Ugh type personality into dialogue is a challenge! But I must keep practising! And yeah I struggled to keep my cool when drawing the poster scene, my god was it hard to be steady! O)_(O
Well, dialogue and characterization aren't easy to master but remember : "Practice makes perfect", as long as you do your best you'll keep getting better at it. (and trust me when I say this because last year I sucked at football/soccer, but then I started practicing a lot and now I'm actually good at it). So just do your best and you'll become better at it . (oh and btw, please take rests now and then because I feel like drawing and writing this comic can be very exhausting).
Well, dialogue and characterization aren't easy to master but remember : "Practice makes perfect", as long as you do your best you'll keep g… moreetting better at it. (and trust me when I say this because last year I sucked at football/soccer, but then I started practicing a lot and now I'm actually good at it). So just do your best and you'll become better at it . (oh and btw, please take rests now and then because I feel like drawing and writing this comic can be very exhausting).
Also a question off-topic, where are you from because from this conversation I've noticed we comment to each other at completely different times so I thought I'd ask where are you from? I'm from Britain in Doncaster btw
Another entertaining issue as always. The main thing you should do to improve is to take maybe 1 extra day and revise everything you've written. Different character voices aside, there are multiple instances of words missing from sentences that make it sound awkward.
Sadly, i wont be able to make a full review because life is catching up, but i will say that the dialogue has improved a bit. Only pet peeve is the typo's or grammatical failz. Im sure you'll deal with them.
P.S I need to rewrite the story change, its a useless wall of text. Ill make it smaller and send it to you Tobster asap.
IT'S HERE!
MIND GAMES PART 2 HAS FINALLY RELEASED!
After discovering the ending events of Part 1; Tobi, Azlyn, Pokedme and Papai begin… mores investigation as tension rises in the Upvote Thread.
After reading it tell me your thoughts and suggestions. Any kind of feedback would be appreciated. Now if you'll excuse I'm gonna pass out from my exhaustion and rest for a few days.
Another entertaining issue as always. The main thing you should do to improve is to take maybe 1 extra day and revise everything you've writ… moreten. Different character voices aside, there are multiple instances of words missing from sentences that make it sound awkward.
Sadly, i wont be able to make a full review because life is catching up, but i will say that the dialogue has improved a bit. Only pet peeve… more is the typo's or grammatical failz. Im sure you'll deal with them.
P.S I need to rewrite the story change, its a useless wall of text. Ill make it smaller and send it to you Tobster asap.
Scooby Dooby Doo, where are you
We need some help from you now
Come on Scooby Doo, I see you
Pretending you've got a sliver
You're not foolin' me 'cause I can see
The way you shake and shiver
You know we got a mystery to solve
So Scooby Doo get ready for your act
Don't hold back, 'cause Scooby Doo
When you come through you're gonna have yourself
A Scooby Snack, that's a fact
Scooby Dooby Doo, where are you
You're ready and you're willin'
If we can count on you Scooby Doo
I know we'll catch the villain
Lol I'm glad. I like how I set it up with caramelldansen!
I like how I did the cosplays: Shaggy(Randomz), Velma(Azlyn), Fred(Papai), Scooby(Pokedme) and Daphnee(Me lol). I thought I'd should do something wacky for a change.
I loved that cover page.
bursts into song
Scooby Dooby Doo, where are you
We need some help from you now
Come on Scooby Doo, I see y… moreou
Pretending you've got a sliver
You're not foolin' me 'cause I can see
The way you shake and shiver
You know we got a mystery to solve
So Scooby Doo get ready for your act
Don't hold back, 'cause Scooby Doo
When you come through you're gonna have yourself
A Scooby Snack, that's a fact
Scooby Dooby Doo, where are you
You're ready and you're willin'
If we can count on you Scooby Doo
I know we'll catch the villain
Lol I'm glad. I like how I set it up with caramelldansen!
I like how I did the cosplays: Shaggy(Randomz), Velma(Azlyn), Fred(Papai), Scooby(Pokedme) and Daphnee(Me lol). I thought I'd should do something wacky for a change.
