Dark Angels Award Nominees (Please Vote so I can get an idea of where everyone stands)
Favorite Hero
Jordan Wilkerson
Lynne Bowen
… more Elsa Houten
Javier Mendoza
Other (Specify)
Favorite Villain
Sparker
Vicente Carmine
Alex Mason
Zack
Other (Please Specify)
Most Shocking Moment
Hopeless Death
Arin Death
Lynne's Return
The "Rape or Kill" choice
Other (Please Specify)
Best Part
Part 1-The Mission (Sparker introduced, Hopeless Shot)
Part 2- The Hunt (Hopeless Confirmed Dead, Jack Killed)
Part 3- Out for Blood (Arin Killed, Sparker Escapes, New Team)
Part 4- All Angels Fall (Some team members as hostages, Lynne Return)
Dark Angels Award Nominees (Please Vote so I can get an idea of where everyone stands)
Favorite Hero
Jordan Wilkerson
Lynne Bowen
… more Elsa Houten
Javier Mendoza
Other (Specify)
Favorite Villain
Sparker
Vicente Carmine
Alex Mason
Zack
Other (Please Specify)
Most Shocking Moment
Hopeless Death
Arin Death
Lynne's Return
The "Rape or Kill" choice
Other (Please Specify)
Best Part
Part 1-The Mission (Sparker introduced, Hopeless Shot)
Part 2- The Hunt (Hopeless Confirmed Dead, Jack Killed)
Part 3- Out for Blood (Arin Killed, Sparker Escapes, New Team)
Part 4- All Angels Fall (Some team members as hostages, Lynne Return)
Hard to say. I liked all of it, but I think my favourite moment would be somewhere in Part 3. Thinking about it, it has to be either the recruiting sequence at the beginning, or the battle against Vicente and Rick.
Dark Angels Award Nominees (Please Vote so I can get an idea of where everyone stands)
Favorite Hero
Jordan Wilkerson
Lynne Bowen
… more Elsa Houten
Javier Mendoza
Other (Specify)
Favorite Villain
Sparker
Vicente Carmine
Alex Mason
Zack
Other (Please Specify)
Most Shocking Moment
Hopeless Death
Arin Death
Lynne's Return
The "Rape or Kill" choice
Other (Please Specify)
Best Part
Part 1-The Mission (Sparker introduced, Hopeless Shot)
Part 2- The Hunt (Hopeless Confirmed Dead, Jack Killed)
Part 3- Out for Blood (Arin Killed, Sparker Escapes, New Team)
Part 4- All Angels Fall (Some team members as hostages, Lynne Return)
Dark Angels Award Nominees (Please Vote so I can get an idea of where everyone stands)
Favorite Hero
Jordan Wilkerson
Lynne Bowen
… more Elsa Houten
Javier Mendoza
Other (Specify)
Favorite Villain
Sparker
Vicente Carmine
Alex Mason
Zack
Other (Please Specify)
Most Shocking Moment
Hopeless Death
Arin Death
Lynne's Return
The "Rape or Kill" choice
Other (Please Specify)
Best Part
Part 1-The Mission (Sparker introduced, Hopeless Shot)
Part 2- The Hunt (Hopeless Confirmed Dead, Jack Killed)
Part 3- Out for Blood (Arin Killed, Sparker Escapes, New Team)
Part 4- All Angels Fall (Some team members as hostages, Lynne Return)
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Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 5
Agent 123
Agent 123: Let's take the Helicopter.
Constance: Helicopter it is.
Antha… morenasius: I call one of the 50. Cals
Agent 123: Well I get to pilot, I don't trust either of you two....
Constance: No body trusts any body.....
Anthanasius: And I thought Jordan could be a dick at times.....
Constance: Whatever, Let's just get to the shooting The Three Board the Plane...
Vicente Carmine
Zips Fly
Vicente: Ah, Thanks Rebecca, That was nice....
Rebecca: No Problem, it was fun for me too
Voice: Good to know that you guys are happy
Vicente: Diana Wilshire, Can't you ever mind your own business?
