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Can You Guys Help Me Come Up with a Name

ralo229ralo229
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I'm making a short film for my video production class and I still haven't found a name yet.

It's about a teenage girl named, Amber, who is house sitting for an old friend and every time she goes over to his house, she passes by a tunnel. And every time she passes by the tunnel, she hears a crying sound coming from within it. With each passing day, the crying gets more and more loud and intense which terrifies Amber. But one day, the crying stops and Amber decides to enter the tunnel armed with only a flashlight and a kitchen knife. After she enters the tunnel, she eventually finds a girl (who was mentioned in the news having gone missing earlier in the film) crying while in a fetal position. When she lifts her head, she has blood streaming from her eyes. She then attacks Amber off screen and sometime later we hear the crying sound from the tunnel again. Only this time we see Amber who is pale and has blood streaming from her eyes.

I've just been calling it, The Tunnel for now, but I hate that name and think it's very generic. If you guys think you can come up with a good title, please comment. Thanks.

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  • BigBlindMaxBigBlindMax Banned

    Sounds cool!

    Red-Eye maybe. I may be biased because Red Eye was an urban legend where I grew up.

  • LingvortLingvort
    edited January 2016

    "Don't Cry".

    Also, "Hush, Little Girl".

  • CarL_JCarL_J
    edited January 2016

    Blood Eyes / Red Eyes maybe?

    Also, that story sounds like The Witch from Left 4 Dead 2

    EDIT: pics:

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  • Omid's catOmid's cat Banned
    edited January 2016

    "Tunnel of Love".

    I assume the story is a metaphor and it's about loosing virginity.

  • SpaceTalesSpaceTales

    This is the only valid answer.

    Omid's cat posted: »

    "Tunnel of Love". I assume the story is a metaphor and it's about loosing virginity.

  • ralo229ralo229

    Ooooh. I like Don't Cry. Thanks man.

    Lingvort posted: »

    "Don't Cry". Also, "Hush, Little Girl".

  • LingvortLingvort

    No problem.

    ralo229 posted: »

    Ooooh. I like Don't Cry. Thanks man.

  • HiggsBoson2142HiggsBoson2142

    Where Light Fades?

    ¯_(ツ)_/¯

  • ralo229ralo229

    That's a pretty good one too.

    HiggsBoson2142 posted: »

    Where Light Fades? ¯_(ツ)_/¯

  • ralo229ralo229

    Huh. Didn't notice the similarities until you brought it up.

    CarL_J posted: »

    Blood Eyes / Red Eyes maybe? Also, that story sounds like The Witch from Left 4 Dead 2 EDIT: pics:

  • DomeWing333DomeWing333

    What about "Echo"? It could refer to both the sound of the crying reverberating through the tunnel and the re-occuring nature of the curse.

  • WarpSpeedWarpSpeed

    A Cry From Within

    OR

    Next Time Call The Police The First Day And Things Like This Won't Happen To You

  • ralo229ralo229

    Yeah, I noticed that plot hole after I wrote the first draft. I figured I'd address it by saying that she's the only one who can hear it.

    WarpSpeed posted: »

    A Cry From Within OR Next Time Call The Police The First Day And Things Like This Won't Happen To You

  • ralo229ralo229

    That's a great one.

    DomeWing333 posted: »

    What about "Echo"? It could refer to both the sound of the crying reverberating through the tunnel and the re-occuring nature of the curse.

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