I might stop the fanfic, sorry. But no one is seeing it and its kinda pointless to do an interactive fanfiction if no one will take part in it.
I dont think its because no one cares but because no one is going to the forum games.
The Walking North, Episode 1, Part 2 'taken' [Agree with Riley, you and 70% of readers choose to agree with Riley]
"Katherine, its the on… morely option" I say "I'm sorry"
Katherine looks at me with a saddened expression and then coughed up some words in anger "Fine, get us all fucking killed!" she raises her voice "What if theres a person on the other side!"
"Come on" Riley grabbed me by the hand and we headed towards the door, 8 other girls followed. The remaining stayed with Katherine.
I turned away from them looking at the door, hearing screaming noises and growling noises once in awhile.
"Okay we need force to break the door down, if 5 of us kick it repeatedly, it should fall down" says Riley "These doors are strong but old, you 3 girls, sit out" the 3 girls nodded.
"Lets do this" Riley says smiling, i nod slowly. We walk up to the door and kick it, it takes only two kicks from all off us and it slowly falls.
BAM!
The d… [view original content]
I might stop the fanfic, sorry. But no one is seeing it and its kinda pointless to do an interactive fanfiction if no one will take part in it.
I dont think its because no one cares but because no one is going to the forum games.
The Walking North, Episode 1, Part 2 'taken' [Agree with Riley, you and 70% of readers choose to agree with Riley]
"Katherine, its the on… morely option" I say "I'm sorry"
Katherine looks at me with a saddened expression and then coughed up some words in anger "Fine, get us all fucking killed!" she raises her voice "What if theres a person on the other side!"
"Come on" Riley grabbed me by the hand and we headed towards the door, 8 other girls followed. The remaining stayed with Katherine.
I turned away from them looking at the door, hearing screaming noises and growling noises once in awhile.
"Okay we need force to break the door down, if 5 of us kick it repeatedly, it should fall down" says Riley "These doors are strong but old, you 3 girls, sit out" the 3 girls nodded.
"Lets do this" Riley says smiling, i nod slowly. We walk up to the door and kick it, it takes only two kicks from all off us and it slowly falls.
BAM!
The d… [view original content]
Don't worry, there's still people paying attention to the story. I know, it sucks when the mods move your thread away from the main hub. It's happened to me before.
I might stop the fanfic, sorry. But no one is seeing it and its kinda pointless to do an interactive fanfiction if no one will take part in it.
I dont think its because no one cares but because no one is going to the forum games.
Yeah, he said he'll see how it plays out. So i might be able to have it go back into main. I'll keep it going since you guys seem to have found it again and its always nice to write for a crowd.
Don't worry, there's still people paying attention to the story. I know, it sucks when the mods move your thread away from the main hub. It's happened to me before.
The Walking North, Episode 1, Part 2 'taken' [Agree with Riley, you and 70% of readers choose to agree with Riley]
"Katherine, its the on… morely option" I say "I'm sorry"
Katherine looks at me with a saddened expression and then coughed up some words in anger "Fine, get us all fucking killed!" she raises her voice "What if theres a person on the other side!"
"Come on" Riley grabbed me by the hand and we headed towards the door, 8 other girls followed. The remaining stayed with Katherine.
I turned away from them looking at the door, hearing screaming noises and growling noises once in awhile.
"Okay we need force to break the door down, if 5 of us kick it repeatedly, it should fall down" says Riley "These doors are strong but old, you 3 girls, sit out" the 3 girls nodded.
"Lets do this" Riley says smiling, i nod slowly. We walk up to the door and kick it, it takes only two kicks from all off us and it slowly falls.
BAM!
The d… [view original content]
The Walking North episode 1 part 3 'taken' (You and 89% of readers tried to save Nick)
I quickly leaned down and started looking through the debris.
BAM!
a gun shot went off and i turned around Zack was ducked on the ground. Behind him was Barton with a hole in his head.
"Barton?1?!" screamed Willy and he ran out the back door Zack ran after him.
"You think you kids will survive out there?" Snarles Principal Charles "Olivia, you dumb little bitch. I should have strapped your nice ass back in that office. You're worthless"
"Dont talk about her like that!" screamed Riley while trying to save Barton
"Dumb children, youll die of hypothermia or starvation out there. I hope you do." He snarles
"Wait" exclaimed Riley "Where the fuck is my-"
BAM!
Another gunshot went off and i looked up at Katherine, she held Riley's gun with two hands and they were shaking.
I looked over to Principal Charles who fell to the ground with a gunshot in his chest.
Katherine let go of the gun and it hit the floor, she then fell to the ground crying.
Riley went over to comfort her and looked at me "Keep looking." She said.
I dug through when i finally found a hand, "Nick!" I said and pushed him out
Nick was bleeding bad he had a big gash on his head probably from the impact and lots of bruises all over.
"Pull him up and lets go!" yelled Riley
"Here i'll help" Said Elizabeth grabbing him by the legs.
We walked out the backdoor and i didn't bother grabbing the gun from Charles.
Katherine was still crying and so was Willy.
