Screw It, The forums are dead so I'm writing another part to this
Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 4
Javier Mendoza
Jav… moreier: Do you think they're okay?
Jordan: I don't know.
Javier: How's the ojo?
Jordan: ...
Javier: How's the eye?
Jordan: Don't know but the docs took care of it, I'm just gonna kill Sparker.
Javier: Ever think the Limbo would be worse? The Tomb, The Gallows, The Black Death, It has a shit load of names but no one has ever gotten out and he would spend the rest of his life suffering, ever think about that? Now I want this guy as bad as you but after thinking it out some....I want to break every bone in his body and then drop whatever is left of his carcass to the Tomb....Just whatever you do, Don't be el Stupido....
Jordan: Good Point, Thinks that's the smartest thing you've ever said...
Javier: Oy!
Agent 123
Trying to get there before Jordan does so he doesn't do anything Stup… [view original content]
Screw It, The forums are dead so I'm writing another part to this
Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 4
Javier Mendoza
Jav… moreier: Do you think they're okay?
Jordan: I don't know.
Javier: How's the ojo?
Jordan: ...
Javier: How's the eye?
Jordan: Don't know but the docs took care of it, I'm just gonna kill Sparker.
Javier: Ever think the Limbo would be worse? The Tomb, The Gallows, The Black Death, It has a shit load of names but no one has ever gotten out and he would spend the rest of his life suffering, ever think about that? Now I want this guy as bad as you but after thinking it out some....I want to break every bone in his body and then drop whatever is left of his carcass to the Tomb....Just whatever you do, Don't be el Stupido....
Jordan: Good Point, Thinks that's the smartest thing you've ever said...
Javier: Oy!
Agent 123
Trying to get there before Jordan does so he doesn't do anything Stup… [view original content]
Holy fuckity fuck! So I was right about the surprise option! And that fucked up choice... Somebody has to break every bone in that terror clowns body and throw his sad remains into the deepest hole in Limbo! The rest may die in peace, but Sparky does not deserve mercy!
Screw It, The forums are dead so I'm writing another part to this
Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 4
Javier Mendoza
Jav… moreier: Do you think they're okay?
Jordan: I don't know.
Javier: How's the ojo?
Jordan: ...
Javier: How's the eye?
Jordan: Don't know but the docs took care of it, I'm just gonna kill Sparker.
Javier: Ever think the Limbo would be worse? The Tomb, The Gallows, The Black Death, It has a shit load of names but no one has ever gotten out and he would spend the rest of his life suffering, ever think about that? Now I want this guy as bad as you but after thinking it out some....I want to break every bone in his body and then drop whatever is left of his carcass to the Tomb....Just whatever you do, Don't be el Stupido....
Jordan: Good Point, Thinks that's the smartest thing you've ever said...
Javier: Oy!
Agent 123
Trying to get there before Jordan does so he doesn't do anything Stup… [view original content]
Helicopter
Kill Jacob
Holy fuckity fuck! So I was right about the surprise option! And that fucked up choice... Somebody has to break … moreevery bone in that terror clowns body and throw his sad remains into the deepest hole in Limbo! The rest may die in peace, but Sparky does not deserve mercy!
Here's some questions
Who's your favorite and least favorite "protagonist" so far?
Who's your favorite and least favorite "villain" so far?
What do you think Sparker's "surprise" is?
Which Salt123 made Fan Fic so far is your favorite?
Screw It, The forums are dead so I'm writing another part to this
Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 4
Javier Mendoza
Jav… moreier: Do you think they're okay?
Jordan: I don't know.
Javier: How's the ojo?
Jordan: ...
Javier: How's the eye?
Jordan: Don't know but the docs took care of it, I'm just gonna kill Sparker.
Javier: Ever think the Limbo would be worse? The Tomb, The Gallows, The Black Death, It has a shit load of names but no one has ever gotten out and he would spend the rest of his life suffering, ever think about that? Now I want this guy as bad as you but after thinking it out some....I want to break every bone in his body and then drop whatever is left of his carcass to the Tomb....Just whatever you do, Don't be el Stupido....
Jordan: Good Point, Thinks that's the smartest thing you've ever said...
Javier: Oy!
