Writing an interactive story, would like feedback.
I really...really... dont want to spoil the story for you, so I'll just let you read it.
https://writer.inklestudios.com/stories/rd69
Now that that's been settled, a few things I should mention: The characters will all be based off of the classes from Valve's Team Fortress 2, you take the role of the soldier. And the person you meet after you leave the house in this story is the Medic.
What can I improve upon?
How can I make the dialogue seem more fluid and natural?
Anything else?
Thank you.
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Just sayin but this is the wrong section there's a forum game section
you need Conga! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8e6wTd2jrWk
Thanks, I edited the post to be submitted into that section.
What's the difference between this section and the other?
It´s cool!
The forum games is where interactive stories are supossed to go
Not bad, actually it is cool...
Thanks! What did you like?