Diana: Not if it involves watching you too...........You looked like Monkeys fighting over shit
Rebecca: That doesnt-
Diana: Can it Becs
Vicente: You're paid to kill not to be a commentator Diana.
Diana: Fine, Fine i'll go out and wait for those guys pissed at… [view original content]
Dark Angels Award Nominees (Please Vote so I can get an idea of where everyone stands)
Favorite Hero
Jordan Wilkerson
Lynne Bowen
… more Elsa Houten
Javier Mendoza
Other (Specify)
Favorite Villain
Sparker
Vicente Carmine
Alex Mason
Zack
Other (Please Specify)
Most Shocking Moment
Hopeless Death
Arin Death
Lynne's Return
The "Rape or Kill" choice
Other (Please Specify)
Best Part
Part 1-The Mission (Sparker introduced, Hopeless Shot)
Part 2- The Hunt (Hopeless Confirmed Dead, Jack Killed)
Part 3- Out for Blood (Arin Killed, Sparker Escapes, New Team)
Part 4- All Angels Fall (Some team members as hostages, Lynne Return)
IP? Do you mean JP? After I finish JP and SON I'm thinking of starting 2 new ones, But I'm wondering what you guys think, I want to give you guys something that you're interested in, If you want another Dark Angels or SON, or JP, I'll consider it, but if you want something else, I'm okay with that too, One will definitely be a new one and the other could be a new one or sequel.
IP? Do you mean JP? After I finish JP and SON I'm thinking of starting 2 new ones, But I'm wondering what you guys think, I want to give you… more guys something that you're interested in, If you want another Dark Angels or SON, or JP, I'll consider it, but if you want something else, I'm okay with that too, One will definitely be a new one and the other could be a new one or sequel.
Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 5
Agent 123
Agent 123: Let's take the Helicopter.
Constance: Helicopter it is.
Antha… morenasius: I call one of the 50. Cals
Agent 123: Well I get to pilot, I don't trust either of you two....
Constance: No body trusts any body.....
Anthanasius: And I thought Jordan could be a dick at times.....
Constance: Whatever, Let's just get to the shooting The Three Board the Plane...
Vicente Carmine
Zips Fly
Vicente: Ah, Thanks Rebecca, That was nice....
Rebecca: No Problem, it was fun for me too
Voice: Good to know that you guys are happy
Vicente: Diana Wilshire, Can't you ever mind your own business?
Diana: Not if it involves watching you too...........You looked like Monkeys fighting over shit
Rebecca: That doesnt-
Diana: Can it Becs
Vicente: You're paid to kill not to be a commentator Diana.
Diana: Fine, Fine i'll go out and wait for those guys pissed at… [view original content]
Trade herself in.
I can't imagine her turning her back on them,even if it means her ass is on the line.
Also, I have a feeling she will be able to give the bitches the slip.
Holy shit, I nearly died, and Lynne came out of no where and killed Rick!
Lynne: Fine, I'll walk away, I've never cared about them, I don't even know two of these guys
Jacob: What the fuck! You heartless bitch!
Lynne: I'm not sorry Jacob, If anything I should come over there and kick your balls
Ethan: I think he's had enough of Ball torture....
Sparker: WOOHA!!! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!! Dials Number Vicente spread the guards out, Deploy all of them! As much as I love seeing your "friends" in agony, I like you so DON'T YOU DARRRREEEEEE WALK AWAY FROM ME LYNNE!!!
Lynne: Okay, Fine Pulls out pistol
Sparker: Move and you're dead
Lynne: You sure about that? Fires Shot
Sparker: Ahhh Shiat!!!!!!!!!!!! You missed Biiiatchh,
Lynne: No I didn't.....
Sparker: ...
Elsa picks up a gun and aims at Sparker...
Sparker: Oh Shit..... Did I hurt you princess?
Elsa Removes Tape
Elsa: I'm not letting this go asshole Cocks Gun
Jordan Wilkerson
We're trying to take the Castle...
Jordan: Shit,
Lynne Voice: I'm in
Jordan: Who the hell is that!?
