Well I didn't wanna be in your stupid game anyway, I'll make a better one with blackjack and hookers!! Eh actually forget the whole blackjack and hookers thing.
To be honest, guys, I'm trying to figure out my next course of action. You guys went down a weird route that I hadn't considered much, which made the plot that I thought of impossible.
To be honest, guys, I'm trying to figure out my next course of action. You guys went down a weird route that I hadn't considered much, which made the plot that I thought of impossible.
Yeah, but you guys did things that I hadn't thought out. I thought, Oh yeah, they could do A, or B. Then with B, blah blah would happen, and blah blah blah. Then I never got back to A. So basically, it's just me being a shitty writer
Yeah, but you guys did things that I hadn't thought out. I thought, Oh yeah, they could do A, or B. Then with B, blah blah would happen, and blah blah blah. Then I never got back to A. So basically, it's just me being a shitty writer
Honestly, I just... Idk, not even think about that. I just completely block it off of my mind. I just have that mentality that I never saw that, you understand?
Ah okay. Hopefully "You'll make it through this bout of whatever you got, and write for us for a good long while."
Also you may want to change the title as Battle Royale is full, and is accepting no more people.
Brotato's is on the other forum. I wouldn't mind if you did, but I think two is a good number. Maybe once one of these two stories finish. What would be the basis of yours? Maybe you would do a Battle Royale, because Clayton's Battle Royale doesn't look to similar to the source material.
YES!!!!! THANK YOU. YUSSSSS I'MA DANCE. I CALL IT THE PUNCAKE DANCE
Mind if I make one of these threads? I'm not exactly sure if I should because apparently there is three ("Brotato's" Yours, and Clayton's.)
YES!!!!! THANK YOU. YUSSSSS I'MA DANCE. I CALL IT THE PUNCAKE DANCE
Mind if I make one of these threads? I'm not exactly sure if I should because apparently there is three ("Brotato's" Yours, and Clayton's.)
Wait... One of the stories will finish? I want it to live forever. Anyway I'm not actually sure on the basis. I don't want to do Battle Royale because it would kind of copy Clayton's idea and title.
I'm thinking of asking users for a personality, name, and background information. I will ask people what location would they like to start off at and the top chosen, or most liked will be the starting points. There will be about one to five places(depending on how many people join) to start out at. I will then randomly put people in the places (Some will have more then others, Example: A countryside farm would have little people, a mall, or city location would have a lot more) and then kind of start off from there. Lemme know whatcha think
This is just a rough idea as I kind of made it up on the spot .
Brotato's is on the other forum. I wouldn't mind if you did, but I think two is a good number. Maybe once one of these two stories finish. W… morehat would be the basis of yours? Maybe you would do a Battle Royale, because Clayton's Battle Royale doesn't look to similar to the source material.
I dunno, man. You oughta develop it some. I still don't know what the purpose would be. What the end goal would be. With this, it's survival. Whether it be surviving bandits or zombies, it's survival. With Battle Royale, it's victory. At least, those are the starting purposes. Later purposes might be something like rebuilding society, for this, or escaping the fight, for Battle Royale.
Wait... One of the stories will finish? I want it to live forever. Anyway I'm not actually sure on the basis. I don't want to do Battle Roy… moreale because it would kind of copy Clayton's idea and title.
I'm thinking of asking users for a personality, name, and background information. I will ask people what location would they like to start off at and the top chosen, or most liked will be the starting points. There will be about one to five places(depending on how many people join) to start out at. I will then randomly put people in the places (Some will have more then others, Example: A countryside farm would have little people, a mall, or city location would have a lot more) and then kind of start off from there. Lemme know whatcha think
This is just a rough idea as I kind of made it up on the spot .
How should I develop it? Mainly these stories are about survival so that's basically the purpose. I guess my main goal is to make sure everyone has a good role, and will make a mark on the story be it big or small. I want to follow in your footsteps to write as good as you do.
I dunno, man. You oughta develop it some. I still don't know what the purpose would be. What the end goal would be. With this, it's survival… more. Whether it be surviving bandits or zombies, it's survival. With Battle Royale, it's victory. At least, those are the starting purposes. Later purposes might be something like rebuilding society, for this, or escaping the fight, for Battle Royale.
