"What problem?" Matt explains, "There's another group out there, mean sons of bitches, they slaughtered all of my group, 8 people, I barely go… moret away.. we need to prepare to strike them, because they're comin' for you, well, for Austin at least.." "That the guy who just tried to gnaw on my face?"
Melody asks. "Yeah. and it wouldn't've happened if this itchy triggerfinger hadn't shot him beforehand!" Matt cries out. "As I told you, we just lost a friend, he was like a father to him, he didn't know what he was doing." Melody tries to calm the situation. "Well, nothing we can do now.." Matt reluctantly says. "As I said, they're comin' for us, are you up to it or not?"
MAJOR CHOICE #25
A) Yes. No. C) We take no side in this.
NOTE: Cast your votes!
"There we go! All stitched up" Samuel says. Quincy looks at the commander then back at Samuel. He laughs and begins to speak. "Don't you have … moreto stitch someplace else?" Samuel confused asks, "Huh? I stitched up the ends to his fingers." Quincy laughs again. "I'm talking about below the belt." Samuel sighs. "I don't really have to do that do I?" Quincy looks back up at him. "Yes, yes you do." Samuel who is gagging pulls down the commanders pants and manages to throw up all over where his private parts used to be. "Nice one shithead you puked all over him." Samuel, who's temper can only go so far, punches Quincy in the face. It doesn't effect Quincy as mush as Sam would have wanted it to, but Quincy goes right back on the attack, and tackles Samuel.
Zack interrupts. "Quincy stop!" The attack is so loud he doesn't hear Zack. "Get off of him you asswhole." He is still being ignored, when Zack looks down at the bloody meat cleaver. He has a big dec… [view original content]
"What problem?" Matt explains, "There's another group out there, mean sons of bitches, they slaughtered all of my group, 8 people, I barely go… moret away.. we need to prepare to strike them, because they're comin' for you, well, for Austin at least.." "That the guy who just tried to gnaw on my face?"
Melody asks. "Yeah. and it wouldn't've happened if this itchy triggerfinger hadn't shot him beforehand!" Matt cries out. "As I told you, we just lost a friend, he was like a father to him, he didn't know what he was doing." Melody tries to calm the situation. "Well, nothing we can do now.." Matt reluctantly says. "As I said, they're comin' for us, are you up to it or not?"
MAJOR CHOICE #25
A) Yes. No. C) We take no side in this.
NOTE: Cast your votes!
"There we go! All stitched up" Samuel says. Quincy looks at the commander then back at Samuel. He laughs and begins to speak. "Don't you have … moreto stitch someplace else?" Samuel confused asks, "Huh? I stitched up the ends to his fingers." Quincy laughs again. "I'm talking about below the belt." Samuel sighs. "I don't really have to do that do I?" Quincy looks back up at him. "Yes, yes you do." Samuel who is gagging pulls down the commanders pants and manages to throw up all over where his private parts used to be. "Nice one shithead you puked all over him." Samuel, who's temper can only go so far, punches Quincy in the face. It doesn't effect Quincy as mush as Sam would have wanted it to, but Quincy goes right back on the attack, and tackles Samuel.
Zack interrupts. "Quincy stop!" The attack is so loud he doesn't hear Zack. "Get off of him you asswhole." He is still being ignored, when Zack looks down at the bloody meat cleaver. He has a big dec… [view original content]
"Yes, we're in" Alex says. "Wait wait wait HOLD ON just a damn minute! Are you serious?! We don't even know if this guy is telling the truth! For all we know he can trick us into the woods and pick us off!" "He won't. This guy he speaks of almost killed me last night! he tried to shoot me! They stole our cow, I knew I heard her last night!" Alex is becoming more and more angry, "You don't wanna come, stay here! I'm going."
"I'm coming with you two Alex, I'm not gonna let you down. I trust you, if you think that's the right thing to do, I'll help you."
"Thanks Melody, I really appreciate that" Alex thinks to himself how lucky he is to end up with such a good friend "Don't mention it, that's what friends are for, after all, you did save my life". "Ok let's do a restocking of the ammunition and guns and decide on an approach.
Later that day...
