*FEEDBACK NEEDED!* Anti-Bullying essay
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Bullying is one reason many people depressed or sad all around the world, it can make people feel worthless and like they aren’t special. According to DoSomething, a government group that specializes in getting others to take a stand against bullying, approximately 16,000 students have skipped school all because of bullying. But, that is only one thing that happens because of bullying. Whether a student is being physically bullied, emotionally bullied, or verbally. It must be put to a stop!
“What are some other effects that bullying causes, and what can I do to stop bullying?”
Bullying can come in all shapes and sizes, unfortunately. And because of that, bullying is a hard thing to go through. Sometimes, the effects can vary based on the type of bullying. (As stated, there are three main types of bullying. Physical, emotional, and verbal bullying.) Most victims of bullying’s grades drop low compared to those who have never or rarely been bullied. Sometimes, it can even lead to Depression, Anxiety, and even Trauma. And very, unfortunately, it can lead to self-harm. No matter the age of the victim, bullying takes a toll on its victim at alarming rates.
It also can lead to other mental illnesses, such as anorexia. And according to several news/media outlets, bullying has been found to change the brain structure of its victim.
“How can I stand up for those who are being bullied?”
There are many ways that you can stand up for those who are being bullied, for instance, call the bully by their name and call them out for what they did. It is important to not insult or provoke the bully. Some people create groups to protect victims of bullying, and then when the bullies see that their victim has a group, they feel intimidated and then back off most of the time. Another way is to tell someone is in proper authority. Most of the time, that stops them.
You can also do the same by yourself if you are the victim.
Bullying is a worldwide phenomenon and it is our job to stop it before it worsens. Because if you were the kid who was being bullied, you would want help too. And it is possible to stop most bullying. So, if we can work together and stand up for those who are being bullied, the bullies will go away!