Can you please give me some Tips?

https://paper.fiftythree.com/1411448-Vovo-Crazy/11122442

Hi everyone!
So, If you can see this drawing, can you plese tell me how can I make more in the TellTale style?
And how can I improve it?
Thank you so much!

Sorry about my English mistakes...

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