"I've got about... 47 bullets on my Nosler" Alex says "Matt, have the pump-action shotgun, it's still got 20 or so shells in it" "It's ok" says Matt
"I've got my trusty rifle, It's called "Charlotte", The name was Carved into the rifle that I found at a local dairy farm" "It's Danny's rifle!" Gloria bursted in to the conversation "I guess he was already dead when you took it.." "Yep, took it from a cold dead body". "Anyway..." Alex says, "Melody, take the revolver, it has 22 bullets, and take the bow as well, you got pretty good with it..", "Okay..", she seems off, "What is it?" He asks. "It's just that... I've never took someone's life before, I just hope that when the moment comes.. I'll be able to do it.." Alex doesn't have anything to say, so he keeps packing his bag. Gloria took the pump action shot gun to fend of walkers. "Come back here in one piece, for me..". "Don't worry mom, I'll only risk my life that much". He hugs her, "Well, Here goes nothing...". He then opened the gate made out of two garbage canisters. While walking in the woods Matt started to plan, "Well, what approach should we take?"
CHOICE #26
A) Run and gun. All out attack those sons of bitches. Pick them off, one by one. C) Lure walkers to the camp and let them get their hands dirty.
Zack thinks quickly and picks up the bloody meat cleaver. "This things heavier then what I thought..." He mumbles to himself as he raises it above his head, ready to strike Quincy's back. "Here goes nothing..." Zack says.
At the same time he throws the cleaver down, Quincy and Samuel roll over and change positions. Zack accidentally hammers Samuel in the shoulder.
Quincy stops the attack and looks up at Zack who has his cleaver pounded into Samuel. "It won't- it won't come out." Zack cries out. Quincy rushes over to Samuel, and pulls the cleaver out. "Shit" Quincy says. "I ain't no male nurse, but if you ask me his arm needs to come off." Zack looks back at him. "What the fuck is that supposed to mean-" His voice is interrupted by the sound of Samuel screaming. "There ain't no reason to cut his arm off!!" Zack yells.
-SCENE SWAP-
"These son's of bitches got a lot of stuff, guns, and everything. I say we lure walkers to the area." Matt says. Alex, and Melody nod. "Well how do we lure em'. There's barley any of them in the area." Alex says.... "Well, this is the fun part, we're going to have to shoot a couple of our bullets." Matt grabs his rifle and. BAM! BAM! BAM! He fires off three shots before he says. "Now, we wait."
The trio sit and wait ten minutes before 20 approach them. "Alright, now follow me." Matt says when he leads them to the bandit camp.
They are 100 yards away, when Matt says. "Alright, now stay quiet, but still fast." Once they are standing right outside the big tent, Matt whispers. "Run straight, for at least 5 minutes, the walkers won't see you at that point. They will already be feasting on our 'friends'." They all run except Matt who specifically leads the walkers into the tent.
-SCENE SWAP-
Samuel was just waking up from being unconscious. "Where-WHERE'S MY ARM?!" He yells. Quincy just grins, while Zack stands crying. "Commander! Wake up!" Samuel yells. "Snore huh? Holy Hell man!! What happened to your arm." Samuel frowns, and points toward Quincy. "Why the hell did you cut off his arm?! Now we have 2 handicaps in our group! How do we fight other people- What's that noise?!" Groans come from outside the tent.
CHOICE #27
A.) Throw Samuel's arm outside the tent.
B.) Throw the commanders hand outside the tent.
C.) Grab guns, and quickly.
D.) Throw Samuel out there, it gives you more time and he can't do shit anyways. (Probably what the commander is thinking lol)
Last time A got strong 5 votes so it's settled:
"Yes, we're in" Alex says. "Wait wait wait HOLD ON just a damn minute! Are you serious?! We… more don't even know if this guy is telling the truth! For all we know he can trick us into the woods and pick us off!" "He won't. This guy he speaks of almost killed me last night! he tried to shoot me! They stole our cow, I knew I heard her last night!" Alex is becoming more and more angry, "You don't wanna come, stay here! I'm going."
"I'm coming with you two Alex, I'm not gonna let you down. I trust you, if you think that's the right thing to do, I'll help you."
