A Walking Dead Fan-Fic by TNT Lee

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  • I've never been called "Pretty",but I guess I'll take it.

    You're a very pretty human being. ;p

  • Tarantino films I love Pulp fiction, Django and kill bills I'm also massive fanboy of Tarantino this going to be good

    Name: Spark

    Age: 20

    Gender: Male

    Backstory: As teen he joined the Army and finished with top honors and medals etc but suffers from mental problems after all the horrors he seen making emotionless and reacts violently randomly. One day during the start of ZA a Walker killed his parents during the night while he was sleeping but lucky he always kept a swiss army knife in his pocket killing the walker.

    When the police arrived they saw blood everywhere with Spark shaking in the corner after a stress attack he was immediately locked up and blamed for killing his parents eventually being sent to a mental institution after blaming the attack on a zombie attack. The government blamed his mental problems from war the case of him killing his parents calling his storie's crazy. A government cover up who knew of the attack by the walkers but wanted to hide it from the public. So Spark was locked up with deep rooted hate for the government and swore revenge escaped during the ZA outbreak

    I'll expand or change anything if you want
  • It is good. I can def work with it. )
    Markd4547 posted: »

    Tarantino films I love Pulp fiction, Django and kill bills I'm also massive fanboy of Tarantino this going to be good Name: Spark

  • OK. I will get some other peoples story going. I have the result of the vote. Voting Closed.
  • edited May 2014
    Thank you I'm so excited to see your stories the first chapter was quality
    tntlee2099 posted: »

    It is good. I can def work with it. )

  • Chapter 1: Alone In The Dark

    REINER

    "Look at all you dead pieces of shit! Your lucky I am not a street cop anymore, because I would be promoted to Captain after arresting every last one of you for jaywalking!"

    Reiner took another swig from his flask and continued to speed along, running over every zombie in his way. He knew he was losing it a little but promised himself that tomorrow he would never drink again. He had to find his wife and son. The first place he was going to check was her sister, Louise's, house. They went there all the time to visit. Louise was wheelchair bound and his wife waited on her hand and foot. While she was doing that his son would watch TV or go hang out in the cellar and go through all of the useless shit that Louise had collected over the years. She was a hoarder. Reiner never cared for her as her ego grew after she was actually one the TV show "Hoarders:Buried Alive".

    As he got approached her house, he saw that there wasn't a lot of zombies in this area yet. He pulled up on the curb and left the car running with the windows up. This would make for a quick escape. He quickly got out and ran up the steps and tried opening the front door. It was locked.

    " Well that is encouraging at least. Or it could be locked because stacked against it is fifty years worth of edible underwear. And we wouldn't want to throw those away would we you FAT BITCH! Nothing attracts a man more than seeing a WHEELCHAIR BOUND WOMAN, SITTING IN A ROOM FILLED WITH OLD TV GUIDES AND HUBBA BUBBA WRAPPERS, TRYING TO LOOK SEXY WHILE WEARING NOTHING BUT A PAIR OF EDIBLE UNDIES THAT DON'T COME UP PAST HER HAM THIGHS AND IN THE FLAVOR OF DR.PEPPER. FUCKING-A THAT SOUNDS LIKE A NUM NUM TREAT IF I DO SAY SO MYSELF!"

    Reiner looked around and saw that there were four zombies heading his way. He cursed himself out for being loud and leaped of the steps and ran around back. He saw the back door and Louise's bedroom window, which was open and had a fan going in it. The groans were getting closer. He had to make a decision quickly.

    1) Try the door.
    2) Go through the window
    3) Shoot the zombies.
    4) Run back to the car and take off and try looking somewhere else.


    BILL BERETTA and SPARK

    Bill was tired but it finally looked like the gun store was fortified. He had lots of guns, plenty of ammo, enough water and canned goods to keep him going for quite awhile. And what he didn't have he could always trade for. He had made a quick sign and put it in the store window to let people know he had guns and ammo to trade. He knew something like this was bound to happen sooner or later. And he had made sure he was safe and prepared. His only window was made of bulletproof glass and his door was metal as well with five locks on it. No one was getting in. Plus he had made a metal drawer in the wall where when a trade happens all he did was send the drawer out to receive and to give.