Lynne Voice: Relax big guy, it's me, Lynne
Javier: Lynne! The hell esta here!?!?
Lynne Voice: Long Story but we have your friend Sparker here
Jacob Voice: And I can't wait to do some shit to his balls.....
Elsa Voice Guys!!!!
Lynne Voice: Aw Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jordan: Lynne!? Elsa!? Anyone!?
Audrey: Land on the top of the castle!!!
Wilson: Let's go!
While the Helicopter is dodging Tank fire and bullets it goes through and lands on the Castle Roof
Jordan: Go! Go! Go! Take the place!
John: Showtime.....
Ethan Willows
Sparker grabbed Elsa's gun and started Running away, then Vicente's guys started over running the place......
Lynne: Aw Shit!!!!!
Ethan: What now!?
Jacob: Time to KICK ASS!
Lynne: I haven't seen you guys in a while but I think you've been on your computer too long Jacob.... I'll be back. Runs out Castle Window and swings back into the window of a lower level
Jacob: Oh Shit, What now?
Elsa: Jordan and the rest have probably landed on the roof, We're taking the place, With or without Lynne....
Lynne: YOU GUYS COMING!?
Ethan: I'll follow her.... Jumps out window
Anslem: Same here Also Jumps out window
Jacob: Uhhhhhh, Yeah me too! Jumps out window but hurts leg on the way into the second window below.... SHIT!!!
Elsa: Dammit Jacob...... Runs off
PeGaSuTy 89240
Enemies Approaching....... can't compute... Enemies all around
Warren: What the hell are you doing you piece of shit!! Start shooting at that copter!!!
PeGaSuTy 89240: Enemy.... must terminate....
Warren: Aw Fuck, Ducks for cover
OKMHG810: Enemy fire! Punches PeGaSuTy
PeGaSuTy: I hate you all...... Starts firing Machine Gun
Vicente Carmine
Vicente: And the shooting begins.............
Rebecca: Ah, Wonderful isn't it?
Vicente: Means more money for us....
Rebecca: Or for me......Pulls out Revolver from Briefcase
Vicente: What are you doing?
Rebecca: Mr. Carmine, I regret to say so but in the words of the great American Donald Trump, "You're Fired" Pulls Trigger
Rebecca: The business is mine..... Phone Rings
Rebecca: Picks Up Yes Sparker?
Sparker: Plan Underway Becs?
Rebecca: As Planned.... Shoots Vicente's dead body 3 times
Wilson Smith
We got off the copter and started taking the Castle.....
Jordan: John you stay here and take out these guys! Wilson! Go down to the left and search the lower floors! Javier! Go to the right and search the lower floors! Melanie, You stay with John!
I was gong down Floor by Floor, the I felt something hit me in the leg.....
Zack: Surprise Fucker!
He had a knife and stabbed me in the leg
Wilson: Shit!!!
Zack: Ha Ha!
Wilson: It's gonna be this way? Battle of the midgets.... Except I'm normal for my size..... We're both the small guys of our teams.....
Zack: I'm not small..............
Wilson: You're not, Your'e just a midget like I said! Ha Ha!
Zack: Charges with Knife AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Javier Mendoza
We got out of the plane and started taking the castle, Vicentes guys are all over, We're doing our best though...
Alex Mason: Hey cupcake!
Javier: Hey Douchebag!! Aims Double Pistols at Alex
Alex Mason: I'm out You fucking Pussy, Want to kill me like a man!?
Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 1
The Final Fight Begins.....
Jacob
Holy shit, I nearly died, and Lynne came out of… more no where and killed Rick!
Lynne: Fine, I'll walk away, I've never cared about them, I don't even know two of these guys
Jacob: What the fuck! You heartless bitch!
Lynne: I'm not sorry Jacob, If anything I should come over there and kick your balls
Ethan: I think he's had enough of Ball torture....
Sparker: WOOHA!!! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!! Dials Number Vicente spread the guards out, Deploy all of them! As much as I love seeing your "friends" in agony, I like you so DON'T YOU DARRRREEEEEE WALK AWAY FROM ME LYNNE!!!
