A POST! YES! ITS AWESOME!
Give in, so nobody dies.
They're our friends I trust they won't hurt us. Now I'm wondering what happened to me and Stache... Apparently we went apeshit lol.
I guess we could be in Rafoli's group since Pro was there?
Fun fact, JonGon's first chapter was intended to be a flash forward. I wasn't anticipating my own death, but when it happened, I decided to just skip all the time in between.
Fun fact, JonGon's first chapter was intended to be a flash forward. I wasn't anticipating my own death, but when it happened, I decided to just skip all the time in between.
I haven't been much active in the forums these last 3 days and I didn't had the chance to vote in the last 2 parts. Regardless I'm back now and even though you probably heard this quite a few times already, you're doing a great job! Anyway, my vote is: GIVE IN, SO NOBODY DIES
JONGON
SEND NOTBEN INTO THE TRAP
"Notben, you're a better fighter. You check i-"
"Hey! I know what I'm doing, give me a chance, man… more." Puncake interrupted.
"No. Notben has a better chance. Did you see how he fucking tomahawked that guy with a sickle? He's more qualified. Go, Notben. Everyone else, start making sure these guys don't come back."
Notben didn't say a word, but instead, chuckled, and took a shoe off of a dead soldier, after stabbing him in the head. He took cover next to the door, as we shot the poor lost souls of the golden state. I wonder what is going on in the rest of the world. Is there a charity to help us? I notice that every few days, helicopters fly far overhead. I've seen them dropping crates, too. Wouldn't it be nice, if one day they dropped a big crate of food? I've tried going into central Cali, but everything useful is guarded heavily by rednecks and crazies. UC Merced seemed not so bad. Students had fo… [view original content]
With all of the major characters related to your organization now side characters, you now will have to come in at a later point, and with less force than you would have previously. If you people had just walked past Sanden and MP, then you would already have been introduced, and you also would have had a huge moment. You still will, but my death has pushed it off. Far off.
JONGON
SEND NOTBEN INTO THE TRAP
"Notben, you're a better fighter. You check i-"
"Hey! I know what I'm doing, give me a chance, man… more." Puncake interrupted.
"No. Notben has a better chance. Did you see how he fucking tomahawked that guy with a sickle? He's more qualified. Go, Notben. Everyone else, start making sure these guys don't come back."
Notben didn't say a word, but instead, chuckled, and took a shoe off of a dead soldier, after stabbing him in the head. He took cover next to the door, as we shot the poor lost souls of the golden state. I wonder what is going on in the rest of the world. Is there a charity to help us? I notice that every few days, helicopters fly far overhead. I've seen them dropping crates, too. Wouldn't it be nice, if one day they dropped a big crate of food? I've tried going into central Cali, but everything useful is guarded heavily by rednecks and crazies. UC Merced seemed not so bad. Students had fo… [view original content]
JONGON
SEND NOTBEN INTO THE TRAP
"Notben, you're a better fighter. You check i-"
"Hey! I know what I'm doing, give me a chance, man… more." Puncake interrupted.
"No. Notben has a better chance. Did you see how he fucking tomahawked that guy with a sickle? He's more qualified. Go, Notben. Everyone else, start making sure these guys don't come back."
Notben didn't say a word, but instead, chuckled, and took a shoe off of a dead soldier, after stabbing him in the head. He took cover next to the door, as we shot the poor lost souls of the golden state. I wonder what is going on in the rest of the world. Is there a charity to help us? I notice that every few days, helicopters fly far overhead. I've seen them dropping crates, too. Wouldn't it be nice, if one day they dropped a big crate of food? I've tried going into central Cali, but everything useful is guarded heavily by rednecks and crazies. UC Merced seemed not so bad. Students had fo… [view original content]
JONGON
SEND NOTBEN INTO THE TRAP
"Notben, you're a better fighter. You check i-"
"Hey! I know what I'm doing, give me a chance, man… more." Puncake interrupted.
"No. Notben has a better chance. Did you see how he fucking tomahawked that guy with a sickle? He's more qualified. Go, Notben. Everyone else, start making sure these guys don't come back."
Notben didn't say a word, but instead, chuckled, and took a shoe off of a dead soldier, after stabbing him in the head. He took cover next to the door, as we shot the poor lost souls of the golden state. I wonder what is going on in the rest of the world. Is there a charity to help us? I notice that every few days, helicopters fly far overhead. I've seen them dropping crates, too. Wouldn't it be nice, if one day they dropped a big crate of food? I've tried going into central Cali, but everything useful is guarded heavily by rednecks and crazies. UC Merced seemed not so bad. Students had fo… [view original content]
With all of the major characters related to your organization now side characters, you now will have to come in at a later point, and with l… moreess force than you would have previously. If you people had just walked past Sanden and MP, then you would already have been introduced, and you also would have had a huge moment. You still will, but my death has pushed it off. Far off.
JONGON
SEND NOTBEN INTO THE TRAP
"Notben, you're a better fighter. You check i-"
"Hey! I know what I'm doing, give me a chance, man… more." Puncake interrupted.
"No. Notben has a better chance. Did you see how he fucking tomahawked that guy with a sickle? He's more qualified. Go, Notben. Everyone else, start making sure these guys don't come back."
Notben didn't say a word, but instead, chuckled, and took a shoe off of a dead soldier, after stabbing him in the head. He took cover next to the door, as we shot the poor lost souls of the golden state. I wonder what is going on in the rest of the world. Is there a charity to help us? I notice that every few days, helicopters fly far overhead. I've seen them dropping crates, too. Wouldn't it be nice, if one day they dropped a big crate of food? I've tried going into central Cali, but everything useful is guarded heavily by rednecks and crazies. UC Merced seemed not so bad. Students had fo… [view original content]
Honestly, this is probably my favorite fanfic on this forum.
