Name: Inquisitor Hadrax Ishmael Ignacio Jacobim IV (and he wants people to use his full name)
Age: real age 417, but physical 30
Gend… moreer: Male
Occupation/Job before being captured: He is the prophet of the lord who has been given the mission to smite all evil on gods domain.
Country of Origin: Spain
Backstory: He was born in to the inquisition and it was there he learned that he had been given the power to destroy all heresy and heretics in the name of the lord. He traveled all over the world to seek and fiend people that worshiped the wrong faith and let's say purify them. He saw the raise and falls of empires, he killed for the Vatican and preached for the Nazis during WWII. He has always done everything by the "book" and never questioned the church orders.
Appearance: He dresses like the spanish inquisition from monty python. He his rather tall and skinny. His head and face his clean shaven
Personality: As long as peop… [view original content]
well is ok to be powerful but he's also immortal "steal life and power of others to extend his life." he steal power and life, after he used his power several times will become stronger then god it self... it may also steal god power )
you can add a bio with all stolen powers, at least make him have only one power at the time or make him have a weakness.
If he absorbs a person that has a power, that dose give him the power it only adds more years for him, He would live much longer but not gain the power. (the stronger the power the more life)
well is ok to be powerful but he's also immortal "steal life and power of others to extend his life." he steal power and life, after he use… mored his power several times will become stronger then god it self... it may also steal god power )
you can add a bio with all stolen powers, at least make him have only one power at the time or make him have a weakness.
He is only immortal when he steals power and if i got that right you still can kill him he just can steal you life (by touch?) there are people that can shoot fire and freeze him or blast him away with shock waves so i think he is not too op
well is ok to be powerful but he's also immortal "steal life and power of others to extend his life." he steal power and life, after he use… mored his power several times will become stronger then god it self... it may also steal god power )
you can add a bio with all stolen powers, at least make him have only one power at the time or make him have a weakness.
If he absorbs a person that has a power, that dose give him the power it only adds more years for him, He would live much longer but not gain the power. (the stronger the power the more life)
well ist the question if he can just as you said steal the power by looking at someone or if he has to touch him but even if not you can team up one distracts him the other gives him a headshot with fire or a lightning or wahatever and it says he only uses his power if someone heretic (now that i think of it Vi and he are propaply not gonna get along)
let me help you...
he can transform in a dinosaur is ok he can be killed...
my characters:
"Vi can summon weapon from veil/void,… more she can't control host for ever, usual she come when is in danger or emotion are very strong."
how your character should be:
"When he touch someone, he can steal life and power from others to extend his own life, also he posed only the current stolen power."
any case if he just look at foe and stole their life and power he's god,
well ist the question if he can just as you said steal the power by looking at someone or if he has to touch him but even if not you can tea… morem up one distracts him the other gives him a headshot with fire or a lightning or wahatever and it says he only uses his power if someone heretic (now that i think of it Vi and he are propaply not gonna get along)
that the main reason why I'm panic!!! he will kill my characters because... well, he can do it(Vatican orders), and I know he can be killed easy but not if he stole power and life with just a look at you, fortunately he can't do that.
well ist the question if he can just as you said steal the power by looking at someone or if he has to touch him but even if not you can tea… morem up one distracts him the other gives him a headshot with fire or a lightning or wahatever and it says he only uses his power if someone heretic (now that i think of it Vi and he are propaply not gonna get along)
that the main reason why I'm panic!!! he will kill my characters because... well, he can do it(Vatican orders), and I know he can be killed easy but not if he stole power and life with just a look at you, fortunately he can't do that.
Two of the soldiers placed their hands unto the girl, and the ground beneath them began to shake. One of the soldiers noticed the ground beginning to crack apart, so he immediately seddates the girl and she’s out cold. They mumble something on the walkie talkie and suddenly, Donnie sends out a shock wave out of his right hand. It was a powerful one, and having the blast go directly through one the soldiers head, it was no doubt he was dead. It destroyed his eardrums allowing a massive amount of blood to leak from it.