We ran up to Willy and Zack, "He's fine" said Zack in a low tone.
"Why Barton?" Carson cried "He was so nice, i cant believe you Olivia." he retorted
"Why are you blaming me?" I whispered
"YOUR BROTHER IS PROBABLY DEAD!" He screamed "AND YOU KILLED BARTON!"
"Shut the fuck up!" sneered Riley "She did nothing wrong!"
"Guys calm down!" said Elizabeth "We are drawing them towards us!"
"She's right" says Zack
I walk away carrying Nick, hes breathing. Riley, Elizabeth, Willy and Zack follow. Katherine and Carson walk behind us.
"He's breathing" I say to Riley, She smilies at me.
"Theres the road!" Exclaims Zack, "It leads too the highway" he says.
"Yay" Riley says sarcastically and we start walking along it.
I look behind and the whole school is in flames and theres bodies everywhere.
"Dont look" says Elizabeth "Want me to carry him?"
"Nah its fine." I say "He's pretty light"
She nods, and Nick makes a sudden noise.
"Nick?!?!" I exclaim and everyone turns and looks at him in silence.
He opens his eyes "Oh. Hey sis... ow"
"Nick!" i hug him tightly "Are you okay" i ask
"My head hurts" He silently says "And my foot I dont want to walk"
I smile "It'll be okay" i say. I wish i could have kept that promise.
[4 days later]
"Katherine?"
"Yeah?" I ask waking up.
"Are you awake?" Whispers Katherine
"No i'm sleeping."i say sarcastically
"You know how i shot Principal Charles?" She asks
"Yeah.." I reply awkwardly
"That was the first time if ever hurt anyone" She whispers "I didnt even think it through when i did it"
"Well if you didnt shoot him he would have shot someone else" I say trying to reassure her "You saved us"
"I just didn't want him talking to you like that" She said
"He killed Barton, and if you didn't kill him, Riley would have.
"Well we need sleep" says Katherine "Zack says we will maybe reach the highway tomorrow"
[5 hours later]
"Katherine!" yells Nick "Wake up wake up WAKEEEEEE UPPPPPPP!"
"God i'm awake" i say smiling. and sit up
"Those things are outside the tent" Says Katherine sitting up "Riley needs your help."
I get up and grab the knife given to me by Riley, i haven't killed one of them yet and i don't want to.
I step outside and see Willy slicing a zombies head in half.
"Good job!" says Riley
I walk up to her "What the hell is this?!?" I say
"I'm teaching Willy how to kill zombies" She exclaims
"You dont teach a 13 year old" I say staying calm "To kill these things"
"He needs to learn and so do you, and so does Nick"
"I'm not teaching Nick!" I yell
"I will." She says
"No. You wont." I say in a harsh tone
"Act fast." Says Riley smiling
"What i say?"
I turn around and there one of them right in front of me i grab the knife and stab it in the chest and pull the knife out.
"Only head works." Says Riley
It grabs onto me and i scream, Willy comes up and stabs it in the head and it falls to the ground.
Riley smiles at me satisfied. I glare at her as I'm covered in its blood.
"We gotta go!" Says Zack.
"Yep." Smiles Riley
[15 min later]
"So i heard Willy can kill one of them things and you cant" Says Elizabeth giggling
"Shut up" i snarl "She trained him. Who trains a little boy to kill those things and who told you in the first place?"
"Carson." she says
I look at him, he's walking in the front with Zack and Riley.
"He's been out to get me ever since what happened to Barton." I say
"Its only been 5 days" Says Elizabeth "You're treating it like it was years ago."
"The past few days have felt like years ago." I say and she nods in agreement.
"There it is!" says Zack and he runs away from us.
"Wait up!" Yells Riley and Katherine and Willy run after him. Me and Elizabeth follow and Carson does too.
I see it, the part when the road splits into 2.
"Where do we go now?" says Katherine
The road splits into two so it is north or south.
"We need to go North" says Nick
"Yeah" Willy agrees. "It is were our families are"
"No" says Nick i look at him "One of the priests said theres a safety area in Vancouver.
"Yes, sister Nicole said that too." Said Katherine
"Nick is right, theres nothing too the north, not many animals and im not from there." Points out Carson
"But why do we have to follow a road just go east into the forest" says Riley "Roads might be dangerous and we dont know about Vancouver."
"We will just get lost in the forest" Says Zack. "We need to go north were my family is"
"South is the safest option" Says Nick looking at me. "What do you think sis?"
The Walking North episode 1 part 3 'taken' (You and 89% of readers tried to save Nick)
I quickly leaned down and started looking through … morethe debris.
BAM!
a gun shot went off and i turned around Zack was ducked on the ground. Behind him was Barton with a hole in his head.
"Barton?1?!" screamed Willy and he ran out the back door Zack ran after him.
"You think you kids will survive out there?" Snarles Principal Charles "Olivia, you dumb little bitch. I should have strapped your nice ass back in that office. You're worthless"
"Dont talk about her like that!" screamed Riley while trying to save Barton
"Dumb children, youll die of hypothermia or starvation out there. I hope you do." He snarles
"Wait" exclaimed Riley "Where the fuck is my-"
BAM!