"Thanks Melody, I really appreciate that" Alex thinks to himself how lucky he is to end up with such a good friend "Don't mention it, that's what friends are for, after all, you did save my life". "Ok let's do a restocking of the ammunition and guns and decide on an approach.
Later that day...
"I've got about... 47 bullets on my Nosler" … [view original content]
The Commander smiled evilly. "Ladies first, faggot!" He shouted as he grabbed Samuel and threw him out of the tent. He chuckled as the walkers began feasting on his flesh. The Commander grabbed his pistol, Quincy wiped off the cleaver, and Zach grabbed the M-16's, handing one to Quincy. Zach shot two of the walkers, killing them both. The Commander shot the other zombies. "Commander, I wanna get Samuel's body," Quincy said. "Wanna fuck 'im? I'm sure he'll love your dick." The Commander said. "No, I was thinking about using his head, if you get my drift." The Commander thought, and then said, "Sure, use his head." Zach was horrified as he walked out of the tent past the bodies. The Commander followed. And Quincy decapitated Samuel.
--SCENE SHIFT--
"I think the walkers are working," Alexander said as the gunshots broke out in the camp. "Let's make for the gas station," Matt suggested. "They'd be fucking stupid to shoot us there." "Sounds like a good idea," Melody replied. The three snuck inside, dispatching the walkers closer to them before going inside the gas station. "There, Commander!" A strange voice said. "In the Texaco!" "Alright, fire at will." The Commander replied. And the battle began...
I just wrote out a whole scene, and when i backspaced, it brought me back to the community. I AM SO FRUSTRATED. I don't think i'm going to write for a while...
You know what? I will write but it won't be as detailed as I would have liked it to be. (There will be less Dialogue then what I would have liked also)
I just wrote out a whole scene, and when i backspaced, it brought me back to the community. I AM SO FRUSTRATED. I don't think i'm going to write for a while...
"You think we killed them?" Alexander asks. "Yeah, I stayed back. I watched them throw their own friend out of the tent!" Matt says, before Melody chimes in. "I just hope I never come that close to killing another person again!" Matt follows. "Well you never really killed anybody, you just caused their death." Melody laughs, then there's a silence. The silence is interrupted by a yell. "Fire at will!"
Alexander reacts quickly, and grabs his gun. "Grab your weapon and follow me!" He says. They run through the rather big gas station, and come across a deli. "Let's hope this door is unlocked." He says before pushing the door open. Alex closes and locks it, when they all begin to crouch.
"Come out, come out, wherever the fuck you are.." The commander says while searching through the store. "We won't fire, just come out, we need to talk." He begins to whisper. "Make sure you don't shoot unless I say, if they brought that one lady with em' then we're gonna keep her for ourselves." He says referring to Gloria. "Ah here we go- are you folks in here?" He says pushing the now locked door. "I'll shoot that glass down and kill all you fuckers, if you don't open this door!" He wait's on the other side of the door excepting an opening.
When all of a sudden he hears a lock, and the door knob move. Out steps a 16 year old boy. "Who else you got in there?" The commander asks shoving Alex out of his way. He comes across Matt and shoves him to the ground with his elbow. When he saw Melody his eyes lit up. "Well you aren't the one I was looking for, but you'll do." He says, requesting Quincy. "You carry her. I can't with my one hand."
Alexander and Matt sneak out of the building, running back towards the inn. "We shouldn't have left Melody." Alex says. "It was either her, or all of us." Alex sighs, when he heard yelling from a distance away. "Wait up!".. "Who the hell?!" The man approaches them. Matt instantly gets alarmed. "He's one of them!" Alex ready's his gun, while the man speaks up. "Wait i'm good! I'm like Austin. I never really liked the commander, I just helped him, so he didn't kill me. I plead to you please let me come with you." Alexander looks at the man, then back to Matt. "Matt do you trust him?"
A.) Yes Matt trusts him. (Allow him to come with you.)
B.) No Matt doesn't trust him. (Allow him to go own his way.)
"You think we killed them?" Alexander asks. "Yeah, I stayed back. I watched them throw their own friend out of the tent!" Matt says, before Me… morelody chimes in. "I just hope I never come that close to killing another person again!" Matt follows. "Well you never really killed anybody, you just caused their death." Melody laughs, then there's a silence. The silence is interrupted by a yell. "Fire at will!"
