Just got my first moment in the comic. Badass drawing man, simply badass.
Edit: If you want to piss on everyone's Cheerios you can always have me resurrect dead forum users for minions too.
Sorry about the viewing problem, the sharing thing must've switched on me without notice. I updated it so it should be viewable now. I'll check this page tomorrow to make sure it worked okay. Ciao.
Part 3 was amazing! Excellent work. I loved when I slammed my head down on the table when WeMissYouCarley brought the peaches and beans, because that's my real life reaction that crap. XD Keep up the extraordinary work.
Glad you guys like it. Now I need to have constructive criticism about the writing for Ep2 Pt3 so I know where it went right and wrong. Any pointers, guys? Areas where I need to improve?
I think you've gotten better with your dialog, it seems to flow better and sound more natural. There are still mistakes though, the last box on page 2 reads, "Hey, Nekro, you told those lads were quite tough..." Last box on page 4, "I'll have you I've been..." About halfway through page 5, "I was wondering why did you asked..." Page 6 about the halfway down, "It's peaceful, doesn't it Kiwi?" On page 2 HelloWorld says Tobi is Papai's older brother, I was under the impression Papai was Tobi's older brother.
Something came up so I'll continue this later if I get the chance.
Glad you guys like it. Now I need to have constructive criticism about the writing for Ep2 Pt3 so I know where it went right and wrong. Any pointers, guys? Areas where I need to improve?
I hate myself so much right now. Maybe I should temporarily close the issue till I type it up and fix those mistakes. And yes, Tobi is the younger of Papai. Good thing I'm doing this before I get into the manga career, this is good practice.
I think you've gotten better with your dialog, it seems to flow better and sound more natural. There are still mistakes though, the last box… more on page 2 reads, "Hey, Nekro, you told those lads were quite tough..." Last box on page 4, "I'll have you I've been..." About halfway through page 5, "I was wondering why did you asked..." Page 6 about the halfway down, "It's peaceful, doesn't it Kiwi?" On page 2 HelloWorld says Tobi is Papai's older brother, I was under the impression Papai was Tobi's older brother.
Something came up so I'll continue this later if I get the chance.
WHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA??????!!!!!!!
I hate myself so much right now. Maybe I should temporarily close the issue till I type it up and fix … morethose mistakes. And yes, Tobi is the younger of Papai. Good thing I'm doing this before I get into the manga career, this is good practice.
WHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA??????!!!!!!!
I hate myself so much right now. Maybe I should temporarily close the issue till I type it up and fix … morethose mistakes. And yes, Tobi is the younger of Papai. Good thing I'm doing this before I get into the manga career, this is good practice.
Yaay, ma ban is finally over!
Episode 5 of TWD S2 was f*cking awesome, maybe even better than season one's.
Now all I'm gonna do i… mores discuss this magnificent ending with you guys and wait for monday to get to read and review part 3 of Tobi's comic.
Hey tobi, I'd really like to say thanks for this series. You work very hard on it, and I think I speak for all of us when I say this is one of the highlights of the forum.
Hey tobi, I'd really like to say thanks for this series. You work very hard on it, and I think I speak for all of us when I say this is one of the highlights of the forum.
Okay, so I read the newest part of your comic last monday, but I didn't have time to give you my feedback until now because of the school
So yeah, part 3 was REALLY great, it felt more peaceful to me than the past ones, mostly because of this moustache thing so everyone's pretty much depressed and sad dialog was great and those silent moments and faces tell more than thousand words. You are so good at drawing faces so it's really easy to interpret what everyone's thinking, going thru in their minds etc. The plot is great, so much details, good dialog, nice characters... I love it
10/10
+Dialog
+Details
+The plot is going to great direction
+The zombie scene was awesome and Eddie maiden's first appear screen was one of my favoirites ( SO MUUCH DETAIL!)
-There pretty much haven't been any minus so far, just perfection!
Damn it's super dead here. That saddens me. Anyway just thought I'd let ya'll know I'll post a documentary about designing the characters of the comic. Oh and I finished like 8 pages of the upcoming issue. 16 pages long. And if my calculations are correct, Ep2 should be finished before December.
Damn it's super dead here. That saddens me. Anyway just thought I'd let ya'll know I'll post a documentary about designing the characters of… more the comic. Oh and I finished like 8 pages of the upcoming issue. 16 pages long. And if my calculations are correct, Ep2 should be finished before December.
