make your own scenes for episode 4
how do you want episode 4 to play out? write your own scenes
this is how i want clem to find sarah
*OVERHEAD VIEW OF THE FOREST*
SUSPENSFUL MUSIC IS PLAYING AND THE SHOT OF THE FOREST OVERVIEW IS STARTING TO PAN DOWN TO SEE CLEMENTINE WALKING THROUGH THE WOODS.
SHE SEEMS TO BE SCANNING AROUND LOOKING FOR ANY SIGN OF HER FRIEND SARAH. HER FACE SHOWS CONCERN NOT EXACTLY SCARED BUT THE FEAR WHAT SHE MIGHT FIND UP AHEAD. (http ://i.imgur.com/xUSlYBa. jpg)
SHE SUDDENLY HEARS A NOISE COMING FROM SOME BUSHES TO THE LEFT OF HER AND STOPS DEAD IN HER TRACKS LOOKING IN THE DIRECTION OF WHERE THE NOISE CAME FROM. (http ://i.imgur.com/H8WmbWx . jpg)
SHE WAITS FOR ALMOST A MINUTE WAITING FOR MOVEMENT FROM THE BUSH TO START UP AGAIN BUT IT CEASES TO HAPPEN SO SHE FINALLY APPROACHES CAUTIOUSLY AND PARTS THE BRANCHES TO FIND A TERRIFIED SARAH CURLED UP IN A BALL CRYING SILENTLY SHAKING LIKE CRAZY.
SHE WALKS OVER TO HER SLOWLY AND KNEELS DOWN AND TRIES TO COMFORT HER TRAUMATISED FRIEND
Clementine: Sa.. Sarah? It's me Clem. It's okay you're safe.
Sarah: I saw my dad. He was... He was... one of those THINGS.
Clementine: Shhh... *brings sarah in for a hug and lets her cry into her shoulder*
Clementine: I know I know it was horrible.
Sarah: I tried to go back to him. I thought he wasn't like the others... *sniffs* *Wipes back tears* Maybe he was immune but when I went back there was nothing left of him. Just a moving torso
I...
I.....
Put him out of his misery
*They hug for a good minute or 2 but Clementine slowly brakes away from the hug to tell her friend the reality of the situation*
Clementine: We got to get you back to the others. Saritas dead, Lukes missing and everyone is worried about you. It's not safe here.
Sarah: It's not safe ANYWHERE *she slaps Clementine across the face and she falls back*
Sarah: WE WOULDN'T BE HERE BECAUSE OF YOU. I WISH LUKE AND PETE DIDN'T FIND YOU. WE WOULD STILL BE AT THE CABIN. WE WOULD BE FAR AWAY FROM ALL THIS! MY DAD... my dad would still be alive *falls to her knees staring at the ground*
*Clems sees the pain her friend is in and a tear starts to run down her cheek.*
Sarah: I can't go on like this. I can't live in a world where I'm constantly scared for my own life and lose everyone around. First my mom now my dad I can't. Please I can't do this anymore
*The player is then left with the option to put sarah out of her misery or take her back to the camp*
so any other writers want to take a shot at this?
this is how i want clem to find sarah
*OVERHEAD VIEW OF THE FOREST*
SUSPENSFUL MUSIC IS PLAYING AND THE SHOT OF THE FOREST OVERVIEW IS STARTING TO PAN DOWN TO SEE CLEMENTINE WALKING THROUGH THE WOODS.
SHE SEEMS TO BE SCANNING AROUND LOOKING FOR ANY SIGN OF HER FRIEND SARAH. HER FACE SHOWS CONCERN NOT EXACTLY SCARED BUT THE FEAR WHAT SHE MIGHT FIND UP AHEAD. (http ://i.imgur.com/xUSlYBa. jpg)
SHE SUDDENLY HEARS A NOISE COMING FROM SOME BUSHES TO THE LEFT OF HER AND STOPS DEAD IN HER TRACKS LOOKING IN THE DIRECTION OF WHERE THE NOISE CAME FROM. (http ://i.imgur.com/H8WmbWx . jpg)
SHE WAITS FOR ALMOST A MINUTE WAITING FOR MOVEMENT FROM THE BUSH TO START UP AGAIN BUT IT CEASES TO HAPPEN SO SHE FINALLY APPROACHES CAUTIOUSLY AND PARTS THE BRANCHES TO FIND A TERRIFIED SARAH CURLED UP IN A BALL CRYING SILENTLY SHAKING LIKE CRAZY.
SHE WALKS OVER TO HER SLOWLY AND KNEELS DOWN AND TRIES TO COMFORT HER TRAUMATISED FRIEND
Clementine: Sa.. Sarah? It's me Clem. It's okay you're safe.
Sarah: I saw my dad. He was... He was... one of those THINGS.
Clementine: Shhh... *brings sarah in for a hug and lets her cry into her shoulder*
Clementine: I know I know it was horrible.
Sarah: I tried to go back to him. I thought he wasn't like the others... *sniffs* *Wipes back tears* Maybe he was immune but when I went back there was nothing left of him. Just a moving torso
I...
I.....
Put him out of his misery
*They hug for a good minute or 2 but Clementine slowly brakes away from the hug to tell her friend the reality of the situation*
Clementine: We got to get you back to the others. Saritas dead, Lukes missing and everyone is worried about you. It's not safe here.
Sarah: It's not safe ANYWHERE *she slaps Clementine across the face and she falls back*
Sarah: WE WOULDN'T BE HERE BECAUSE OF YOU. I WISH LUKE AND PETE DIDN'T FIND YOU. WE WOULD STILL BE AT THE CABIN. WE WOULD BE FAR AWAY FROM ALL THIS! MY DAD... my dad would still be alive *falls to her knees staring at the ground*
*Clems sees the pain her friend is in and a tear starts to run down her cheek.*
Sarah: I can't go on like this. I can't live in a world where I'm constantly scared for my own life and lose everyone around. First my mom now my dad I can't. Please I can't do this anymore
*The player is then left with the option to put sarah out of her misery or take her back to the camp*
so any other writers want to take a shot at this?
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anyone else have any scenes they would like to share?