Doug's Escape (Walking Dead Fanfic)

edited August 2013 in The Walking Dead
In preperation for the third of the season finale, I thought Id give you guys something to occupy time. A more story based type.. thing. This is the first time you're going to see me do drama.. so yea, go easy on me :P

Chapter 1: Escaping a Grizzly Fate

The drug store alarm was blazing through the sound of gunshots, walker moans, and the yelling of the survivors. Doug went for the window, trying to stop all walkers from getting through. However, he got grabbed, The walkers were tugging and pulling just trying their best to rip him apart. Doug, through all the panic, looked to see Carley, the bullet sounds were gone, and she was in trouble. Doug looked over to Lee, praying that he would save Carley. Doug only wanted her to be safe, even though he's only know her for a day, she was the only one who showed a liking to him.

Dougs wish was granted, though it tore Lee apart, he saved Carley,chanding her the rest of her bullets. Doug braced himself for what was next. The walkers burst through the barricaded window and pulled him out with them. Carley and Lee watched in horrow as it happened, only hearing his screams and more gunshots.

What they didnt realize, was Carley was the only one with a gun in the group. Back outside the window, Doug's walker captors were being shot down. A 5 foot tall, short haired, blonde guy was blasting through them. Doug pushed off the ones that were on him. The man misfired and accidently shot Dougs shoulder, causing blood to spurt all over his body, and the blood made him faint.

Some walkers came up behind the guy, and he was out of bullets, so he ducked for cover immediately. Afterwords, Kenny drove by in his pickup with everyone in it, and shot down the walkers that were slowly approaching Doug. When Doug was in view, they saw as if the walkers were still eating him, after the moment of staring in horror, they drove off.

The man came out of hiding once again, He felt Dougs pulse, and he was still alive. He dragged Doug back towards the camp. Upon awaking, Doug was greated with his savior. "Wha.. What happened?" Doug asked.

"You were being attacked by those things, luckily, I came in just efore any could bite you" The man smiled. "Names Drake, you?"

"Doug..." He answered. "Where am I?"

Drake began to explain. "You see, my friend, Jenny, She's in the group right now. She has her black hair done up in pig tails. She's kind of short, but it don't seem that way when she owns this nuke bunker."

Doug got up shocked. "Bunker!? I don't remember anyone in Macon having a bunker like this!"

"No uh, were a bit far from that town. You were out for a couple of days so we took you with us in our RV and patched you up on our way back to Jeffersonville.

"Why? I mean, such a long trip and big use of medical supplies!" Doug looked surprised and frightened.

Jenny stepped inside the room. "Yes, but my husband had a friend up in Macon. He said you were good with tech stuff, Drake here is good with medical supplies. Im the one with the bunker here and help collect supplies. We have another man here, his name is Vince. He's an ex convict, but he wont try to kill you, I promise. He has a friend with him, he's resting to. His name is Justin.. or was it Danny? Im cant remember... Well, either way we need a tech guy, the cons are good with guns, and don't let that scare you."

Doug was shocked. He began breathing heavy. "Carley, did either of you know Carley!? Is she ok!?"

Drake put his hand on Dougs shoulder "There was a pickup with a group of survivors in it, they had a few women, one with a red tank top, nother wearing a hite fancy shirt and a long skirt, they had a little girl to"

"Clementine even made it out!? That's... that's great. And yes, Carley was the one in the long skirt."

Vince walked in. "This the new guy?"

Jenny nodded. "This is the new guy."

"Great, Doug I heard your name was. Im glad you can help us. We have some supplies you can use to help us keep walkers off of us, ill help when you need it, ok?"

Doug nodded, grateful to be alive at the moment. Knowing Carley was also alive. He opened up the supply closet, and all of his options, he smiled. "This will do, and before you ask, im not good with guns."

Jenny patted his shoulder. "As long as what I've heard about you is true, that wont be a problem."

To be continued
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  • edited August 2013
    what do you guys think?
  • edited August 2013
    Who's Doug?
  • edited August 2013
    It's pretty good! :p
  • edited August 2013
    The Nate wrote: »
    Who's Doug?

    You're gong to be in this fics epilogue.
  • edited August 2013
    You're gong to be in this fics epilogue.

    Whatever you say, paco.
  • edited August 2013
    The Nate wrote: »
    Whatever you say, paco.

    You look like one of the bandits that raided my camp! :eek:
  • edited August 2013
    Ben Paul wrote: »
    You look like one of the bandits that raided my camp! :eek:

    Maybe I am, maybe I'm not... The real question is...