Damn it's super dead here. That saddens me. Anyway just thought I'd let ya'll know I'll post a documentary about designing the characters of… more the comic. Oh and I finished like 8 pages of the upcoming issue. 16 pages long. And if my calculations are correct, Ep2 should be finished before December.
Damn it's super dead here. That saddens me. Anyway just thought I'd let ya'll know I'll post a documentary about designing the characters of… more the comic. Oh and I finished like 8 pages of the upcoming issue. 16 pages long. And if my calculations are correct, Ep2 should be finished before December.
I was passing by and i realised i haven't even said what i thought about the last (Episode, issue, scene, part.) of the comic.
The thing is, it's really hard to find stuff to criticize on something you like. So i'm just going to say that the latest (Episodes, issues, sce- GOD DAMMIT.) of the comic have been really awesome..
TWD Forum Comic: Tales from the Forum: Character Designs(Heroes)
When I first started making the characters, I wanted people to have the freedom over their own designs. They gave me description and I merely just picture it in my head with a few of my own preferences. But some just wanted me to draw them in anyway. I also used their own personality to help me make their appearance relate to them. When I was given the picture of what 1Guy was meant to look, the figure looked right but I was spectacle of the outfit. I didn't have the proper leader feel I was looking for when making the main group(Upvote Revolution), so I looked into some manga and used (NARUTO SPOILER) Madara Uchiha's Junchuriki cloak as the reference.
For Pokedme, it was really difficult to find a proper outfit as I'm not into furries, but I looked at Star Fox games and used that as an inspiration. Plus I made sure his eyes looked "light" to represent some of his light hearted personality. For Arthur I wanted his facial features match his personality and also make his hair "flaming" to represent his short temper. Kinda symbolic. When designing Z-attack, I was stumped in how to make him for a bit, but eventually I came up with the idea to give him a suburban military appearance to show he's the guy you can rely on. For Rock, I wanted to make him like Wyatt form TWD 400 Days, cuz come on, a lot of us likes the hipster. Helloworld was a real challenge in mixing Brie, Lilly, and Sarah. I decided to make her look youthful I make most of the face Sarah, hair be from Brie, and, uh, Lilly's lips. When making Cultist, when colouring him I wanted his cloak to be dark yet I wanted contrast with the colours, so instead of black hair I gave him white hair, and it looks better than I thought.
Well for Papai, he was, well, naked. He was supposed to be Tobi's brother(who's wearing clothes) and the two didn't match so I took the outfit that I was given as reference and changed it. I given him similar boots to Tobi's as well as giving a similar head to Tobi's but with a more stern appearance. Azlyn was really well described but the only changes I made was the facial structure and I added two extra horns to make some diversity from Homestuck. I put extra details on the eyes in later issues just in case you see her without them one of these times. For Nekro, the only thing I've changed was the jacket, I mixed some of Leon S. Kennedy's RE4 jacket's design to it. For Vince I looked at both Lee Everett and Cyborg from DC, and mixed the two together while adding the desired outfit the user wanted but just giving him a tank top instead a jacket to show his mechanical parts.
For Viva, I was told to surprise the user, so I used Lee Everett as a base and mixed in some Dark Elf designs from Skyrim to the mix while using the Elder Kai's design from Dragon Ball Z for the outfit. Milo was hard to make so I mostly used Iron man's body and mixed in Claptrap's parts to him. I wanted to give a rather jolly appearance for him, and the "Luigi mustache" helped suit his appearance. Originally his hair was slicked back. For ihatemycat I used Inamuta from Kill La Kill and worked from there. For WeMissYouCarley, I used Carver's jacket as reference for his own jacket.
For Tobi, I originally started out with a basic, cartoony rabbit by looking at my old Sam avatar. I originally was thought the comic would've been a bit cartoony like the Rachet and Clank series. But there were so many great designs people thought of, and I realized I had to change my character. Plus the personality didn't fit the character's appearance. So I went back and gave Tobi a much more stern yet cute face(yeah I just called my character cute) and I went with the Ratchet design from TOD and BAM, you got a simple yet iconic design. That's when I desided to give him high tech weapons. Plus I wanted to show even small characters can be strong as the tall ones.
I think Mustache killed him. But there's gotta be a reason for that. Maybe Kiwi did something he shouldn't have? Or maybe Mustache was possesed to cause trouble on the forums, so then nobody notices something else?
Only Toby the almighty creator knows the answers. (I hope. -___-)
Yaay, ma ban is finally over!
Episode 5 of TWD S2 was f*cking awesome, maybe even better than season one's.
