    I still think Nick Breckon gets too much hate, though. I'd easily put A House Divided on my top 3 favorite episodes.
  • WTF did I just read? Episode 2 was great, hardly would call anything in it stupid.
  • edited May 2014
    Pierre did a great job with TWAU ep 1....

    But I guess he could have done better with TWD
  • Why do so many people hate Nick Breckon on this forum? Both Ep 2 and Ep 3 were very good and were some of my favorite of the series.
  • Where do you people keep coming from? Ep2 was probably one of the best in whole series so far.
    iorek21 posted: »

    Pierre did a great job with TWAU ep 1.... But I guess he could have done better with TWD

  • I agree

    Where do you people keep coming from? Ep2 was probably one of the best in whole series so far.

  • At Telltale's writers' room

    Telltale Boss: Pierre, you're going write Episode 3 of TWD.

    Pierre: FUCK YES, i have all these great ideas.

    Pierre: I'll have many hubs around the camp, i'll bring back the 400 days character and we'll have lots of character development and interactions. This is going to be perfect!

    Telltale Boss: You only have 90 minutes to tell a story

    Pierre: oh...

    [Breckon texts Vanaman]: Man i knew i should have jumped ship and join your company.
  • Yeah, I don't know why people hate him...
    Team_Purple posted: »

    Why do so many people hate Nick Breckon on this forum? Both Ep 2 and Ep 3 were very good and were some of my favorite of the series.

  • I completely disagree. Carver devolved into a one-dimensional psychopath in episode 3; going out of his way to antagonize everyone he met. A long way to fall from his menacing and collected demeanor from the last episode. I'm glad that you mentioned that another person wrote this episode, cause I knew something was off. Characters lacked depth, and many of them were brushed aside to make room for Carver to be overly violent just so they can build up to his inevitable execution. If I was Nick, I would be incredibly unhappy with what I have to pick up after Pierre is done savaging the characters.
  • Then how can he could have done better with ep2 of TWD? Sure it could always be better but it was bloody awesome already.
    iorek21 posted: »

    I agree

  • Ep 3 better than ep 2? I'm afraid that's not the case, at least in my opinion. I was excited by the prospect that Shorette is writing this episode, mainly because he did an excellent job with TWAU episode. But the way Carver was handled and just how one-dimensional the other characters at the camp were killed all my hype for this episode.

    I'll still look forward to ep 4, but I'm definitely not as hyped as I was about ep 3.
  • edited May 2014
    he is? I didn't know that, who is writing the next episode
    Dragonleaf posted: »

    Nick Breckon is going to write the finale, which makes me nervous. (He said so in an earlier Playing Dead) I still think Nick Breckon gets too much hate, though. I'd easily put A House Divided on my top 3 favorite episodes.

  • I am talking about Pierre and Episode 3...

    Then how can he could have done better with ep2 of TWD? Sure it could always be better but it was bloody awesome already.

  • Ok sorry then, thought you agreed with that asswipe who suggested that ep2 was bad.
    iorek21 posted: »

    I am talking about Pierre and Episode 3...

  • +1, loved how Bonnie was handled in this episode and the dark mood they gave but Carver was somewhat of a letdown compared to what he was in ep2.

    Ep 3 better than ep 2? I'm afraid that's not the case, at least in my opinion. I was excited by the prospect that Shorette is writing this e

  • hahaha no harm done

    A House Divided is top 3 on my list

    Ok sorry then, thought you agreed with that asswipe who suggested that ep2 was bad.

  • ok, ya, I know there were some stupid things that happened in episode 2.

    but that doesn't mean the episode was bad. I thought episode 2 was great except for little things here and there like the turbine part.

    and I will say that I think episode 3 was better than episode 2, but I don't think that makes nick a bad writer, he had to do different scenes to work with than the guy who wrote episode 3.
  • TWAU episode 1 was really great, so I had a lot of expectations to see what could have been done for 203.

    It wasn't bad, but it lacked development and choices

    Ep 3 better than ep 2? I'm afraid that's not the case, at least in my opinion. I was excited by the prospect that Shorette is writing this e

  • Well Clem did the turbine because shes the playable character and you are suppose to have puzzles in this game. Something ep3 didn't at all, which is not bad, Im just saying ep3 was more of a cut screen than puzzle game.

    ok, ya, I know there were some stupid things that happened in episode 2. but that doesn't mean the episode was bad. I thought episode 2

  • edited May 2014
    I always thought the Bonnie hate was blown out of proportions. It's good to see she at least got some development. Carver was indeed a big letdown, a lot of potential wasted. Don't get me wrong, I knew he wasn't the good guy by any means, but I had high hopes we will have some meaningful interactions with him, try to see things from his point of view and somewhat relate to him.

    My hopes were crushed when right from the beginning he slaps Clem and throws Reggie off the balcony just for the sake of being evil, it felt like his actions were forced just so the player hates him. He had no character development in my eyes and I'm sad to see that TT went for the one dimensional psychopath route.

    +1, loved how Bonnie was handled in this episode and the dark mood they gave but Carver was somewhat of a letdown compared to what he was in ep2.

  • Episode 2 had choices. Hell, they even threw two determinant characters!

    But Episode 3 has nothing like that (well it had Sarita bitten, but we still don't know how that will turn out)

    ok, ya, I know there were some stupid things that happened in episode 2. but that doesn't mean the episode was bad. I thought episode 2

  • This episode made me remember of Smoke and Mirrors...
    iorek21 posted: »

    Episode 2 had choices. Hell, they even threw two determinant characters! But Episode 3 has nothing like that (well it had Sarita bitten, but we still don't know how that will turn out)

  • Yeah, some of that was pretty silly. Carver preached about how people could rehabilitate themselves and rejoin the group, and then he goes and kills the one prisoner who was on his side. I know the guy likes to use violence to prove a point, but it seems like it has the opposite effect when it proves him a liar.

    I completely disagree. Carver devolved into a one-dimensional psychopath in episode 3; going out of his way to antagonize everyone he met. A

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