    He was just about to go out back to use the toilet when there was a knock on the door. He walked over and looked out and saw a man standing there.

    Spark had been keeping to backyards and the shadows as not to be seen. All he had on him was a liter of water and his swiss army knife. He had been lucky so far as none of the dead heads had seen him yet. Seems like he had been running forever. Coming out from around a trailer he saw the gun shop and the trading sign in the window. He had nothing to trade but the person inside didn't know that. He looked up and down the street and saw a small number of dead heads. He quietly ran toward the shop. Gently he knocked on the door. Real quick he stabbed himself in the leg twice. If he wanted to get inside he would have to play "hurt".

    From inside he heard a voice say " What do you need?"

    "Sir, I have been shot in the leg. Someone with a machine gun was firing wildly and killed some innocent people and I got hit. I have nothing to trade but I know that the bullet didn't go all the through. I am bleeding badly and the bullet has to come out. I don't want to pass out on the street and become lunch for these fuckers. Or worse yet, become one. Please, help me."

    Bill could see the bloody leg through the window. He hated to see anyone hurt but he had to be careful. He grabbed his automatic shotgun and began to unlock the locks. When he was through he opened the door, pulled the man in and shut the door. Turning the gun on the man he pointed to a chair. The injured man hobbled over to it and sat down. Bill locked the door back up and went over to the man.

    Spark took the chance to grab a can of food and put it in his pocket while the man turned away from him to relock the door. When the man turned back around Spark grabbed his leg and begin to moan in pain. Bill knew the bullet had to come out, if not the kid could lose the leg or even his life.

    "What's your name son?"
    "Joey, sir."
    "Well, Joey, my name is Bill. Sorry about the shotgun here but trusting people today can cost you your life. But you said you were shot in the leg and I can see the wound. Now I do not have any medical supplies just yet but I know a doctor who is on his way over here to trade medical supplies for a gun or two and bullets to go with it. Now he will be here within the next half hour. If you can wait that long then he will fix you right up. The only thing I can offer you til then is a drink. Would you like one?"
    "Yes, please."
    "I will go grab you a soda as I don't have and hard stuff because I don't drink. Now you sit there and try not to worry about your wound. I will be right back."

    1) Take out the can and hit Bill in the head with it. Then take as much as you can before he wakes up.
    2) Hit Bill with the can and take the shotgun away from him and kill him. Then take over the gun shop and use it to your advantage.
    3) Wait for the doctor to show up with the medical supplies and then come up with a plan to get the medical supplies and anything else you want in the shop.
  • Reiner: 3)

    Spark: 3)
    tntlee2099 posted: »

    Chapter 1: Alone In The Dark REINER "Look at all you dead pieces of shit! Your lucky I am not a street cop anymore, because I woul

  • edited May 2014
    I love you writing style so violent and funny your very talented writer I can't wait to see the next chapter and my character Spark and that decision brilliant also you made my character better then I could ever imagine love it

    2) Go through the window

    The zombies hordes are usually endless amounts no point wasting bullets go through complete the mission family finding his family is worth any risk

    2) Hit Bill with the can and take the shotgun away from him and kill him. Then take over the gun shop and use it to your advantage.

    I need my first kill human's are much smarter so are more dangerous then walkers it must be done then steal everything in the house. Finally when his done Spark will let the doctor heal him tell him bill was a walker and he was attacked then shot the doctor when his healed and take his supplies job done.
    tntlee2099 posted: »

    Chapter 1: Alone In The Dark REINER "Look at all you dead pieces of shit! Your lucky I am not a street cop anymore, because I woul

  • Brilliant but missed the vote great writing :'(
    tntlee2099 posted: »

    Chapter 1: ALONE IN THE DARK He stood in the middle of the kitchen and took one last look around to make sure he got everything. Satisf

  • Reiner 2)
    Spark 3)
  • Reiner: 4- Drive away and search somewhere else.
    Sparks: 3- Be cool and wait for doctor to show up.
    tntlee2099 posted: »

    Chapter 1: Alone In The Dark REINER "Look at all you dead pieces of shit! Your lucky I am not a street cop anymore, because I woul

  • I'm saying you're hot, k?
    TDMshadowCP posted: »

    I've never been called "Pretty",but I guess I'll take it.

