Elsa wanted to go on the mission with us, I wasn't too sure but the others thought it was a good idea so I agreed, Hopefully nothing will go wrong like last time..
Jordan: You guys in place?
After we arrived in Dubai we split into teams, The first one was Me and Anthanasius ,The second was Javier, Anslem, and Elsa, The third was John, Melanie and Ethan, And Jacob was managing our communications and overseeing the plan.
Javier: Yep.
John: We're good.
Jacob: You're all good, Just keep following the plan.
Jordan: Copy.
Anthanasius: You ready?
Jordan: Yeah, Just the last mission didn't work out so well.
Anthanasius: That where Arin was killed?
Jordan: No, A new guy you never met named Hopeless was killed, Arin was killed once we caught the bastard we tried to get but he escaped...
Anthanasius: Ouch, Sorry to hear that you've lost 2 guys recently, I remember when we lost some people back in the Army.
Jordan: Well, It never get's any easier...
Anthanasius: Damn right.
Javier Mendoza
Javier: You ready amigos?
Anslem: Nope, My first mission since I was a Navy Seal 5 years ago.
Javier: Even better mate, Get the fire lit inside you.!
Anslem: Okay.....
Javier: If it never cooled down too much Looks at Elsa
Elsa Houten: Really Javier? The Puns?
Javier: Hey, you said we couldn't make any on the last mission, never said anything about this one chica.
Anslem: Hey Javier, Don't be a dick to the lady and just let that shit go.
Elsa Houten: Someone shoot me....
Jacob Voice: We wouldn't want that again.
Elsa Houten: Jacob, It was a joke, don't be so literal about everything.
Jacob Voice: Oh! Jacob will remember that!
Elsa Houten: God Dammit.
Javier: Learn to love spicy personality's ice princess.
Anslem: Maybe she could with some good Beer.
Javier: Si, Si.
John Lottmann
I'm so nervous, We have some new guys so I'm not sure if this is the best time for a mission this big and personal....
Melanie: Hey kid, You want this Spreads Legs
John: What?
Melanie: This Gun Grabs Gun from Under her
John: Oh, Yeah, looks cool
Ethan: Get ready.
John: Why You see anything?
Ethan: Some people approaching, Can't tell who they are from up here.
John: Jacob, Can you get the cameras and zoom in on them?
Jacob Voice: Sure, It looks like Gary, Rick,, Vicente and some other guys
Melanie: Hey, What's your friend doing?
John: Who and What?
John sees Anthanasius followed by Jordan running down
Ethan: He supposed to be doing that?
John: Nope, but he does stuff like that a lot so it's hard to be surprised, Just cover them*
Elsa Houten
I convinced the others to put me in on this mission and as usual Jordan and his friend started doing some crazy shit that's hard to let go.....
Elsa Houten: What the fuck are they doing?
Anslem: Beats Me.
Javier: Trying to take out the los muertos senoras
Anslem: Dude, Do you even know Spanish?
Javier: Look at me, Of course I know Spanish, my Parents were Spanish, My Grandparents were Spanish, My Uncle was Spanish, My Cousin was...
Elsa Houten: Javier! Cover them with your sniper rifle!
Anthanasius Redborn
This is my first mission in a long time and with Jordan, We saw our target coming so we decided to try and get him before the others could, this is like Hunting after-all, Only one person can claim the kill...
Jordan: Fire!
Jordan and Anthanasius start shooting
Vicente: Shit! Go! Go! Go!
Rick: Gary, Stall them!
Gary jumps up with M-4 and starts shooting back
Anthanasius: Take Cover!
Jordan: Fuck, the guy has us pinned
Melanie Voice: Not for long.
Gary falls over
Javier: Los Ciento Chica, I got him first.
Jordan: Nice shot whoever that was.
Anthanasius: Fuck they're splitting up! Which one are we going after!?
Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 3
Jordan Wilkerson
Elsa wanted to go on the mission with us, I wasn't too sure but the other… mores thought it was a good idea so I agreed, Hopefully nothing will go wrong like last time..
Jordan: You guys in place?
After we arrived in Dubai we split into teams, The first one was Me and Anthanasius ,The second was Javier, Anslem, and Elsa, The third was John, Melanie and Ethan, And Jacob was managing our communications and overseeing the plan.
Javier: Yep.
John: We're good.
Jacob: You're all good, Just keep following the plan.
Jordan: Copy.
Anthanasius: You ready?
Jordan: Yeah, Just the last mission didn't work out so well.
Anthanasius: That where Arin was killed?
Jordan: No, A new guy you never met named Hopeless was killed, Arin was killed once we caught the bastard we tried to get but he escaped...
Anthanasius: Ouch, Sorry to hear that you've lost 2 guys recently, I… [view original content]
Chase Rick and his men
Splitting up is a bad idea and if they chase Vicente, Rick and his men could probably flank them. It's always better to defeat the mooks first.
Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 3
Jordan Wilkerson
Elsa wanted to go on the mission with us, I wasn't too sure but the other… mores thought it was a good idea so I agreed, Hopefully nothing will go wrong like last time..
Jordan: You guys in place?
After we arrived in Dubai we split into teams, The first one was Me and Anthanasius ,The second was Javier, Anslem, and Elsa, The third was John, Melanie and Ethan, And Jacob was managing our communications and overseeing the plan.
Javier: Yep.
John: We're good.
Jacob: You're all good, Just keep following the plan.
Jordan: Copy.
Anthanasius: You ready?
Jordan: Yeah, Just the last mission didn't work out so well.
Anthanasius: That where Arin was killed?
Jordan: No, A new guy you never met named Hopeless was killed, Arin was killed once we caught the bastard we tried to get but he escaped...
Anthanasius: Ouch, Sorry to hear that you've lost 2 guys recently, I… [view original content]
Well, This is my first time making a Fan Fic ,I'm enjoying it so far and I'm thinking about making another one eventually depending on the reception to this one. I have some ideas so please tell me what you think EDIT: I will be starting 2 more interactive Fan Fics soon, One is the Jurassic Park option and the other is the former agent who is set up and being chased by the government one.