The soldier immediately retaliate firing their assault rifles at Donie. He hides behind a rock and sends more shockwaves at them. One of the soldiers responded to a voice on their walkie’s. They signal a sniper on a nearby cliff. The sniper is loaded with the same chemical used to sedate superhumans and it is fully loaded, ready to take down Donnie. However, our hero manage to destroy the cliff with the sniper, sending him crashing down to the ground. “Let the girl go, and I wont hurt you!” Donnie yelling, but they don’t respond, they begin to back away.
A large swirling flame appeared around Donnie. The heat was so powerful it was causing damage to him, but not burning him. From the flames a young man emerged, he immediately sedated Donnie and ordered the soldiers to take him away. Donnie Howl – Apprehended
Jake Andros
Jake Andros was doing doing his best to avoid the soldiers pursuit. Having the ability of power replication, he bother the ability of a superhuman who could adapt to anything, allowing him to breath under water until he could get ahold of another one. Jake hid under a small lake. He could see the soldiers at the very top, staring down at him. He swam down further and hid in a underwater cave from them. Inside the cave was a open, sunlight… It looked so beautiful he thought and decided to try his luck and escape through there.
He climbed up towards the light and once he got up there, soldiers were waiting for him. He dropped down and made his way back towards the water. In came the soldiers firing their sedates. He was nearly out of reach until of the darts hit lif left leg, he fell into the water and began to fall asleep. The last thing he saw was the exit he was going for.. Jake Andross – Apprehended
Jason Ulfred
He is watching the security screen as the soldiers begin to breach his mansion. He rises up out of his seat and summons Vi to his side. “Trouble master?” Vi to Jason. He nods then Vi merges with him. He now wields a sword and shield, and then the alarm goes off. A explosion follows after blasting the door to his lab and then the soldiers, swarming the lab and Jason.
Jason and Vi immediately makes quick work of the soldiers, decorating the lab with their blood. They fire multiple rounds of sedate darts at Jason, but in this form, they cannot harm him. Now with nearly every soldier dead, a strange middle age man enters the room, applauding Jason for his performance. "Impressive impressive, Jason. You utilize dark energy very well. I never seen anything like you before. I am quite impressed, really.” Jason wipes the remaining blood from his weapon and ask the man who he is and what is he doing here. The man adjusts his glass then rubs his hands together. The room begins to tilt sideways and Jason begins to see things. He is attacked by strange illusions, fighting them off with all his power.
They tire him down, but he isn’t giving up let. He sends a massive wave of energy at the man, seemingly killing him. “What a mess” Jason as he prepares to return to normal, but Vi warns him and the man appears behind Jason’s placing his hand on his shoulder. Jason then loses conscious. The man then observes his wounds and calls in soldiers to take Jason away, then proceeds to casually exit the lab was humming a tune. Jason Ulfred – Apprehended
Conor Moss and Andrew Locke
Somewhere on the outskirts of London, Conor Moss is fighting for life trying to avoid being captured by the soldiers. Using his power, he transform into a tyrannosaurus rex and mows down as many he can. He grabs one of them with his powerful jaws and turns them into a pile of gore. The sedate darts are barely working, but after a thirty shots, Connor begins to feel dizzy show he turns into a condor and retreats to a safe place.
He now find himself on a hill where the sedate begins to kick in. He feels even more dizzy, sleepy then final dozes off. Now Connor is defenseless against the soldiers. They managed to pinpoint Connors location, and immediately begin to seize him, however they are killed by Andrew Locke who freezes them solid.
Andrew notices the unconscious Connor and then hears more soldiers arriving at his location, he is then left with a choice.
Day one of the siege, continued
[Help the girl]
Two of the soldiers placed their hands unto the girl, and the ground beneath them bega… moren to shake. One of the soldiers noticed the ground beginning to crack apart, so he immediately seddates the girl and she’s out cold. They mumble something on the walkie talkie and suddenly, Donnie sends out a shock wave out of his right hand. It was a powerful one, and having the blast go directly through one the soldiers head, it was no doubt he was dead. It destroyed his eardrums allowing a massive amount of blood to leak from it.