How should I develop it? Mainly these stories are about survival so that's basically the purpose. I guess my main goal is to make sure every… moreone has a good role, and will make a mark on the story be it big or small. I want to follow in your footsteps to write as good as you do.
Seriously me and Puncake are begging for more.
I dunno. Make it unique. Watch a movie or two. Get some inspiration. Maybe a horror related story? Try watching a few Horror movies.
Also, thanks for the compliment, but I ain't that good at writing.
Well I liked The Walking Dead, so I started thinking of a story that could happen with its rules. Somewhere closer to home would be nice, so I set it in Cali. I did change the world a bit, though.
To be honest, guys, I'm trying to figure out my next course of action. You guys went down a weird route that I hadn't considered much, which made the plot that I thought of impossible.
Well I liked The Walking Dead, so I started thinking of a story that could happen with its rules. Somewhere closer to home would be nice, so I set it in Cali. I did change the world a bit, though.
HELP MASTER PSYCHIC. PULL THOSE MOTHERFUCKERS OFF OF HIM.
"GET OFF HIM!" I ran up to the two beating the hell out of MP, and flat out football punted one of them in the fucking face. Then I tackled the other. I got in a punch or two before the other one got up. I hopped off of the guy underneath me, and I prepared to fight. One of them took out a gun, and shot MP in the throat, never breaking eye contact with me. I responded by pulling out my revolver and shooting him in the shoulder.
"HOLY FUCK!" Someone in the courtroom that MP tried to run from shouted. Leetheprofessional and some girl stepped out. "HARP?" Pro looked like shit. He had a black eye, and a bandaged arm, and a bandage around his midsection. The girl didn't have a black eye or anything, but she did have a bandage around her shoulder.
The other big guy tackled me while I was distracted. He started to absolutely wail on me. One hit after another fucked me up. "YOU. DON'T FUCKING. SHOOT. FROSTBITE." This must've angered dad, because seconds later, I heard him shouting, and then he kicked the guy in the face, grabbed him by the shirt, and pinned him against the wall.
"Don't hit my son, SANDEN!"
"Fuck you, stache!' Sanden gut punched him, and threw dad into a trash heap. All the while, Pro and the girl were freaking out over MP's corpse.
"What the fuck? He was only supposed to get a beating." Pro turned to the girl, "What happened?"
"I don't know! This guy intervened, and..."
Oh shit. A feeling of deep shame rose in my stomach.
(?) YOU MIGHT HAVE CAUSED MASTER PSYCHIC'S DEATH
Meanwhile, dad was getting the crap kicked out of him. He was not a match for Sanden's brute strength. GuiltyKing was arguing with Tyranitar, speaking very intently. Raging Blades was watching. Either shock or indecision was bright in his eyes. I couldn't figure out which would be worse. Sanden came over to me, after tossing dad against a brick wall, winding him. He then said "You shouldn't have tried anything, kid." His foot was lifted over my head, and I could almost feel the stomp coming. I closed my eyes, not wanting to see it, too.
...
He must have been pausing dramatically.
...
Suddenly, I heard a shout, accompanied by a grunt, and rustling. He hit the ground with a thud. I heard what must have been some nasty punches. I opened my eyes, and saw Raging Blades, attacking him. One punch after another. He must have surprised him, because a second later, Sanden picked him up, and pinned him against the wall. It was his turn to slam. Once, twice, three times.
(?) RAGING BLADES SAVED YOU
King came over with a brick, and hit Sanden over the head. Sanden fell, and King began to stomp him. It wasn't long before he grabbed King's foot, and tripped him. At this point, I could see Tyranitar mutter something under his breath, before he came in with wild fist swings. Dad got up out of the heap, and grabbed a mean looking 2x4 before walking over to Sanden. Raging Blades was down, and recovering. He made eye contact with me, and he said a nonverbal message loud and clear. What do you want to do?
The strength in numbers was helpful, but the fight still could swing either way.
Meanwhile, Pro was still freaking out over the corpse of a good friend. He hardly seemed invested at all in the situation. The girl seemed shaken, but not stirred. She seemed interested in the fight, but it was clear she was trying desperately to ignore MP, and she wasn't good at it.
