An Abandoned Carley Fanfiction
Here's a piece I wrote in which Carley lives and teams up with this guy, Avery. She wants to reconnect with the group, he wants to head to the mountains, and it follows their journey.
I wrote the very beginning but I left it alone in favor of some other projects. I have the story planned out but don't intend on finishing it. Still, I'd hate to see it be for not so I thought I'd share what I have.
FADE IN:
EXT. LONG ROAD - NIGHT
A walker is shuffling towards a body (Carley) on the side of
the road.
CLOSE UP: The walker leans in to take the first bite when
suddenly it stops moving.
REVEAL: A MAN (Avery) pulls a large knife from the back of
it's head and the body falls over.
AVERY starts to search CARLEY'S pockets quickly and
methodically for anything scavangable. Nothing. He rips open
her shirt to search her bra. He puts his hand in her cup
when CARLEY grabs his arm.
AVERY pushes on her chest to pin her, CARLEY moans in pain,
and he lifts up his knife to drive through her head when she
speaks.
AVERY pauses for a beat then lowers his weapon.
CARLEY sits ups, wincing in pain.
backpack and pulls out bottle of pills. He opens it, takes a pill
out, and puts the bottle back in his backpack. He presents
CARLEY with the pill and a water canteen.
CARLEY stands up. Suddenly AVERY grabs her arms and binds her
hand with rope.
I wrote the very beginning but I left it alone in favor of some other projects. I have the story planned out but don't intend on finishing it. Still, I'd hate to see it be for not so I thought I'd share what I have.
FADE IN:
EXT. LONG ROAD - NIGHT
A walker is shuffling towards a body (Carley) on the side of
the road.
CLOSE UP: The walker leans in to take the first bite when
suddenly it stops moving.
REVEAL: A MAN (Avery) pulls a large knife from the back of
it's head and the body falls over.
AVERY starts to search CARLEY'S pockets quickly and
methodically for anything scavangable. Nothing. He rips open
her shirt to search her bra. He puts his hand in her cup
when CARLEY grabs his arm.
AVERY pushes on her chest to pin her, CARLEY moans in pain,
and he lifts up his knife to drive through her head when she
speaks.
CARLEY
(weak voice)
Help me...
(weak voice)
Help me...
AVERY pauses for a beat then lowers his weapon.
AVERY
Hey, my name Avery. I'll help you
out as best as I can but I need you
to listen to me. What's your name?
CARLEY
Carley.
AVERY
Carley, where do you feel pain?
CARLEY
My left cheek.
Hey, my name Avery. I'll help you
out as best as I can but I need you
to listen to me. What's your name?
CARLEY
Carley.
AVERY
Carley, where do you feel pain?
CARLEY
My left cheek.
CARLEY sits ups, wincing in pain.
AVERY
Does it hurt anywhere else?
CARLEY
No.
AVERY looks around for walkers. He starts digging in hisDoes it hurt anywhere else?
CARLEY
No.
backpack and pulls out bottle of pills. He opens it, takes a pill
out, and puts the bottle back in his backpack. He presents
CARLEY with the pill and a water canteen.
AVERY
It's a painkiller and some water.
It's the best I can do for you
right now. That gun shot is going
to bring Dummies. We need to get
moving. Can you walk?
CARLEY
Yeah, I think so.
It's a painkiller and some water.
It's the best I can do for you
right now. That gun shot is going
to bring Dummies. We need to get
moving. Can you walk?
CARLEY
Yeah, I think so.
CARLEY stands up. Suddenly AVERY grabs her arms and binds her
hand with rope.
CARLEY
What the hell do you think you're
doing?
AVERY
(pushes her)
Move
. What the hell do you think you're
doing?
AVERY
(pushes her)
Move
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8480643/1/A-New-Day
Avery sounds like he's a hick.
link here, seriously you want to go through all that again ?
http://www.telltalegames.com/forums/showthread.php?t=34909
then there is your rather odd 'summary thread' here
http://www.telltalegames.com/forums/showthread.php?t=36427
ps
i did 2 more bits to my carley fan fic no likes on them so i dunno if anyone read the updates lol i'm tempted to post it on the forums
I agree on that, which is why I dropped it.
Yeah, but I'm sort of lazy :P