Alexander reacts quickly, and grabs his gun. "Grab your weapon and follow me!" He says. They run through the rather big gas station, and come across a deli. "Let's hope this door is unlocked." He says before pushing the door open. Alex closes and locks it, when they all begin to crouch.
"Come out, come out, wherever the fuck you are.." The commander says while searching through the store. "We won't fire, just come out, we need to talk." He begins to whisper. "Make sure you don't shoot unless I say, if they brought that one lady with em' then w… [view original content]
I just wrote out a whole scene, and when i backspaced, it brought me back to the community. I AM SO FRUSTRATED. I don't think i'm going to write for a while...
"JACKPOT!" "What is it?" "Found some whiskey, it's about damn time!" The Commander sighs with relief. "PLEASE, let me go! I'll do anything, just spare my life! I'm begging you!" "Hmmm, anything?" The Commander smiles as he says that, a smile only a true molester can wear on his face. "Wha-? Ewww no! I'm not gonna be your fucking sex slave!" Melody is disgusted by the Commander's statement. "You aren't in position of making a choice, anyway, It's not for me, I'd love to , but some little shit cut my dick off, It's for him." Quincy smiles. "I'll leave you two alone, have a good time!" wink. "Cm'ere" Quincy says as he rip Melody's shirt off, "NO! NO PLEASE STOP!" "I'll stop when I wanna stop. now, let's get star-" PKAW! A bullet goes right through Quincy's eye as he falls over Melody.
"Looks like I got here just in time.."
SCENE SWAP
"Yes." Matt says. "What?? how do you know he's speaking the truth?" Alex seems shocked by the quick decision. "When they raided our camp, he spared my life, because his "Commander" wasn't around, he had his sights on me, and he didn't pull the trigger, I've got a bullshit detector, trust me with this one." "Whatever.." He then whispers to him, "But still keep tabs on 'im, just in case.." He nods. "What's your name son?" Matt asks the stranger, "Zachary, call me Zack". "Ok Zack, we need to go back for Melody, She's our friend and your Commander captured her.", "Then we must get to her quick, because if I know my group, she's probably getting raped right now. "SHIT, we can't let that happen, we have to go!" Alex says as the trio starts running at the direction they came from.
PKAW "Looks like we got here just in time..." Alexander says. Putting the revolver back in his pocket.
The commander turns around, while chugging whiskey. "Shit.." He pulls his M-16 out and fires at Zack in the chest.. The commander tries running but doesn't have enough time. PKAW PKAW PKAW Alexander shoots 3 times piercing through the commander's face each time. Alex stares down at Zack. "He was a good man. Probably anyways. I'm going to shoot his head so he doesn't have to live as a walker." Alexander points his revolver down at Zack, and takes him out. PKAW The gunshot fires as the screen goes black...
ClementineCultist I have some questions.
Do you think this is a good time to end the episode? The whole bandit arc is over, and it's good to end an episode with action right?
PKAW "Looks like we got here just in time..." Alexander says. Putting the revolver back in his pocket.
The commander turns around, while ch… moreugging whiskey. "Shit.." He pulls his M-16 out and fires at Zack in the chest.. The commander tries running but doesn't have enough time. PKAW PKAW PKAW Alexander shoots 3 times piercing through the commander's face each time. Alex stares down at Zack. "He was a good man. Probably anyways. I'm going to shoot his head so he doesn't have to live as a walker." Alexander points his revolver down at Zack, and takes him out. PKAW The gunshot fires as the screen goes black...
* ClementineCultist I have some questions.
* Do you think this is a good time to end the episode? The whole bandit arc is over, and it's good to end an episode with action right?
We could end the episode. I want to write, but a timeskip would be good.
I also have a question: Is this in the same universe as the other fanfic? If not we could bring in some S1 characters.
We could end the episode. I want to write, but a timeskip would be good.
I also have a question: Is this in the same universe as the other fanfic? If not we could bring in some S1 characters.
