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Doug's Escape (Walking Dead Fanfic)

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  • HarpadarpaHarpadarpa
    edited August 2013
    I dunno though, sometimes the narrative was a bit off. Sentences that were boring to read. Don't get me wrong, I love the idea of the story... But...
  • Flame ReaderFlame Reader
    edited August 2013
    Harpadarpa wrote: »
    I dunno though, sometimes the narrative was a bit off. Sentences that were boring to read. Don't get me wrong, I love the idea of the story... But...

    but, it was the first installment, the setup. Its going to get more interesting.
  • HarpadarpaHarpadarpa
    edited August 2013
    You don't get what I'm saying. Some of the sentences were awkward. Not the things that were happening in them, but the way they were written.
  • Bioshock Infinite WDBioshock Infinite WD
    edited August 2013
    They always get better after the start.
  • HarpadarpaHarpadarpa
    edited August 2013
    I hope so, I was just trying to get him to understand what I was saying, you know?
  • Flame ReaderFlame Reader
    edited August 2013
    Harpadarpa wrote: »
    I hope so, I was just trying to get him to understand what I was saying, you know?

    I get it I get it don't worry, if I need help ill let you know.
  • cassadacassada
    edited June 2014

    I can see blood spared since they got Doug, maybe he lost his arm like lee or Reggie.

  • ThewalkingcommenterThewalkingcommenter

    why did you bump this discussion from August of 2013?

    cassada posted: »

    I can see blood spared since they got Doug, maybe he lost his arm like lee or Reggie.

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