COMFORT LEETHEPROFESSIONAL AND THE GIRL/KEEP RAGING BLADES OUT OF THE FIGHT
HELP FIGHT SANDEN AND BRING RAGING BLADES WITH ME
VOTING IS CLOSED
JONGON
"NOBODY rules over us! We are a sovereign power, and anybody who thinks otherwise WILL. BE. CORRECTED." Eeuss finished his speech on that strong note, and our soldier-type people (all 5 of us) liked it. Notben was the only one not celebrating, but he was happy. You could tell because he got his psycho look on. His eyes bulged real wide, and his hands were on his knees. A creepy smile formed on his face as well. He meant well enough, though. Bananas simply cheered and whistled. Puncake and Graysonn cheered and high fived. Even our pet walker, "Porky" seemed happy. Though it is hard to tell with his muzzle on. Deceptio seemed happy, too. As Eeuss walked towards the armory, he got several claps on the back, and obligatory "Woo!"s and "Hell yeah!"s.
"Now, guys. While you pick your weapons, just remember that the men next to you need weapons as well. And they also need weapons while we're out. Take one. We can't afford to be one man armies. Also remember to take a fanny pack," Eeuss was interrupted by four of us voicing our disapproval at once, while Teameveryonenotben cheered sarcastically, "HEY! You need a good way to store our ammo. OTHERWISE, you're gonna look like an asshole reaching into your backpacks, and it'll slow us down, and we may lose lives because of our terrible reload time."
YES!!!!! THANK YOU. YUSSSSS I'MA DANCE. I CALL IT THE PUNCAKE DANCE
Mind if I make one of these threads? I'm not exactly sure if I should because apparently there is three ("Brotato's" Yours, and Clayton's.)
HARPADARPA
HELP MASTER PSYCHIC. PULL THOSE MOTHERFUCKERS OFF OF HIM.
"GET OFF HIM!" I ran up to the two beating the hell out of MP, an… mored flat out football punted one of them in the fucking face. Then I tackled the other. I got in a punch or two before the other one got up. I hopped off of the guy underneath me, and I prepared to fight. One of them took out a gun, and shot MP in the throat, never breaking eye contact with me. I responded by pulling out my revolver and shooting him in the shoulder.
"HOLY FUCK!" Someone in the courtroom that MP tried to run from shouted. Leetheprofessional and some girl stepped out. "HARP?" Pro looked like shit. He had a black eye, and a bandaged arm, and a bandage around his midsection. The girl didn't have a black eye or anything, but she did have a bandage around her shoulder.
The other big guy tackled me while I was distracted. He started to absolutely wail on me. One hit after another fucked me u… [view original content]
HARPADARPA
HELP MASTER PSYCHIC. PULL THOSE MOTHERFUCKERS OFF OF HIM.
"GET OFF HIM!" I ran up to the two beating the hell out of MP, an… mored flat out football punted one of them in the fucking face. Then I tackled the other. I got in a punch or two before the other one got up. I hopped off of the guy underneath me, and I prepared to fight. One of them took out a gun, and shot MP in the throat, never breaking eye contact with me. I responded by pulling out my revolver and shooting him in the shoulder.
"HOLY FUCK!" Someone in the courtroom that MP tried to run from shouted. Leetheprofessional and some girl stepped out. "HARP?" Pro looked like shit. He had a black eye, and a bandaged arm, and a bandage around his midsection. The girl didn't have a black eye or anything, but she did have a bandage around her shoulder.
The other big guy tackled me while I was distracted. He started to absolutely wail on me. One hit after another fucked me u… [view original content]
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lol
Are you going to introduce the characters by the order on the list or randomly?
Mostly randomly. I am trying to get more people who signed up towards the beginning, though.
Probably randomly, because he can.
Good thing Blind Sniper cleaned it up.
To be honest, guys, I'm trying to figure out my next course of action. You guys went down a weird route that I hadn't considered much, which made the plot that I thought of impossible.
How do we go down a weird route? Your the one writing the story. The only thing we do is sign up.