Episode 2 name's good, but for one I was thinking about something like Better times or Mother and son , you know, something along these lines, Life among them is already taken as it's the name of the comic's 12 Volume
Episode 2 name's good, but for one I was thinking about something like Better times or Mother and son , you know, something along these lines, Life among them is already taken as it's the name of the comic's 12 Volume
Gloria is walking with her shotgun ready, aimed at the void of the store she was scavenging food for, when a lurker suddenly grabs her from the side. BOOM! She acts quickly, blasting the lurker's head to bits. That was a close one.., she thinks to herself while stuffing into her relatively full backpack a bottle of sprite (which was luckily not opened) and a bag of chips. "Well, guess that'll do for the next few days.." she says while opening the exit door. She's about halfway as she starts hearing a familiar sound. A sound that she didn't hear for a long time, and hadn't thought she would hear for the rest of her life. No.. it can't be... She thinks as she starts running to the direction of the voice. as she gets near the voice, she also starts hearing a walker's groan. she finally gets to the origin of the sound as she see's a female walker, tied to a nearby tree. She also sees a note near the walker and a gun just by it.
She starts reading:
I can't... I couldn't do it.. Please do it for me, and take care of him as your own...
She then looks at the origin of the sound and sees a baby. A tear trails down her cheek since he looks like Alex when he was little. She then takes the gun, gets up and says:
MAJOR CHOICE #29:
A) I will. I'm sorry, but I can't, and then pulls the trigger.
Epilogue
Gloria is walking with her shotgun ready, aimed at the void of the store she was scavenging food for, when a lurker suddenly grabs… more her from the side. BOOM! She acts quickly, blasting the lurker's head to bits. That was a close one.., she thinks to herself while stuffing into her relatively full backpack a bottle of sprite (which was luckily not opened) and a bag of chips. "Well, guess that'll do for the next few days.." she says while opening the exit door. She's about halfway as she starts hearing a familiar sound. A sound that she didn't hear for a long time, and hadn't thought she would hear for the rest of her life. No.. it can't be... She thinks as she starts running to the direction of the voice. as she gets near the voice, she also starts hearing a walker's groan. she finally gets to the origin of the sound as she see's a female walker, tied to a nearby tree. She also sees a note near the walker and a gun just by it.
She sta… [view original content]
Epilogue
Gloria is walking with her shotgun ready, aimed at the void of the store she was scavenging food for, when a lurker suddenly grabs… more her from the side. BOOM! She acts quickly, blasting the lurker's head to bits. That was a close one.., she thinks to herself while stuffing into her relatively full backpack a bottle of sprite (which was luckily not opened) and a bag of chips. "Well, guess that'll do for the next few days.." she says while opening the exit door. She's about halfway as she starts hearing a familiar sound. A sound that she didn't hear for a long time, and hadn't thought she would hear for the rest of her life. No.. it can't be... She thinks as she starts running to the direction of the voice. as she gets near the voice, she also starts hearing a walker's groan. she finally gets to the origin of the sound as she see's a female walker, tied to a nearby tree. She also sees a note near the walker and a gun just by it.
She sta… [view original content]
Comments
Option F. I would also be fine with option J.
Just joking, C.
Just want to know how many people are here, can everyone show presence so we can see how many writers are we?
A
A
Did you join as "thegateswillopen"?
Thanks. And we should keep it for a long time, adding Character to the list when they are made, and changing descriptions from time to time.
A.
Hey, i'm fine with that idea, especially if we have stuff like this happen.
Also, I'd say A.
yeah
Somebody should write I think the voteing is about done.
i'll write
Last time A got strong 5 votes so it's settled:
"Yes, we're in" Alex says. "Wait wait wait HOLD ON just a damn minute! Are you serious?! We don't even know if this guy is telling the truth! For all we know he can trick us into the woods and pick us off!" "He won't. This guy he speaks of almost killed me last night! he tried to shoot me! They stole our cow, I knew I heard her last night!" Alex is becoming more and more angry, "You don't wanna come, stay here! I'm going."
"I'm coming with you two Alex, I'm not gonna let you down. I trust you, if you think that's the right thing to do, I'll help you."