Another gunshot went off and i looked up at Katherine, she held Riley's gun with two hands and they were shaking.
I looked over to Principal Charles who fell to the ground wi… [view original content]
The Walking North episode 1 part 3 'taken' (You and 89% of readers tried to save Nick)
I quickly leaned down and started looking through … morethe debris.
BAM!
a gun shot went off and i turned around Zack was ducked on the ground. Behind him was Barton with a hole in his head.
"Barton?1?!" screamed Willy and he ran out the back door Zack ran after him.
"You think you kids will survive out there?" Snarles Principal Charles "Olivia, you dumb little bitch. I should have strapped your nice ass back in that office. You're worthless"
"Dont talk about her like that!" screamed Riley while trying to save Barton
"Dumb children, youll die of hypothermia or starvation out there. I hope you do." He snarles
"Wait" exclaimed Riley "Where the fuck is my-"
BAM!
Another gunshot went off and i looked up at Katherine, she held Riley's gun with two hands and they were shaking.
I looked over to Principal Charles who fell to the ground wi… [view original content]
The Walking North episode 1 part 3 'taken' (You and 89% of readers tried to save Nick)
I quickly leaned down and started looking through … morethe debris.
BAM!
a gun shot went off and i turned around Zack was ducked on the ground. Behind him was Barton with a hole in his head.
"Barton?1?!" screamed Willy and he ran out the back door Zack ran after him.
"You think you kids will survive out there?" Snarles Principal Charles "Olivia, you dumb little bitch. I should have strapped your nice ass back in that office. You're worthless"
"Dont talk about her like that!" screamed Riley while trying to save Barton
"Dumb children, youll die of hypothermia or starvation out there. I hope you do." He snarles
"Wait" exclaimed Riley "Where the fuck is my-"
BAM!
Another gunshot went off and i looked up at Katherine, she held Riley's gun with two hands and they were shaking.
I looked over to Principal Charles who fell to the ground wi… [view original content]
The Walking North episode 1 part 3 'taken' (You and 89% of readers tried to save Nick)
I quickly leaned down and started looking through … morethe debris.
BAM!
a gun shot went off and i turned around Zack was ducked on the ground. Behind him was Barton with a hole in his head.
"Barton?1?!" screamed Willy and he ran out the back door Zack ran after him.
"You think you kids will survive out there?" Snarles Principal Charles "Olivia, you dumb little bitch. I should have strapped your nice ass back in that office. You're worthless"
"Dont talk about her like that!" screamed Riley while trying to save Barton
"Dumb children, youll die of hypothermia or starvation out there. I hope you do." He snarles
"Wait" exclaimed Riley "Where the fuck is my-"
BAM!
Another gunshot went off and i looked up at Katherine, she held Riley's gun with two hands and they were shaking.
I looked over to Principal Charles who fell to the ground wi… [view original content]
This one's hard....I guess the forests, alot of people are probably going to the nearest safezone and it's best not to risk the group's safety just to find Zack's family.
The Walking North episode 1 part 3 'taken' (You and 89% of readers tried to save Nick)
I quickly leaned down and started looking through … morethe debris.
BAM!
a gun shot went off and i turned around Zack was ducked on the ground. Behind him was Barton with a hole in his head.
"Barton?1?!" screamed Willy and he ran out the back door Zack ran after him.
"You think you kids will survive out there?" Snarles Principal Charles "Olivia, you dumb little bitch. I should have strapped your nice ass back in that office. You're worthless"
"Dont talk about her like that!" screamed Riley while trying to save Barton
"Dumb children, youll die of hypothermia or starvation out there. I hope you do." He snarles
"Wait" exclaimed Riley "Where the fuck is my-"
BAM!
Another gunshot went off and i looked up at Katherine, she held Riley's gun with two hands and they were shaking.
I looked over to Principal Charles who fell to the ground wi… [view original content]
The Walking North Episode 1 Part 4 (You and 50% of players went south to Vancouver)
"Lets go to Vancouver" I say "Me and Katherine we're going to go there anyways"
"Plus it doesn't snow there" Snorts Riley and Zack rolls his eyes.
We keep walking down the road and i wonder what is going on in Vancouver.
"We need a ride." Says Willy "We cant walk there."
"Yes, we can" Riley says in a harsh tone "We aren't hitchhiking creeps prey on girls like us" She says looking at me, Katherine and Elizabeth.
It was true, many aboriginal girls where murdered by hitchhikers because they're easy targets but i doubt that would happen to Riley since she is really tough.
I just nod.
"We'll you guys wont die with us here" Zack says proudly "I can look after you girls.
Riley looks at him and snarled "I could kick your ass in 2 seconds if i wanted too."
Me and Katherine laugh.
Nick walks up to us "Sis?"
"Yeah?" i say, Nick has been asking the same things over and over again.
l
"Can you carry me?" he says politely
"Oh, Nick. I would but I'm carrying all the stuff we've made and i'm carrying all the dry wood and thats heavy!" I exclaim
He looks down and says in a sad tone "Yeah, okay."