Yeah, but you guys did things that I hadn't thought out. I thought, Oh yeah, they could do A, or B. Then with B, blah blah would happen, and blah blah blah. Then I never got back to A. So basically, it's just me being a shitty writer
Ah okay. Sorry I guess.
Honestly, I just... Idk, not even think about that. I just completely block it off of my mind. I just have that mentality that I never saw that, you understand?
Like, I get the immediate outcomes of the choices, but after that, I'm still kinda figuring out where to go.
Ah okay. Hopefully "You'll make it through this bout of whatever you got, and write for us for a good long while."
Also you may want to change the title as Battle Royale is full, and is accepting no more people.
Alright, now I think I get what I do next. I'll start writing now.
YES!!!!! THANK YOU. YUSSSSS I'MA DANCE. I CALL IT THE PUNCAKE DANCE
Mind if I make one of these threads? I'm not exactly sure if I should because apparently there is three ("Brotato's" Yours, and Clayton's.)
Brotato's is on the other forum. I wouldn't mind if you did, but I think two is a good number. Maybe once one of these two stories finish. What would be the basis of yours? Maybe you would do a Battle Royale, because Clayton's Battle Royale doesn't look to similar to the source material.
Wait... One of the stories will finish?
I want it to live forever. Anyway I'm not actually sure on the basis. I don't want to do Battle Royale because it would kind of copy Clayton's idea and title.
I'm thinking of asking users for a personality, name, and background information. I will ask people what location would they like to start off at and the top chosen, or most liked will be the starting points. There will be about one to five places(depending on how many people join) to start out at. I will then randomly put people in the places (Some will have more then others, Example: A countryside farm would have little people, a mall, or city location would have a lot more) and then kind of start off from there. Lemme know whatcha think
This is just a rough idea as I kind of made it up on the spot
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Your weird....
I dunno, man. You oughta develop it some. I still don't know what the purpose would be. What the end goal would be. With this, it's survival. Whether it be surviving bandits or zombies, it's survival. With Battle Royale, it's victory. At least, those are the starting purposes. Later purposes might be something like rebuilding society, for this, or escaping the fight, for Battle Royale.
How should I develop it? Mainly these stories are about survival so that's basically the purpose. I guess my main goal is to make sure everyone has a good role, and will make a mark on the story be it big or small. I want to follow in your footsteps to write as good as you do.
Seriously me and Puncake are begging for more.
I dunno. Make it unique. Watch a movie or two. Get some inspiration. Maybe a horror related story? Try watching a few Horror movies.
Also, thanks for the compliment, but I ain't that good at writing.
I'm not into horror movies.... BTW What inspired you?
Well your good enough that I am inspired and I want more parts so in my book your pretty good.
Well I liked The Walking Dead, so I started thinking of a story that could happen with its rules. Somewhere closer to home would be nice, so I set it in Cali. I did change the world a bit, though.
I want more of this too It's so good.
No shit.
Harp are you almost done?
Is it here yet?
Just about.
WARNING TO EVERYONE!!!! THAT MOTHERFUCKER IS BACK AS "THELONEONE"!!! DON'T OPEN THREADS!!!
HARPADARPA
HELP MASTER PSYCHIC. PULL THOSE MOTHERFUCKERS OFF OF HIM.
"GET OFF HIM!" I ran up to the two beating the hell out of MP, and flat out football punted one of them in the fucking face. Then I tackled the other. I got in a punch or two before the other one got up. I hopped off of the guy underneath me, and I prepared to fight. One of them took out a gun, and shot MP in the throat, never breaking eye contact with me. I responded by pulling out my revolver and shooting him in the shoulder.
"HOLY FUCK!" Someone in the courtroom that MP tried to run from shouted. Leetheprofessional and some girl stepped out. "HARP?" Pro looked like shit. He had a black eye, and a bandaged arm, and a bandage around his midsection. The girl didn't have a black eye or anything, but she did have a bandage around her shoulder.
The other big guy tackled me while I was distracted. He started to absolutely wail on me. One hit after another fucked me up. "YOU. DON'T FUCKING. SHOOT. FROSTBITE." This must've angered dad, because seconds later, I heard him shouting, and then he kicked the guy in the face, grabbed him by the shirt, and pinned him against the wall.