"Thanks Melody, I really appreciate that" Alex thinks to himself how lucky he is to end up with such a good friend "Don't mention it, that's what friends are for, after all, you did save my life". "Ok let's do a restocking of the ammunition and guns and decide on an approach.
Later that day...
"I've got about... 47 bullets on my Nosler" Alex says "Matt, have the pump-action shotgun, it's still got 20 or so shells in it" "It's ok" says Matt
"I've got my trusty rifle, It's called "Charlotte", The name was Carved into the rifle that I found at a local dairy farm" "It's Danny's rifle!" Gloria bursted in to the conversation "I guess he was already dead when you took it.." "Yep, took it from a cold dead body". "Anyway..." Alex says, "Melody, take the revolver, it has 22 bullets, and take the bow as well, you got pretty good with it..", "Okay..", she seems off, "What is it?" He asks. "It's just that... I've never took someone's life before, I just hope that when the moment comes.. I'll be able to do it.." Alex doesn't have anything to say, so he keeps packing his bag. Gloria took the pump action shot gun to fend of walkers. "Come back here in one piece, for me..". "Don't worry mom, I'll only risk my life that much". He hugs her, "Well, Here goes nothing...". He then opened the gate made out of two garbage canisters. While walking in the woods Matt started to plan, "Well, what approach should we take?"
CHOICE #26
A) Run and gun. All out attack those sons of bitches.
Pick them off, one by one. C) Lure walkers to the camp and let them get their hands dirty.
Zack thinks quickly and picks up the bloody meat cleaver. "This things heavier then what I thought..." He mumbles to himself as he raises it above his head, ready to strike Quincy's back. "Here goes nothing..." Zack says.
At the same time he throws the cleaver down, Quincy and Samuel roll over and change positions. Zack accidentally hammers Samuel in the shoulder.
Quincy stops the attack and looks up at Zack who has his cleaver pounded into Samuel. "It won't- it won't come out." Zack cries out. Quincy rushes over to Samuel, and pulls the cleaver out. "Shit" Quincy says. "I ain't no male nurse, but if you ask me his arm needs to come off." Zack looks back at him. "What the fuck is that supposed to mean-" His voice is interrupted by the sound of Samuel screaming. "There ain't no reason to cut his arm off!!" Zack yells.
-SCENE SWAP-
"These son's of bitches got a lot of stuff, guns, and everything. I say we lure walkers to the area." Matt says. Alex, and Melody nod. "Well how do we lure em'. There's barley any of them in the area." Alex says.... "Well, this is the fun part, we're going to have to shoot a couple of our bullets." Matt grabs his rifle and. BAM! BAM! BAM! He fires off three shots before he says. "Now, we wait."
The trio sit and wait ten minutes before 20 approach them. "Alright, now follow me." Matt says when he leads them to the bandit camp.
They are 100 yards away, when Matt says. "Alright, now stay quiet, but still fast." Once they are standing right outside the big tent, Matt whispers. "Run straight, for at least 5 minutes, the walkers won't see you at that point. They will already be feasting on our 'friends'." They all run except Matt who specifically leads the walkers into the tent.
-SCENE SWAP-
Samuel was just waking up from being unconscious. "Where-WHERE'S MY ARM?!" He yells. Quincy just grins, while Zack stands crying. "Commander! Wake up!" Samuel yells. "Snore huh? Holy Hell man!! What happened to your arm." Samuel frowns, and points toward Quincy. "Why the hell did you cut off his arm?! Now we have 2 handicaps in our group! How do we fight other people- What's that noise?!" Groans come from outside the tent.
CHOICE #27
A.) Throw Samuel's arm outside the tent.
B.) Throw the commanders hand outside the tent.
C.) Grab guns, and quickly.
D.) Throw Samuel out there, it gives you more time and he can't do shit anyways. (Probably what the commander is thinking lol)
try to continue both plots, we need to mix them into one because it's a lot of work running two plots at once.
That's what I tried to do with my post above.
What kind of gun is the Nosler? Is that the revolver or the rifle?