Well, This is my first time making a Fan Fic ,I'm enjoying it so far and I'm thinking about making another one eventually depending on the r… moreeception to this one. I have some ideas so please tell me what you think EDIT: I will be starting 2 more interactive Fan Fics soon, One is the Jurassic Park option and the other is the former agent who is set up and being chased by the government one.
http://www.strawpoll.me/3072675
So @SupernovaeHollay, @NoHopeLeft, @Markd4547, @ClemyClooAndBabyboo, @supersagig, @TheWalkingSheep, @LiquidChicagoTed, @HelloWorld123 @Twist… moreee, @GoldenPaladin, @Zachiscool, @TheCornPopper, Thanks for submitting Characters! and feel free to tell me what you think so far!
So @SupernovaeHollay, @NoHopeLeft, @Markd4547, @ClemyClooAndBabyboo, @supersagig, @TheWalkingSheep, @LiquidChicagoTed, @HelloWorld123 @Twist… moreee, @GoldenPaladin, @Zachiscool, @TheCornPopper, Thanks for submitting Characters! and feel free to tell me what you think so far!
So @SupernovaeHollay, @NoHopeLeft, @Markd4547, @ClemyClooAndBabyboo, @supersagig, @TheWalkingSheep, @LiquidChicagoTed, @HelloWorld123 @Twist… moreee, @GoldenPaladin, @Zachiscool, @TheCornPopper, Thanks for submitting Characters! and feel free to tell me what you think so far!
Well I'm going to be starting 2 more Fan Fics, The first one is called "The Shadow of November" and character submission is open here: http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/87014/the-shadow-of-november That one will be canon to this one's universe. The second is going to be a Jurassic Park one and details plus character submission will be released after Dark Angels is finished.
Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 4
Anthanasius Redborn
Jordan and I popped out and opened fire on the bastards and they started fleeing, They left in 2 groups and I asked Jordan which one we and the rest of his team should go after.....
Anthanasius: Which ones are we going after?
Jordan: Everyone chase Rick and his guys!!
John Voice: Copy
We started chasing this guy Rick and his guys down, we almost had them pinned but the started returning fire
Rick: Fuck! We Can't go back! Shoot them!
Jordan: Stay here, Bro, I'll be back.
Anthanasius: Sure thing, Jumps up and starts shooting at Ricks Men with a 12 gauge shotgun, Hitting a few of them
Javier Mendoza
I sniped that asshole who was working with Jack earlier, I think Gary was the name, then Vicente and Rick started running, We heard from Jordan over our earpieces that we're chasing Rick so we went our way...
Elsa: Let's get em
Anslem: Yeah, Let's blow some shit up.
Elsa: Fuck, They're shooting back now
Anslem: Well, what did you expect Princess....
Javier: Si, Si, Es muy stupido .
Javier sees Anthanasius hit a few of Ricks men
Javier: Eh! El douche can't do shit like that without me!
Javier snipes another one of Ricks guys
Anslem: How many chickenfucks left?
Elsa: Looks like 12 including Rick.
Javier: Got another one... Wait who is that?
Anslem: What do you mean?
Javier: There's a woman down there, and she is smoking!
Elsa: Dammit Javier, It better not be that Lawyer
Javier: Oh No, No
Woman sees Javier hiding above and flips him off
Javier: Sassy Girl...
Elsa: More like Fucking Cunt
Anslem: Sorry to tell you dude, but she looks lesbian.
Javier: What?
Woman points to where Javier, Elsa and Anslem are
Rick: Some fags hiding up there?
Unknown Woman: Yep.
Rick: Hey You Points at random henchman Shoot up there.
Javier: Think they see us?
Elsa: Dammit Javier, Of course they do
Random Henchman grabs grenade and throws it up where Javier is
Anslem: Go! Go! Go!
Javier: Run!
Grenade Explodes
Elsa: AHHH! Fuckers!!
Javier: Elsa! Elsa!!!!!!
Jacob Voice: What the fuck is going on?
Anslem: Some bitch threw a grenade up here and we didn't move fast enough
Elsa: Get the fuck off me!
Javier: Elsa where are you!!!
Elsa: Javier! Guysss!! AHHH! Motherfuck, Get the hell off me!!!!!
Javier: We're going back for her!
Anslem: We can't!
Javier: We have to!
Try and Save Elsa OR Let her Go
John Lottmann
Jordan said we were going after Rick so we followed him and his friend, We had them pinned but they weren't going down without a fight so they started shooting back at us, I heard over the chat some shit was happening to Javier, Anslem, and Elsa but we couldn't help...
Melanie: Fuck, they're getting the others
Ethan: Yeah, but we can't help, the least we can do is to just carry out the mission.
Henchman quietly creeps up on them
Melanie: John you rea-
Ethan: Shit!!!
John: Get OFF John stabs the henchman
Melanie: Thanks kid, That's a bigass knife you got there...
John: Yeah.
Melanie: I wonder what else you got that's big...
Ethan: I'm still here guys.....
John: Okay Ethan, We know.....
Ethan: Fuck, they're getting the other team
Melanie: Looks like Rick and his guys have someone...
John: Let's get em
Ethan: Wait, This could be a trap ]
Melanie: So? Are we just gonna watch them do some shit?
John: We have to do something, Where the hell is Jordan? I see Anthanasius down there trying to take them out but he's gonna need cover and something's happened to Javier, Elsa and Anslem....
Jump out and start shooting OR Split up and see if each of us can get into a good position to take em out
Well I'm going to be starting 2 more Fan Fics, The first one is called "The Shadow of November" and character submission is open here: http:… more//www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/87014/the-shadow-of-november That one will be canon to this one's universe. The second is going to be a Jurassic Park one and details plus character submission will be released after Dark Angels is finished.
Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 4
Anthanasius Redborn
Jordan and I popped out and opened fire on the bastards and they started fleeing, They left in 2 groups and I asked Jordan which one we and the rest of his team should go after.....