Lynne: Okay, Fine Pulls out pistol
Sparker: Move and you're dead
Lynne: You sure about that? Fires Shot
Sparker: Ahhh Shiat!!!!!!!!!!!! You missed Biiiatchh,
Lynne: No I didn't.....
Sparker: ...
Elsa picks up a gun and aims at Sparker...
Sparker: Oh Shit..… [view original content]
Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 1
The Final Fight Begins.....
Jacob
Holy shit, I nearly died, and Lynne came out of… more no where and killed Rick!
Lynne: Fine, I'll walk away, I've never cared about them, I don't even know two of these guys
Jacob: What the fuck! You heartless bitch!
Lynne: I'm not sorry Jacob, If anything I should come over there and kick your balls
Ethan: I think he's had enough of Ball torture....
Sparker: WOOHA!!! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!! Dials Number Vicente spread the guards out, Deploy all of them! As much as I love seeing your "friends" in agony, I like you so DON'T YOU DARRRREEEEEE WALK AWAY FROM ME LYNNE!!!
Lynne: Okay, Fine Pulls out pistol
Sparker: Move and you're dead
Lynne: You sure about that? Fires Shot
Sparker: Ahhh Shiat!!!!!!!!!!!! You missed Biiiatchh,
Lynne: No I didn't.....
Sparker: ...
Elsa picks up a gun and aims at Sparker...
Sparker: Oh Shit..… [view original content]
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DID ANYONE NOTICE THOUGH!? REBECCA!? VICENTE! SPARKER!? ANYONE!?!! I guess No One gives a Damn about Villains anymore xD
Rebecca and Sparker are cool. Vicente was boring XD
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DID ANYONE NOTICE THOUGH!? REBECCA!? VICENTE! SPARKER!? ANYONE!?!! I guess No One gives a Damn about Villains anymore xD
Rebecca and Sparker are cool. Vicente was boring XD
There's been plenty of non mentioned time where they could have made it, And I think you're the first one to actually seem to have read that part xD And I think that's 3 parts of my Fan Fics out today (2 DA and 1 SON)
Wow i was not expecting that with Vicente good twist Salt bro.......though when the heck did the disscuss this plan?
Youre on........
Really great job saltbro though ill miss Vicente
Really? I thought that the others just didn't care about Vicente ( To be fair he wasent as developed and we mostly only saw his hench people and the fact he was simmilar to most corporate bag guys made him less memorable than the rest)
But i liked him he was like the crooked man he was the pupetter and was indirectly involved in all the villains actions. He also did'nt seem to have any problem beating the heroes and in the end they really did'nt beat him they just got lucky. So yeah i liked him
There's been plenty of non mentioned time where they could have made it, And I think you're the first one to actually seem to have read that part xD And I think that's 3 parts of my Fan Fics out today (2 DA and 1 SON)
Yeah, He wasn't developed because he was more of that Crooked man guy behind the scenes, Hell if you think about it, The Crooked Man wasn't around that long, This happening to him was inevitable....
Really? I thought that the others just didn't care about Vicente ( To be fair he wasent as developed and we mostly only saw his hench people… more and the fact he was simmilar to most corporate bag guys made him less memorable than the rest)
But i liked him he was like the crooked man he was the pupetter and was indirectly involved in all the villains actions. He also did'nt seem to have any problem beating the heroes and in the end they really did'nt beat him they just got lucky. So yeah i liked him
Yeah, He wasn't developed because he was more of that Crooked man guy behind the scenes, Hell if you think about it, The Crooked Man wasn't around that long, This happening to him was inevitable....
Yeah, He wasn't developed because he was more of that Crooked man guy behind the scenes, Hell if you think about it, The Crooked Man wasn't around that long, This happening to him was inevitable....
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Hard to say. I liked all of it, but I think my favourite moment would be somewhere in Part 3. Thinking about it, it has to be either the recruiting sequence at the beginning, or the battle against Vicente and Rick.