"Don't hit my son, SANDEN!"
"Fuck you, stache!' Sanden gut punched him, and threw dad into a trash heap. All the while, Pro and the girl were freaking out over MP's corpse.
"What the fuck? He was only supposed to get a beating." Pro turned to the girl, "What happened?"
"I don't know! This guy intervened, and..."
Oh shit. A feeling of deep shame rose in my stomach.
(?) YOU MIGHT HAVE CAUSED MASTER PSYCHIC'S DEATH
Meanwhile, dad was getting the crap kicked out of him. He was not a match for Sanden's brute strength. GuiltyKing was arguing with Tyranitar, speaking very intently. Raging Blades was watching. Either shock or indecision was bright in his eyes. I couldn't figure out which would be worse. Sanden came over to me, after tossing dad against a brick wall, winding him. He then said "You shouldn't have tried anything, kid." His foot was lifted over my head, and I could almost feel the stomp coming. I closed my eyes, not wanting to see it, too.
...
He must have been pausing dramatically.
...
Suddenly, I heard a shout, accompanied by a grunt, and rustling. He hit the ground with a thud. I heard what must have been some nasty punches. I opened my eyes, and saw Raging Blades, attacking him. One punch after another. He must have surprised him, because a second later, Sanden picked him up, and pinned him against the wall. It was his turn to slam. Once, twice, three times.
(?) RAGING BLADES SAVED YOU
King came over with a brick, and hit Sanden over the head. Sanden fell, and King began to stomp him. It wasn't long before he grabbed King's foot, and tripped him. At this point, I could see Tyranitar mutter something under his breath, before he came in with wild fist swings. Dad got up out of the heap, and grabbed a mean looking 2x4 before walking over to Sanden. Raging Blades was down, and recovering. He made eye contact with me, and he said a nonverbal message loud and clear. What do you want to do?
The strength in numbers was helpful, but the fight still could swing either way.
Meanwhile, Pro was still freaking out over the corpse of a good friend. He hardly seemed invested at all in the situation. The girl seemed shaken, but not stirred. She seemed interested in the fight, but it was clear she was trying desperately to ignore MP, and she wasn't good at it.
COMFORT LEETHEPROFESSIONAL AND THE GIRL/KEEP RAGING BLADES OUT OF THE FIGHT
HELP FIGHT SANDEN AND BRING RAGING BLADES WITH ME
VOTING IS CLOSED
JONGON
"NOBODY rules over us! We are a sovereign power, and anybody who thinks otherwise WILL. BE. CORRECTED." Eeuss finished his speech on that strong note, and our soldier-type people (all 5 of us) liked it. Notben was the only one not celebrating, but he was happy. You could tell because he got his psycho look on. His eyes bulged real wide, and his hands were on his knees. A creepy smile formed on his face as well. He meant well enough, though. Bananas simply cheered and whistled. Puncake and Graysonn cheered and high fived. Even our pet walker, "Porky" seemed happy. Though it is hard to tell with his muzzle on. Deceptio seemed happy, too. As Eeuss walked towards the armory, he got several claps on the back, and obligatory "Woo!"s and "Hell yeah!"s.
"Now, guys. While you pick your weapons, just remember that the men next to you need weapons as well. And they also need weapons while we're out. Take one. We can't afford to be one man armies. Also remember to take a fanny pack," Eeuss was interrupted by four of us voicing our disapproval at once, while Teameveryonenotben cheered sarcastically, "HEY! You need a good way to store our ammo. OTHERWISE, you're gonna look like an asshole reaching into your backpacks, and it'll slow us down, and we may lose lives because of our terrible reload time."
Jack Black is da boss.
Raging, if you make a thread be sure to include me, I like your writing style
Your vote?
MP NO!!!!! But yay so many introductions! And I fought... Got beat down though...
Come on.. Guilty and Stache can handle Sanden. (What is Tyranitar up to?...)
Comfort LeeTheProfessional and the Girl/ Keep Raging Blades out of the fight
If I do you will be one of the first
. Also Harpa and Puncake if they want.