Agent 123
Trying to get there before Jordan does so he doesn't do anything Stup… [view original content]
I know what I said about how I was releasing the chapters but so I can finish Dark Angels a chapter will be coming out everyday now with a chapter from either Shadow of November or Forum Users: Jurassic Park.
Agent 123: Well I get to pilot, I don't trust either of you two....
Constance: No body trusts any body.....
Anthanasius: And I thought Jordan could be a dick at times.....
Constance: Whatever, Let's just get to the shooting The Three Board the Plane...
Vicente Carmine
Zips Fly
Vicente: Ah, Thanks Rebecca, That was nice....
Rebecca: No Problem, it was fun for me too
Voice: Good to know that you guys are happy
Vicente: Diana Wilshire, Can't you ever mind your own business?
Diana: Not if it involves watching you too...........You looked like Monkeys fighting over shit
Rebecca: That doesnt-
Diana: Can it Becs
Vicente: You're paid to kill not to be a commentator Diana.
Diana: Fine, Fine i'll go out and wait for those guys pissed at Sparker to come.....
Warren Roldan
I was outside with my creations, They're beautiful despite the first one being a shitbird......
Warren: Dear Alex, You ready?
Alex: Eh, I guess, Glad it's not Short Notice Looks at Zack
Zack: Just shut up.
PeGaSuTy 89240: Ready to terminate all specimens
Warren: Good to know shitbird but you should have been destroyed when you were made, You're just here so I can get a few extra bucks from Vicente.
OKMHG810: I am a superior model, capable of killing far more targets than the defective model as previously stated by creator Warren Roldan.
Zack: They're here!
Jordan Wilkerson
We're gonna fucking end these bastards
Jordan: Here we go!
Javier: Shit!
John: What's going on up there!
Javier: Ellos es Largo Tankes!!!
Melanie: English motherfucker!
Jordan: They got some bigass tanks firing at us!
Audrey: Well shoot back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Elsa
I've been muffled so I couldn't talk............. And they were either gonna RAPE me or fucking KILL Jacob.....That bastard Rick is choosing....
Rick: Tough, The chick is hot but I really fucking hate that tech guy, So kill him.
Sparker: Option #2 it is!!! Group of Henchmen walk in Hope the guys standing here make it more dramatic and they can clean up the mess........... Good Bye Jacob!!!!!!!!! Points Gun
A Henchman jumps out uses an M-4 and kills the other Henchmen
Sparker: Who are you sir!? Nice to meet you!!
Henchman takes off mask
Henchman: I'm not a man, I'm a woman
Anslem: Who the hell are you?
Henchman: Who the hell are you Skrub?
Jacob: Lynne!? What the fuck are you doing here
Lynne: Saving you asses, Heard about it from some Agency Spook.
Sparker: Oh yeah,I remember you when that kid Hopeless was killed......
Rick: Alex!!!!!!!!!! Zack!!!!!!!!!! Rick falls to the ground
Lynne: You're next clown....
Sparker: Bring it biatch........ You can either walk away or you can have your friends back but you trade yourself in......
Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 5
Agent 123
Agent 123: Let's take the Helicopter.
Constance: Helicopter it is.
Antha… morenasius: I call one of the 50. Cals
Agent 123: Well I get to pilot, I don't trust either of you two....
Constance: No body trusts any body.....
Anthanasius: And I thought Jordan could be a dick at times.....
Constance: Whatever, Let's just get to the shooting The Three Board the Plane...
Vicente Carmine
Zips Fly
Vicente: Ah, Thanks Rebecca, That was nice....
Rebecca: No Problem, it was fun for me too
Voice: Good to know that you guys are happy
Vicente: Diana Wilshire, Can't you ever mind your own business?
Diana: Not if it involves watching you too...........You looked like Monkeys fighting over shit
Rebecca: That doesnt-
Diana: Can it Becs
Vicente: You're paid to kill not to be a commentator Diana.
Diana: Fine, Fine i'll go out and wait for those guys pissed at… [view original content]
Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 5
Agent 123
Agent 123: Let's take the Helicopter.
Constance: Helicopter it is.
Antha… morenasius: I call one of the 50. Cals
Agent 123: Well I get to pilot, I don't trust either of you two....
Constance: No body trusts any body.....
Anthanasius: And I thought Jordan could be a dick at times.....
Constance: Whatever, Let's just get to the shooting The Three Board the Plane...