Now all I'm gonna do i… mores discuss this magnificent ending with you guys and wait for monday to get to read and review part 3 of Tobi's comic.
Comments
XD your character seems so badass in the comic
They only bad thing about the comic was....It reminded me of @Azlyn I miss her so much pls come back D':
I may be late, but still, awesome work Tobi.
Part 3 was amazing! Excellent work. I loved when I slammed my head down on the table when WeMissYouCarley brought the peaches and beans, because that's my real life reaction that crap. XD Keep up the extraordinary work.
Glad you guys like it. Now I need to have constructive criticism about the writing for Ep2 Pt3 so I know where it went right and wrong. Any pointers, guys? Areas where I need to improve?
I think you've gotten better with your dialog, it seems to flow better and sound more natural. There are still mistakes though, the last box on page 2 reads, "Hey, Nekro, you told those lads were quite tough..." Last box on page 4, "I'll have you I've been..." About halfway through page 5, "I was wondering why did you asked..." Page 6 about the halfway down, "It's peaceful, doesn't it Kiwi?" On page 2 HelloWorld says Tobi is Papai's older brother, I was under the impression Papai was Tobi's older brother.
Something came up so I'll continue this later if I get the chance.
WHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA??????!!!!!!!
I hate myself so much right now. Maybe I should temporarily close the issue till I type it up and fix those mistakes. And yes, Tobi is the younger of Papai. Good thing I'm doing this before I get into the manga career, this is good practice.
Tobi I gave you some notes by PM and I'll be finishing the rest today
Tobi I gave you some notes by PM and I'll be finishing the rest today
LOKI DOKIE!
Markd? Did you learn shadow clone jutsu? lol
XD THERE ON TO ME SHEET
I temporarily removed Ep2 Pt3 due to some problems that need fixing. It'll be back up in updated and back up on September 1st. Sorry Guys.
Yaay, ma ban is finally over!
Episode 5 of TWD S2 was f*cking awesome, maybe even better than season one's.
Now all I'm gonna do is discuss this magnificent ending with you guys and wait for monday to get to read and review part 3 of Tobi's comic.
Okay guys, I updated Ep2 Part 3 and re-uploaded it. Enjoy.
http://uzumakiichigoy2k.deviantart.com/gallery/51020394/TWD-Forum-Comic-Mind-Games-Part-3
Welcome back, Vince!
And yeah, I really liked No Going Back. It was indeed awesome!
Thanks bruh
I'm going to read part 3 quickly now because I gotta go sleep soon (early wake up tommorow) and give you my feedback tommorow.
Hey tobi, I'd really like to say thanks for this series. You work very hard on it, and I think I speak for all of us when I say this is one of the highlights of the forum.
No problem. I enjoy it anyhow.
So I'm going to start working on part 4 of Ep2 today. The latest time to release this issue is the 20th this month!
Joker spam
Who do you think is a better villainJoker or Bane and why?
Who is your favourite villain ever and why?
I don't know, Bane's a badass, so i'll just stick with him. Not the chubby movie one, the mexican-steroid-monster from the comics.
Bane just had this perfect plan to ''break the bat'', and it worked. You need an award for beating Batman on your first try.
My favorite villain...I really don't know. Thanos and Ultron from Marvel are pretty cool.
Both of them kicked the Avengers asses.
P.S: Writing with images is awesome.
Okay, so I read the newest part of your comic last monday, but I didn't have time to give you my feedback until now because of the school
So yeah, part 3 was REALLY great, it felt more peaceful to me than the past ones, mostly because of this moustache thing so everyone's pretty much depressed and sad
dialog was great and those silent moments and faces tell more than thousand words. You are so good at drawing faces so it's really easy to interpret what everyone's thinking, going thru in their minds etc. The plot is great, so much details, good dialog, nice characters... I love it
10/10
+Dialog
+Details
+The plot is going to great direction
+The zombie scene was awesome and Eddie maiden's first appear screen was one of my favoirites ( SO MUUCH DETAIL!)
-There pretty much haven't been any minus so far, just perfection!
Damn it's super dead here. That saddens me. Anyway just thought I'd let ya'll know I'll post a documentary about designing the characters of the comic. Oh and I finished like 8 pages of the upcoming issue. 16 pages long. And if my calculations are correct, Ep2 should be finished before December.
O-O holy sheet I can't wait awesome :'D
Well yeah, there's not much to talk about honestly.
Mark has been doing a good job at reviving the thread once in a while though.
Nice to see ya around Tobi
I want it now.
