Walking dead-another room in heaven. Fan-fic

edited August 2013 in The Walking Dead
This is a fanfic i'm writing. there will be a desision in the end, so you'll have to choose. You are playing as Lee at heaven, who meets the people he used to know.
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Idea by I Waste My Time , check his story too :)

Another room in heaven.

"I'll miss you"Lee said. His eyes were yellow, and he was tired.
"Me,too" Clementine said. She was crying and coverd in 'gross stuff'
Clementine raised the gun and pointed it at Lee. She looked away.
After a second, she pulled the trigger.

Lee woke up in a strange room. Everything in there was white. [Exept him, was that racist?]

"Am i in heaven? how? when?" confused Lee said.
"Wait.. I was bitten.. I was going to turn. But Clementine shoot me. Clementine! is she alright?"
"Hello there, Lee"
Lee turn around seeing a strange guy. He looked normal, but he never saw him before.
"Are you my 'angel'?" Lee asked.
"No, i'm not. I'm your guider, that will help you in heaven." He said.
"Ok, 'guider' what am i suppous to do?"
2 doors show up infront of him.
"Wh... What is that?" Lee asked, even more cunfused.
"You have a chance to meet the people you knew before you died that died too. You'll have to choose who to meet first, and who to meet later. Choose well" The guy disappeared.
The door on the left said "your family"
The door on the right said "your love" [you probably know who that is]
what will you choose?
[Door on the left]
[Door on the right]
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Comments

  • edited August 2013
    you're doing the same thing i am. sweet.

    [door on the left]

    I think Family is really important.
  • edited August 2013
    but with diffrent People and plot.
    I'll give you credit.
  • edited August 2013
    Carley would want Lee to see his family
  • edited August 2013
    Lee entered the door on his left.
    He saw his Mom, dad and brother.
    "Lee?" His dad's voice sounded.
    "Honey?" His mom's voice sounded.
    "Mom... Dad..." He tried not to cry.
    "You gonna stare at us all day? come here you idiot" his brother said.
    Lee went closer to his family. "Is that really you?"
    "of course, who eles?" his brother said.
    He hugged them. "I'm sorry for leaving you..." he said.
    "Honey, it's okay. Now we'll be together. I'm not mad at you knowing you did everything for that girl... Orange" his mom said.
    "Clementine..." Lee said.
    "I missed you so much.. All of you"
    "but thank you... For putting me out of this misery.." Brad said.
    "Huh?"
    "That day, in the drug store. I was a walker... You got me here..."
    "Yeah..." Lee said and hugged him.
    "I'll always.. Be here for you..." Lee said.

    "Huh? i'm back here already?" Lee said.
    The door of his family disappeared, and an other door appeared.
    [go to the door on his left] - Your friends
    [go to the door on his right] - Your love
  • edited August 2013
    NOW its the time to meet carley and get some in heaven style ;)
  • edited August 2013
    [Door on the right]- Family first, Loved one's second.
  • edited August 2013
    Get some? WE'LL SEE ABOUT THAT.

    Lee enterd the door on his right. he saw a TV.
    "And now, the news from WABE Atlanta"
    "Huh?" Lee looked around, seeing Carley's gun, a microphone and a camra.
    Lee smiled, seeing the girl that he liked from the second they met,the girl that trusted him...
    Lee stepped closer to her, seeing her infront of the camra, reporting.
    She kept talking, but all Lee cared about is talking to her. He went closer to her, and touched her shoulder.
    Carley got scared and pointed her gun at him.
    "Lee?" she lowerd it.
    "Carley?" He said.
    "I missed you so much, Carley"
    "Me too"
    they both smiled.
    [i'm sorry i didn't save you]
    [i fucked up]
    [Lilly killed you]
    [...]
  • edited August 2013
    Huh?
  • edited August 2013
    [i'm sorry i didn't save you]

    also, incase you didn't notice. There's a new choice at the end of my recent update of my fic. fabi.
  • edited August 2013
    Okay.
  • edited August 2013
    and for the choice in this fic.