The Commander smiled evilly. "Ladies first, faggot!" He shouted as he grabbed Samuel and threw him out of the tent. He chuckled as the walkers began feasting on his flesh. The Commander grabbed his pistol, Quincy wiped off the cleaver, and Zach grabbed the M-16's, handing one to Quincy. Zach shot two of the walkers, killing them both. The Commander shot the other zombies. "Commander, I wanna get Samuel's body," Quincy said. "Wanna fuck 'im? I'm sure he'll love your dick." The Commander said. "No, I was thinking about using his head, if you get my drift." The Commander thought, and then said, "Sure, use his head." Zach was horrified as he walked out of the tent past the bodies. The Commander followed. And Quincy decapitated Samuel.
--SCENE SHIFT--
"I think the walkers are working," Alexander said as the gunshots broke out in the camp. "Let's make for the gas station," Matt suggested. "They'd be fucking stupid to shoot us there." "Sounds like a good idea," Melody replied. The three snuck inside, dispatching the walkers closer to them before going inside the gas station. "There, Commander!" A strange voice said. "In the Texaco!" "Alright, fire at will." The Commander replied. And the battle began...
PLEASE CONTINUE
I just wrote out a whole scene, and when i backspaced, it brought me back to the community. I AM SO FRUSTRATED. I don't think i'm going to write for a while...
You know what? I will write but it won't be as detailed as I would have liked it to be. (There will be less Dialogue then what I would have liked also)
"You think we killed them?" Alexander asks. "Yeah, I stayed back. I watched them throw their own friend out of the tent!" Matt says, before Melody chimes in. "I just hope I never come that close to killing another person again!" Matt follows. "Well you never really killed anybody, you just caused their death." Melody laughs, then there's a silence. The silence is interrupted by a yell. "Fire at will!"
Alexander reacts quickly, and grabs his gun. "Grab your weapon and follow me!" He says. They run through the rather big gas station, and come across a deli. "Let's hope this door is unlocked." He says before pushing the door open. Alex closes and locks it, when they all begin to crouch.
"Come out, come out, wherever the fuck you are.." The commander says while searching through the store. "We won't fire, just come out, we need to talk." He begins to whisper. "Make sure you don't shoot unless I say, if they brought that one lady with em' then we're gonna keep her for ourselves." He says referring to Gloria. "Ah here we go- are you folks in here?" He says pushing the now locked door. "I'll shoot that glass down and kill all you fuckers, if you don't open this door!" He wait's on the other side of the door excepting an opening.
When all of a sudden he hears a lock, and the door knob move. Out steps a 16 year old boy. "Who else you got in there?" The commander asks shoving Alex out of his way. He comes across Matt and shoves him to the ground with his elbow. When he saw Melody his eyes lit up. "Well you aren't the one I was looking for, but you'll do." He says, requesting Quincy. "You carry her. I can't with my one hand."
Alexander and Matt sneak out of the building, running back towards the inn. "We shouldn't have left Melody." Alex says. "It was either her, or all of us." Alex sighs, when he heard yelling from a distance away. "Wait up!".. "Who the hell?!" The man approaches them. Matt instantly gets alarmed. "He's one of them!" Alex ready's his gun, while the man speaks up. "Wait i'm good! I'm like Austin. I never really liked the commander, I just helped him, so he didn't kill me. I plead to you please let me come with you." Alexander looks at the man, then back to Matt. "Matt do you trust him?"
A.) Yes Matt trusts him. (Allow him to come with you.)
B.) No Matt doesn't trust him. (Allow him to go own his way.)
C.) No Matt doesn't trust him. (Kill him.)
Here is what the deli looked like, if my writing was confusing. (This is what it looked like except imagine a door, and glass.)
Nolser is a rifle model
I hate when that happens! It happened to me 4 times while I tried to continue the story!
"JACKPOT!" "What is it?" "Found some whiskey, it's about damn time!" The Commander sighs with relief. "PLEASE, let me go! I'll do anything, just spare my life! I'm begging you!" "Hmmm, anything?" The Commander smiles as he says that, a smile only a true molester can wear on his face. "Wha-? Ewww no! I'm not gonna be your fucking sex slave!" Melody is disgusted by the Commander's statement. "You aren't in position of making a choice, anyway, It's not for me, I'd love to , but some little shit cut my dick off, It's for him." Quincy smiles. "I'll leave you two alone, have a good time!" wink. "Cm'ere" Quincy says as he rip Melody's shirt off, "NO! NO PLEASE STOP!" "I'll stop when I wanna stop. now, let's get star-" PKAW! A bullet goes right through Quincy's eye as he falls over Melody.