I like Tobi's fanfic but it's a little too silly for my tastes.
Keep up the damn good work, Harp
(loved the breaking bad reference btw)
Woo! Yay
Maybe somebody could do some fanart for me. Huh? Huh? Anyone?
No?
... Okay...
By the way, do you remember what specifically Notben was referring to?
He threw it into a hallway, and then a dude charged through. Then came the part where he used the chinese guy to find where the guy's head was. That was one of my favorites.
Or Maybe war is coming between a big group of people, It was weird about the helicopters flying around dropping crates. I think they might play a big role later on when we find out more. But Idk, honestly the ending caught me off guard, bro. Good job.
"Did you see how"
Or Maybe war is coming between a big group of people, It was weird about the helicopters flying around dropping crates.… more I think they might play a big role later on when we find out more. But Idk, honestly the ending caught me off guard, bro. Good job.
He threw it into a hallway, and then a dude charged through. Then came the part where he used the chinese guy to find where the guy's head was. That was one of my favorites.
JONGON
SEND NOTBEN INTO THE TRAP
"Notben, you're a better fighter. You check i-"
"Hey! I know what I'm doing, give me a chance, man… more." Puncake interrupted.
"No. Notben has a better chance. Did you see how he fucking tomahawked that guy with a sickle? He's more qualified. Go, Notben. Everyone else, start making sure these guys don't come back."
Notben didn't say a word, but instead, chuckled, and took a shoe off of a dead soldier, after stabbing him in the head. He took cover next to the door, as we shot the poor lost souls of the golden state. I wonder what is going on in the rest of the world. Is there a charity to help us? I notice that every few days, helicopters fly far overhead. I've seen them dropping crates, too. Wouldn't it be nice, if one day they dropped a big crate of food? I've tried going into central Cali, but everything useful is guarded heavily by rednecks and crazies. UC Merced seemed not so bad. Students had fo… [view original content]
Honestly, this is probably my favorite fanfic on this forum.
I like Tobi's fanfic but it's a little too silly for my tastes.
Keep up the damn good work, Harp
(loved the breaking bad reference btw)
Comments
Yup. Definitely sucks.
I wouldn't be making jokes if I were you. You were going to be a HUGE character.
give in. Too risky.
my bad. Didn't mean to reply to you.
As for going apeshit, I imagine that would mainly refer to Stache and GuiltyKing. Maybe Tyranitar. Your character seemed to be more chilled out.
Don't worry, I got your vote.
Fun fact, JonGon's first chapter was intended to be a flash forward. I wasn't anticipating my own death, but when it happened, I decided to just skip all the time in between.
huh. also, you let sanden live? FU** SANDEN! no offense Sanden.
How do you think I feel? But yes, he lived.
I haven't been much active in the forums these last 3 days and I didn't had the chance to vote in the last 2 parts. Regardless I'm back now and even though you probably heard this quite a few times already, you're doing a great job! Anyway, my vote is: GIVE IN, SO NOBODY DIES
too bad.
Heh, sounds good to me. I always approve of violence.
I am sure we will be back to finish him off someday.
Oh, we can hope.
were? WERE?!
With all of the major characters related to your organization now side characters, you now will have to come in at a later point, and with less force than you would have previously. If you people had just walked past Sanden and MP, then you would already have been introduced, and you also would have had a huge moment. You still will, but my death has pushed it off. Far off.
Give in, so nobody dies.
Too many people have died already!!!
You're telling me.
GIVE IN, SO NOBODY DIES
Honestly, this is probably my favorite fanfic on this forum.
I like Tobi's fanfic but it's a little too silly for my tastes.
Keep up the damn good work, Harp
(loved the breaking bad reference btw)
RESIST,AND AVOID CAPTURE.Lets get a little action.XD
Ah okay. Good. I was injured
. Apeshit is not my thing!
Godamn! xD
Wtf is going on?! That twist lol, great work Harp!
JonGon: GIVE IN, SO NOBODY DIES
Woo! Yay
Maybe somebody could do some fanart for me. Huh? Huh? Anyone?
No?
... Okay...
By the way, do you remember what specifically Notben was referring to?
This is one of the first times I seriously tried to foreshadow. I think I did decent. Can you find the foreshadowing?
Wasn't it when Mike threw a shoe into a room to get that old chinese guy?
He threw it into a hallway, and then a dude charged through. Then came the part where he used the chinese guy to find where the guy's head was. That was one of my favorites.
"Did you see how"
Or Maybe war is coming between a big group of people, It was weird about the helicopters flying around dropping crates. I think they might play a big role later on when we find out more. But Idk, honestly the ending caught me off guard, bro. Good job.
I meant foreshadowing about the ending. I definitely put some in there, even in previous parts.
AH! Close enough! I loved that part! I loved mike!
So what would happen if you we voted to send Puncake in the trap?
I was thinking that my Jesse was gonna die. I fucking love Jesse. The only genuinely good person in the show, and he got away. FUCK YEAH!
I've never felt more pumped in my life.
He would've called out to Pro, and nobody would've been hurt.
Jesse can't die!
But he is broken
Jesse is God.
I think the best choice would be to give in.
I would call you a hypocrite but seeing as this gif involves Mila Kunis any hypocrisy is automatically forgiven
oh well, I liked our way just as well.
Tobi's comics are to silly it's early days upcoming episodes are going to be very dark believe me