1. Elsa Houten (Though I'm happy that Javier is nominated
)
2. Sparker. That guy is creepy, absolutely insane and, in a dark way, entertaining. Out of the nominated, Vicente would be my runner-up
3. Hopeless Death
4. Out for Blood
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Walk away
So what did you think?
Awesome chapter! I liked that Jacob survived and that Lynne came back. She was cool in Part 1!
I will not be making another Fan Fic till after I finish JP and SON but I'm just wondering.........http://www.strawpoll.me/3237212
Yes , but i will prefer another IP instead of a DA2. Well , except with you end it with a cliffhanger XD
IP? Do you mean JP? After I finish JP and SON I'm thinking of starting 2 new ones, But I'm wondering what you guys think, I want to give you guys something that you're interested in, If you want another Dark Angels or SON, or JP, I'll consider it, but if you want something else, I'm okay with that too, One will definitely be a new one and the other could be a new one or sequel.
With IP i meant a new one
As I said I'm thinking about starting 2 new ones after SON and JP, One being new and the second either being new or a sequel.
What did you have in mind?
I have ideas but nothing set in stone, It's gonna be a while but I just want to know what you guys are interested in :P
Trade herself in.
I can't imagine her turning her back on them,even if it means her ass is on the line.
Also, I have a feeling she will be able to give the bitches the slip.
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Lynne is now a heartless bitch. :<
xD She came back at least and killed Rick
Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 1
The Final Fight Begins.....
Jacob
Holy shit, I nearly died, and Lynne came out of no where and killed Rick!
Lynne: Fine, I'll walk away, I've never cared about them, I don't even know two of these guys
Jacob: What the fuck! You heartless bitch!
Lynne: I'm not sorry Jacob, If anything I should come over there and kick your balls
Ethan: I think he's had enough of Ball torture....
Sparker: WOOHA!!! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!! Dials Number Vicente spread the guards out, Deploy all of them! As much as I love seeing your "friends" in agony, I like you so DON'T YOU DARRRREEEEEE WALK AWAY FROM ME LYNNE!!!
Lynne: Okay, Fine Pulls out pistol
Sparker: Move and you're dead
Lynne: You sure about that? Fires Shot
Sparker: Ahhh Shiat!!!!!!!!!!!! You missed Biiiatchh,
Lynne: No I didn't.....
Sparker: ...
Elsa picks up a gun and aims at Sparker...
Sparker: Oh Shit..... Did I hurt you princess?
Elsa Removes Tape
Elsa: I'm not letting this go asshole Cocks Gun
Jordan Wilkerson
We're trying to take the Castle...
Jordan: Shit,
Lynne Voice: I'm in
Jordan: Who the hell is that!?
Lynne Voice: Relax big guy, it's me, Lynne
Javier: Lynne! The hell esta here!?!?
Lynne Voice: Long Story but we have your friend Sparker here
Jacob Voice: And I can't wait to do some shit to his balls.....
Elsa Voice Guys!!!!
Lynne Voice: Aw Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jordan: Lynne!? Elsa!? Anyone!?
Audrey: Land on the top of the castle!!!
Wilson: Let's go!
While the Helicopter is dodging Tank fire and bullets it goes through and lands on the Castle Roof
Jordan: Go! Go! Go! Take the place!
John: Showtime.....
Ethan Willows
Sparker grabbed Elsa's gun and started Running away, then Vicente's guys started over running the place......
Lynne: Aw Shit!!!!!
Ethan: What now!?
Jacob: Time to KICK ASS!
Lynne: I haven't seen you guys in a while but I think you've been on your computer too long Jacob.... I'll be back. Runs out Castle Window and swings back into the window of a lower level
Jacob: Oh Shit, What now?
Elsa: Jordan and the rest have probably landed on the roof, We're taking the place, With or without Lynne....
Lynne: YOU GUYS COMING!?
Ethan: I'll follow her.... Jumps out window
Anslem: Same here Also Jumps out window
Jacob: Uhhhhhh, Yeah me too! Jumps out window but hurts leg on the way into the second window below.... SHIT!!!
