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It's almost Halloween, check out my short Horror Film.

BKproductionsBKproductions
edited October 2011 in General Chat
hey everyone,
i'm a constant lurker on these boards, mostly Jurassic Park which I'm PUMPED for, and I was wondering if you guy's could check out my short horror film for the Home Run Inn pizza competition. If you like it I'd appreciate a vote but I'd also like to know what you think. Here's a link
http://wildfireapp.com/website/6/contests/148640/voteable_entries/33695510

Thanks in advance!

Comments

  • DaviesDavies
    edited October 2011
    I'm unable to view the video on that site (I use a PS3 to browse the Internet). :(

    Any chance of uploading your short film to YouTube? I'm a big fan of horror and would be happy to give you some feedback.
  • BKproductionsBKproductions
    edited October 2011
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1KJE-hKRNXY That should work, thanks for taking the time to watch it.
  • SilverwolfpetSilverwolfpet
    edited October 2011
    Not a bad try :) The acting really really really needs work... or just change the actors. The rest is cute.
  • DaviesDavies
    edited October 2011
    I agree that the acting needs some work. "Because I love you"... ouch!

    Also, I feel that the editing is too fast (as if it's trying to be an MTV music video).

    Otherwise, it all seems pretty cool. Creativity is always worthwile. Keep up the good work.
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