Anthanasius: Which ones are we going after?
Jordan: Everyone chase Rick and his guys!!
John Voice: Copy
We started chasing this guy Rick and his guys down, we almost had them pinned but the started returning fire
Rick: Fuck! We Can't go back! Shoot them!
Jordan: Stay here, Bro, I'll be bac… [view original content]
Well I'm going to be starting 2 more Fan Fics, The first one is called "The Shadow of November" and character submission is open here: http:… more//www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/87014/the-shadow-of-november That one will be canon to this one's universe. The second is going to be a Jurassic Park one and details plus character submission will be released after Dark Angels is finished.
Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 4
Anthanasius Redborn
Jordan and I popped out and opened fire on the bastards and they started fleeing, They left in 2 groups and I asked Jordan which one we and the rest of his team should go after.....
Anthanasius: Which ones are we going after?
Jordan: Everyone chase Rick and his guys!!
John Voice: Copy
We started chasing this guy Rick and his guys down, we almost had them pinned but the started returning fire
Rick: Fuck! We Can't go back! Shoot them!
Jordan: Stay here, Bro, I'll be bac… [view original content]
Actually, she got my vote in the favourite character poll
It's just that doing heroic stuff, like saving the princess, often involves a possibility of sudden and unexpected death. But I guess that's always a possibility in a mission like this
One way or the other, I'm definititely looking forward for next part
Well I'm going to be starting 2 more Fan Fics, The first one is called "The Shadow of November" and character submission is open here: http:… more//www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/87014/the-shadow-of-november That one will be canon to this one's universe. The second is going to be a Jurassic Park one and details plus character submission will be released after Dark Angels is finished.
Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 4
Anthanasius Redborn
Jordan and I popped out and opened fire on the bastards and they started fleeing, They left in 2 groups and I asked Jordan which one we and the rest of his team should go after.....
Anthanasius: Which ones are we going after?
Jordan: Everyone chase Rick and his guys!!
John Voice: Copy
We started chasing this guy Rick and his guys down, we almost had them pinned but the started returning fire
Rick: Fuck! We Can't go back! Shoot them!
Jordan: Stay here, Bro, I'll be bac… [view original content]
Name: Harry Cooper
Age: 32
Appearance: Very thin, wears glasses, messy blonde hair, short beard,
Personality: Loner, arrogant, very… more intelligent, Loudmouth
Group/Alliance: Neutral
Any other info: He is a very good hacker and likes to be challenged. He works for everyone as long as he gets a big challenge
Well I'm going to be starting 2 more Fan Fics, The first one is called "The Shadow of November" and character submission is open here: http:… more//www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/87014/the-shadow-of-november That one will be canon to this one's universe. The second is going to be a Jurassic Park one and details plus character submission will be released after Dark Angels is finished.
Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 4
Anthanasius Redborn
Jordan and I popped out and opened fire on the bastards and they started fleeing, They left in 2 groups and I asked Jordan which one we and the rest of his team should go after.....
Anthanasius: Which ones are we going after?
Jordan: Everyone chase Rick and his guys!!
John Voice: Copy
We started chasing this guy Rick and his guys down, we almost had them pinned but the started returning fire
Rick: Fuck! We Can't go back! Shoot them!
Jordan: Stay here, Bro, I'll be bac… [view original content]
you surpassed my expectations having read so many different fanics like this it was essential to have a unique and refreshing angle for story telling plus a very talented writer at the helm and you succeeded
So @SupernovaeHollay, @NoHopeLeft, @Markd4547, @ClemyClooAndBabyboo, @supersagig, @TheWalkingSheep, @LiquidChicagoTed, @HelloWorld123 @Twist… moreee, @GoldenPaladin, @Zachiscool, @TheCornPopper, Thanks for submitting Characters! and feel free to tell me what you think so far!
Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 3
Jordan Wilkerson
Elsa wanted to go on the mission with us, I wasn't too sure but the other… mores thought it was a good idea so I agreed, Hopefully nothing will go wrong like last time..
Jordan: You guys in place?
After we arrived in Dubai we split into teams, The first one was Me and Anthanasius ,The second was Javier, Anslem, and Elsa, The third was John, Melanie and Ethan, And Jacob was managing our communications and overseeing the plan.
Javier: Yep.
John: We're good.
Jacob: You're all good, Just keep following the plan.
Jordan: Copy.
Anthanasius: You ready?
Jordan: Yeah, Just the last mission didn't work out so well.
Anthanasius: That where Arin was killed?
Jordan: No, A new guy you never met named Hopeless was killed, Arin was killed once we caught the bastard we tried to get but he escaped...
Anthanasius: Ouch, Sorry to hear that you've lost 2 guys recently, I… [view original content]
Well I'm going to be starting 2 more Fan Fics, The first one is called "The Shadow of November" and character submission is open here: http:… more//www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/87014/the-shadow-of-november That one will be canon to this one's universe. The second is going to be a Jurassic Park one and details plus character submission will be released after Dark Angels is finished.
Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 4
Anthanasius Redborn
Jordan and I popped out and opened fire on the bastards and they started fleeing, They left in 2 groups and I asked Jordan which one we and the rest of his team should go after.....
Anthanasius: Which ones are we going after?
Jordan: Everyone chase Rick and his guys!!
John Voice: Copy
We started chasing this guy Rick and his guys down, we almost had them pinned but the started returning fire
Rick: Fuck! We Can't go back! Shoot them!
Jordan: Stay here, Bro, I'll be bac… [view original content]
Well I'm going to be starting 2 more Fan Fics, The first one is called "The Shadow of November" and character submission is open here: http:… more//www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/87014/the-shadow-of-november That one will be canon to this one's universe. The second is going to be a Jurassic Park one and details plus character submission will be released after Dark Angels is finished.
Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 4
Anthanasius Redborn
Jordan and I popped out and opened fire on the bastards and they started fleeing, They left in 2 groups and I asked Jordan which one we and the rest of his team should go after.....
