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  • Forces Divided 2-1

    A new opponent has entered the fight...

    ???'s POV

    The mysterious woman in armor slowly walks towards the battlefield. She walks towards the Imperial back flank where Golden and Gustav were fighting. A crossbow man spots her and aims up a shot. The woman raises her hand and the man starts bleeding from his neck and falls down. She walks in to the camp and two soldiers attempt to stop her. One of them falls dead before he reaches her and then she stabs the other through his chest. She walks towards the fighting and pulls out two daggers, of which she then proceeds to stab through two Imperial soldier's chests. She keeps walking towards Golden and Gustav leaving the daggers there. Upon reaching the two she pulls her sword out and knocks them both down. She walks over to Gustav and then raises her sword. Golden grabs a dagger out of the dead bodies and throws it hitting her hand. Golden had stopped the execution then she walks over to Golden. Golden gets up and starts running telling any of the soldiers he got to do the same. As they are running the woman raises her hand and then Golden falls clutching his leg. The woman goes in for the kill and Clemmy jumps in front taking the sword. Saltlick throws some rocks at the woman and Sagig grabs Clemmy. They all run away as the woman regains composure. The woman stands there for a moment then hears Gustav yell something.

    Gustav- Restrain that woman!

    Suddenly 10 armed soldiers jumps on her and knocks her out. She had been captured.

    End of Chapter

  • I DID IT! I AM THE BEST!

    Forces Divided 2-1 A new opponent has entered the fight... ???'s POV The mysterious woman in armor slowly walks towards the battlef

  • I saved your life!

    The soldiers captured her!

    I DID IT! I AM THE BEST!

  • THANK YOU GOLDEN

    I saved your life! The soldiers captured her!

  • Awesome! :D

    Forces Divided 2-1 A new opponent has entered the fight... ???'s POV The mysterious woman in armor slowly walks towards the battlef

  • IS YOUR CAPS LOCK BROKEN?

    THANK YOU GOLDEN

  • NO

    IS YOUR CAPS LOCK BROKEN?

  • Thanks!

    :D

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Awesome!

  • I want to ask a little question...

    Who do you think the mysterious woman is?

    What do you think is their ability to do stuff like raising their hand and making shit happen?

    1. Pretty sure it's Raging_Blades.

    2. No idea :P

    I want to ask a little question... Who do you think the mysterious woman is? What do you think is their ability to do stuff like raising their hand and making shit happen?

  • edited November 2014

    I also want to know which stories you want to see first.

    Here are some of the plots...

    • Creeping and the Temple
    • The Old Fort
    • St. Terra Bay
    • Neon and the Assassins
    • The Banker
    • Southern Imperial disappearances

    Pick three.

  • There is another thing below this.

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    * Pretty sure it's Raging_Blades. * No idea :P

  • edited November 2014
    • St. Terra Bay
    • Creeping and the Temple
    • The Old Fort

    I also want to know which stories you want to see first. Here are some of the plots... * Creeping and the Temple * The Old Fort * St. Terra Bay * Neon and the Assassins * The Banker * Southern Imperial disappearances Pick three.

  • Actually change the first vote...

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    * St. Terra Bay * Creeping and the Temple * The Old Fort

  • Okay... :P

    Actually change the first vote...

  • Thanks, want to keep that one for later.

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Okay... :P

  • No problem... :P

    Thanks, want to keep that one for later.

  • Southern Imperial disappearances
    The Old Fort
    St. Terra Bay

    I also want to know which stories you want to see first. Here are some of the plots... * Creeping and the Temple * The Old Fort * St. Terra Bay * Neon and the Assassins * The Banker * Southern Imperial disappearances Pick three.

  • edited November 2014

    Awesome!!

    I did something xd

    Forces Divided 2-1 A new opponent has entered the fight... ???'s POV The mysterious woman in armor slowly walks towards the battlef

  • It won't be the only thing.

    supersagig posted: »

    Awesome!! I did something xd

  • Raging_Blades
    Very Good XD

    I want to ask a little question... Who do you think the mysterious woman is? What do you think is their ability to do stuff like raising their hand and making shit happen?

  • Creeping and the Temple

    Neon and the Assassins

    The Banker

    I also want to know which stories you want to see first. Here are some of the plots... * Creeping and the Temple * The Old Fort * St. Terra Bay * Neon and the Assassins * The Banker * Southern Imperial disappearances Pick three.

  • The temple, assassins, and the banker.

    I also want to know which stories you want to see first. Here are some of the plots... * Creeping and the Temple * The Old Fort * St. Terra Bay * Neon and the Assassins * The Banker * Southern Imperial disappearances Pick three.

  • edited November 2014

    Imperial Soldiers Green the other has lots soldiers he needs the help B)

    Middle/Middle and assasin hidden blade

    I'll expand anything just tell me

  • edited November 2014

    assasin hidden blade

    Okay?

    XD

    I probably won't make you an assassin...Or...I might...

    I also need gender.

    Markd4547 posted: »

    Imperial Soldiers Green the other has lots soldiers he needs the help Middle/Middle and assasin hidden blade I'll expand anything just tell me

  • Alt text

    I'm an AC fanboy pls :'/

    assasin hidden blade Okay? XD I probably won't make you an assassin...Or...I might... I also need gender.