"Hey little dude i can carry you." Zack says smiling.
Nick smilies and runs up to him and Zack picks him up and carries him.
"Whats wrong with you?" Asks Katherine "He's your brother, remember the day you found him in that classroom?"
"Yeah" i say "Its just i feel like being alone"
"Oh" Says Katherine "I have an older brother so i think i know what it feels like."
"Hey Katherine?" i say in a sad tone
"Yes? Whats wrong?" She asks
"You know how principal Charles talked to me like... that" i say uncomfortably "When he said he wish he'd strapped me in the office."
"Oh right before i shot him?" She snarls "Why are you talking about this?"
"He tried to touch me." I say
"What?!?" Exclaims Katherine
"What a creep!" Says Elizabeth walking up to us.
"Yeah" i say sadly "He said he wants me-"
"Shut the fuck up." Says Carson and i turn around to him "You're such a fucking liar."
"Easy there." Says Zack and covers Nick's ears.
"For one goddam second can you chill the fuck out?!?" Screams Riley walking up to him.
"Stop acting like tough shit Riley! I see right through you, you just miss your mommy and daddy dont you?" he yells back.
Riley slaps him across the face and he then punches her in the cheek and she falls the the ground. Elizabeth runs over a pushes over Carson and restrains him. Willy walks onto the road and sits down and starts sobbing.
Katherine walks over to Willy, I grab Riley's arms as she screams at him
"ILL END YOU stupid SHIT!" She yells as i restrain her.
I hear a car coming down the road and someone screams "There they are!".
"RUN!" Screams Zack dropping Nick and Nick runs.
"Fuck." I whisper and drop all the stuff i was holding.
I run into the bushes,
Katherine runs behind me, but Willy isnt with her.
I hear gun shots and a bullet passes me i keep running in this dense forest and don't hear Katherine behind me after awhile.
I turn around, and trip and slide down a hill.
"ARRGGHHH!!" I scream
My head hits the bottom of the ground
BAM!
[10 minutes later]
"I've go you now Olivia."
I open my eyes and see Carson over me with a knife.
I push him away and grab out my knife.
"Stay away from me." I say "You better be joking"
"Okay, I'm sorry." He says in a low tone "But you have to be quiet they're looking for us"
"Wheres Nick and Katherine?" I ask
"I don't know about Katherine but they got Nick and Willy" He said "They said they only want you, Katherine and Riley"
"Wheres the rest?" I ask again
"I dunno, Zack and Elizabeth were together." Says Carson and i nod.
"You seem em'!" a voice yells
"Get down!" Says Carson sharply
"Nah" another guy yells "We got the girl and the boy but we still haven't found 4 of em'"
"Riley's out there" I whisper
Carson moves and i follow him he walk along the stream.
"Psst. Olivia!" I look and see Katherine in a bush and i motion Carson to them.
Katherine gets out of the bush and Riley follows.
"It's over." Says Riley.
"They're going to kill Nick if we dont bring ourselves in." Whispers Katherine
"We have to fight back!" Says Carson.
"No. I'm not letting Nick die." I say and walk up the hill towards the road in silence.
"No, Don't!" says Carson
"Olivia are sure you want to do this, they'll hurt us." Says Riley.
"Its the only option." I say
"Please don't hurt him! he's a little boy!" a voice says.
I begin running and make my way to the road were they all are.
Nick and Willy have a gun to there heads and Elizabeth and Zack are on the other side of the road.
"Nick!" I scream
"Olivia" He cries "...Help"
"Let go of him!" yells Elizabeth
"Please..... no." Cries Willy.
"Give us the girls now!" screamed the man.
"Okay, okay." I said and walk towards them
"Damn..." One of the men said.
Another man whistled at me.
Riley walked beside me and we held hands.
"I'm so scared" I whisper to her.
"Stay calm, i have a plan" She says back
Katherine stayed behind with Elizabeth.
Katherine looked at me and began walking too.
"Olivia no!" Cried Nick as i was in the middle of the road.
I guy holding him pointed the gun away from him at me.
"Bitch, walk or i shoot" He snarled
Zack took the opportunity and ran at him.
BAM
Zack was shot in the leg and fell to the ground screaming in pain.
I ran at the guy and rammed him over, his legs went flying upwards and he hit the ground.
"Run Nick!" I screamed
Nick began running away but was really hurt.
Riley was fighting off the guy who was holding Willy and I went to help Nick who fell over, when suddenly i was knocked over by the back of a gun.
I struggled but blindfolds were put over my eyes and i could now longer see i could only hear.
"Olivia!" screamed Riley "I cant see!"
My eyes teared up and I began crying, I was crying too much to respond to her.
Elizabeth screamed in anger
BAM!
A gunshot went off and Elizabeth screamed again in anger,
"Elizabeth!" yelled Zack
BAM!
BAM!
BAM!
"Zack!" Elizabeth screamed
"No!" Cried Wily
"Shut up boy!" A man yelled and i heard Willy hit the ground.
BAM!
"FUCK! NO!!" Screamed Carson "HELP HIM!"