Anthanasius: Which ones are we going after?
Jordan: Everyone chase Rick and his guys!!
John Voice: Copy
We started chasing this guy Rick and his guys down, we almost had them pinned but the started returning fire
Rick: Fuck! We Can't go back! Shoot them!
Jordan: Stay here, Bro, I'll be bac… [view original content]
Well I'm going to be starting 2 more Fan Fics, The first one is called "The Shadow of November" and character submission is open here: http:… more//www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/87014/the-shadow-of-november That one will be canon to this one's universe. The second is going to be a Jurassic Park one and details plus character submission will be released after Dark Angels is finished.
Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 4
Anthanasius Redborn
Jordan and I popped out and opened fire on the bastards and they started fleeing, They left in 2 groups and I asked Jordan which one we and the rest of his team should go after.....
Anthanasius: Which ones are we going after?
Jordan: Everyone chase Rick and his guys!!
John Voice: Copy
We started chasing this guy Rick and his guys down, we almost had them pinned but the started returning fire
Rick: Fuck! We Can't go back! Shoot them!
Jordan: Stay here, Bro, I'll be bac… [view original content]
So @SupernovaeHollay, @NoHopeLeft, @Markd4547, @ClemyClooAndBabyboo, @supersagig, @TheWalkingSheep, @LiquidChicagoTed, @HelloWorld123 @Twist… moreee, @GoldenPaladin, @Zachiscool, @TheCornPopper, Thanks for submitting Characters! and feel free to tell me what you think so far!
Me, Anslem, and Elsa were together but Rick and a beautiful but evil companion of his spotted us and started firing at us and a smoke grenade came in, I thought we made it out but I heard Elsa yelling....
Elsa Voice: Get the fuck off me! You bastards!!!!
Javier: Elsa, Where are you?
Elsa: Over HE-
Anslem: Motherfuck! Javier!
Javier: Anslem? What's happening?
Anslem: AHHHHHH HELP, NO FUC-
Javier: Anslem! Elsa!? Anyone!?
I couldn't see through the smoke, all could here were distant voices and Gun Fire
Unknown Voice Singing: I see you.........
Javier: Who is that!!!
Unknown Voice Singing: You don't see me
Javier: Where are you!?
Unknown voice Singing: I am going to kill you........
After my time in the Spanish military ,people said I had the ear of a bat, I guess that's true because I could hear something approaching....
Javier: Got You!!! Wait you're that Woman with Rick...... What's your name Bitch?
Unknown woman: Audrey Degaldo....
Javier: And I'm Javier, Wow, You es beautiful
All I saw was Audrey somehow gain the strength to jump up and drop kick me
Audrey: Sorry Javier....... I have to do this.......
Javier: Ugh, AHHHHH
I saw her pull something out, And I didn't want to stick around to find out what it was so I rolled off the platform over seeing Rick and his men.....
Jacob
I had no Idea what was going on, The Earpieces and my Cameras were off, I was in the Dark...
Jacob: Javier, You hear me? Elsa copy. Jordan? Anyone out there call in.
Voice: You listen veryyy carefully now SkrubCake....
Jacob: Who are you?
Voice: Oh, You don't recognize my voice..... What about my face!?
I heard the door behind me fall, I turned around and saw him......
Jacob: Sparker!?
Sparker: Aw, so you do recognize me, Get em boys
Jacob: NO! FUCK YA!!!!
Fuck, I left my pistol back at our safe-house, All I had was a tazer
Sparker: Oh My God! HAHAHAHAHEHEOH HAHAH OH WOW HAHAHAHEHEHEHEHHAHA
Jacob: Jokes on you clown, I upgraded this tazer to make it 100,000 volts! 1 hit of this and you're dead.
Sparker: HAHA!!! Bullshit. Next time you wanna play Alfred at least become a better Liar
Jacob: NOOOO Fires Tazer and henchman stares at Jacob
Sparker: Well that shit didn't work, Get em boys........
Jacob: Son of a Saltlick.......
John Lottmann
We see Rick so we decided to jump out and start shooting.....
John: Let's just go out there and start shooting these guys...
Melanie: Nice, I like that
Ethan: Whatever......
Melanie: Wait, who's that they have there?
John: It's Elsa...And Anslem
Rick: Get out here right fucking now or else I blow there asses into Hell.
John: Rick!!! Starts shooting
Melanie: Watch out there's some coming behind us!!!
Ethan: Told you we should have split up and set up at different spots
Melanie: Not the time ethan!
John: Pulls out Machete
John charged towards the guys approaching behind them and suprised them, The first one was stabbed in the stomach, the second one noticed but didn't react fast enough and was stabbed in the chest, the third and fourth both started shooting at John but Melanie jumped up and Shot them.
Ethan: Wow, that was intense.......Wait Fuck!
John: Ethan!!!
Melanie: There's too many!
Rick: We have these bastards now, Audrey you're cool and stuff but I think i'm gonna have to cut you loose....
Audrey: What?
Ricks pulls out his Colt Python and shoots Audrey in the chest
Rick: Besides, You wouldn't have sex with me, You were probably a lesbian
Melanie: Ethan!!!
John: Ethan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Melanie: We have to go!
John: Dang...
Anthanasius Redborn
I was shooting at those chickenfucks with my shotgun, The last time I had so much fun was maybe 12 years ago at that Strip- Nvm that.
Rick: Damn, This other guys got us
Henchman: I'll fix it
Henchman walks out of cover but Anthanasius shoots him in the head
Rick: Fucking Idiot
Jordan: HEY FUCKERS!!!!!!!
Anthanasius: Where the hell were you?
Jordan: Bringing the party. Pulls Out Mini-Gun
Anthanasius: Sweet as Honey.....
Jordan: Rick! I'm gonna give you 5 seconds to come out!
Rick: I have two of your guys right here so that's a bad idea boy!
Jordan: Fuck.....
