The Walking Dead: Real Monsters (Fanfic)

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  • edited August 2013
    Are you gonna put it on fanfiction.net soon? I'll read it there cause I can't read it now since, it's 22:06 over here in England, too tired to read.

    It should be there now. :)
  • edited August 2013
    Ok then, I'll read it tomorrow since its now 22:41.
  • edited August 2013
    Wow... Just wow... this was amazing. Charlie is just... wow, I am speechless. This is fantastic, I can tell you put a lot of effort into this. So much unexpected stuff happened. I am seriously just mind blown right now this is so good.

    When you post something new up, I do Nate's crazy-eyed smile. Keep on going, I'm doing quite a bit of fanart for this. I should have been finished sooner, but I scrapped a couple sketches so I could keep the concept but do a better design. I may be a while, but when I'm done it will be great, so keep posting!
  • edited August 2013
    Goddamn that was awesome! God job once again Visambros.
  • edited August 2013
    Thecat101 wrote: »
    Wow... Just wow... this was amazing. Charlie is just... wow, I am speechless. This is fantastic, I can tell you put a lot of effort into this. So much unexpected stuff happened. I am seriously just mind blown right now this is so good.

    I can tell you put a lot of effort into this

    You don't even understand! This chapter was so hard for me to write! You see, what happened was that I had to change what was going to happen. What is now going to be chapter 4 was originally most of chapter 3. When I realized that wasn't going to work out very well, I split it up. But I split it in such a way where 6/7th (maybe more) of chapter 3 was now chapter 4, which left only 1/7th (or less) of the original chapter 3 for me to work with.

    So I was completely stumped for ideas for how to stretch in to last an entire chapter. It took me about a day to re-write what was going to happen. When I actually began writing, it was like the fic didn't want to be written. Even though I knew what was going to happen, I couldn't seem to get my story down on the computer.

    As I was writing, I actually entertained the idea of stopping all together. It wasn't a serious thought, but it was the first time I thought of doing that ever since I started this fic. I managed to finish obviously, but it was so hard. I thought it was only going to take me a few days to write this chapter, but it took me an entire week! But seeing comments like this:
    Harpadarpa wrote: »
    Nice story bro. Less happened in this one, but it's still pretty good.
    Goddamn that was awesome! God job once again Visambros.
    Thecat101 wrote: »
    When you post something new up, I do Nate's crazy-eyed smile. Keep on going, I'm doing quite a bit of fanart for this. I should have been finished sooner, but I scrapped a couple sketches so I could keep the concept but do a better design. I may be a while, but when I'm done it will be great, so keep posting!

    It makes the hard work worth it. Thank you all so much.
  • edited August 2013
    It is so good, you give me reason to continue to write my Fan Fic when I am bored, thanks for your amazing work.
  • edited August 2013
    I have a problem writing mine sometimes, cause I get distracted easily, this is why I put my head down and keep going, thank you Visambros!
  • edited August 2013
    Only fanfic I've ever done is a 36-page one for Team Fortress 2.

    I don't think I could equal to the Walking Dead's storytelling standards though.









    And screw you, Charlie. No pun intended.
  • edited August 2013
    I am up to page 26, how long do you think it should be?
  • edited August 2013
    Okay, I was thinking that would be a good idea.
  • edited August 2013
    My sister drew this for me and its so cute! It's Nate and her interpretation of Vaughan
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    I love it! So cute!
  • edited August 2013
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    Nate is the best.
  • edited August 2013
    Visambros wrote: »
    My sister drew this for me and its so cute! It's Nate and her interpretation of Vaughan
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    I love it! So cute!

    That is cute.
  • edited August 2013
    That is really sweet.
  • edited August 2013
    News

    I finished writing the plans for chapter 4 (it's two and a bit pages long oh my god) so I should start writing either today or tomorrow. That doesn't mean it will come out soon though, it might take me a while to finish because this chapter is going to be long.

    Another thing about chapter 4, it's going to be the "calm before the storm" episode of the series. Don't get me wrong, things are still going to happen, but it won't be as stressful as the other chapters.

