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The Biggest of Cities

Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
edited June 2009 in Forum Games
This is a new adventure, It'll be posed in Gmod (So don't expect regular updates, Maybe 1-3 updates a day) and will work on a multiple choice system.
You are Ray Thason, a College graduate going to the City on his private Helicopter to seek his fortunes.
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You must find a hotel to spend the night, But it occurs that getting off the building may be somewhat a problem, as the door down has been locked.
What do you do;
A) Brake the door down.
B) Jump off the side, After all, You'll only suffer minimal injuries *Hic*.
C) Use the Rope you have to abseil down slowly.
D) Call a Superhero/Magical Being to help you.
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  • MouldcubeMouldcube
    edited February 2009
    > B
  • Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
    edited February 2009
    You wake up in some sort of clinical center.
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    You: What... Happe-... Who's tha-...
    Man: That wasn't smart was it?
    You: Who're you?
    Man: names Heath Sturgeon, local Medic.
    You: Medic!? Don't those guys just ease the pain until you d-
    Sturgeon: Yes. It wasn't me who cured you of your 2 broken legs, cracked skull, fractured arms and possible puncturing of the lungs.
    You: Then... Who?
    Sturgeon: The City's caster, She's a quiet one, but undoubtedly useful.
    You: Caster? Don't see many of them around anymore.
    Sturgeon: Indeed, But anyway, You should be perfectly fine to leave right now, Ok?
    You: Sure, Got any suggestions of hotels?
    Sturgeon: Well, There's always the Devious Dartmouse or th-
    ???: Head to the Writer's Block. They are good.
    You: O... Kay then...

    That was an odd encounter... But at least you aren't dead.
    What should you do;
    A) Head to the Writer's Block, Sounds like a nice place.
    B) Go looking for a job. There has to be SOMETHING in this city.
    C) Go looking for an old contact, Who moved to the city 2 years ago.
  • SnicklinSnicklin
    edited February 2009
    A) Head to the Writer's Block, Sounds like a nice place.
  • metalkombatmetalkombat
    edited February 2009
    Snicklin wrote: »
    A) Head to the Writer's Block, Sounds like a nice place.

    A nice place, but certainly not a nice situation.

    Despite this, I agree.

    >A
  • Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
    edited February 2009
    Who was that mysterious woman? Why did she send me to the Writer's Block? Regardless, I headed over to it posthaste...
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    Looks like a nice enough place... If you can get over the battered and mangled robots...

    I'm beginning to have second thoughts... What should I do?
    A) Go inside. It can't be as bad as the outside looks.
    B) Go looking for that woman, She sounded familiar...
    C) Runaway screaming.
    D) Do the Chicken Dance!
  • SnicklinSnicklin
    edited February 2009
    B) Go looking for that woman, She sounded familiar...
  • Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
    edited February 2009
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    Using the telescope that is on a high building, You search for her, But to no avail, However... There's a note in your pocket that says;
    "ターンに戻る。手遅れではない。"
    It seems to be written in another language, And your degree didn't cover things like that.
    How strange...

    *Strange Note added to Inventory*

    That was pointless... What should I do?
    A) Head Back to the Block.
    B) Look for a store to buy some Supplies and food. I'm hungry.
    C) Go to the Arcade. I'm real Bored.
    D) Look for a bar or someone to pick a fight with.

    (Also, Are you guys gettin' tired of bad over-the-shoulder shots with bad DoF?)
  • SnicklinSnicklin
    edited February 2009
    "Back to the turn. It's not too late." it says.

    A) Head Back to the Block.
  • Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
    edited February 2009
    EDIT: *Sigh* Ray is experiencing technical difficulties taking the last picture (Very bad Vertex Errors) So I'll get it posted tomorrow, But you can see the first 2/3 of the post.
    You go into the hotel, and see a bright flash of light. When you open your eyes... You see something odd.
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    You proceed down the *ahem* Stairs and come to the realization that you aren't in the city anymore.
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    I think I'm going to go to the tunnels. What should I do;
    A) Go to the tunnels.
    B) Go to the tunnels.
    C) Go to the tunnels.
    D) Dance! Just kidding.
  • SnicklinSnicklin
    edited February 2009
    D) Dance!
  • metalkombatmetalkombat
    edited February 2009
    D) Dance!

    Then, B) Go to the tunnels.
  • StinkomanFanStinkomanFan
    edited February 2009
    D.!
  • MouldcubeMouldcube
    edited February 2009
    hmm...I can't choose btween A and C, but B's just stupid, so I'll leave that one.
  • Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
    edited February 2009
    ...Be... Grateful... I had to change map JUST to get a shot in an Orange and Grey Tunnel, But sadly, It's not as good as the tunnel in the other map. *sigh*
    You walk into the tunnels and-
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    AH! Some kind of monster has jumped out at you!
    Somehow, There's a sword in your hands, But you don't think your fighting skills will do much good...

    Ah! What do I do!
    A) Fight this beast, HEAD ON!
    B) Run! You haven't got a chance!
    C) Try and lure it away from the tunnels and get a sneak attack in.
    D) Try and take it down BARE HANDS!... No, wait, That'd be dumb.

