TEXT ADVENTURE OF BREAKING BAD

edited September 2014 in General Chat

This discussion may be moved to the Talk section, so I would like to apologize in advance to any mod.

If the general consensus is negative, I probably won't bother with another, and will probably make something else, if you have any suggestion for a new project, Please comment... :)
But, I made a text adventure game which is basically what a Telltale Games' Breaking Bad would be...
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/cx7umxdfp0wghnbts0vtnq/breaking-bad-episode-1-on-the-run

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  • It was ok. I would love for you to use actual paragraphs instead of making one paragraph for each section. Also, the choices weren't very meaningful. Plus, just a tip, don't do a "If you did this click here" thing, it takes you out of the experience. Besides the cliffhanger, I don't really see the point of it being in the Breaking Bad universe (as much as I love the show, I don't really see any point in making my own story in said universe). Speaking of story, I didn't find it all that interesting. It was kind of random and dragged on at times (though I thought the length was good, the time itself could have been better used) Better luck with Episode 2!

  • edited September 2014

    Ok Yeah I kind of accidentally made an if you did this click here, I didn't want to it just kinda happened, yeah I know that the reason for many people watching Breaking Bad was cause it was Walter White's story and not many people fit in to it. And the cliffhanger is just so i the next episode you will hire Saul to help you get Jon/Shawn out of jail. BTW this was kinda to test what i could do with the game and the story, since this was my first text adventure. And the reason for one paragraph is I tend to write long paragraphs and wanted to decrease the size into one so there can be space to see the choices more easier. Hopefully I can do better in ep. 2 story-wise. :P Thanks for the criticism! :)

    SivD1 posted: »

    It was ok. I would love for you to use actual paragraphs instead of making one paragraph for each section. Also, the choices weren't very me

  • Post here what you think of it. :P I take any criticism...

  • It was kinda cool,I guess.Best of luck with episode 2!But,you know...this is the TWD forum,and we don't talk about stuff like Breaking Bad,since it's kinda off topic.

    If you want to post a thread like this in the future,I suggest you post it in the Telltale Talk section(it's made for off topic discussions about stuff and all that).Just my advice ;)

  • edited September 2014

    I know i put that in the description, hoping a mod will move, posted it here so it can gain some notoriety.

    SwagBeast posted: »

    It was kinda cool,I guess.Best of luck with episode 2!But,you know...this is the TWD forum,and we don't talk about stuff like Breaking Bad,s

  • I also want suggestions for some other franchise to work on...

    -XYAB- posted: »

    Post here what you think of it. :P I take any criticism...

  • edited September 2014

    Do you have a suggestion for some other franchise i could do? Since breaking bad is not really something you can fit just anyone into...

    SivD1 posted: »

    It was ok. I would love for you to use actual paragraphs instead of making one paragraph for each section. Also, the choices weren't very me

  • Well... I'm doing The Walking Dead right now, as you know (thanks for helpful feed back on that, by the way). I plan to do other series afterwards though. I'd love to tell you them but I kind of also want them to be a surprise.

    -XYAB- posted: »

    Do you have a suggestion for some other franchise i could do? Since breaking bad is not really something you can fit just anyone into...

  • You know, Telltale Talk isn't as quiet as it used to be since the board has opened up. I'm not saying this just towards you and you aren't in trouble, but I wish that more people in general would stop posting off topic threads in the Walking Dead section just because they think Telltale Talk isn't that busy.

  • The Wolf Among Us?

    -XYAB- posted: »

    I also want suggestions for some other franchise to work on...

  • I was honestly thinking about doing a The Wolf Among Us myself, but it's a universe that would be very hard to pull off. Since there's a crap ton of lore, it would have to be based off of canon. Also, playing as Bigby Wolf in a non-canon story is a difficult thing to make (Telltale somehow pulled it off magnificently though).

    papai46 posted: »

    The Wolf Among Us?

  • I know that it's canon, I said that in my comment. I just said that it would be incredibly difficult, I never said that it would be impossible.

    papai46 posted: »

    The Wolf Amon Us is canon and you could create a new fable or sumthing.

  • The Wolf Amon Us is canon and you could create a new fable or sumthing.

    SivD1 posted: »

    I was honestly thinking about doing a The Wolf Among Us myself, but it's a universe that would be very hard to pull off. Since there's a cra

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    SivD1 posted: »

    I was honestly thinking about doing a The Wolf Among Us myself, but it's a universe that would be very hard to pull off. Since there's a cra

  • Weird. What I was saying though, is that I did say that The Wolf Among Us is canon, and it's fantastic. But for a one-man team to make a somehow canon story on the Fables series would be very difficult.

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