Requesting any suggestions or improvements for 16 Months

Yep, as the title suggests this is me asking for anything I can do to improve my story of Clementine and Christa.

Anything I'm doing right, anything thing I'm doing wrong, what should I keep up and what should I stop doing. Answering these can really help me out.

Keep in mind that I'm NOT asking for character submissions.

Comments

  • edited June 2014

    Love it that your keeping it within the game. The only thing that I dislike is I feel that there is an awful group at every turn, but that's what makes the story exciting! Keep up the good work :D

    Edit: By awful I mean evil

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