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My 'Amid the Ruins' treatment.

KennyIsGordonFreemanKennyIsGordonFreeman
in The Walking Dead

https://www.evernote.com/shard/s314/sh/d73b5cd1-c049-4334-8e8b-6d7e672fe1d9/abdae08b28ae4753bc20477732b6fc5d

It is really long and I would like to hear your thougts on it. Thanks.

May contain spoilers for 'Amid The Ruins'.

Comments

  • JackmanJackman

    I sense that somthing big is gonna happen

  • EdenJ_EdenJ_

    I'm kind of confused, is this what really happens? or did you just make this up?

  • Conduit42Conduit42

    I think this is just their idea of what'll go down in Amid The Ruins, based off of the achievements and... the (very revealing) in-game choices.

    EdenJ_ posted: »

    I'm kind of confused, is this what really happens? or did you just make this up?

  • KennyIsGordonFreemanKennyIsGordonFreeman

    I made it up using the achievements and leaked choices. As Conduit42 said.

    EdenJ_ posted: »

    I'm kind of confused, is this what really happens? or did you just make this up?

  • stitchfan08stitchfan08

    great story

  • AbstractWolfAbstractWolf

    This is a made up story of an idea of what COULD happen, based on the achievements

    EdenJ_ posted: »

    I'm kind of confused, is this what really happens? or did you just make this up?

  • _Juice_Box__Juice_Box_

    -Not to mention real leaked files.

    AbstractWolf posted: »

    This is a made up story of an idea of what COULD happen, based on the achievements

  • snakecharmerofborgsnakecharmerofborg

    If half of that happens, then it should be a fantastic episode. What you wrote though does sound very plausible and fits in well with the storyline.

  • EdenJ_EdenJ_

    Ah right! That would make sense aha, It's really well done and seems quite realistic of what might actually happen.

    KennyIsGordonFreeman posted: »

    I made it up using the achievements and leaked choices. As Conduit42 said.

  • InKennyWeTrustInKennyWeTrust

    That was really cool! But I want to add something:

    1. I highly doubt that Luke will die. I just have a feeling. And actually, in the preview Kenny said that Luke is gone again. Sorry if I missed something, but you didn't mention it.
    2. I love the way you did that eye scene with Kenny. But you know what would be even more cooler? If you'll have an option to say "You'll always be pretty" and after this Kenny will complain that it's just an excuse and he's still a weak old man who lost everything. And you will get [Comfort him] option.
    3. You didn't mention the moment when Kenny will say "It feels peaceful".
  • nasmadoodlenasmadoodle

    Alvin thought it was a girl not boy. But it was cool!

  • KennyIsGordonFreemanKennyIsGordonFreeman
    edited June 2014

    1. Yup forgot about that. It was meant to be said when Luke was looking for Eddie.

    2. That was meant to be instead of him saying that feels quiet in the preview. Good point though. This meant to answer 3 not two (typo).

    InKennyWeTrust posted: »

    That was really cool! But I want to add something: * I highly doubt that Luke will die. I just have a feeling. And actually, in the pre

  • KennyIsGordonFreemanKennyIsGordonFreeman

    Although when you are looking for Pete or Nick. Rebecca is talking about her child and she mentions it being a she or a he if that man gets his wish or something along those lines.

    nasmadoodle posted: »

    Alvin thought it was a girl not boy. But it was cool!

  • Let_Clementine_LiveLet_Clementine_Live

    When were there leaked files for Amid the Ruins?
    (Sorry if that's a stupid question, but I never heard about it...)

    _Juice_Box_ posted: »

    -Not to mention real leaked files.

  • Conduit42Conduit42

    A thread was made showing all the in-game decisions for Amid The Ruins. You know, the one that had the Episode 4 spoiler tag.

    Let_Clementine_Live posted: »

    When were there leaked files for Amid the Ruins? (Sorry if that's a stupid question, but I never heard about it...)

  • Let_Clementine_LiveLet_Clementine_Live

    Oh, thanks! I heard of that before, but didn't think that was what Juice_Box was referring to. lol My mistake.

    Conduit42 posted: »

    A thread was made showing all the in-game decisions for Amid The Ruins. You know, the one that had the Episode 4 spoiler tag.

  • SartanSartan

    Wonderful script and amazing story! Great job!

  • KennyIsGordonFreemanKennyIsGordonFreeman

    Thanks

    Sartan posted: »

    Wonderful script and amazing story! Great job!

  • KennyIsGordonFreemanKennyIsGordonFreeman

    Last choice is meant to be called Survivalism instead of Pragmatism. Pragmatism is the Sarah one.

  • CathalOHaraCathalOHara Moderator

    You should seriously write for Telltale. This is excellent!

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