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Ugh type personality into dialogue is a challenge! But I must keep practising! And yeah I struggled to keep my cool when drawing the poster scene, my god was it hard to be steady! O)_(O
Just read part 2, it was a rather funny and emotional issue (oh and Iove the way how you draw these, it's amazing!).
Thanks. But I suck at dialogue and characterization. I keep trying but it doesn't seem to improve. -___-
Awesome as always Tobi. XD
Well, dialogue and characterization aren't easy to master but remember : "Practice makes perfect", as long as you do your best you'll keep getting better at it. (and trust me when I say this because last year I sucked at football/soccer, but then I started practicing a lot and now I'm actually good at it). So just do your best and you'll become better at it
. (oh and btw, please take rests now and then because I feel like drawing and writing this comic can be very exhausting).
Thanks! And yeah it's killer when doing it alone. O_O
Np, but maybe you could try doing the dialogue with your brother, sister etc.? because everyone has their way of saying stuff.
I live in Brazil, yes, we live far away from each other, haha. Nice to meet you man, come around more often!
Another entertaining issue as always. The main thing you should do to improve is to take maybe 1 extra day and revise everything you've written. Different character voices aside, there are multiple instances of words missing from sentences that make it sound awkward.
Cool I'd love to live in Brazil, can you tell me what time it is over there
Sorry for the delay. It is now 5 PM for me.
Sadly, i wont be able to make a full review because life is catching up, but i will say that the dialogue has improved a bit. Only pet peeve is the typo's or grammatical failz. Im sure you'll deal with them.
P.S I need to rewrite the story change, its a useless wall of text. Ill make it smaller and send it to you Tobster asap.
Loved it great character building chapter, Clementine made me let out a fanboy scream XD, So imaginative and genius applauds
That's the best book title I've ever heard Tobi.
AND PRAISE CLEMENTINE BITCHES I'VE BEEN INTRODUCED!
Hm... If Tobi has an issue with dialogue and such, maybe I could help him out with that if he wants.
That is a big time difference, anyway it was good talking to you Rafioli
XD. I think the book is a easter egg from TWAU when Bigby asks Bufkin what Bricklebit does, he says : It makes animals shit gold.
100 Pages!! >.<
\o/
I already got someone helping me, thanks though. BTW how did you like your character, did I do alright?
Yeah, due to scheduling and my partner was unavailable, there was complications. I barely just finished this one to be honest. >_<
Okely Dokely!
Yep, the whole issue had TWAU all over it! XD
TATERS...
I was amazing, as usual :P
Academy Awards here I go!
Without you guys it wouldn't get this far!
I loved that cover page.
bursts into song
Scooby Dooby Doo, where are you
We need some help from you now
Come on Scooby Doo, I see you
Pretending you've got a sliver
You're not foolin' me 'cause I can see
The way you shake and shiver
You know we got a mystery to solve
So Scooby Doo get ready for your act
Don't hold back, 'cause Scooby Doo
When you come through you're gonna have yourself
A Scooby Snack, that's a fact
Scooby Dooby Doo, where are you
You're ready and you're willin'
If we can count on you Scooby Doo
I know we'll catch the villain
Lol I'm glad. I like how I set it up with caramelldansen!
I like how I did the cosplays: Shaggy(Randomz), Velma(Azlyn), Fred(Papai), Scooby(Pokedme) and Daphnee(Me lol). I thought I'd should do something wacky for a change.
Yep. Caramelldansen is the clown-faced guy on the top right?
Caramelldansen is the dance. x3
Azlyn just answered, the clown was Swagguy even tho he wasn't in issue this time.
Hey Azlyn did you check the PM I sent you?
Hey Tobi, will Derpfaced-Slender from the last part have a more important role later?
He wont be that important, but for him to show up again?
I just gave you the idea, didn't i?
If your partner is ever not available again I'd be glad to give you a hand with editing the writing if you need it.
Have you guys seen the trailer for Amid the Ruins??? It's awesome!
MAYTHELEGENDCONTINUE
Ok, see you around man.
Oh. IDK anything about that dance...
The question here is who hasn't?