Really? Damn. I thought there was.
And yeah, Mark did good. Thanks Mark!
I was passing by and i realised i haven't even said what i thought about the last (Episode, issue, scene, part.) of the comic.
The thing is, it's really hard to find stuff to criticize on something you like. So i'm just going to say that the latest (Episodes, issues, sce- GOD DAMMIT.) of the comic have been really awesome..
TWD Forum Comic: Tales from the Forum: Character Designs(Heroes)
When I first started making the characters, I wanted people to have the freedom over their own designs. They gave me description and I merely just picture it in my head with a few of my own preferences. But some just wanted me to draw them in anyway. I also used their own personality to help me make their appearance relate to them. When I was given the picture of what 1Guy was meant to look, the figure looked right but I was spectacle of the outfit. I didn't have the proper leader feel I was looking for when making the main group(Upvote Revolution), so I looked into some manga and used (NARUTO SPOILER) Madara Uchiha's Junchuriki cloak as the reference.
For Pokedme, it was really difficult to find a proper outfit as I'm not into furries, but I looked at Star Fox games and used that as an inspiration. Plus I made sure his eyes looked "light" to represent some of his light hearted personality. For Arthur I wanted his facial features match his personality and also make his hair "flaming" to represent his short temper. Kinda symbolic. When designing Z-attack, I was stumped in how to make him for a bit, but eventually I came up with the idea to give him a suburban military appearance to show he's the guy you can rely on. For Rock, I wanted to make him like Wyatt form TWD 400 Days, cuz come on, a lot of us likes the hipster. Helloworld was a real challenge in mixing Brie, Lilly, and Sarah. I decided to make her look youthful I make most of the face Sarah, hair be from Brie, and, uh, Lilly's lips. When making Cultist, when colouring him I wanted his cloak to be dark yet I wanted contrast with the colours, so instead of black hair I gave him white hair, and it looks better than I thought.
Well for Papai, he was, well, naked. He was supposed to be Tobi's brother(who's wearing clothes) and the two didn't match so I took the outfit that I was given as reference and changed it. I given him similar boots to Tobi's as well as giving a similar head to Tobi's but with a more stern appearance. Azlyn was really well described but the only changes I made was the facial structure and I added two extra horns to make some diversity from Homestuck. I put extra details on the eyes in later issues just in case you see her without them one of these times. For Nekro, the only thing I've changed was the jacket, I mixed some of Leon S. Kennedy's RE4 jacket's design to it. For Vince I looked at both Lee Everett and Cyborg from DC, and mixed the two together while adding the desired outfit the user wanted but just giving him a tank top instead a jacket to show his mechanical parts.
For Viva, I was told to surprise the user, so I used Lee Everett as a base and mixed in some Dark Elf designs from Skyrim to the mix while using the Elder Kai's design from Dragon Ball Z for the outfit. Milo was hard to make so I mostly used Iron man's body and mixed in Claptrap's parts to him. I wanted to give a rather jolly appearance for him, and the "Luigi mustache" helped suit his appearance. Originally his hair was slicked back. For ihatemycat I used Inamuta from Kill La Kill and worked from there. For WeMissYouCarley, I used Carver's jacket as reference for his own jacket.
For Tobi, I originally started out with a basic, cartoony rabbit by looking at my old Sam avatar. I originally was thought the comic would've been a bit cartoony like the Rachet and Clank series. But there were so many great designs people thought of, and I realized I had to change my character. Plus the personality didn't fit the character's appearance. So I went back and gave Tobi a much more stern yet cute face(yeah I just called my character cute) and I went with the Ratchet design from TOD and BAM, you got a simple yet iconic design. That's when I desided to give him high tech weapons. Plus I wanted to show even small characters can be strong as the tall ones.
I have to know. The things my guy character was saying, was any of it foreshadowing? If so, you don't have to tell me for what.
Maybe yes. Maybe no. It's all smoke and mirrors.
So I am curious, when you first saw Mustache standing over Kiwi's corpse, what were you thinking? Did he do it? Or is there some another explanation?
Well that he found him there, dead. Or that Kiwi attacked him for some reason.
I think Mustache killed him. But there's gotta be a reason for that. Maybe Kiwi did something he shouldn't have? Or maybe Mustache was possesed to cause trouble on the forums, so then nobody notices something else?
Only Toby the almighty creator knows the answers. (I hope. -___-)
No prob bro's and thank you This is only the beginning MUAHHAHAHA
Welcome back bro we miss you :DDDDDDDDDDDDD