The soldier immediately retaliate firing their assault rifles at Donie. He hides behind a rock and sends more shockwaves at them. One of the soldiers responded to a voice on their walkie’s. They signal a sniper on a nearby cliff. The sniper is loaded with the same chemical used to sedate superhumans and it is fully loaded, ready to take down Donnie. However, our hero manage… [view original content]
Day one of the siege, continued
[Help the girl]
Two of the soldiers placed their hands unto the girl, and the ground beneath them bega… moren to shake. One of the soldiers noticed the ground beginning to crack apart, so he immediately seddates the girl and she’s out cold. They mumble something on the walkie talkie and suddenly, Donnie sends out a shock wave out of his right hand. It was a powerful one, and having the blast go directly through one the soldiers head, it was no doubt he was dead. It destroyed his eardrums allowing a massive amount of blood to leak from it.
The soldier immediately retaliate firing their assault rifles at Donie. He hides behind a rock and sends more shockwaves at them. One of the soldiers responded to a voice on their walkie’s. They signal a sniper on a nearby cliff. The sniper is loaded with the same chemical used to sedate superhumans and it is fully loaded, ready to take down Donnie. However, our hero manage… [view original content]
Day one of the siege, continued
[Help the girl]
Two of the soldiers placed their hands unto the girl, and the ground beneath them bega… moren to shake. One of the soldiers noticed the ground beginning to crack apart, so he immediately seddates the girl and she’s out cold. They mumble something on the walkie talkie and suddenly, Donnie sends out a shock wave out of his right hand. It was a powerful one, and having the blast go directly through one the soldiers head, it was no doubt he was dead. It destroyed his eardrums allowing a massive amount of blood to leak from it.
The soldier immediately retaliate firing their assault rifles at Donie. He hides behind a rock and sends more shockwaves at them. One of the soldiers responded to a voice on their walkie’s. They signal a sniper on a nearby cliff. The sniper is loaded with the same chemical used to sedate superhumans and it is fully loaded, ready to take down Donnie. However, our hero manage… [view original content]
[Help Connor and run.] also will be nice to use Vi instead of Jason when he is transformed because "Vi immediately makes quick work of the soldiers" is just you give credit to Jason instead of Vi also "The man then observes his wounds" what was that don't tell me.!.!.!
also this
"Jason wipes the remaining blood from his weapon and ask the man who he is and what is he doing here."
to
Vi wipes the remaining blood from her weapon and Jason tells Vi to ask the man who he is and what is he doing here.
Day one of the siege, continued
[Help the girl]
Two of the soldiers placed their hands unto the girl, and the ground beneath them bega… moren to shake. One of the soldiers noticed the ground beginning to crack apart, so he immediately seddates the girl and she’s out cold. They mumble something on the walkie talkie and suddenly, Donnie sends out a shock wave out of his right hand. It was a powerful one, and having the blast go directly through one the soldiers head, it was no doubt he was dead. It destroyed his eardrums allowing a massive amount of blood to leak from it.
The soldier immediately retaliate firing their assault rifles at Donie. He hides behind a rock and sends more shockwaves at them. One of the soldiers responded to a voice on their walkie’s. They signal a sniper on a nearby cliff. The sniper is loaded with the same chemical used to sedate superhumans and it is fully loaded, ready to take down Donnie. However, our hero manage… [view original content]
Day one of the siege, continued
[Help the girl]
Two of the soldiers placed their hands unto the girl, and the ground beneath them bega… moren to shake. One of the soldiers noticed the ground beginning to crack apart, so he immediately seddates the girl and she’s out cold. They mumble something on the walkie talkie and suddenly, Donnie sends out a shock wave out of his right hand. It was a powerful one, and having the blast go directly through one the soldiers head, it was no doubt he was dead. It destroyed his eardrums allowing a massive amount of blood to leak from it.