    [i'm sory i didn't save you]
  • edited August 2013
    "I'm sorry i didn't save you from Lilly.. I let you die... I..."
    (?) Carley will remember that
    "Shh..." She stopped him. "It's okay, you woulden't know."
    "I left her after what she did.. I coulden't look at her"
    "I know you always do the right thing"
    "What have you been doing here?" Lee pointed at the camra.
    "I kinda missed reporting, so i'm doing it"
    "But the camra dosen't work.."
    "I know, i'm just doing it for fun."
    Lee smiled. "I missed your smile.. Your eyes.. Your lips..."
    "Then don't miss it"
    Lee understand and kissed her. All he needed was Clementine, and his world will be perfect.
    "Will Clementine be okay without you?" Carley asked.
    [She can take care of herself]
    [She'll find Omid and Christa]
    [...]
  • edited August 2013
    [She'll Find Omid and Christa]
  • edited August 2013
    "She'll find Omid and Christa. She has to"
    (?) Carley noticed your optimism.
    "I sure hope so" she said.
    "Carley..."
    "Yeah?"
    "I... I love you" Lee said.
    "I love you too"

    "GODDAMMIT HEAVEN!" Lee yalled as he went back to the begining.
    [go to the door on the left] - your friend
    [go to the door on the right] - your enemy
  • edited August 2013
    Left.
  • edited August 2013
    I'll do it tommorow, got tired.
  • edited August 2013
    Is it Kenny!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
  • edited August 2013
    Great so ghost Lee wants clem so season 2 is going to be Clem escaping the evil ghosts chasing her down... :D
  • edited August 2013
    I hope by friend it means Chuck or Mark, not the Kenny.
  • edited August 2013
    What!? Why!?
  • edited August 2013
    You know, that will mean he died in that alleyway, and I just prefer him to be alive.
  • edited August 2013
    You know, that will mean he died in that alleyway, and I just prefer him to be alive.

    Oh, yeah. Makes sense. :D
  • edited August 2013
    Wait, how did Carley know who Omid and Christa were when she had died before meeting them?
  • edited August 2013
    They are always watching... Always knowing...
  • edited August 2013
    Yeah, they are.

    Lee opened the door on his left, seeing the sea and a boat.
    "What the... Is this.. Kenny's heaven?"
    Lee enterd the boat, seeing Kenny sailing and Duck and Katjaa next to him.
    "Kenny?" Confuesd Lee said.
    Kenny turn around, looking drunk. "Oh hello there friend. Good sea in heaven, isn't it? a lot of fish"
    "are you drunk? next to Katjaa and Duck?" Lee said. (And rhymed)
    "So?"
    "It's okay, it dosen't really matter" Katjaa said.
    "Hey Lee!" Duck said.
    [What is going on?]
    [what are you doing?]
    [why are you on a boat?]
    [...]
  • edited August 2013
    Kennnnnyyy :)

    [why are you on a boat?]
  • edited August 2013
    "Why are you on a boat?" Lee asked.
    (?) Kenny noticed that.
    "This is heaven Lee, everyone here have their own piece of heaven with a place they want to be"
    "I never thought you really died... You died to save Ben..."
    "But now i'm with my family. You need to be happy for this. I rather be with them then stay alive an suffer"
    Lee noded.
    "What about Clementine?"
    "I don't know... She's probably looking for Omid and Christa... You remember them?"
    "Sure do, the pregnant woman and the funny dude"
    "They'll be the best for her"
    "Yeah.. They will" Katjaa said.
    "You don't know them" Kenny said to her.
    "But i allways watched if they are the best for her" Katjaa said.
    Lee smiled.
    "Sit down pal, let's have a meal to celebrate heaven!"
    after eating.
    "Kenny, you should know... You are my best friend"
    "I know pal"

    Lee disappeard.
    The friend door stayed, and Lee had to make another choise.
    [go to the door on the left] -your friend
    [go to the door on the right] - your enemy
  • edited August 2013
    There'd better be some Doug.
  • edited August 2013
    People who turn into walkers are not in heaven. They are not dead, they are still trapped inside their bodies.
  • edited August 2013
    Doug got shot in the head saving Ben.

    Oh wait, this lee saved Carley. Just say he got shot as a walker.
  • edited August 2013
    LOL but he didn't there was no one there, and Doug wasn't that friend of Lee.
  • edited August 2013
    The prison bus wasn't too far from Macon.
  • edited August 2013
    What do you mean?
  • edited August 2013
    The prison bus from 400 days was not too far from Macon. Justin went away from Vince, it's possible he passed by Doug. Also, walkers aren't going to stay in Macon forever. They move on eventually, in search of food, so if Justin didn't pass through Macon, then they still could've met, and Justin still could've shot him.
  • edited August 2013
    Well umm... I don't know.
  • edited August 2013
    know what.

    I like to think that whoever you don't save in episode 3 ends up being one of those few walkers teh millitary put out.
  • edited August 2013
    What millitary? if we didn't see them i don't think they are alive.
  • edited August 2013
    Come on, we need some Doug in this story. Doug is the best.
  • edited August 2013
    You save Doug instand of Carley?
  • edited August 2013
    they were rendered useless during the 3 month time gap.

    They did try to wipe out the walkers in macon, They might've got a few before Mark and some others had to hide in the base.

    also. I'm personally a team Doug guy. I like Carley too, But, different boats for different folk.
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