My Version of Season Two (Pass time writing project)

edited September 2014 in The Walking Dead

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  • I agree Christa should´ve stayed around, but I like how they did Kenny. That encounter was super emotional.

  • I agree Kenny's was emotional but just wait until I add more. There is a purpose to Kenny being back already ;)

    ABigBadWolf posted: »

    I agree Christa should´ve stayed around, but I like how they did Kenny. That encounter was super emotional.

  • edited September 2014

    who throws them all in the shed to figure out what they should do with them.

    No offense, but that makes the Cabin Group unsympathetic assholes instead of people who did not have the whole story.

  • Kenny would be aiming his gun at the group obviously and would come off with "Calm the fuck down" routine and Rebecca would definitely prod to have them kept in the shed until they figure out whether or not they can work out a deal.

    AlanSpencer posted: »

    who throws them all in the shed to figure out what they should do with them. No offense, but that makes the Cabin Group unsympathetic assholes instead of people who did not have the whole story.

  • edited September 2014

    But it does not make sense. I very much doubt anybody but Luke could push for a deal, the Cabin Group has the advantage in numbers and, of course, in guns. They just could tell then to go away, and even if everything turned up fine they could not accept simply being locked up in a shed. Besides, the Cabin group could not do that. They only did that to Clem because she was bitten.

    TJ3046 posted: »

    Kenny would be aiming his gun at the group obviously and would come off with "Calm the fuck down" routine and Rebecca would definitely prod to have them kept in the shed until they figure out whether or not they can work out a deal.

  • Christa is begging for shelter because she is pregnant. However, Kenny comes off as his usual self so they don't know whether they can trust them. Then there's Clem and they don't want to put a little girl out. You would have Carlos, Rebecca, and maybe Nick arguing that they shouldn't be there but the rest arguing for why they should.

    AlanSpencer posted: »

    But it does not make sense. I very much doubt anybody but Luke could push for a deal, the Cabin Group has the advantage in numbers and, of c

  • edited September 2014

    Christa is begging for shelter because she is pregnant.

    Okay, this makes sense. And I suppose Christa and Clem could guilt trip Kenny into accepting to be locked in the shed. But the Cabin Group just throwing then in the shed is no really in character. They are not bad people.

    TJ3046 posted: »

    Christa is begging for shelter because she is pregnant. However, Kenny comes off as his usual self so they don't know whether they can trust

  • Eventually the screams go silent and Carlos walks out quietly. Clem can ask what happened and Carlos will answer that the baby did not make it.

    Zombie baby? I wouldn't handle this shit, just the attic boy was too fucking sad for me.

  • just the attic boy was too fucking sad for me.

    What about zombie Duck?

    fallandir posted: »

    Eventually the screams go silent and Carlos walks out quietly. Clem can ask what happened and Carlos will answer that the baby did not make it. Zombie baby? I wouldn't handle this shit, just the attic boy was too fucking sad for me.

  • Not quite but expect a twist with this in Episode Three when I get to writing that portion.

    fallandir posted: »

    Eventually the screams go silent and Carlos walks out quietly. Clem can ask what happened and Carlos will answer that the baby did not make it. Zombie baby? I wouldn't handle this shit, just the attic boy was too fucking sad for me.

  • Luke, Pete, Alvin are pretty much all for sheltering them but Carlos, Nick, and Rebecca would be against it. So it's split but they come to a resolution. Like I said, Carlos would be very antagonistic to everyone. He's Larry on steroids basically.

    AlanSpencer posted: »

    Christa is begging for shelter because she is pregnant. Okay, this makes sense. And I suppose Christa and Clem could guilt trip Kenn

  • Thank the gods you dont work for telltale

  • edited September 2014

    Well, the whole reason Nick argued against Clem is because he thought she was bitten, and Rebecca should be sympathetic to Christa because, you know, both are pregnant.

    TJ3046 posted: »

    Luke, Pete, Alvin are pretty much all for sheltering them but Carlos, Nick, and Rebecca would be against it. So it's split but they come to a resolution. Like I said, Carlos would be very antagonistic to everyone. He's Larry on steroids basically.

  • Okay well I can add this but Nick is basically afraid of Kenny and Rebecca at this point in time isn't pregnant. That comes into play later.

    AlanSpencer posted: »

    Well, the whole reason Nick argued against Clem is because he thought she was bitten, and Rebecca should be sympathetic to Christa because, you know, both are pregnant.

  • If this is what I'm going to get then I'm not going to bother. That was utterly rude and you didn't even offer any positive criticism.

    Rhaeygar posted: »

    Thank the gods you dont work for telltale

  • edited September 2014

    Ah, okay, then. You should have mentioned that.

    So in this version Carver did not rape Rebecca?

    TJ3046 posted: »

    Okay well I can add this but Nick is basically afraid of Kenny and Rebecca at this point in time isn't pregnant. That comes into play later.

  • Sorry about that. I'm just trying to write this out. This will probably take a while but I will keep coming back to it.

    Not yet. Episode Three is a lot different and takes place over a longer period of time. The rape would happen in that period. My Episode Three is pretty dark. I'll get to that eventually.

    AlanSpencer posted: »

    Ah, okay, then. You should have mentioned that. So in this version Carver did not rape Rebecca?

  • I finished my version of episode One so I hope you guys like that and I'll work on episode two soon.

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