Elsa: Dammit Jacob...... Runs off
PeGaSuTy 89240
Enemies Approaching....... can't compute... Enemies all around
Warren: What the hell are you doing you piece of shit!! Start shooting at that copter!!!
PeGaSuTy 89240: Enemy.... must terminate....
Warren: Aw Fuck, Ducks for cover
OKMHG810: Enemy fire! Punches PeGaSuTy
PeGaSuTy: I hate you all...... Starts firing Machine Gun
Vicente Carmine
Vicente: And the shooting begins.............
Rebecca: Ah, Wonderful isn't it?
Vicente: Means more money for us....
Rebecca: Or for me......Pulls out Revolver from Briefcase
Vicente: What are you doing?
Rebecca: Mr. Carmine, I regret to say so but in the words of the great American Donald Trump, "You're Fired" Pulls Trigger
Rebecca: The business is mine..... Phone Rings
Rebecca: Picks Up Yes Sparker?
Sparker: Plan Underway Becs?
Rebecca: As Planned.... Shoots Vicente's dead body 3 times
Wilson Smith
We got off the copter and started taking the Castle.....
Jordan: John you stay here and take out these guys! Wilson! Go down to the left and search the lower floors! Javier! Go to the right and search the lower floors! Melanie, You stay with John!
I was gong down Floor by Floor, the I felt something hit me in the leg.....
Zack: Surprise Fucker!
He had a knife and stabbed me in the leg
Wilson: Shit!!!
Zack: Ha Ha!
Wilson: It's gonna be this way? Battle of the midgets.... Except I'm normal for my size..... We're both the small guys of our teams.....
Zack: I'm not small..............
Wilson: You're not, Your'e just a midget like I said! Ha Ha!
Zack: Charges with Knife AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Javier Mendoza
We got out of the plane and started taking the castle, Vicentes guys are all over, We're doing our best though...
Alex Mason: Hey cupcake!
Javier: Hey Douchebag!! Aims Double Pistols at Alex
Alex Mason: I'm out You fucking Pussy, Want to kill me like a man!?
Javier: You're On..... OR Nah, Adios Bitch
Tell me what you guys think!
Nah, Adios Bitch - ('__')/
Lynne is acting like Ada Wong XD
What about Vicente?
What about her...
WHAT ABOUT VICENTE!? IS ANYONE NOTICING! XD
Nah, Adios Bitch
DON´T YOU DARE TO KILL WILSON.
Awesome Chapter!!!!!!
DID ANYONE NOTICE THOUGH!? REBECCA!? VICENTE! SPARKER!? ANYONE!?!! I guess No One gives a Damn about Villains anymore xD
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NOBODY CARES ABOUT VICENTE
True he was but anyone care about what Rebecca did then? Oh My God you guys must be high or something XD
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Rebecca and Sparker are cool. Vicente was boring XD
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My reaction was: finally!
Wow i was not expecting that with Vicente good twist Salt bro.......though when the heck did the disscuss this plan?
Youre on........
Really great job saltbro though ill miss Vicente
There's been plenty of non mentioned time where they could have made it, And I think you're the first one to actually seem to have read that part xD And I think that's 3 parts of my Fan Fics out today (2 DA and 1 SON)
Really? I thought that the others just didn't care about Vicente ( To be fair he wasent as developed and we mostly only saw his hench people and the fact he was simmilar to most corporate bag guys made him less memorable than the rest)
But i liked him he was like the crooked man he was the pupetter and was indirectly involved in all the villains actions. He also did'nt seem to have any problem beating the heroes and in the end they really did'nt beat him they just got lucky. So yeah i liked him
Yeah, He wasn't developed because he was more of that Crooked man guy behind the scenes, Hell if you think about it, The Crooked Man wasn't around that long, This happening to him was inevitable....
I think the wolf among us proved you wrong....
Or Dark Angels proved TWAU wrong Let's face it, Vicente wasn't that developed and was never intended to be the main villain
Same here BUT THAT'S NOT THE POINT XD
My crooked man is alive :P