Some more guys run in
Henchman: Vicente sends his regards
Jordan: Boom. Starts Firing Mini Gun AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Rick: Go! Go! Go! We have an opening, Fallback!
Anthanasius: Good Job agent 007
Jordan: Shit they're getting away
Sparker Voice I would just walk away bras.......
Jordan: Sparker! You son of a bitch....
Sparker Voice: How's the eye?
Jordan: I'll fucking kill you
Sparker Voice: Go ahead and try.......
Anthanasius: What now?
Jordan: Rick got away, Vicente got away, Sparkers on the loose and our communication is cut, We have to go back and round up the others....
3 Hours Later
Javier: There you guys are
Jordan: Where's Elsa and Anslem?
Javier:........ Those bitches got em, I tried but there was too many.......
John: They took Ethan too.
Anthanasius: Fucking Shit, We have a video message....
Sparker in Video: Heya Guys, Think things would go away this easy? This isn't a one night stand dumbasses, But.... I'm sure you're wondering why I might be a little unusual right now, The answer is I have your guys here and I kinda like them..., I have a high power contact in your little agency who has helped me on some thangs and he told me the names of your friends here EHOHAHA, Sparker rips off Saw Mask Snowcone here Elsa, Typical Druck American Anslem, Shroudy and cliche Ethan, and your little tech Geek Squad guy Jacob, You have 2 days to come here and get them, If you don't well, I will torture each and every one of them and make them beg for death then I will finally give it to them to end their horrible lives!!!
Sparker: After all, it would be a shame if a princess like this died Pats Elsas Head
Dark Angels Part 3:Out for Blood Chapter 5
Javier Mendoza
Me, Anslem, and Elsa were together but Rick and a beautiful but evil compani… moreon of his spotted us and started firing at us and a smoke grenade came in, I thought we made it out but I heard Elsa yelling....
Elsa Voice: Get the fuck off me! You bastards!!!!
Javier: Elsa, Where are you?
Elsa: Over HE-
Anslem: Motherfuck! Javier!
Javier: Anslem? What's happening?
Anslem: AHHHHHH HELP, NO FUC-
Javier: Anslem! Elsa!? Anyone!?
I couldn't see through the smoke, all could here were distant voices and Gun Fire
Unknown Voice Singing: I see you.........
Javier: Who is that!!!
Unknown Voice Singing: You don't see me
Javier: Where are you!?
Unknown voice Singing: I am going to kill you........
After my time in the Spanish military ,people said I had the ear of a bat, I guess that's true because I could hear something approaching....
Javier: Got You!!… [view original content]
Dark Angels Part 3:Out for Blood Chapter 5
Javier Mendoza
Me, Anslem, and Elsa were together but Rick and a beautiful but evil compani… moreon of his spotted us and started firing at us and a smoke grenade came in, I thought we made it out but I heard Elsa yelling....
Elsa Voice: Get the fuck off me! You bastards!!!!
Javier: Elsa, Where are you?
Elsa: Over HE-
Anslem: Motherfuck! Javier!
Javier: Anslem? What's happening?
Anslem: AHHHHHH HELP, NO FUC-
Javier: Anslem! Elsa!? Anyone!?
I couldn't see through the smoke, all could here were distant voices and Gun Fire
Unknown Voice Singing: I see you.........
Javier: Who is that!!!
Unknown Voice Singing: You don't see me
Javier: Where are you!?
Unknown voice Singing: I am going to kill you........
After my time in the Spanish military ,people said I had the ear of a bat, I guess that's true because I could hear something approaching....
Javier: Got You!!… [view original content]
Dark Angels Part 3:Out for Blood Chapter 5
Javier Mendoza
Me, Anslem, and Elsa were together but Rick and a beautiful but evil compani… moreon of his spotted us and started firing at us and a smoke grenade came in, I thought we made it out but I heard Elsa yelling....
Elsa Voice: Get the fuck off me! You bastards!!!!
Javier: Elsa, Where are you?
Elsa: Over HE-
Anslem: Motherfuck! Javier!
Javier: Anslem? What's happening?
Anslem: AHHHHHH HELP, NO FUC-
Javier: Anslem! Elsa!? Anyone!?
I couldn't see through the smoke, all could here were distant voices and Gun Fire
Unknown Voice Singing: I see you.........
Javier: Who is that!!!
Unknown Voice Singing: You don't see me
Javier: Where are you!?
Unknown voice Singing: I am going to kill you........
After my time in the Spanish military ,people said I had the ear of a bat, I guess that's true because I could hear something approaching....
Javier: Got You!!… [view original content]
Dark Angels Part 3:Out for Blood Chapter 5
Javier Mendoza
Me, Anslem, and Elsa were together but Rick and a beautiful but evil compani… moreon of his spotted us and started firing at us and a smoke grenade came in, I thought we made it out but I heard Elsa yelling....
Elsa Voice: Get the fuck off me! You bastards!!!!
Javier: Elsa, Where are you?
Elsa: Over HE-
Anslem: Motherfuck! Javier!
Javier: Anslem? What's happening?
Anslem: AHHHHHH HELP, NO FUC-
Javier: Anslem! Elsa!? Anyone!?
I couldn't see through the smoke, all could here were distant voices and Gun Fire
Unknown Voice Singing: I see you.........
Javier: Who is that!!!
Unknown Voice Singing: You don't see me
Javier: Where are you!?
Unknown voice Singing: I am going to kill you........
After my time in the Spanish military ,people said I had the ear of a bat, I guess that's true because I could hear something approaching....
Javier: Got You!!… [view original content]
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Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 3
Jordan Wilkerson
Elsa wanted to go on the mission with us, I wasn't too sure but the others thought it was a good idea so I agreed, Hopefully nothing will go wrong like last time..
Jordan: You guys in place?
After we arrived in Dubai we split into teams, The first one was Me and Anthanasius ,The second was Javier, Anslem, and Elsa, The third was John, Melanie and Ethan, And Jacob was managing our communications and overseeing the plan.
Javier: Yep.
John: We're good.