Vicente Carmine
Zips Fly
Vicente: Ah, Thanks Rebecca, That was nice....
Rebecca: No Problem, it was fun for me too
Voice: Good to know that you guys are happy
Vicente: Diana Wilshire, Can't you ever mind your own business?
Diana: Not if it involves watching you too...........You looked like Monkeys fighting over shit
Rebecca: That doesnt-
Diana: Can it Becs
Vicente: You're paid to kill not to be a commentator Diana.
Diana: Fine, Fine i'll go out and wait for those guys pissed at… [view original content]
Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 5
Agent 123
Agent 123: Let's take the Helicopter.
Constance: Helicopter it is.
Antha… morenasius: I call one of the 50. Cals
Agent 123: Well I get to pilot, I don't trust either of you two....
Constance: No body trusts any body.....
Anthanasius: And I thought Jordan could be a dick at times.....
Constance: Whatever, Let's just get to the shooting The Three Board the Plane...
Vicente Carmine
Zips Fly
Vicente: Ah, Thanks Rebecca, That was nice....
Rebecca: No Problem, it was fun for me too
Voice: Good to know that you guys are happy
Vicente: Diana Wilshire, Can't you ever mind your own business?
Diana: Not if it involves watching you too...........You looked like Monkeys fighting over shit
Rebecca: That doesnt-
Diana: Can it Becs
Vicente: You're paid to kill not to be a commentator Diana.
Diana: Fine, Fine i'll go out and wait for those guys pissed at… [view original content]
Honestly, I like torturing the fans, I thought I was doing that with the last choice but you guys didn't seem to care so much..... And don't worry the old one will be back after Christmas
F****ck Yeah time to party
Trade yourself in
Btw: Do you like jacob or just torturing your fans? That guy has more lives than a cat.
Also cool profile pic tho i miss the old one a bit
Lynne just had this badass rescue moment, I think it would be a bit weak if she just walks away after shooting Rick and the random henchman.
Amazing chapter! Good to see Lynne back. In Part 1 she actually was my favourite, but afterwards Elsa usurped this position. I'm very excited for that final battle!
Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 5
Agent 123
Agent 123: Let's take the Helicopter.
Constance: Helicopter it is.
Antha… morenasius: I call one of the 50. Cals
Agent 123: Well I get to pilot, I don't trust either of you two....
Constance: No body trusts any body.....
Anthanasius: And I thought Jordan could be a dick at times.....
Constance: Whatever, Let's just get to the shooting The Three Board the Plane...
Vicente Carmine
Zips Fly
Vicente: Ah, Thanks Rebecca, That was nice....
Rebecca: No Problem, it was fun for me too
Voice: Good to know that you guys are happy
Vicente: Diana Wilshire, Can't you ever mind your own business?
Diana: Not if it involves watching you too...........You looked like Monkeys fighting over shit
Rebecca: That doesnt-
Diana: Can it Becs
Vicente: You're paid to kill not to be a commentator Diana.
Diana: Fine, Fine i'll go out and wait for those guys pissed at… [view original content]
Yeah, From the start I knew I wanted her to be in the beginning of the story but then come back somehow at the end, With my Fan Fics, I have a general outline of the plot but it has a lot of blanks, but when you guys submit your characters it helps me fill in those blanks and come up with choices and different outcomes
Trade yourself in
Lynne just had this badass rescue moment, I think it would be a bit weak if she just walks away after shooting Rick and… more the random henchman.
Amazing chapter! Good to see Lynne back. In Part 1 she actually was my favourite, but afterwards Elsa usurped this position. I'm very excited for that final battle!
I did ( do you honestly think i dont check your fics afther they message me about activity in them)
And that still doesent mean he'l live....... I really wish it did but it dosen't
If you guys chose to actually contact 123 he would have gotten better help faster, And he would have lived, I don't know how many times I have to say this..... CHOICES MATTER!!
If you guys chose to actually contact 123 he would have gotten better help faster, And he would have lived, I don't know how many times I have to say this..... CHOICES MATTER!!
Yeah he is dead....Because of you guys.... And Hopeless, Jack, Gary, and Rick are all dead and I have Pines and Hope (Which I can kill off) Don't mess with a Saltlick...
