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  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Mine too :)

    Btw whats the fad with the :P simbol..........wait OMG IT LOOKS LIKE A................omg

    supersagig posted: »

    My crooked man is alive :P

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Ehh still liked him

    Not as much as Sparker but still

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Or Dark Angels proved TWAU wrong Let's face it, Vicente wasn't that developed and was never intended to be the main villain

  • supersagigsupersagig

    My stomach is full of replies XD

    Same here BUT THAT'S NOT THE POINT XD

    Maybe

    supersagig posted: »

    My crooked man is alive :P

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    I think you guys are caring about this more than Hopeless and Arin dying xD

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Ehh still liked him Not as much as Sparker but still

  • LiquidChicagoTedLiquidChicagoTed

    Holy shit Rebecca! I knew that she was capable of that but still... no comfortable prison cell for poor Vicente :(

    And for Javier: Nah, Adios Bitch :D

    Great part, probably one of my favourites in the story.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 1 The Final Fight Begins..... Jacob Holy shit, I nearly died, and Lynne came out of

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Wait, You're talking about Lynne now? xD She was a major part in the Prologue and first part, then she left, lol

    supersagig posted: »

    I never knew that Lynne even existed XD

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Thank You! :D Her and Sparker got Vicente..... It's the Beginning of the End....

    LiquidChicagoTed posted: »

    Holy shit Rebecca! I knew that she was capable of that but still... no comfortable prison cell for poor Vicente And for Javier: Nah, Adios Bitch Great part, probably one of my favourites in the story.

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    To be honest i did'nt see much for hopeless in fact i predicted his/her death would be the first

    And arins death was AWESOME......ly sad yes thats what i meant....... awesomely sad

    Yeah im kinda sad Vicente isent joining the party at Limbo ....... But wat eves

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    I think you guys are caring about this more than Hopeless and Arin dying xD

  • supersagigsupersagig

    I never knew that Lynne even existed XD

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    I think you guys are caring about this more than Hopeless and Arin dying xD

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA
    edited December 2014

    Who replied that?

    supersagig posted: »

    My stomach is full of replies XD Same here BUT THAT'S NOT THE POINT XD Maybe

  • LiquidChicagoTedLiquidChicagoTed

    Agreeing with Lord_EEA. Vicente had it coming and it felt really karmic, but still I liked his role in the story.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    I think you guys are caring about this more than Hopeless and Arin dying xD

  • supersagigsupersagig

    Wait, You're talking about Lynne now? xD She was a major part in the Prologue and first part, then she left, lol

    XD. Arin death was amazing. Hopeless death was Fantastic :P

    supersagig posted: »

    I never knew that Lynne even existed XD

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Hopeless din't have to die.........You guys sealed his fate with that choice though...... And I feel like people have forgotten about Arin lol, And I never planned to send Vicente there, From the moment I saw him and Rebeccas character, I knew she was gonna kill him at some point....

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    To be honest i did'nt see much for hopeless in fact i predicted his/her death would be the first And arins death was AWESOME......ly sad

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Should have known

    supersagig posted: »

    @Saltlick123

  • supersagigsupersagig

    @Saltlick123

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Who replied that?

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Say Whaaaa XD and i meant the Crooked Man living was not the point.

    supersagig posted: »

    @Saltlick123

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Yeah a women doesent sleep with mobsters unless they want something

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Hopeless din't have to die.........You guys sealed his fate with that choice though...... And I feel like people have forgotten about Arin l

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Well you could say Vicente was more than a Mobster :)

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Yeah a women doesent sleep with mobsters unless they want something

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA
    edited December 2014

    Was he really ..... I dont think so and if he was the it was really never shown ............... at all

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Well you could say Vicente was more than a Mobster

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    What do you mean? xD In the first parts he was revealed to be more than a typical mobster :)

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Was he really ..... I dont think so and if he was the it was really never shown ............... at all

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Becouse he........ did what exactly that was outside mobster behavior?

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    What do you mean? xD In the first parts he was revealed to be more than a typical mobster

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Kind of, He was basically one of the worlds top arms dealers, In the end they're similar to mobsters :)

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Becouse he........ did what exactly that was outside mobster behavior?

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    yep

    btw why are you in such hurry to end Dark Angels?

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Kind of, He was basically one of the worlds top arms dealers, In the end they're similar to mobsters

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    I wouldn't call it in a "hurry" but idk actually, I guess maybe for the Holidays? Good point though....

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    yep btw why are you in such hurry to end Dark Angels?

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    well you posted 2 parts for the same fic and arent prolonging it so yeah.....

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    I wouldn't call it in a "hurry" but idk actually, I guess maybe for the Holidays? Good point though....

  • LiquidChicagoTedLiquidChicagoTed

    From the moment I wrote her, I knew she would play a part in Vics downfall. Still took me by surprise :D

    Well, Becs put her tust in the wrong psychotic clown-terrorist IMO. Twilight Sparker can't be trust!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Thank You! Her and Sparker got Vicente..... It's the Beginning of the End....

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Yeah...... I think

    1. It's the Holidays
    2. I'm bored so this is what's keepng me occupied
    3. I already know what's going to happen in my head now.... (hope you guys will like it)
    Lord_EAA posted: »

    well you posted 2 parts for the same fic and arent prolonging it so yeah.....

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Once I finish the story, I should do another Dark Angels Awards and I bet that would get some votes for "most shocking moment", We'll see what happens :)

    LiquidChicagoTed posted: »

    From the moment I wrote her, I knew she would play a part in Vics downfall. Still took me by surprise Well, Becs put her tust in the wrong psychotic clown-terrorist IMO. Twilight Sparker can't be trust!

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Btws i HAVE to add this in

    Vicente: Means more money for us....