Jacob: You're all good, Just keep following the plan.
Jordan: Copy.
Anthanasius: You ready?
Jordan: Yeah, Just the last mission didn't work out so well.
Anthanasius: That where Arin was killed?
Jordan: No, A new guy you never met named Hopeless was killed, Arin was killed once we caught the bastard we tried to get but he escaped...
Anthanasius: Ouch, Sorry to hear that you've lost 2 guys recently, I remember when we lost some people back in the Army.
Jordan: Well, It never get's any easier...
Anthanasius: Damn right.
Javier Mendoza
Javier: You ready amigos?
Anslem: Nope, My first mission since I was a Navy Seal 5 years ago.
Javier: Even better mate, Get the fire lit inside you.!
Anslem: Okay.....
Javier: If it never cooled down too much Looks at Elsa
Elsa Houten: Really Javier? The Puns?
Javier: Hey, you said we couldn't make any on the last mission, never said anything about this one chica.
Anslem: Hey Javier, Don't be a dick to the lady and just let that shit go.
Elsa Houten: Someone shoot me....
Jacob Voice: We wouldn't want that again.
Elsa Houten: Jacob, It was a joke, don't be so literal about everything.
Jacob Voice: Oh! Jacob will remember that!
Elsa Houten: God Dammit.
Javier: Learn to love spicy personality's ice princess.
Anslem: Maybe she could with some good Beer.
Javier: Si, Si.
John Lottmann
I'm so nervous, We have some new guys so I'm not sure if this is the best time for a mission this big and personal....
Melanie: Hey kid, You want this Spreads Legs
John: What?
Melanie: This Gun Grabs Gun from Under her
John: Oh, Yeah, looks cool
Ethan: Get ready.
John: Why You see anything?
Ethan: Some people approaching, Can't tell who they are from up here.
John: Jacob, Can you get the cameras and zoom in on them?
Jacob Voice: Sure, It looks like Gary, Rick,, Vicente and some other guys
Melanie: Hey, What's your friend doing?
John: Who and What?
John sees Anthanasius followed by Jordan running down
Ethan: He supposed to be doing that?
John: Nope, but he does stuff like that a lot so it's hard to be surprised, Just cover them*
Elsa Houten
I convinced the others to put me in on this mission and as usual Jordan and his friend started doing some crazy shit that's hard to let go.....
Elsa Houten: What the fuck are they doing?
Anslem: Beats Me.
Javier: Trying to take out the los muertos senoras
Anslem: Dude, Do you even know Spanish?
Javier: Look at me, Of course I know Spanish, my Parents were Spanish, My Grandparents were Spanish, My Uncle was Spanish, My Cousin was...
Elsa Houten: Javier! Cover them with your sniper rifle!
Anthanasius Redborn
This is my first mission in a long time and with Jordan, We saw our target coming so we decided to try and get him before the others could, this is like Hunting after-all, Only one person can claim the kill...
Jordan: Fire!
Jordan and Anthanasius start shooting
Vicente: Shit! Go! Go! Go!
Rick: Gary, Stall them!
Gary jumps up with M-4 and starts shooting back
Anthanasius: Take Cover!
Jordan: Fuck, the guy has us pinned
Melanie Voice: Not for long.
Gary falls over
Javier: Los Ciento Chica, I got him first.
Jordan: Nice shot whoever that was.
Anthanasius: Fuck they're splitting up! Which one are we going after!?
The group will chase Rick and his Men
Chase Rick and his men
Splitting up is a bad idea and if they chase Vicente, Rick and his men could probably flank them. It's always better to defeat the mooks first.
We'll see
Hmmmm
Chase Rick and his men
Another one bites the dust... :P
Well, This is my first time making a Fan Fic ,I'm enjoying it so far and I'm thinking about making another one eventually depending on the reception to this one. I have some ideas so please tell me what you think
EDIT: I will be starting 2 more interactive Fan Fics soon, One is the Jurassic Park option and the other is the former agent who is set up and being chased by the government one.
http://www.strawpoll.me/3072675
A Jurassic Park Fan Fic sounds amazing!
So @SupernovaeHollay, @NoHopeLeft, @Markd4547, @ClemyClooAndBabyboo, @supersagig, @TheWalkingSheep, @LiquidChicagoTed, @HelloWorld123 @Twistee, @GoldenPaladin, @Zachiscool, @TheCornPopper, Thanks for submitting Characters! and feel free to tell me what you think so far!
I really like it so far!
If you have not heard, I am starting two more Fan Fics "Soon" and one is a Jurassic Park one
It's good. It's a different approach to telling a story, but you do very good job with it.
Who has 2 thumbs, is white, has blue eyes, and loves stories?
My sister, dummy.
Who has 2 thumbs, is white, has blue eyes, and loves THIS STORY?
MEEEEEEE!!!!!!
Well I'm going to be starting 2 more Fan Fics, The first one is called "The Shadow of November" and character submission is open here: http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/87014/the-shadow-of-november That one will be canon to this one's universe. The second is going to be a Jurassic Park one and details plus character submission will be released after Dark Angels is finished.
Dark Angels Part 3: Out for Blood Chapter 4
Anthanasius Redborn
Jordan and I popped out and opened fire on the bastards and they started fleeing, They left in 2 groups and I asked Jordan which one we and the rest of his team should go after.....
Anthanasius: Which ones are we going after?
Jordan: Everyone chase Rick and his guys!!
John Voice: Copy
We started chasing this guy Rick and his guys down, we almost had them pinned but the started returning fire
Rick: Fuck! We Can't go back! Shoot them!
Jordan: Stay here, Bro, I'll be back.
Anthanasius: Sure thing, Jumps up and starts shooting at Ricks Men with a 12 gauge shotgun, Hitting a few of them
Javier Mendoza
I sniped that asshole who was working with Jack earlier, I think Gary was the name, then Vicente and Rick started running, We heard from Jordan over our earpieces that we're chasing Rick so we went our way...
Elsa: Let's get em
Anslem: Yeah, Let's blow some shit up.