The soldier immediately retaliate firing their assault rifles at Donie. He hides behind a rock and sends more shockwaves at them. One of the soldiers responded to a voice on their walkie’s. They signal a sniper on a nearby cliff. The sniper is loaded with the same chemical used to sedate superhumans and it is fully loaded, ready to take down Donnie. However, our hero manage… [view original content]
Day one of the siege, continued
[Help the girl]
Two of the soldiers placed their hands unto the girl, and the ground beneath them bega… moren to shake. One of the soldiers noticed the ground beginning to crack apart, so he immediately seddates the girl and she’s out cold. They mumble something on the walkie talkie and suddenly, Donnie sends out a shock wave out of his right hand. It was a powerful one, and having the blast go directly through one the soldiers head, it was no doubt he was dead. It destroyed his eardrums allowing a massive amount of blood to leak from it.
The soldier immediately retaliate firing their assault rifles at Donie. He hides behind a rock and sends more shockwaves at them. One of the soldiers responded to a voice on their walkie’s. They signal a sniper on a nearby cliff. The sniper is loaded with the same chemical used to sedate superhumans and it is fully loaded, ready to take down Donnie. However, our hero manage… [view original content]
Day one of the siege, continued
[Help the girl]
Two of the soldiers placed their hands unto the girl, and the ground beneath them bega… moren to shake. One of the soldiers noticed the ground beginning to crack apart, so he immediately seddates the girl and she’s out cold. They mumble something on the walkie talkie and suddenly, Donnie sends out a shock wave out of his right hand. It was a powerful one, and having the blast go directly through one the soldiers head, it was no doubt he was dead. It destroyed his eardrums allowing a massive amount of blood to leak from it.
The soldier immediately retaliate firing their assault rifles at Donie. He hides behind a rock and sends more shockwaves at them. One of the soldiers responded to a voice on their walkie’s. They signal a sniper on a nearby cliff. The sniper is loaded with the same chemical used to sedate superhumans and it is fully loaded, ready to take down Donnie. However, our hero manage… [view original content]
Day one of the siege, continued
[Help the girl]
Two of the soldiers placed their hands unto the girl, and the ground beneath them bega… moren to shake. One of the soldiers noticed the ground beginning to crack apart, so he immediately seddates the girl and she’s out cold. They mumble something on the walkie talkie and suddenly, Donnie sends out a shock wave out of his right hand. It was a powerful one, and having the blast go directly through one the soldiers head, it was no doubt he was dead. It destroyed his eardrums allowing a massive amount of blood to leak from it.
The soldier immediately retaliate firing their assault rifles at Donie. He hides behind a rock and sends more shockwaves at them. One of the soldiers responded to a voice on their walkie’s. They signal a sniper on a nearby cliff. The sniper is loaded with the same chemical used to sedate superhumans and it is fully loaded, ready to take down Donnie. However, our hero manage… [view original content]
Backstory: Brian's family was among some of the more wealthy people, paying his way through some of the top schools and eventually securing a job with NASA. Although he has a lot of money from his family, he is not the stuck up rich prick everyone would expect. He likes to help out and get his hands dirty.
Name: Brian Davidson
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Occupation: NASA scientist
Country of origin: USA
Backstory: Brian's family was amo… moreng some of the more wealthy people, paying his way through some of the top schools and eventually securing a job with NASA. Although he has a lot of money from his family, he is not the stuck up rich prick everyone would expect. He likes to help out and get his hands dirty.
Appearance: tall, short brown hair, green eyes,
Personality: Hands on, devoted, hard worker
Superhuman power: Control over gravity.
Comments
That may be too powerful
There are a few pwople that are also very powerfull
We have people that can turn in to demons and dinosaur, so it can be debatable if it is to op
well is ok to be powerful but he's also immortal "steal life and power of others to extend his life." he steal power and life, after he used his power several times will become stronger then god it self... it may also steal god power
)
you can add a bio with all stolen powers, at least make him have only one power at the time or make him have a weakness.
