My song please rate

edited January 2011 in General Chat
This is from an album I released about a year ago. The quality isn't great because I don't know how to read music and I'm self taught with the sequencer I use, but I think it came out ok.
should I post more?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3_FCfNnTbIY

Comments

  • edited January 2011
    Why did you use the same title as the other "rate my song" thread?
  • edited January 2011
    to confuse everyone[/sarcasm]
  • edited January 2011
    Stop that.
  • edited January 2011
    never
  • edited January 2011
    Troll(ing is largely frowned upon here).
  • edited January 2011
    actually I was hoping if I made another thread that other musicians would come out of the forum woodwork and post there own songs because I'm interested to hear them. (ok)
  • edited January 2011
    That's fine, but this is not the way to do it.
  • edited January 2011
    are you going to rate my song or what
  • edited January 2011
    Can't, on iPod with horrible playback speed.
  • edited January 2011
    here is an mp3 if anybody prefers it
    http://redmongoose.randomsociety.com/mp3/caf&s/9.mp3
  • edited January 2011
    It sounds too "disorganized" like a jumble of sounds and I can't enjoy it because I can't pick out any specific instrument and listen to it for a certain period of time before it changes into something remixed and crazy
  • edited January 2011
    thank you
    keep em comin
  • edited January 2011
    Man you crack me up lol.

    Are you like a DJ? THats some strange funky music man.
  • edited January 2011
    No I used to be pretty good at playing the keyboard and when I was younger I would make little songs on it, it was really cool but then it got stolen and it was like 800 dollars so I resorted to sequencing things with a mouse on a laptop

    about a year ago I got a lot of good commission work for scoring soundtracks to different things with clients ranging to flash cartoon artists to playboy.com <--- (probably not what you're thinking)

    here are some links to things I did the audio for
    http://www.weebls-stuff.com/songs/spooky+scary+skeletons/
    http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/515968
    edit: sfw playboy.com cartoon link
    http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/529574

    I've always wanted to DJ tho I think it looks like fun. Thank you for asking. :)
  • edited January 2011
    I liked the first track you posted, but I was waiting for some kind of change instead of more stuff layering on top. Then it kinda ended.

    It was good, but i'd have just taken it a different way personally...if I did sequencing and stuff.

    I didn't think it was too messy or anything though, it was dissonant but the clarity was still there

    I'll check out the other links when I get to a comp with speakers ;)

    We should put all the songs in one thread I think. Shit's getting confusing
  • edited January 2011
    I loved your videos.
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