Elsa: Fuck, They're shooting back now
Anslem: Well, what did you expect Princess....
Javier: Si, Si, Es muy stupido .
Javier sees Anthanasius hit a few of Ricks men
Javier: Eh! El douche can't do shit like that without me!
Javier snipes another one of Ricks guys
Anslem: How many chickenfucks left?
Elsa: Looks like 12 including Rick.
Javier: Got another one... Wait who is that?
Anslem: What do you mean?
Javier: There's a woman down there, and she is smoking!
Elsa: Dammit Javier, It better not be that Lawyer
Javier: Oh No, No
Woman sees Javier hiding above and flips him off
Javier: Sassy Girl...
Elsa: More like Fucking Cunt
Anslem: Sorry to tell you dude, but she looks lesbian.
Javier: What?
Woman points to where Javier, Elsa and Anslem are
Rick: Some fags hiding up there?
Unknown Woman: Yep.
Rick: Hey You Points at random henchman Shoot up there.
Javier: Think they see us?
Elsa: Dammit Javier, Of course they do
Random Henchman grabs grenade and throws it up where Javier is
Anslem: Go! Go! Go!
Javier: Run!
Grenade Explodes
Elsa: AHHH! Fuckers!!
Javier: Elsa! Elsa!!!!!!
Jacob Voice: What the fuck is going on?
Anslem: Some bitch threw a grenade up here and we didn't move fast enough
Elsa: Get the fuck off me!
Javier: Elsa where are you!!!
Elsa: Javier! Guysss!! AHHH! Motherfuck, Get the hell off me!!!!!
Javier: We're going back for her!
Anslem: We can't!
Javier: We have to!
Try and Save Elsa OR Let her Go
John Lottmann
Jordan said we were going after Rick so we followed him and his friend, We had them pinned but they weren't going down without a fight so they started shooting back at us, I heard over the chat some shit was happening to Javier, Anslem, and Elsa but we couldn't help...
Melanie: Fuck, they're getting the others
Ethan: Yeah, but we can't help, the least we can do is to just carry out the mission.
Henchman quietly creeps up on them
Melanie: John you rea-
Ethan: Shit!!!
John: Get OFF John stabs the henchman
Melanie: Thanks kid, That's a bigass knife you got there...
John: Yeah.
Melanie: I wonder what else you got that's big...
Ethan: I'm still here guys.....
John: Okay Ethan, We know.....
Ethan: Fuck, they're getting the other team
Melanie: Looks like Rick and his guys have someone...
John: Let's get em
Ethan: Wait, This could be a trap ]
Melanie: So? Are we just gonna watch them do some shit?
John: We have to do something, Where the hell is Jordan? I see Anthanasius down there trying to take them out but he's gonna need cover and something's happened to Javier, Elsa and Anslem....
Jump out and start shooting OR Split up and see if each of us can get into a good position to take em out
Let her Go
Jump out and start shooting
Try and Save Elsa
Ugh, I'm so going to regret that...
Jump out and start shooting
Why? Do you not like Elsa?
Actually, she got my vote in the favourite character poll
It's just that doing heroic stuff, like saving the princess, often involves a possibility of sudden and unexpected death. But I guess that's always a possibility in a mission like this
One way or the other, I'm definititely looking forward for next part
Let her Go
Split up and see if each of us can get into a good position to take em out
Can i still join? I only joined the forum today after i saw this forum game section. I like the story so far
Name: Harry Cooper
Age: 32
Appearance: Very thin, wears glasses, messy blonde hair, short beard,
Personality: Loner, arrogant, very intelligent, Loudmouth
Group/Alliance: Neutral
Any other info: He is a very good hacker and likes to be challenged. He works for everyone as long as he gets a big challenge
Thanks
Try to save Elsa
Split up and see if each of us can get into a good position to take em out
Btw guys, how do I write with bold letters, like you did?
Put ** Before and after what you say with no spaces
you surpassed my expectations having read so many different fanics like this it was essential to have a unique and refreshing angle for story telling plus a very talented writer at the helm and you succeeded
Awesome
Split up guys and get both of them
2 birds one stone doet
Oh, Sorry this is an old part.....
Try and Save Elsa
YES be the hero B}
**Jump out and start shooting **
HELL YEAH
New Fan Fic of mine
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/87092/forum-users-jurassic-park-mods-please-leave-this-up-for-a-little-so-people-can-see-it?new=1
Try and save Elsa
jump out and start shooting
try and save Elsa
Jump out and start shooting
To get updates on my Fan Fics or if you have any questions you can come here: http://us20.chatzy.com/23237808000877
It's a fantastic story
Dark Angels Part 3:Out for Blood Chapter 5
Javier Mendoza
Me, Anslem, and Elsa were together but Rick and a beautiful but evil companion of his spotted us and started firing at us and a smoke grenade came in, I thought we made it out but I heard Elsa yelling....
Elsa Voice: Get the fuck off me! You bastards!!!!
Javier: Elsa, Where are you?
Elsa: Over HE-
Anslem: Motherfuck! Javier!
Javier: Anslem? What's happening?
Anslem: AHHHHHH HELP, NO FUC-
Javier: Anslem! Elsa!? Anyone!?
I couldn't see through the smoke, all could here were distant voices and Gun Fire
Unknown Voice Singing: I see you.........
Javier: Who is that!!!
Unknown Voice Singing: You don't see me
Javier: Where are you!?
Unknown voice Singing: I am going to kill you........
After my time in the Spanish military ,people said I had the ear of a bat, I guess that's true because I could hear something approaching....
Javier: Got You!!! Wait you're that Woman with Rick...... What's your name Bitch?
Unknown woman: Audrey Degaldo....
Javier: And I'm Javier, Wow, You es beautiful
All I saw was Audrey somehow gain the strength to jump up and drop kick me
Audrey: Sorry Javier....... I have to do this.......
Javier: Ugh, AHHHHH
I saw her pull something out, And I didn't want to stick around to find out what it was so I rolled off the platform over seeing Rick and his men.....