"LET US GO!" Cried Katherine "PLEASE DONT TOUCH HER"
"Too late" The guy smiled and i heard stabbing noises.
"AAHHHHHH!!!" screamed Katherine
"HELP ME OUT!" yelled Carson
"GET DOWN!" A guy yelled.
BAM!
There was complete silence.
Get those girls in the car, leave that one shes not worth it. And bring those guys but leave him and him. Just for fun"
Someone grabbed the back of my neck
"KNOCK EM" OUT!" A guy yelled
Suddenly a powerful force went into the back of my head.
And thats the last thing i remember.
EPISODE 2 COMING IN MID JULY AFTER EPISODE 4, i'll keep you guys updated.
The Walking North Episode 1 Part 4 (You and 50% of players went south to Vancouver)
"Lets go to Vancouver" I say "Me and Katherine we're … moregoing to go there anyways"
"Plus it doesn't snow there" Snorts Riley and Zack rolls his eyes.
We keep walking down the road and i wonder what is going on in Vancouver.
"We need a ride." Says Willy "We cant walk there."
"Yes, we can" Riley says in a harsh tone "We aren't hitchhiking creeps prey on girls like us" She says looking at me, Katherine and Elizabeth.
It was true, many aboriginal girls where murdered by hitchhikers because they're easy targets but i doubt that would happen to Riley since she is really tough.
I just nod.
"We'll you guys wont die with us here" Zack says proudly "I can look after you girls.
Riley looks at him and snarled "I could kick your ass in 2 seconds if i wanted too."
Me and Katherine laugh.
Nick walks up to us "Sis?"
"Yeah?" i say, Nick has bee… [view original content]
I actually think many survived, the only one who I think might have died was Zack because he was shot like 4 times, although he could have been shot in less critical areas. Maybe the others were shot in the head. Who knows? Very intense!
The Walking North Episode 1 Part 4 (You and 50% of players went south to Vancouver)
"Lets go to Vancouver" I say "Me and Katherine we're … moregoing to go there anyways"
"Plus it doesn't snow there" Snorts Riley and Zack rolls his eyes.
We keep walking down the road and i wonder what is going on in Vancouver.
"We need a ride." Says Willy "We cant walk there."
"Yes, we can" Riley says in a harsh tone "We aren't hitchhiking creeps prey on girls like us" She says looking at me, Katherine and Elizabeth.
It was true, many aboriginal girls where murdered by hitchhikers because they're easy targets but i doubt that would happen to Riley since she is really tough.
I just nod.
"We'll you guys wont die with us here" Zack says proudly "I can look after you girls.
Riley looks at him and snarled "I could kick your ass in 2 seconds if i wanted too."
Me and Katherine laugh.
Nick walks up to us "Sis?"
"Yeah?" i say, Nick has bee… [view original content]
Holy shit! Epic finale!
DAMMIT I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL JULY!
I actually think many survived, the only one who I think might have died was Z… moreack because he was shot like 4 times, although he could have been shot in less critical areas. Maybe the others were shot in the head. Who knows? Very intense!
The Walking North Episode 1 Part 4 (You and 50% of players went south to Vancouver)
"Lets go to Vancouver" I say "Me and Katherine we're … moregoing to go there anyways"
"Plus it doesn't snow there" Snorts Riley and Zack rolls his eyes.
We keep walking down the road and i wonder what is going on in Vancouver.
"We need a ride." Says Willy "We cant walk there."
"Yes, we can" Riley says in a harsh tone "We aren't hitchhiking creeps prey on girls like us" She says looking at me, Katherine and Elizabeth.
It was true, many aboriginal girls where murdered by hitchhikers because they're easy targets but i doubt that would happen to Riley since she is really tough.
I just nod.
"We'll you guys wont die with us here" Zack says proudly "I can look after you girls.
Riley looks at him and snarled "I could kick your ass in 2 seconds if i wanted too."
Me and Katherine laugh.
Nick walks up to us "Sis?"
"Yeah?" i say, Nick has bee… [view original content]
The Walking North Episode 1 Part 4 (You and 50% of players went south to Vancouver)
"Lets go to Vancouver" I say "Me and Katherine we're … moregoing to go there anyways"
"Plus it doesn't snow there" Snorts Riley and Zack rolls his eyes.
We keep walking down the road and i wonder what is going on in Vancouver.
"We need a ride." Says Willy "We cant walk there."
"Yes, we can" Riley says in a harsh tone "We aren't hitchhiking creeps prey on girls like us" She says looking at me, Katherine and Elizabeth.
It was true, many aboriginal girls where murdered by hitchhikers because they're easy targets but i doubt that would happen to Riley since she is really tough.
I just nod.
"We'll you guys wont die with us here" Zack says proudly "I can look after you girls.
Riley looks at him and snarled "I could kick your ass in 2 seconds if i wanted too."
Me and Katherine laugh.
Nick walks up to us "Sis?"
"Yeah?" i say, Nick has bee… [view original content]
Comments
I might stop the fanfic, sorry. But no one is seeing it and its kinda pointless to do an interactive fanfiction if no one will take part in it.