Yeah he is dead....Because of you guys.... And Hopeless, Jack, Gary, and Rick are all dead and I have Pines and Hope (Which I can kill off) Don't mess with a Saltlick...
Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 5
Agent 123
Agent 123: Let's take the Helicopter.
Constance: Helicopter it is.
Antha… morenasius: I call one of the 50. Cals
Agent 123: Well I get to pilot, I don't trust either of you two....
Constance: No body trusts any body.....
Anthanasius: And I thought Jordan could be a dick at times.....
Constance: Whatever, Let's just get to the shooting The Three Board the Plane...
Vicente Carmine
Zips Fly
Vicente: Ah, Thanks Rebecca, That was nice....
Rebecca: No Problem, it was fun for me too
Voice: Good to know that you guys are happy
Vicente: Diana Wilshire, Can't you ever mind your own business?
Diana: Not if it involves watching you too...........You looked like Monkeys fighting over shit
Rebecca: That doesnt-
Diana: Can it Becs
Vicente: You're paid to kill not to be a commentator Diana.
Diana: Fine, Fine i'll go out and wait for those guys pissed at… [view original content]
Comments
**Helicopter ** **Kill Jacob ** Fuc , FUCK
Awesome Chapter!!!
Thanks, I was gonna do this tomorrow but I was bored so ANOTHER CHAPTER OUT! Yeah!
Helicopter
Kill Jacob
And for the first choice?
Oops, I'll fix that...
JP and TSON?
Oh Yeah, I haven't told you guys yet, I'm doing the chapters released by days so today is for Dark Angels, tomorrow is TSON and then JP.
YAY :P
So far this choice seems decided unless the other vote for the other option.... What did you think of it?
About killing Jacob? I don´t want Elsa to be raped. About Helicopter? Helicopters are cool :P
Helicopter
Kill Jacob
Holy fuckity fuck! So I was right about the surprise option! And that fucked up choice... Somebody has to break every bone in that terror clowns body and throw his sad remains into the deepest hole in Limbo! The rest may die in peace, but Sparky does not deserve mercy!
Holy Shit ,All the votes are the same so far, Seems like you gut won't let Elsa go
Too bad you guys didn't choose the Surprise Option....
Hopeless
Favorite: Elsa, least favorite: uh... Jacob
2: Favorite is Sparker and least Favorite is Gary
3: IDK
4: Dark Angels
Helicoptor Kill Jacob
Cool chapter! I like the machete backstory. And yes, that was your most messed up choice yet
Thanks
I know what I said about how I was releasing the chapters but so I can finish Dark Angels a chapter will be coming out everyday now with a chapter from either Shadow of November or Forum Users: Jurassic Park.
Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 5
Agent 123
Agent 123: Let's take the Helicopter.
Constance: Helicopter it is.
Anthanasius: I call one of the 50. Cals
Agent 123: Well I get to pilot, I don't trust either of you two....
Constance: No body trusts any body.....
Anthanasius: And I thought Jordan could be a dick at times.....
Constance: Whatever, Let's just get to the shooting The Three Board the Plane...
Vicente Carmine
Zips Fly
Vicente: Ah, Thanks Rebecca, That was nice....
Rebecca: No Problem, it was fun for me too
Voice: Good to know that you guys are happy
Vicente: Diana Wilshire, Can't you ever mind your own business?
Diana: Not if it involves watching you too...........You looked like Monkeys fighting over shit
Rebecca: That doesnt-
Diana: Can it Becs
Vicente: You're paid to kill not to be a commentator Diana.
Diana: Fine, Fine i'll go out and wait for those guys pissed at Sparker to come.....
Warren Roldan
I was outside with my creations, They're beautiful despite the first one being a shitbird......
Warren: Dear Alex, You ready?
Alex: Eh, I guess, Glad it's not Short Notice Looks at Zack
Zack: Just shut up.
PeGaSuTy 89240: Ready to terminate all specimens
Warren: Good to know shitbird but you should have been destroyed when you were made, You're just here so I can get a few extra bucks from Vicente.
OKMHG810: I am a superior model, capable of killing far more targets than the defective model as previously stated by creator Warren Roldan.
Zack: They're here!
Jordan Wilkerson
We're gonna fucking end these bastards
Jordan: Here we go!
Javier: Shit!
John: What's going on up there!
