How I would write episode 4
The episode begins exactly where it left off with Sarita. If her arm was chopped off, she will scream like hell, drawing Walkers. Kenny will come over and start freaking out. He picks her up and the group(Clem, Kenny, Sarita, Mike, Jane, Bonnie, Nick, Luke, and Rebecca) will run. If you didn't cut off her arm, she will conceal the bite and the group will run. At this point, Mike will trip and fall over a walkers body that is still alive. The group is to far ahead to save him, unless Nick is alive. If Nick is alive, he shoots the Walker off of Mike and he survived. If Nick is dead, Mike is killed and the group runs off into the forest. After getting far enough away, if Sarita cut off her arm, Kenny wraps a blanket he found in Carvers camp over Sarita's stump. He leans her against a tree. If her arm was not cut off, she will say she is going to use the bathroom when what she really does is commit suicide.
That's all I've got so far, I'll update later.
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That's so intense bro. I'm loving it..
Cool!!
If i were to write it, id probably do it so bad the world would explode. Not kidding.
Meh... okay
It seems there's a troll among us
yeah that was bad
It's okay, but having Sarita do the same thing as Katjaa wouldn't have the same effect it did before, it would actually be ironic how everyone Kenny loves commits suicide.
Let me change that too trolls among us
I think it'd be more sadistic, and I think it will delude Kenny into thinking that ever since the "Shawn" incident, death has replaced the one thing that kept him going, love. His love for his family caused the death of another, and so death is now going to replace that love. In a weird sadistic, breaking way.
I get where you're coming from, i'm just saying that since you already killed the character's wife, killing his other love interest in the same way wouldn't have the same effect. Kenny would be fucking pissed though.
One. It's dark. 2. There's a cult and a subsequent campfire/ritual scene.
I think instead of her killing herself, she would reveal the bite and someone would have to do it. If Kenny killed Duck in Season One, he'd do it, if he didn't kill Duck someone else like Jane or Mike would do it.