I dont think its because no one cares but because no one is going to the forum games.
Yeah, I get why they moved them but I don't like it. I read and voted, if that makes you feel better
That's a fucking sadistic choice! But let's save Nick
Good chapter.
Don't worry, there's still people paying attention to the story. I know, it sucks when the mods move your thread away from the main hub. It's happened to me before.
Yeah, he said he'll see how it plays out. So i might be able to have it go back into main. I'll keep it going since you guys seem to have found it again and its always nice to write for a crowd.
Thank you!
Just curious, Who do you guys think will die next out of the 9 of them?
Well it seems based on the options that it will either be Nick or Zack. Good chapter, btw!
I think Nick is dead either way.
#KillPrincipalCharles
Isn't he your character? c:
Yes...
HAHAHAHA, thanks for not being mad about it. I was worried making a pedo, bloodthirsty principal would piss off the person created him.
Me mad?
Nah, it's your story and I respect that. :-)
Starting part 3 now
The Walking North episode 1 part 3 'taken' (You and 89% of readers tried to save Nick)
I quickly leaned down and started looking through the debris.
BAM!
a gun shot went off and i turned around Zack was ducked on the ground. Behind him was Barton with a hole in his head.
"Barton?1?!" screamed Willy and he ran out the back door Zack ran after him.
"You think you kids will survive out there?" Snarles Principal Charles "Olivia, you dumb little bitch. I should have strapped your nice ass back in that office. You're worthless"
"Dont talk about her like that!" screamed Riley while trying to save Barton
"Dumb children, youll die of hypothermia or starvation out there. I hope you do." He snarles
"Wait" exclaimed Riley "Where the fuck is my-"
BAM!
Another gunshot went off and i looked up at Katherine, she held Riley's gun with two hands and they were shaking.
I looked over to Principal Charles who fell to the ground with a gunshot in his chest.
Katherine let go of the gun and it hit the floor, she then fell to the ground crying.
Riley went over to comfort her and looked at me "Keep looking." She said.
I dug through when i finally found a hand, "Nick!" I said and pushed him out
Nick was bleeding bad he had a big gash on his head probably from the impact and lots of bruises all over.
"Pull him up and lets go!" yelled Riley
"Here i'll help" Said Elizabeth grabbing him by the legs.
We walked out the backdoor and i didn't bother grabbing the gun from Charles.
Katherine was still crying and so was Willy.
We ran up to Willy and Zack, "He's fine" said Zack in a low tone.
"Why Barton?" Carson cried "He was so nice, i cant believe you Olivia." he retorted
"Why are you blaming me?" I whispered
"YOUR BROTHER IS PROBABLY DEAD!" He screamed "AND YOU KILLED BARTON!"
"Shut the fuck up!" sneered Riley "She did nothing wrong!"
"Guys calm down!" said Elizabeth "We are drawing them towards us!"
"She's right" says Zack
I walk away carrying Nick, hes breathing. Riley, Elizabeth, Willy and Zack follow. Katherine and Carson walk behind us.
"He's breathing" I say to Riley, She smilies at me.
"Theres the road!" Exclaims Zack, "It leads too the highway" he says.
"Yay" Riley says sarcastically and we start walking along it.
I look behind and the whole school is in flames and theres bodies everywhere.
"Dont look" says Elizabeth "Want me to carry him?"
"Nah its fine." I say "He's pretty light"
She nods, and Nick makes a sudden noise.
"Nick?!?!" I exclaim and everyone turns and looks at him in silence.
He opens his eyes "Oh. Hey sis... ow"
"Nick!" i hug him tightly "Are you okay" i ask
"My head hurts" He silently says "And my foot I dont want to walk"
I smile "It'll be okay" i say. I wish i could have kept that promise.
[4 days later]
"Katherine?"
"Yeah?" I ask waking up.
"Are you awake?" Whispers Katherine
"No i'm sleeping."i say sarcastically
"You know how i shot Principal Charles?" She asks
"Yeah.." I reply awkwardly
"That was the first time if ever hurt anyone" She whispers "I didnt even think it through when i did it"
"Well if you didnt shoot him he would have shot someone else" I say trying to reassure her "You saved us"
"I just didn't want him talking to you like that" She said
"He killed Barton, and if you didn't kill him, Riley would have.
"Well we need sleep" says Katherine "Zack says we will maybe reach the highway tomorrow"
[5 hours later]
"Katherine!" yells Nick "Wake up wake up WAKEEEEEE UPPPPPPP!"
"God i'm awake" i say smiling. and sit up
"Those things are outside the tent" Says Katherine sitting up "Riley needs your help."
I get up and grab the knife given to me by Riley, i haven't killed one of them yet and i don't want to.
I step outside and see Willy slicing a zombies head in half.
"Good job!" says Riley
I walk up to her "What the hell is this?!?" I say
"I'm teaching Willy how to kill zombies" She exclaims
"You dont teach a 13 year old" I say staying calm "To kill these things"
"He needs to learn and so do you, and so does Nick"
"I'm not teaching Nick!" I yell
"I will." She says
"No. You wont." I say in a harsh tone
"Act fast." Says Riley smiling
"What i say?"