Javier: Ellos es Largo Tankes!!!
Melanie: English motherfucker!
Jordan: They got some bigass tanks firing at us!
Audrey: Well shoot back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Elsa
I've been muffled so I couldn't talk............. And they were either gonna RAPE me or fucking KILL Jacob.....That bastard Rick is choosing....
Rick: Tough, The chick is hot but I really fucking hate that tech guy, So kill him.
Sparker: Option #2 it is!!! Group of Henchmen walk in Hope the guys standing here make it more dramatic and they can clean up the mess........... Good Bye Jacob!!!!!!!!! Points Gun
A Henchman jumps out uses an M-4 and kills the other Henchmen
Sparker: Who are you sir!? Nice to meet you!!
Henchman takes off mask
Henchman: I'm not a man, I'm a woman
Anslem: Who the hell are you?
Henchman: Who the hell are you Skrub?
Jacob: Lynne!? What the fuck are you doing here
Lynne: Saving you asses, Heard about it from some Agency Spook.
Sparker: Oh yeah,I remember you when that kid Hopeless was killed......
Rick: Alex!!!!!!!!!! Zack!!!!!!!!!! Rick falls to the ground
Lynne: You're next clown....
Sparker: Bring it biatch........ You can either walk away or you can have your friends back but you trade yourself in......
Lynne will walk away
END OF PART 4
@SupernovaeHollay SHE HAS RETURNED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tell me what you guys think!
R.I.P Rick
Walk away
So what did you think? (THAT WAS PAYBACK FOR TRENT!!!)
F****ck Yeah time to party
Trade yourself in
Btw: Do you like jacob or just torturing your fans? That guy has more lives than a cat.
Also cool profile pic tho i miss the old one a bit
WALK AWAY Awesome Chapter!!!!!!!
Honestly, I like torturing the fans, I thought I was doing that with the last choice but you guys didn't seem to care so much..... And don't worry the old one will be back after Christmas
:P
Lynne is back
You know even afther all hes done i STILL want Sparker to live and be taken to Limbo
Read the latest Shadow of November chapter
There's a reference about him.
What has been your favorite moment so far?
Trade yourself in
Lynne just had this badass rescue moment, I think it would be a bit weak if she just walks away after shooting Rick and the random henchman.
Amazing chapter! Good to see Lynne back. In Part 1 she actually was my favourite, but afterwards Elsa usurped this position. I'm very excited for that final battle!
I did ( do you honestly think i dont check your fics afther they message me about activity in them)
And that still doesent mean he'l live....... I really wish it did but it dosen't
Yeah, From the start I knew I wanted her to be in the beginning of the story but then come back somehow at the end, With my Fan Fics, I have a general outline of the plot but it has a lot of blanks, but when you guys submit your characters it helps me fill in those blanks and come up with choices and different outcomes
When my character didn't die...Wait...
I'm just joking, probably when Hopeless died, i found it pretty sad that he died in the hospital. XD
(Damn my tricks to calm you didn't work) True...... So True........ I doubt Jordan will be "Forgiving"
If you guys chose to actually contact 123 he would have gotten better help faster, And he would have lived, I don't know how many times I have to say this..... CHOICES MATTER!!
Well, he's dead now! Oh and um...Trent died...Fear me. >:P
Yeah he is dead....Because of you guys.... And Hopeless, Jack, Gary, and Rick are all dead and I have Pines and Hope (Which I can kill off) Don't mess with a Saltlick...
;P
Walk away Good Chapter!
I can't decide :P
Dark Angels Award Nominees (Please Vote so I can get an idea of where everyone stands)
Favorite Hero
Jordan Wilkerson
Lynne Bowen
Elsa Houten
Javier Mendoza
Other (Specify)
Favorite Villain
Sparker
Vicente Carmine
Alex Mason
Zack
Other (Please Specify)
Most Shocking Moment
Hopeless Death
Arin Death
Lynne's Return
The "Rape or Kill" choice
Other (Please Specify)
Best Part
Part 1-The Mission (Sparker introduced, Hopeless Shot)
Part 2- The Hunt (Hopeless Confirmed Dead, Jack Killed)
Part 3- Out for Blood (Arin Killed, Sparker Escapes, New Team)
Part 4- All Angels Fall (Some team members as hostages, Lynne Return)