  • Well, I need gender.

    I might make you one...I'm playing ACU right now, i'm a huge fan too.

    Markd4547 posted: »

    I'm an AC fanboy pls :'/

  • cool and male

    Well, I need gender. I might make you one...I'm playing ACU right now, i'm a huge fan too.

  • K

    I'll make you an assassin.

    Markd4547 posted: »

    cool and male

  • edited November 2014

    Alt text

    Thanks :3

    K I'll make you an assassin.

  • Here is the plan...

    This episode will have reversing parts...

    On one part it will include

    • Creeping and the Temple
    • Neon and the Assassins
    • The Old Fort

    One the next it will include:

    • St. Terra Bay
    • SID
    • The Banker

    Then the occasional part about Golden or Gustav.

    I also want to know which stories you want to see first. Here are some of the plots... * Creeping and the Temple * The Old Fort * St. Terra Bay * Neon and the Assassins * The Banker * Southern Imperial disappearances Pick three.

  • This episode won't feature you very much, but I promise that you will have a bigger role than you do right now.

    He will appear with a big role in either E3 or E4.

    supersagig posted: »

    :P PD: My character is going to be just some random warrior? XD

  • :P
    PD: My character is going to be just some random warrior? XD

    Here is the plan... This episode will have reversing parts... On one part it will include * Creeping and the Temple * Neon and t

  • I can't reveal too much...

    Here is some ideas

    • The main villain reveal
    • Important allies
    • Our first death
    • A stronger Rebel army
    • New Imperials
    • And a very unlikeable or likeable semi-villain.

    These are not in order.

    supersagig posted: »

    What is the theme of each part?

  • What is the theme of each part?

    Here is the plan... This episode will have reversing parts... On one part it will include * Creeping and the Temple * Neon and t

  • I can't reveal too much...

    Here is some ideas
    ◾The main villain reveal
    ◾Important allies
    ◾Our first death
    ◾A stronger Rebel army
    ◾New Imperials
    ◾And a very unlikeable or likeable semi-villain.

    These are not in order.

    This is the best I can tell you about this episode.

    supersagig posted: »

    What is the theme of each part?

  • This part, yes, but I promise that he will have a bigger role around E3 or E4.

    supersagig posted: »

    :P PD: My character is going to be just some random warrior? XD

  • Forces Divided 2-2

    The Forces Divided in a unforgiving war...

    Creeping's POV

    Creeping wearing Imperial armor and a brown cloak walks up to a Imperial check point in the rolling hills of the West. There are three Imperials standing watch, as Creeping walks up there are two talking.

    Imperial Delta- So, like I was saying, that Temple is fucking creepy.

    Imperial Omega- Don't be such a wuss, the Temple is fine.

    Imperial Delta- Why did the Empress restrict all access then?

    Imperial Beta- Guys, someone is approaching.

    Imperial Delta- Is it Alpha?

    Imperial Beta walks up to Creeping.

    Beta- State your business, this area is restricted.

    Creeping- Official business from the Empress herself!

    Beta- We didn't get any word of this.

    Creeping- Well, it is a war.

    Beta- True enough, although we recommend a guide.

    Creeping- No.

    Beta- You must have a guide.

    Creeping-...Fine.

    Beta- Delta! Take this officer to the Temple.

    Delta- Me?!

    Beta- Yes you! Alpha has disappeared and I am the commanding officer of this checkpoint and I order you to take... Wait what is your name?

    Creeping-...Aleks...

    Beta- Take Officer Aleks to the Temple.

    Delta-...Yes...Sir...

    Neon's POV

    Neon climbs up a cliff of the winter North cliff sides. She is wearing a cloak and fur armor. Upon reaching the top she is caught by armed Assassins. Neon is taken to the Assassin Fortress and gets dragged into the Grand hall where statues of the best Assassins are and banners of the assassins and Green are hanging all around. Neon is dragged to the Grandmaster who is standing on a balcony.

    Grandmaster Flog- Hello, who are you and why are you here?

    Neon- I wish to join you and your order.

    Flog- Who...Are...You?

    Neon- My name is Neon or Beth.

    Flog- Well Neon...Why do you want to join?

    Neon- Revenge...I was with the Rebels but they betrayed me and left me for dead. I heard you all were strong and loyal, you also live under the Imperial flag.

    Imperial Choice

    [Welcome to the Order child]

    [No, throw her into the dungeon]

    Coming's POV

    Coming and X1H2 walk out of a forest towards an old abandoned fortress near there. They walk some more till they reached the Keep where it was built into the side of a mountain. They slowly approach...The Keep looks abandoned. There are moss, trees, and vines growing all over the keep. If anyone has been here it was a long time ago...

    X1H2- Doesn't look very safe huh?

    Coming-No...But we need a fortress. Those mines won't last long.

    X1H2- Why?

    Coming- The Imperials aren't dumb...They aren't smart either. It will probably take a while.

    The two walk towards the doors of the Keep.

    X1H2- How do you want to do this?

    Coming- I don't know...

    Rebel Choice

    [Slowly sneak in, we don't know if there is anybody there]

    [Just walk in]

    [Swords ready, be prepared to fight]

  • So which of these three are your favorite?

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Nice! Swords ready, be prepared to fight

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