  • k.

    I'm saying you're hot, k?

  • Once everybody votes I will close the voting and then post the next three stories. All of the first chapter will be done by 3am eastern time. :)
  • 2)

    and

    2)

    Just something Spark would do.
    tntlee2099 posted: »

    Chapter 1: Alone In The Dark REINER "Look at all you dead pieces of shit! Your lucky I am not a street cop anymore, because I woul

  • edited May 2014
    Just something Spark would do? lol you know my character to well and I remembered you voted to shoot Spark in a previous story thread not sure if good thing or bad thing xD

    2) and 2) Just something Spark would do.

  • Lol, I think it was Raging's story. Well The reason for that was, that you had the sniper and were a better shot, plus you were on top of a roof and the person shooting at you had a handgun. I thought that she would shoot up but miss and hit the building, causing you to get distracted. I thought if she tried to shoot Twistee, he would probably die. But a lot of people voted for that and he got injured, heh.
    Markd4547 posted: »

    Just something Spark would do? lol you know my character to well and I remembered you voted to shoot Spark in a previous story thread not sure if good thing or bad thing xD

  • edited May 2014
    Just be honest you hate me Lee xD only joking I would shoot Spark to if wasn't my character what an ass**** that character is lol.

    Lol, I think it was Raging's story. Well The reason for that was, that you had the sniper and were a better shot, plus you were on top of a

  • Lol, nah man. I wanted to see how you're character would react to that. Haha, I want to see how it'll end up with you guys shooting at ohyoupokedme's crew.
    Markd4547 posted: »

    Just be honest you hate me Lee xD only joking I would shoot Spark to if wasn't my character what an ass**** that character is lol.

  • Sorry about the delay. Lost a loved one. Will be continuing either today or tomorrow. I will need something to do to keep my mind busy. You will see a lot of posts this week. Might even finish Chapter 1.
  • :(
    tntlee2099 posted: »

    Sorry about the delay. Lost a loved one. Will be continuing either today or tomorrow. I will need something to do to keep my mind busy. You will see a lot of posts this week. Might even finish Chapter 1.

  • Got to close this story. Very sorry. I will not be on for awhile. I am leaving soon to go be an writing intern for the TV series, From Dusk Til Dawn season 2. Hope I like Texas. Take care guys and I will talk to you when I get back. :)
  • Hey, good luck.
    tntlee2099 posted: »

    Got to close this story. Very sorry. I will not be on for awhile. I am leaving soon to go be an writing intern for the TV series, From Dusk Til Dawn season 2. Hope I like Texas. Take care guys and I will talk to you when I get back. :)

  • edited May 2014
    Name: Michel Damson

    Age:28

    Gender: Male

    Backstory: Signed up for the military at a young age he was born into a average house in a average neighborhood he always tried to spice things up but it never got him anywhere when he was 18 years old he joined the military when he got back however he was different he had a spilt personality who he called Frank. Frank is Michel's dark side always starting fights and hurting people but he likes everyone to just call him good guy frank. Its unknown exactly what happened to Michel in the military all we know is when he came back he was a new man.

    Personality: Stared out as a jokester always cracking jokes and being a total pain in the ass to his superior officers when he came back however he was a new man never smiled never cracked jokes and never bothered anyone unless they bothered him first that is. Frank on the other hand is pure evil in carnet he does not care what he does to anyone,
    Where he worked until the zombie out break: an old bar in the middle of nowhere he run's the place.

    Other things about him: He's strong, he wears his old army uniform, He drinks, smokes, and has blonde hair
  • Nice! Good luck.
    tntlee2099 posted: »

    Got to close this story. Very sorry. I will not be on for awhile. I am leaving soon to go be an writing intern for the TV series, From Dusk Til Dawn season 2. Hope I like Texas. Take care guys and I will talk to you when I get back. :)

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