"Looks like I got here just in time.."
SCENE SWAP
"Yes." Matt says. "What?? how do you know he's speaking the truth?" Alex seems shocked by the quick decision. "When they raided our camp, he spared my life, because his "Commander" wasn't around, he had his sights on me, and he didn't pull the trigger, I've got a bullshit detector, trust me with this one." "Whatever.." He then whispers to him, "But still keep tabs on 'im, just in case.." He nods. "What's your name son?" Matt asks the stranger, "Zachary, call me Zack". "Ok Zack, we need to go back for Melody, She's our friend and your Commander captured her.", "Then we must get to her quick, because if I know my group, she's probably getting raped right now. "SHIT, we can't let that happen, we have to go!" Alex says as the trio starts running at the direction they came from.
First time for me, but it was very frustrating, it was probably the most detailed I have wrote yet!
PKAW "Looks like we got here just in time..." Alexander says. Putting the revolver back in his pocket.
The commander turns around, while chugging whiskey. "Shit.." He pulls his M-16 out and fires at Zack in the chest.. The commander tries running but doesn't have enough time. PKAW PKAW PKAW Alexander shoots 3 times piercing through the commander's face each time. Alex stares down at Zack. "He was a good man. Probably anyways. I'm going to shoot his head so he doesn't have to live as a walker." Alexander points his revolver down at Zack, and takes him out. PKAW The gunshot fires as the screen goes black...
We could end the episode. I want to write, but a timeskip would be good.
I also have a question: Is this in the same universe as the other fanfic? If not we could bring in some S1 characters.
wait guys, can I write a scene like an epilogue to end the episode? I've got something good in mind..
It is in the other universe as the other fan-fic. So at one point Melody is going to somehow lose this group.
The only person possible to be in this fan-fic from season 1 would have to be Lily.
I was thinking instead of an epilogue, we could do something similar in the beginning of episode 2, like a prologue.
Let's discuss names for episode 1, and episode 2. Here are my suggestions.
Episode 1: I'm not sure for this one.
Episode 2: The Days After
Episode 2 name's good, but for one I was thinking about something like Better times or Mother and son , you know, something along these lines, Life among them is already taken as it's the name of the comic's 12 Volume
Trust me, it's an epilogue with a major choice, it'll fit more as an ending than an opening. Tell you what, I'll post it and we'll decide after.
is it? I knew it sounded familiar, lol. Then I will scratch that name off.
ok, I posted it, tell me what you think.
Epilogue
Gloria is walking with her shotgun ready, aimed at the void of the store she was scavenging food for, when a lurker suddenly grabs her from the side. BOOM! She acts quickly, blasting the lurker's head to bits. That was a close one.., she thinks to herself while stuffing into her relatively full backpack a bottle of sprite (which was luckily not opened) and a bag of chips. "Well, guess that'll do for the next few days.." she says while opening the exit door. She's about halfway as she starts hearing a familiar sound. A sound that she didn't hear for a long time, and hadn't thought she would hear for the rest of her life. No.. it can't be... She thinks as she starts running to the direction of the voice. as she gets near the voice, she also starts hearing a walker's groan. she finally gets to the origin of the sound as she see's a female walker, tied to a nearby tree. She also sees a note near the walker and a gun just by it.
She starts reading:
I can't... I couldn't do it.. Please do it for me, and take care of him as your own...
She then looks at the origin of the sound and sees a baby. A tear trails down her cheek since he looks like Alex when he was little. She then takes the gun, gets up and says:
MAJOR CHOICE #29:
A) I will.
I'm sorry, but I can't, and then pulls the trigger.
I understand everything up until the last part. i will what? Or she can't what? (sorry i get confused a lot)
I like it, but this is a major decision for the beginning of episode 2. Don't continue from here yet.
"I will" as if I will take the baby under my wing and raise him as my own