    Sparker: THIS IS NOT ABOUT THE MONEY!!!!!!! its about sending a message.........

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    XD I thought about that but Sparker wasn't in that scene, I think Sparker said that earlier somewhere though :) .

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Btws i HAVE to add this in Vicente: Means more money for us.... Sparker: THIS IS NOT ABOUT THE MONEY!!!!!!! its about sending a message.........

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Still it HAD to be said :)

    btw if sparker lives do the "I think were destined...." line ( im not ordering you i just think it would be cool)

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    XD I thought about that but Sparker wasn't in that scene, I think Sparker said that earlier somewhere though .

  • SupernovaeHollaySupernovaeHollay

    You're on!

    Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next! BTW are you on the final part of the story?

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 1 The Final Fight Begins..... Jacob Holy shit, I nearly died, and Lynne came out of

  • ZachiscoolZachiscool

    You're on... Good chapter!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 1 The Final Fight Begins..... Jacob Holy shit, I nearly died, and Lynne came out of

  • janitorjanitor

    Nah, Adios Bitch

    Awesome twist! Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 1 The Final Fight Begins..... Jacob Holy shit, I nearly died, and Lynne came out of

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Yep, The beginning of the End....

    SupernovaeHollay posted: »

    You're on! Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next! BTW are you on the final part of the story?

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123
    edited December 2014

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 2

    Rebecca Saunders

    Rebecca: Good to see you Sparker....

    Sparker: Good to see you too babe Kisses HmmHmmmHmmm now let's do this....

    Rebecca: What about Alex and Zack?

    Sparker: Hopefully they can take out a few of the Skrubs but if it comes down to it, they're Expendable. We stick to the plan, Vicente's or more of our men are charging this place so the skrubs shouldn't last for long...

    Rebecca: Sweet

    Sparker: Not as sweet as you HaHa Oh He Ha Ha,and I thought my jokes were bad....

    Lynne Bowen

    I may not act like it a lot, But I care for these guys....

    Lynne: Ah! Punches Henchman then turns around and stabs another Hey Jordan

    Jordan: Hey Lynne, What are you doing here? Punches and Snaps henchman's Throat

    Lynne: Told you, it's a Long Story.... Shoots another Henchman in the head Who are the other guys? And is Arin here?

    Jordan: Arin's dead, Sparker killed him. That's why we're here.....

    Lynne: Sorry to hear that, Ah! Shoots a few Henchman that enter the room Told you I fight better Solo.....

    Jordan: Damn....

    Audrey: Sorry to break up the Romance, But can we get going Charges out Room

    Jordan and Lynne look at each other

    Lynne: Hell No....

    Jordan: That's what I was thinking....

    Ethan Willows

    Ethan: Let's go guys!

    Anslem: Fuck Yeah Jumps out of Corner and shoots incoming Henchman with Shotgun

    Ethan: Where's Jacob?

    Anslem: Tech Boy can take care of himself HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Starts Shooting Shotgun

    Agent 123

    Looks like I'm late to the Party

    Agent 123: Here we go guys! Tanks on bottom Shoots Missiles

    Constance: Could let us have some fun

    Agent 123: Fine, Fine, Goons entering the building get em Constance! Constance Starts Shooting Machine Gun

    Constance: EHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    Agent 123: Yeah!

    Anthanasius: Bye Guys!

    Agent 123: Rope's down

    Anthanasius: Thanks for the lift!

    Anthanasius slides down rope on to the roof

    Constance: Don't look at me, I'm having fun right here Starts Shooting Machine Gun

    Wilson Smith

    Wilson: Oh Shiat! You missed Shorty!

    Zack: No....No... HIYYAHAHAHAHAHHAHA Charges with Knife

    Wilson dodges Zack's charge once again

    Wilson: Let's even this up a bit,....... Pulls out Knife

    Jacob

    Aw Shit, I fell and hurt my Leg I think

    Jacob: Hey you! Help me up Ethan....

    Harry: I'm not Ethan...

    Jacob: Aw Shit.... Pulls out Tazer

    Harry: I'm a tech guy too, So I also have a Tazer! bring it Pussy

    Jacob: AHHHHHH

    Jacob and Harry charge at each other with their Tazers

    Javier Mendoza

    Javier: Nah, Adios Bitch....

    Alex Mason: Piece of Pussy, Sparker told me if you had any balls you would fight me like a man, Guess I will have to use this

    Javier: Comprende?

    Alex Mason shoots Javier

    Javier: Ay Ay Ay!

    Alex Mason: Kevlar saved your life, Good, Good, I'm gonna have fun with this.... Alex picks up Javier and throws him

    Sparker

    Sparker: Becs, go with Diana, I have some "business" to attend to, Get the briefcase... Pulls out Tommy Gun

    Jordan: SPARKER GET OUT HERE!!! NOW!

    Sparker: Hey Bra, Wanna Tussle! Now we can do this one or two ways, Considering that we both have weapons... But our people are busy killing each other, Wanna do a old style draw! Or a Brawl! Your Choice.....

    Fist-Fight Sparker OR Draw with Sparker

  • NoHopeLeftNoHopeLeft

    Draw with Sparker - We've already seen that Sparker can take a punch, lots of them.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 2 Rebecca Saunders Rebecca: Good to see you Sparker.... Sparker: Good to see you to

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Hmmmmm We'll see

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Draw with Sparker - We've already seen that Sparker can take a punch, lots of them.

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Aw thanks, I feel like it might not be as good as the last one though :/

    supersagig posted: »

    Draw with Sparker THE BEST CHAPTER!!!!!!

  • supersagigsupersagig

    Draw with Sparker

    THE BEST CHAPTER!!!!!!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 2 Rebecca Saunders Rebecca: Good to see you Sparker.... Sparker: Good to see you to

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