    (Also, For those who want dancing, It'll be in the "End of Chapter 1; Bonus Features")
  • MouldcubeMouldcube
    edited February 2009
    A!!
  • Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
    edited February 2009
    I'll post it tomorrow, But only about 3-ish more parts until Chapter end, And Chapter 2's format may be different. That okay?
  • metalkombatmetalkombat
    edited February 2009
    Ray-The-Sun wrote: »
    That okay?

    Fine by me.
  • Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
    edited February 2009
    You Fight the beast and eventually end up outside...
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    You dodge a blow from the beast, And it loses track of you, And while it is emitting a loud, High pitch sound...
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    You sneak behind it and notice a strange symbol, Perhaps some kind of weak point...
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    You stab your sword STRAIGHT THROUGH the Monster's back, Bringing it right to the ground, Moaning in pain. The beast is vanquished!

    You turn around and walk away, but...
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    a bright light appears before you, And suddenly, you feel... different.
    Alright, Since the last part's plot is already decided, Let's have a vote for bonus content on the Episode 1 Bonus Chapter, There'll be two, One for this part, And one for the next.

    A) Character Bios/Facts/Interviews
    B) Next episode preview
    C) Random Funny Poses (From Ray's screenshot folder)
    D) Serious Stuff.
  • MouldcubeMouldcube
    edited February 2009
    I vote C
  • SidGarciaSidGarcia
    edited February 2009
    I also vote C.
  • metalkombatmetalkombat
    edited February 2009
    Ray-The-Sun wrote: »
    (Also, For those who want dancing, It'll be in the "End of Chapter 1; Bonus Features")

    I was promised dancing!

    >E - Dancing

    However, since I suspect that random funny poses may include dancing, I'll also vote for a choice presented to me,

    >C

    the least useful and most entertaining choice of the lot.
  • Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
    edited February 2009
    When you open your eyes, You see something else that's strange
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    "I swear- I'm really getting sick of dimensional travel now".
    You look forward, and there's some kind of glow...
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    "こんにちは。"
    You do not understand what it is saying, But you seem to get the message.
    "Umm... Hello?"
    "冷静さを保つてください。 私はあなたを傷つけるものではありません。"
    "Well that's a relief, Say, Wouldn't know why I'm going through these really trippy dream worlds, Wouldya?"
    "彼らは試験をしている。あなたが合格しています。"
    "Doesn't surprise me... but... Who are you?"
    "私はキャスター番号7 。わたしは...
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    Sephie!"
    "...That sounded better in your head, yeah?"
    "実に。"
    "*sigh* I guess you need ME to rid the world of some evil or fulfill some prophecy, right?"
    "はい。"
    "Fine, Take me back to the city then..."
    "わかりました。"
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    "I'm gonna throw uuup!"
    Time to vote for Bonus thing content 2/3;
    A) Character Bios/Facts/Interviews.
    B) Next episode preview.
    C) List of what things say in japanese.
    D) Serious Stuff.
  • MouldcubeMouldcube
    edited February 2009
    ...C
  • SnicklinSnicklin
    edited February 2009
    B) Next episode preview.
  • Darkblade07Darkblade07
    edited February 2009
    C)List of what japanese stuff says
  • Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
    edited February 2009
    Guys, Sorry there haven't been updates in a week, I took a break for half term, I'll try and get back on track next monday.
  • Darkblade07Darkblade07
    edited February 2009
    Question about gmod? Did you get the pack with orange box or just half-life...
    Cause it looks like one of the stages is a TF2 Stage.
  • Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
    edited February 2009
    I DO have TF2, But none of the maps themselves are from it (gm_bigcity, gm_develepor_otter, and gm_construct, I believe).
  • Darkblade07Darkblade07
    edited February 2009
    Well,I am expecting next part to have some heavy weapons guy..And maybe a Pyro,and a scout...
  • the_napoleonthe_napoleon
    edited February 2009
    I would usually say something about my game idea rules, but since my game is dead now I'll let anyone use my idea. Plus, yours has G-mod.
  • SnicklinSnicklin
    edited February 2009
    In this episode, use characters from Team Fortress 2.
  • Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
    edited February 2009
    I am REALLY sorry guys, But my bandwidth has been cut and I can't log in to steam and just when I get the Outlaw Star theme on HLSS...
  • SnicklinSnicklin
    edited February 2009
    Same thing here. I can't go on TF2, because Steam's server is too busy for anyone else logging in. Maybe we should wait until next week, guys.
  • Ray-The-SunRay-The-Sun
    edited February 2009
    Indeed, I may get the preview bonus but thats about it.
    Also; Here's a preview of the preview; "I AM CRUSH PUNY MEN WITH MY HANDS!"
  • SnicklinSnicklin
    edited February 2009
    :eek:
  • pizzapumapizzapuma
    edited June 2009
    >update
  • Darkblade07Darkblade07
    edited June 2009
    Ray-The-Sun wrote: »
    "I AM CRUSH PUNY MEN WITH MY HANDS!"

    Dundidledun Dundidledun Dundidledun Duh Dun Dn Dun dn duh!
    I'm Heavy weapons guy.
  • SnicklinSnicklin
    edited June 2009
    "I am full of sandvich and I am coming for you!"

    Ha ha ha ha!
  • Darkblade07Darkblade07
    edited June 2009
    "Ommm Nommmm Nommmm!"
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  • SnicklinSnicklin
    edited June 2009
    No. It goes "nom nom nom om nom nom".
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