If he absorbs a person that has a power, that dose give him the power it only adds more years for him, He would live much longer but not gain the power. (the stronger the power the more life)
let me help you...
he can transform in a dinosaur is ok he can be killed...
my characters:
how your character should be:
any case if he just look at foe and stole their life and power he's god,
He is only immortal when he steals power and if i got that right you still can kill him he just can steal you life (by touch?) there are people that can shoot fire and freeze him or blast him away with shock waves so i think he is not too op
sorry is my bad then, I mistook/mislead his power... so is just immortal.
nea, it was me that was not clear with the power. But yea only immortal
I am curios what will happen if Selene Kate use her power to him... assume that he have 417 year!
well ist the question if he can just as you said steal the power by looking at someone or if he has to touch him but even if not you can team up one distracts him the other gives him a headshot with fire or a lightning or wahatever and it says he only uses his power if someone heretic (now that i think of it Vi and he are propaply not gonna get along)
My brain hurts thinking about it
that the main reason why I'm panic!!! he will kill my characters because... well, he can do it(Vatican orders), and I know he can be killed easy but not if he stole power and life with just a look at you, fortunately he can't do that.
after Selene Kate will use her power, you character will become: one blink and mass steal life from Earth...
LoL
Dude let's team UP!
But i think Jason (or Vi) is smart enough to realise that he is some religious dude and that i would not be to smart to change forms in his sight
you don't get it!!!
"usual she come when is in danger or emotion are very strong."
well then he has to get a hold of himself
Well thats how its done
NO, NEVER, SELENA LOVE DEMONS
That's sexy
Day one of the siege, continued
[Help the girl]
Two of the soldiers placed their hands unto the girl, and the ground beneath them began to shake. One of the soldiers noticed the ground beginning to crack apart, so he immediately seddates the girl and she’s out cold. They mumble something on the walkie talkie and suddenly, Donnie sends out a shock wave out of his right hand. It was a powerful one, and having the blast go directly through one the soldiers head, it was no doubt he was dead. It destroyed his eardrums allowing a massive amount of blood to leak from it.
The soldier immediately retaliate firing their assault rifles at Donie. He hides behind a rock and sends more shockwaves at them. One of the soldiers responded to a voice on their walkie’s. They signal a sniper on a nearby cliff. The sniper is loaded with the same chemical used to sedate superhumans and it is fully loaded, ready to take down Donnie. However, our hero manage to destroy the cliff with the sniper, sending him crashing down to the ground. “Let the girl go, and I wont hurt you!” Donnie yelling, but they don’t respond, they begin to back away.
A large swirling flame appeared around Donnie. The heat was so powerful it was causing damage to him, but not burning him. From the flames a young man emerged, he immediately sedated Donnie and ordered the soldiers to take him away. Donnie Howl – Apprehended
Jake Andros
Jake Andros was doing doing his best to avoid the soldiers pursuit. Having the ability of power replication, he bother the ability of a superhuman who could adapt to anything, allowing him to breath under water until he could get ahold of another one. Jake hid under a small lake. He could see the soldiers at the very top, staring down at him. He swam down further and hid in a underwater cave from them. Inside the cave was a open, sunlight… It looked so beautiful he thought and decided to try his luck and escape through there.
He climbed up towards the light and once he got up there, soldiers were waiting for him. He dropped down and made his way back towards the water. In came the soldiers firing their sedates. He was nearly out of reach until of the darts hit lif left leg, he fell into the water and began to fall asleep. The last thing he saw was the exit he was going for.. Jake Andross – Apprehended
Jason Ulfred
He is watching the security screen as the soldiers begin to breach his mansion. He rises up out of his seat and summons Vi to his side. “Trouble master?” Vi to Jason. He nods then Vi merges with him. He now wields a sword and shield, and then the alarm goes off. A explosion follows after blasting the door to his lab and then the soldiers, swarming the lab and Jason.