    Got any tail back from that high school you're from? Don't leave out any deets
  • edited August 2013
    Hmmm...Jenny Pitcher looked pretty nice. :rolleyes:
  • edited August 2013
    Ben Paul wrote: »
    Hmmm...Jenny Pitcher looked pretty nice. :rolleyes:

    Mmhmmmm I'm hungry. Give me the deets. How's the rack? C'mon, gotta get my beak wet
  • edited August 2013
    what do you guys think?

    it's good
  • edited August 2013
    suddnly a horny nate had a conversation with Ben Paul.
  • edited August 2013
    suddnly a horny nate had a conversation with Ben Paul.

    I'm always horny
  • edited August 2013
    I don't feel comfortable on this thread anymore...
  • edited August 2013
    i don't feel comfortable on this FORUM anymore
  • edited August 2013
    i don't feel comfortable on this FORUM anymore

    You could say that again.
  • edited August 2013
    Ben Paul wrote: »
    I don't feel comfortable on this thread anymore...

    You gotta loosen up those nerves, bro. Your always so tense. So nervous. lighten up a little bit.

    *holds up wisky*

    Wanna sip?
  • edited August 2013
    i don't feel comfortable on this FORUM anymore

    But there's so much foot-room, how could you not?!?


    Shit, bro
  • edited August 2013
    So...much......roleplaying......I can't.......
  • edited August 2013
    So...much......roleplaying......I can't.......

    Hey, look up at me, were gonna make it through this, alright? Here you cover me or I cover you, your choice...
  • edited August 2013
    So...much......roleplaying......I can't.......

    make it stop
  • edited August 2013
    Man, if only there were some other thread devoted entirely to role-playing. Ah well, a man can dream.
  • edited August 2013
    Man, if only there were some other thread devoted entirely to role-playing. Ah well, a man can dream.

    Thank you demonwing.

    No offnse to "The Nate" But roleplaying can get annoying when you try to bring it to ever thread.
  • edited August 2013
    Bullet to the shoulder and DORK NONSENSE PREVAILS!



    Thank you demonwing.


    DomeWing's alter ego?
  • edited August 2013
    Thank you demonwing.

    No offnse to "The Nate" But roleplaying can get annoying when you try to bring it to ever thread.

    None taken, paco.
  • edited August 2013
    Ok now this is turning into a Youtube comment section .
  • edited August 2013
    Ok now this is turning into a Youtube comment section .

    ive unfortunately noticed -_-
  • edited August 2013
    I just noted that to, not a good thing indeed.
  • edited August 2013
    Quick! Everybody say an insult about how you can beat them up!
  • edited August 2013
    please stop the youtube commenting and/or roleplaying
  • edited August 2013
    I always hating that part of Youtube comments, what am I saying the youtube comment section is utterly pointless, it rarely amounts to anything but random arguments over something really dumb or trolls.
  • edited August 2013
    I won't, I thought it is a good story that is really, sorry that happened to the last thread, I will try much harder to not go off topic in the future.
  • edited August 2013
    I won't, I thought it is a good story that is really, sorry that happened to the last thread, I will try much harder to not go off topic in the future.

    what you mean with the whole ben destroying the game everyone in the entire world wants? Ill pass it off as a short joke, no worries my friend.

    I just hate when people take a thread that wants to actually discuss or tell a story and people turn it into their own roleplay thread. I hope that doesn't make me sound selfish.
  • edited August 2013
    That is not selfish, I would hate that if it happened to my thread.
  • edited August 2013
    I kept on topic, mostly, so Youtube my ass.

    If you do further installments, Flame, could we have some "chalk talk" dork nonsense moments from Doug? I'd love that :)
  • edited August 2013
    That is not selfish, I would hate that if it happened to my thread.

    thanks for understanding. Its part of why I hate RP accounts. People just can't help themselves and go around to every thread going "Hey guys! Know that character!? Yea! Im him!" I see it more a grab for attention rather than a funny joke.
  • edited August 2013
    I have never heard the term 'chalk talk' before in my life, I like the sound of it though.
  • edited August 2013
    So far, I think it needs a little bit of work. A little rough around the edges. Get my meaning? I mean, fuck yeah, Doug, but things so far aren't the most... Articulate. I don't mean to sound selfish, like "HEY LET ME HELP," but I could help, if you'd like.
  • edited August 2013
    I literally meant Doug's chalk talk, lol. It was so endearing. I wish there'd be a couple more moments like that in the game.
  • edited August 2013
    I see, I may be a Carley fan and not a Doug fan, but that line was just priceless and should be loved by all.
  • edited August 2013
    Harpadarpa wrote: »
    So far, I think it needs a little bit of work. A little rough around the edges. Get my meaning? I mean, fuck yeah, Doug, but things so far aren't the most... Articulate. I don't mean to sound selfish, like "HEY LET ME HELP," but I could help, if you'd like.

    Dont worry, Doug will go more in character. And the only reason he seemed more cardboard cut out here is because well he just went through an extreme situation, he's not really his nerdy self when there a ton of walkers trying to eat him.
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