    On an unrelated note, I want there to be a tvtropes page for my fic. I can't stop thinking about it. I can't make it myself though because I have no idea how, so yeah. :(
  • edited August 2013
    TVtropes, destroying lives for quite sometime, I just started up my Fan Fic, sorry if it sounds like I am competing ageist you, I really am not just funny timing.
  • edited August 2013
    TVtropes, destroying lives for quite sometime, I just started up my Fan Fic, sorry if it sounds like I am competing ageist you, I really am not just funny timing.

    Tvtropes is just too addictive.

    Ha ha, I don't see it that way at all. Don't worry about it. Do you have any idea when you'll be done?
  • edited August 2013
    Not really, I just finished act 1 today, I have to acts to go and I currently have 33 pages with 26,197 words, quite a lot.
  • edited August 2013
    URG it's so tough to write my fan fic when you're me, I only did at least 3 sentences in one f*cking day. *cries in frustration*
  • edited August 2013
    If you need help with anything I will help, from one bro to another.
  • edited August 2013
    Also Cany your name is in the opening credits for my Fan Fic, which is up and running now.
  • edited August 2013
    Thanks guys I know who to turn to if I need help.... Kenny...... Nah I'm just kidding, it's you.
  • edited August 2013
    666 CANY POSTS! AAAh!

    Lol bad joke.
  • edited August 2013
    I know, thanks :D

    Also, why did you mention me exactly? Besides being your friend?

    Well for being a good friend, giving me inspiration with your Fan Fic, and the fact you are going to be one of two members that will be a survivor somewhere.
  • edited August 2013
    Your welcome.
  • CanySupportCanySupport Banned
    edited August 2013
    This and all other fanfics hers are terrible. u should be ashamed of urself visaumbros
  • edited August 2013
    This and all other fanfics hers are terrible. u should be ashamed of urself visaumbros

    Stop trolling, seriously.
    Nobody likes you.
  • edited August 2013
    Stop trolling, you are making everything worse here.
  • edited August 2013
    ...
  • edited August 2013
    That asshole, he just made my Fan Fic four stars, that asshole I did nothing to him, hell I phrased him on his first post, mods please something about this.
  • edited August 2013
    I don't care anymore, this Fan Fics had months of work put into them, heart and souls of real hardcore fans, they tried real hard to be good and a lot of them did well, why do this to everyone's pride and joy.
  • edited August 2013
    Anyways, aside from the page of death wishes, I'm lookin' forward to part four. I'm not really one to write fanfictions though. I myself write comics. Albeit simple ones.
  • edited August 2013
    I've almost finished a some art work for this. In about two days, I'll post it up!
  • edited August 2013
    Thecat101 wrote: »
    I've almost finished a some art work for this. In about two days, I'll post it up!

    Awesome! Thank you!
  • What the HELL!!!!

    This layout looks really cool, but it has completely ruined the way the fic looks on this website! What I'm I supposed to do? Can I continue to post this fic here? Do I have to fix every single chapter?

  • Same problem in my fan fic, it seems to post some dash at some parts randomly and it cuts off at random points, I think they may have just killed fan fics.

  • That sucks! They don't even have the option to do advanced texts, so it's not like I can even go back and fix anything! I don't know what to do, but I'm hoping that the advanced texts come back so I can try to work something out. I really don't want to not post this fic here anymore.

    Same problem in my fan fic, it seems to post some dash at some parts randomly and it cuts off at random points, I think they may have just killed fan fics.

  • Me nether, my chapters are really long, I already had 72 chapters, so if I want to carry on there will be 1000 chapters by the end instead of 200 or so chapters, and the old ones are screwed up and I can't seem to fix it, it really is Youtube.

  • Visambros, I come here as a representative of Ben Paul's forum, Real Monsters can continue again there, it has a delete button, a edit button, it also has a large character limit that will not cut paragraphs in half, a lot of old Walking Dead sub forum guys are there, like me, Ben, Kenny, Bubba, I waste my time, and plenty of others, I hope you get this message, the forum is the Walking Dead forum on Pro Boards just so you know, this is Bioshock Infinite WD signing off.

  • Great! This sounds awesome! I'll keep this in mind. Thank you so much.
    I hope that telltale fixes this though. I don't think they will, but I can hope :(

    Visambros, I come here as a representative of Ben Paul's forum, Real Monsters can continue again there, it has a delete button, a edit button,

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