Jason and Vi immediately makes quick work of the soldiers, decorating the lab with their blood. They fire multiple rounds of sedate darts at Jason, but in this form, they cannot harm him. Now with nearly every soldier dead, a strange middle age man enters the room, applauding Jason for his performance. "Impressive impressive, Jason. You utilize dark energy very well. I never seen anything like you before. I am quite impressed, really.” Jason wipes the remaining blood from his weapon and ask the man who he is and what is he doing here. The man adjusts his glass then rubs his hands together. The room begins to tilt sideways and Jason begins to see things. He is attacked by strange illusions, fighting them off with all his power.
They tire him down, but he isn’t giving up let. He sends a massive wave of energy at the man, seemingly killing him. “What a mess” Jason as he prepares to return to normal, but Vi warns him and the man appears behind Jason’s placing his hand on his shoulder. Jason then loses conscious. The man then observes his wounds and calls in soldiers to take Jason away, then proceeds to casually exit the lab was humming a tune. Jason Ulfred – Apprehended
Conor Moss and Andrew Locke
Somewhere on the outskirts of London, Conor Moss is fighting for life trying to avoid being captured by the soldiers. Using his power, he transform into a tyrannosaurus rex and mows down as many he can. He grabs one of them with his powerful jaws and turns them into a pile of gore. The sedate darts are barely working, but after a thirty shots, Connor begins to feel dizzy show he turns into a condor and retreats to a safe place.
He now find himself on a hill where the sedate begins to kick in. He feels even more dizzy, sleepy then final dozes off. Now Connor is defenseless against the soldiers. They managed to pinpoint Connors location, and immediately begin to seize him, however they are killed by Andrew Locke who freezes them solid.
Andrew notices the unconscious Connor and then hears more soldiers arriving at his location, he is then left with a choice.
[Help Connor and run.]
[Fight off the rest of the soldiers]
[Leave Connor]
Great part thanks
[Help Connor and run.]
So, the bad guys have superhumans in their ranks too... that's certainly interesting. Great part again, I like these introductions a lot.
[Help Connor and run.]
Be a hero, Andrew!
[Help Connor and run]
Nice T-Rex action
[Help Connor and run.] also will be nice to use Vi instead of Jason when he is transformed because "Vi immediately makes quick work of the soldiers" is just you give credit to Jason instead of Vi also "The man then observes his wounds" what was that don't tell me.!.!.!
also this
"Jason wipes the remaining blood from his weapon and ask the man who he is and what is he doing here."
to
Vi wipes the remaining blood from her weapon and Jason tells Vi to ask the man who he is and what is he doing here.
[Fight off the rest of the soldiers]
[Fight off the rest of the soldiers]
[Help Connor and run]
If your still taking characters, I had an idea for a good one.
This song it doesn't fit well... but here it is.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ogMNV33AhCY#start=0:00;end=3:55;cycles=-1;autoreplay=true
It's in your eyes, a color fade out
Looks like a new transition
The starting up and shaking your ground
Turning your head to see a new day calling
Does it feel like a head to lean on?
A snapshot from where you were born
I'm looking for your hand in the rough
You're caught in the wire
Well, I'll lift you out
Leading on the action
Caught in a cell phone's rays
Bleeding on a sofa
Staring at the waistline
He's coming and she knows it
Even though she knows why
Footsteps in the hallway
Girl, you haven't got time
You gotta get out
Go far away
You gotta get out
Go far away
Darkness in the bedroom
Maybe she is resting up
Maybe she was out late
Just come back from the club
I can't hear her breathing
Something doesn't seem right
Killer in the hallway
We're living on a set time
We gotta get out
Go far away
You gotta get out
Go far away
Name: Brian Davidson
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Occupation: NASA scientist
Country of origin: USA
Backstory: Brian's family was among some of the more wealthy people, paying his way through some of the top schools and eventually securing a job with NASA. Although he has a lot of money from his family, he is not the stuck up rich prick everyone would expect. He likes to help out and get his hands dirty.
Appearance: tall, short brown hair, green eyes,
Personality: Hands on, devoted, hard worker
Superhuman power: Control over gravity.
That's cool one :P, I mean his power
Thanks! Although I thought his power could be a little OP