Fanfic :Fallen Leaders
Hey guys !
this is my first time writing a fanfic and would like for you guys to read adn give feedback ! english isnt my main laguege so go easy :P
Episode 1 -the RV
I'm sitting here tied up like a fucking animal while they decide what my fate will be.
it all happend last night,my group fought on the road and there was this woman..this bitch Carley..she was so ungreatful about me saving her useless ass from the bandits,she thinks she can go ahead and telling me to fucking help someone?! without me she would be dead for sure.
after she said that I saw red,and before I knew what I was doing I pulled my gun out.
Suddenly a noise disturbed the second of silance.
and Carley fell..
now im here,this "born"leader wich is now the prisoner of the group that hates me,Kenny and I never got along and Ben didnt even look at me after that fucking gunshot.
but Lee..Lee.. he was always there for me,I still remmember that cursed night at the dairy,how Lee tried to revive my dad..he really understood how much my dad meant to me didnt he?
I remmember dad's mouth moving but then..but then..
My own criying,my aweful screams of that night still haunting me.
Now im in this RV alone,they found a godamned train,and they think they can get it working.but what about me?they cant just leave me here..can they?
"Hey Lilly" suddenly I hear the voice of the man that was always there for me,the man that disagreed to leave me behind.
"Lilly !" his voice is more angry now
"What do you want from me Lee?" I cant even look in his eyes "just leave me the fuck alone ! "
he shook his head and got out of the Rv with a pancil,didnt notice im free now.
but I cant get out,I will get shot or wrose,Ill just stay here.
...
its late afternoon now,load voices coming from outside,they met someone new apperently,some kind of a fucking hobo.
"DROP IT " Lee's voice from last nightcoming back to me..and the look on his face..he lost any godamned patience towards me.
now I hear screams coming from the outside,are they arguing?
im coming towards the window,where I see the hobo and this fucking coward,Kenny.
"I won't do this!,she is a fucking monster and deserved to ger eaten the fuck alive ! "
"well but what will it be after.." I hear the hobo trying to calm Kenny down "you will get this train going,if what you are telling me she did was true,you can at least try to knowck some sence into her"
"me?!" Kenny snapped.of curse he will,he cant do anything by his own "she fucking hates me!,no matter what you think or say,that motherfucking bitch deserves to die !"
Great.they are talking about me,I thought Kenny will "forget" that his kid got rations almost every single day,that when I asked him for help to ration he said "no".that I AM the one that had to look on Clementine and see how thiner she got..Im looking at her outside the window now..she is looking at duck
whats wrong with duck anyway?
I remmember the bandits.Lee and I covered the team while our people hid,I remmember Duck and Katjaa getting attacked by the walker..
Oh no.
Oh no..
Oh no...
the RV door opened "Fuck,I cant belive im fucking doing this" Kenny and the Hobo got into the RV.the Hobo speaks :
"Heya there..uh..Lilly,can we talk?"
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Thats the end of episode 1!
I know it was a bit boring,ill do my best to get better at this ! Please leave comments
this is my first time writing a fanfic and would like for you guys to read adn give feedback ! english isnt my main laguege so go easy :P
Episode 1 -the RV
I'm sitting here tied up like a fucking animal while they decide what my fate will be.
it all happend last night,my group fought on the road and there was this woman..this bitch Carley..she was so ungreatful about me saving her useless ass from the bandits,she thinks she can go ahead and telling me to fucking help someone?! without me she would be dead for sure.
after she said that I saw red,and before I knew what I was doing I pulled my gun out.
Suddenly a noise disturbed the second of silance.
and Carley fell..
now im here,this "born"leader wich is now the prisoner of the group that hates me,Kenny and I never got along and Ben didnt even look at me after that fucking gunshot.
but Lee..Lee.. he was always there for me,I still remmember that cursed night at the dairy,how Lee tried to revive my dad..he really understood how much my dad meant to me didnt he?
I remmember dad's mouth moving but then..but then..
My own criying,my aweful screams of that night still haunting me.
Now im in this RV alone,they found a godamned train,and they think they can get it working.but what about me?they cant just leave me here..can they?
"Hey Lilly" suddenly I hear the voice of the man that was always there for me,the man that disagreed to leave me behind.
"Lilly !" his voice is more angry now
"What do you want from me Lee?" I cant even look in his eyes "just leave me the fuck alone ! "
he shook his head and got out of the Rv with a pancil,didnt notice im free now.
but I cant get out,I will get shot or wrose,Ill just stay here.
...
its late afternoon now,load voices coming from outside,they met someone new apperently,some kind of a fucking hobo.
"DROP IT " Lee's voice from last nightcoming back to me..and the look on his face..he lost any godamned patience towards me.
now I hear screams coming from the outside,are they arguing?
im coming towards the window,where I see the hobo and this fucking coward,Kenny.
"I won't do this!,she is a fucking monster and deserved to ger eaten the fuck alive ! "
"well but what will it be after.." I hear the hobo trying to calm Kenny down "you will get this train going,if what you are telling me she did was true,you can at least try to knowck some sence into her"
"me?!" Kenny snapped.of curse he will,he cant do anything by his own "she fucking hates me!,no matter what you think or say,that motherfucking bitch deserves to die !"
Great.they are talking about me,I thought Kenny will "forget" that his kid got rations almost every single day,that when I asked him for help to ration he said "no".that I AM the one that had to look on Clementine and see how thiner she got..Im looking at her outside the window now..she is looking at duck
whats wrong with duck anyway?
I remmember the bandits.Lee and I covered the team while our people hid,I remmember Duck and Katjaa getting attacked by the walker..
Oh no.
Oh no..
Oh no...
the RV door opened "Fuck,I cant belive im fucking doing this" Kenny and the Hobo got into the RV.the Hobo speaks :
"Heya there..uh..Lilly,can we talk?"
...........................................................................................................
Thats the end of episode 1!
I know it was a bit boring,ill do my best to get better at this ! Please leave comments
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