I turn around and there one of them right in front of me i grab the knife and stab it in the chest and pull the knife out.
"Only head works." Says Riley
It grabs onto me and i scream, Willy comes up and stabs it in the head and it falls to the ground.
Riley smiles at me satisfied. I glare at her as I'm covered in its blood.
"We gotta go!" Says Zack.
"Yep." Smiles Riley
[15 min later]
"So i heard Willy can kill one of them things and you cant" Says Elizabeth giggling
"Shut up" i snarl "She trained him. Who trains a little boy to kill those things and who told you in the first place?"
"Carson." she says
I look at him, he's walking in the front with Zack and Riley.
"He's been out to get me ever since what happened to Barton." I say
"Its only been 5 days" Says Elizabeth "You're treating it like it was years ago."
"The past few days have felt like years ago." I say and she nods in agreement.
"There it is!" says Zack and he runs away from us.
"Wait up!" Yells Riley and Katherine and Willy run after him. Me and Elizabeth follow and Carson does too.
I see it, the part when the road splits into 2.
"Where do we go now?" says Katherine
The road splits into two so it is north or south.
"We need to go North" says Nick
"Yeah" Willy agrees. "It is were our families are"
"No" says Nick i look at him "One of the priests said theres a safety area in Vancouver.
"Yes, sister Nicole said that too." Said Katherine
"Nick is right, theres nothing too the north, not many animals and im not from there." Points out Carson
"But why do we have to follow a road just go east into the forest" says Riley "Roads might be dangerous and we dont know about Vancouver."
"We will just get lost in the forest" Says Zack. "We need to go north were my family is"
"South is the safest option" Says Nick looking at me. "What do you think sis?"
VOTE HERE: http://strawpoll.me/1890104/
Okay good, nice gifs btw
To vancouver!!
Yay! c: i need more votes though.
Yeah, ill need more than 1 vote to go into part 4.
prays to mods
Please change forum games stuff soon. Atleast make it easier to find.
Me when principal Charles died.
Haha, I now notice he was never shot in the head..
He's still out there!
You never know...
Evil Laugh
What does "strapped her ass" mean? I never heard that before.
He has a strap which is like a whip on his desk. He was going to whip her if Andrew didn't walk in.
Oh okay.
This one's hard....I guess the forests, alot of people are probably going to the nearest safezone and it's best not to risk the group's safety just to find Zack's family.
Finale in 3 hours! It is going to be epic.
#HYPE #HYPE
#SAVENICK
The Walking North Episode 1 Part 4 (You and 50% of players went south to Vancouver)
"Lets go to Vancouver" I say "Me and Katherine we're going to go there anyways"
"Plus it doesn't snow there" Snorts Riley and Zack rolls his eyes.
We keep walking down the road and i wonder what is going on in Vancouver.
"We need a ride." Says Willy "We cant walk there."
"Yes, we can" Riley says in a harsh tone "We aren't hitchhiking creeps prey on girls like us" She says looking at me, Katherine and Elizabeth.
It was true, many aboriginal girls where murdered by hitchhikers because they're easy targets but i doubt that would happen to Riley since she is really tough.
I just nod.
"We'll you guys wont die with us here" Zack says proudly "I can look after you girls.
Riley looks at him and snarled "I could kick your ass in 2 seconds if i wanted too."
Me and Katherine laugh.
Nick walks up to us "Sis?"
"Yeah?" i say, Nick has been asking the same things over and over again.
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"Can you carry me?" he says politely
"Oh, Nick. I would but I'm carrying all the stuff we've made and i'm carrying all the dry wood and thats heavy!" I exclaim
He looks down and says in a sad tone "Yeah, okay."
"Hey little dude i can carry you." Zack says smiling.
Nick smilies and runs up to him and Zack picks him up and carries him.
"Whats wrong with you?" Asks Katherine "He's your brother, remember the day you found him in that classroom?"
"Yeah" i say "Its just i feel like being alone"
"Oh" Says Katherine "I have an older brother so i think i know what it feels like."
"Hey Katherine?" i say in a sad tone
"Yes? Whats wrong?" She asks
"You know how principal Charles talked to me like... that" i say uncomfortably "When he said he wish he'd strapped me in the office."
"Oh right before i shot him?" She snarls "Why are you talking about this?"
"He tried to touch me." I say
"What?!?" Exclaims Katherine
"What a creep!" Says Elizabeth walking up to us.
"Yeah" i say sadly "He said he wants me-"
"Shut the fuck up." Says Carson and i turn around to him "You're such a fucking liar."
"Easy there." Says Zack and covers Nick's ears.
"For one goddam second can you chill the fuck out?!?" Screams Riley walking up to him.
"Stop acting like tough shit Riley! I see right through you, you just miss your mommy and daddy dont you?" he yells back.
Riley slaps him across the face and he then punches her in the cheek and she falls the the ground. Elizabeth runs over a pushes over Carson and restrains him. Willy walks onto the road and sits down and starts sobbing.