Jacob
I had no Idea what was going on, The Earpieces and my Cameras were off, I was in the Dark...
Jacob: Javier, You hear me? Elsa copy. Jordan? Anyone out there call in.
Voice: You listen veryyy carefully now SkrubCake....
Jacob: Who are you?
Voice: Oh, You don't recognize my voice..... What about my face!?
I heard the door behind me fall, I turned around and saw him......
Jacob: Sparker!?
Sparker: Aw, so you do recognize me, Get em boys
Jacob: NO! FUCK YA!!!!
Fuck, I left my pistol back at our safe-house, All I had was a tazer
Sparker: Oh My God! HAHAHAHAHEHEOH HAHAH OH WOW HAHAHAHEHEHEHEHHAHA
Jacob: Jokes on you clown, I upgraded this tazer to make it 100,000 volts! 1 hit of this and you're dead.
Sparker: HAHA!!! Bullshit. Next time you wanna play Alfred at least become a better Liar
Jacob: NOOOO Fires Tazer and henchman stares at Jacob
Sparker: Well that shit didn't work, Get em boys........
Jacob: Son of a Saltlick.......
John Lottmann
We see Rick so we decided to jump out and start shooting.....
John: Let's just go out there and start shooting these guys...
Melanie: Nice, I like that
Ethan: Whatever......
Melanie: Wait, who's that they have there?
John: It's Elsa...And Anslem
Rick: Get out here right fucking now or else I blow there asses into Hell.
John: Rick!!! Starts shooting
Melanie: Watch out there's some coming behind us!!!
Ethan: Told you we should have split up and set up at different spots
Melanie: Not the time ethan!
John: Pulls out Machete
John charged towards the guys approaching behind them and suprised them, The first one was stabbed in the stomach, the second one noticed but didn't react fast enough and was stabbed in the chest, the third and fourth both started shooting at John but Melanie jumped up and Shot them.
Ethan: Wow, that was intense.......Wait Fuck!
John: Ethan!!!
Melanie: There's too many!
Rick: We have these bastards now, Audrey you're cool and stuff but I think i'm gonna have to cut you loose....
Audrey: What?
Ricks pulls out his Colt Python and shoots Audrey in the chest
Rick: Besides, You wouldn't have sex with me, You were probably a lesbian
Melanie: Ethan!!!
John: Ethan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Melanie: We have to go!
John: Dang...
Anthanasius Redborn
I was shooting at those chickenfucks with my shotgun, The last time I had so much fun was maybe 12 years ago at that Strip- Nvm that.
Rick: Damn, This other guys got us
Henchman: I'll fix it
Henchman walks out of cover but Anthanasius shoots him in the head
Rick: Fucking Idiot
Jordan: HEY FUCKERS!!!!!!!
Anthanasius: Where the hell were you?
Jordan: Bringing the party. Pulls Out Mini-Gun
Anthanasius: Sweet as Honey.....
Jordan: Rick! I'm gonna give you 5 seconds to come out!
Rick: I have two of your guys right here so that's a bad idea boy!
Jordan: Fuck.....
Some more guys run in
Henchman: Vicente sends his regards
Jordan: Boom. Starts Firing Mini Gun AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Rick: Go! Go! Go! We have an opening, Fallback!
Anthanasius: Good Job agent 007
Jordan: Shit they're getting away
Sparker Voice I would just walk away bras.......
Jordan: Sparker! You son of a bitch....
Sparker Voice: How's the eye?
Jordan: I'll fucking kill you
Sparker Voice: Go ahead and try.......
Anthanasius: What now?
Jordan: Rick got away, Vicente got away, Sparkers on the loose and our communication is cut, We have to go back and round up the others....
3 Hours Later
Javier: There you guys are
Jordan: Where's Elsa and Anslem?
Javier:........ Those bitches got em, I tried but there was too many.......
John: They took Ethan too.
Anthanasius: Fucking Shit, We have a video message....
Sparker in Video: Heya Guys, Think things would go away this easy? This isn't a one night stand dumbasses, But.... I'm sure you're wondering why I might be a little unusual right now, The answer is I have your guys here and I kinda like them..., I have a high power contact in your little agency who has helped me on some thangs and he told me the names of your friends here EHOHAHA, Sparker rips off Saw Mask Snowcone here Elsa, Typical Druck American Anslem, Shroudy and cliche Ethan, and your little tech Geek Squad guy Jacob, You have 2 days to come here and get them, If you don't well, I will torture each and every one of them and make them beg for death then I will finally give it to them to end their horrible lives!!!
Sparker: After all, it would be a shame if a princess like this died Pats Elsas Head
Elsa Muffled: EEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anslem: Don't you fucking touch her!!!!!!!!!
Sparker: Oh come on tough guy!!!!!!! Hit Me! Hit ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh wait you can't Punches Anslem Now keep your trap shut.
You have 2 days, Come or they die and To make things easier, I'm in Ireland right now, Bring it Skrubs HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Camera Shuts off
Jordan: Holy Shit...............
John: Oh My God.....
Melanie: What the hell are we gonna do now
Javier: We're gonna charge in and get our amigos out. By the way I got another person.....
Melanie: Who?
Javier: Guys meet Audrey, Rick tried to take her out and she wants to help us...
Audrey: I don't care about you folks, I just want him dead.
Jordan: Fine, as long as she doesn't get in our way....
John: Are we gonna get more help?
Jordan: Sure, We're gonna need a lot of Help OR Hell No, Sparker said he has a man inside, We can't trust anybody
Sure , We´re gonna need a lot of help. Excellent Chapter!!!!!
Sure, We're gonna need a lot of Help
Hell no, Sparker said he has a man inside, we can't trust anybody
I'm the careful type. Good chapter!
So, What do you guys think about Elsa, Anslem,Ethan and Jacob?
I don't know. Maybe 1 or 2 of them will die. I hope not...
That they should live
especially Anselm and Ethan XD