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edited December 2014 in General Chat

I think I stretched her head and neck length wise. Confirm? What other inconsistencies are there?

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  • edited December 2014

    Needs more Opal 1/10. Could you try drawing her? I know somebody who would love to see it. Of course if you haven't watched Korra yet then do it! :P

    More seriously. Not bad, the head and neck is definitely too long. I think her head looks a little bit rectangular, and her chin looks kind of weird. I don't know xD.

  • Is that supposed to be Katara? It's not bad, I think you made a good attempt but the face definitely needs some work.

  • Awesome thanks :D

    Needs more Opal 1/10. Could you try drawing her? I know somebody who would love to see it. Of course if you haven't watched Korra yet then d

  • That is who it's supposed to be. I guess it wasn't terrible because you at least guessed right :p

    What exactly needs work with the face?

    It's the first drawing I've done since art class junior year.

    MrX1H2 posted: »

    Is that supposed to be Katara? It's not bad, I think you made a good attempt but the face definitely needs some work.

  • Well, like you and@Raging_Blades said the neck is way too long as well as the head. I would try to make her head shorter and a little more roundish and shorten the length of her neck. The lower body seems okay. I also would recommend making the eyes more circular. Other than that everything looks fine.

    Viva-La-Lee posted: »

    That is who it's supposed to be. I guess it wasn't terrible because you at least guessed right What exactly needs work with the face? It's the first drawing I've done since art class junior year.

  • Ahh the eyes, yes! Thanks :)

    MrX1H2 posted: »

    Well, like you and@Raging_Blades said the neck is way too long as well as the head. I would try to make her head shorter and a little more r

  • Not bad. Not bad at all.

  • Really nice man,

    Viva-La-Lee posted: »

    Awesome thanks

  • Oh, boy.

    I think the proportions of her face and body and neck are wrong. Her neck is kind of... very long, and so is her face. Also, her face is so flawlessly pentagon on purpose? Small irises are an issue, too. And shading, I think there's something wrong with the shading.

    There, I'm done.

  • The shading of the hair at the top right is what didn't feel right to me. Either lightening it a bit or darkening th rest of her hair would be a necessity. The shading on the neck isn't accurate because, like the head, the neck was elongated. I'm not sure why the head turned out so boxy...

    Thanks for the input!

    Lingvort posted: »

    Oh, boy. I think the proportions of her face and body and neck are wrong. Her neck is kind of... very long, and so is her face. Also, her

  • Remember to put her braided pony tail at the back.

  • Her face is too thin. Other than that it's good.

  • How so?

    You make her look way too old

  • edited December 2014

    You make her look way too old

  • Face way too sharp and long. Look at the difference from the ears. It's just too long

    Viva-La-Lee posted: »

    How so?

  • I don't know if someone could shed some light on this for me, but why are people so obsessed with this show all of a sudden? I watched the original Avatar series when it was on TV, but there seems to be a resurgence of popularity. Like I'm seeing this stuff everywhere.

  • Probably cause Legend of Korra (the sequel) is going on right now, I think it re-lit the flame that avatar fans had after 4 years went by with practically nothing new in that universe.

    I don't know if someone could shed some light on this for me, but why are people so obsessed with this show all of a sudden? I watched the o

  • I haven't really seen a resurrection of it anywhere but here. It's been reviving here because of people like Green and I. Since she's a huge fan of the new series, and I've been reintroduced to my childhood story. That's the only explanation I've got :p

    I don't know if someone could shed some light on this for me, but why are people so obsessed with this show all of a sudden? I watched the o

  • Since she's a huge fan of the new series

    If you're talking about me, I'm actually not a she :P

    Viva-La-Lee posted: »

    I haven't really seen a resurrection of it anywhere but here. It's been reviving here because of people like Green and I. Since she's a huge fan of the new series, and I've been reintroduced to my childhood story. That's the only explanation I've got

  • It is very long :p

    I didn't realize it made her look old, though. So perhaps I'll just say I was making an "Older Katara" and I can pretend I didn't fuck up :)

    Face way too sharp and long. Look at the difference from the ears. It's just too long

  • Huh. Well. I guess it is true what they say about what happens when you assume. :P

    Green613 posted: »

    Since she's a huge fan of the new series If you're talking about me, I'm actually not a she :P

  • Her neck and face are to skinny, other than that it looks good.

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