Katherine walks over to Willy, I grab Riley's arms as she screams at him
"ILL END YOU stupid SHIT!" She yells as i restrain her.
I hear a car coming down the road and someone screams "There they are!".
"RUN!" Screams Zack dropping Nick and Nick runs.
"Fuck." I whisper and drop all the stuff i was holding.
I run into the bushes,
Katherine runs behind me, but Willy isnt with her.
I hear gun shots and a bullet passes me i keep running in this dense forest and don't hear Katherine behind me after awhile.
I turn around, and trip and slide down a hill.
"ARRGGHHH!!" I scream
My head hits the bottom of the ground
BAM!
[10 minutes later]
"I've go you now Olivia."
I open my eyes and see Carson over me with a knife.
I push him away and grab out my knife.
"Stay away from me." I say "You better be joking"
"Okay, I'm sorry." He says in a low tone "But you have to be quiet they're looking for us"
"Wheres Nick and Katherine?" I ask
"I don't know about Katherine but they got Nick and Willy" He said "They said they only want you, Katherine and Riley"
"Wheres the rest?" I ask again
"I dunno, Zack and Elizabeth were together." Says Carson and i nod.
"You seem em'!" a voice yells
"Get down!" Says Carson sharply
"Nah" another guy yells "We got the girl and the boy but we still haven't found 4 of em'"
"Riley's out there" I whisper
Carson moves and i follow him he walk along the stream.
"Psst. Olivia!" I look and see Katherine in a bush and i motion Carson to them.
Katherine gets out of the bush and Riley follows.
"It's over." Says Riley.
"They're going to kill Nick if we dont bring ourselves in." Whispers Katherine
"We have to fight back!" Says Carson.
"No. I'm not letting Nick die." I say and walk up the hill towards the road in silence.
"No, Don't!" says Carson
"Olivia are sure you want to do this, they'll hurt us." Says Riley.
"Its the only option." I say
"Please don't hurt him! he's a little boy!" a voice says.
I begin running and make my way to the road were they all are.
Nick and Willy have a gun to there heads and Elizabeth and Zack are on the other side of the road.
"Nick!" I scream
"Olivia" He cries "...Help"
"Let go of him!" yells Elizabeth
"Please..... no." Cries Willy.
"Give us the girls now!" screamed the man.
"Okay, okay." I said and walk towards them
"Damn..." One of the men said.
Another man whistled at me.
Riley walked beside me and we held hands.
"I'm so scared" I whisper to her.
"Stay calm, i have a plan" She says back
Katherine stayed behind with Elizabeth.
Katherine looked at me and began walking too.
"Olivia no!" Cried Nick as i was in the middle of the road.
I guy holding him pointed the gun away from him at me.
"Bitch, walk or i shoot" He snarled
Zack took the opportunity and ran at him.
BAM
Zack was shot in the leg and fell to the ground screaming in pain.
I ran at the guy and rammed him over, his legs went flying upwards and he hit the ground.
"Run Nick!" I screamed
Nick began running away but was really hurt.
Riley was fighting off the guy who was holding Willy and I went to help Nick who fell over, when suddenly i was knocked over by the back of a gun.
I struggled but blindfolds were put over my eyes and i could now longer see i could only hear.
"Olivia!" screamed Riley "I cant see!"
My eyes teared up and I began crying, I was crying too much to respond to her.
Elizabeth screamed in anger
BAM!
A gunshot went off and Elizabeth screamed again in anger,
"Elizabeth!" yelled Zack
BAM!
BAM!
BAM!
"Zack!" Elizabeth screamed
"No!" Cried Wily
"Shut up boy!" A man yelled and i heard Willy hit the ground.
BAM!
"FUCK! NO!!" Screamed Carson "HELP HIM!"
"LET US GO!" Cried Katherine "PLEASE DONT TOUCH HER"
"Too late" The guy smiled and i heard stabbing noises.
"AAHHHHHH!!!" screamed Katherine
"HELP ME OUT!" yelled Carson
"GET DOWN!" A guy yelled.
BAM!
There was complete silence.
Get those girls in the car, leave that one shes not worth it. And bring those guys but leave him and him. Just for fun"
Someone grabbed the back of my neck
"KNOCK EM" OUT!" A guy yelled
Suddenly a powerful force went into the back of my head.
And thats the last thing i remember.
EPISODE 2 COMING IN MID JULY AFTER EPISODE 4, i'll keep you guys updated.
Hot damn. Did everyone just die?!
Wow. Nice finale!
Hehe, you'll have to wait and find out.
And thank you c:
Holy shit! Epic finale!
DAMMIT I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL JULY!
I actually think many survived, the only one who I think might have died was Zack because he was shot like 4 times, although he could have been shot in less critical areas. Maybe the others were shot in the head. Who knows? Very intense!
thanks c:
the only thing ill reveal is episode 2 is called 'isolated' hm, what could it mean?
O_O
What an ending. I'm exited for episode 2.
Awesome finale! Really hyped for episode 2!
I'm just wondering who do you guys think died? (If anyone did die)