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  • supersagigsupersagig

    Help Wilson He needs more help

    Awesome Chapter!!!!!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 3 Agent 123 Constance: Tank coming up! I'll take care of it! Agent 123: Nope! I got

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123
    edited December 2014

    Deceased Characters: Hopeless, Arin Osco, Jack, Gary, Rick, Vicente Carmine, Rebecca Saunders

    http://www.strawpoll.me/3256297

  • supersagigsupersagig

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    Poor Rebecca..... But it wasn't that shocking...

    Yep , i knew she was going to get killed by now ;P

    supersagig posted: »

    Help Wilson He needs more help Awesome Chapter!!!!!

  • ZachiscoolZachiscool

    Help Wilson Awesome chapter!!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 3 Agent 123 Constance: Tank coming up! I'll take care of it! Agent 123: Nope! I got

  • LiquidChicagoTedLiquidChicagoTed

    Great chapter! I have to say, Rebecca had it definitely coming! That was a karmic and well deserved death.

    Help Wilson

    He is wounded and unarmed against the crazy midget, while Javier seems to be doing relatively fine.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 3 Agent 123 Constance: Tank coming up! I'll take care of it! Agent 123: Nope! I got

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Yeah, That's what she get's for double crossing Vicente and going with Sparker :P

    LiquidChicagoTed posted: »

    Great chapter! I have to say, Rebecca had it definitely coming! That was a karmic and well deserved death. Help Wilson He is wounded and unarmed against the crazy midget, while Javier seems to be doing relatively fine.

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Yeah :)

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    So warren was captured ........thats good

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    So warren was captured ........thats good

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Deceased Characters: Hopeless, Arin Osco, Jack, Gary, Rick, Vicente Carmine, Rebecca Saunders http://www.strawpoll.me/3256297

  • LiquidChicagoTedLiquidChicagoTed

    She definitely trusted the wrong psychotic clown-terrorist!

    Damn... I just realized I'm running out of characters real fast... Now I'm worried about Javier :(

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Yeah, That's what she get's for double crossing Vicente and going with Sparker :P

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Now you and @NoHopeLeft have something in common :)

    LiquidChicagoTed posted: »

    She definitely trusted the wrong psychotic clown-terrorist! Damn... I just realized I'm running out of characters real fast... Now I'm worried about Javier

  • LiquidChicagoTedLiquidChicagoTed

    Well, Javier is not dead yet... Right? Right? Shit NOW I'm worried D:

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Now you and @NoHopeLeft have something in common

  • janitorjanitor
    edited December 2014

    Help Javier

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 3 Agent 123 Constance: Tank coming up! I'll take care of it! Agent 123: Nope! I got

  • NoHopeLeftNoHopeLeft

    Half of these characters are my :'(

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Deceased Characters: Hopeless, Arin Osco, Jack, Gary, Rick, Vicente Carmine, Rebecca Saunders http://www.strawpoll.me/3256297

  • NoHopeLeftNoHopeLeft

    Help Javier

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 3 Agent 123 Constance: Tank coming up! I'll take care of it! Agent 123: Nope! I got

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    His plan's coming together :), Just thinking if I should wait for people to come back from traveling or dong their stuff for Christmas.

    Markd4547 posted: »

    XD Sparker is insane I LOVE THIS >:D just genius writing I can't wait for more Help Wilson

  • Markd4547Markd4547

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    XD Sparker is insane I LOVE THIS >:D just genius writing I can't wait for more :)

    Help Wilson

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 3 Agent 123 Constance: Tank coming up! I'll take care of it! Agent 123: Nope! I got

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Hey mark would you prefer Sparker died or was taken to Limbo?

    Markd4547 posted: »

    XD Sparker is insane I LOVE THIS >:D just genius writing I can't wait for more Help Wilson

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    I share in you sorrow friend.........

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Half of these characters are my

  • NoHopeLeftNoHopeLeft

    :'c

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    I share in you sorrow friend.........

  • LiquidChicagoTedLiquidChicagoTed
    edited December 2014

    Two of the three remaining dead characters are mine :( I know that feeling man...

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Half of these characters are my

  • Markd4547Markd4547

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    hmm great question I'd prefer him to die he killed so many people and created so much chaos I feel the readers deserve a conclusion to his tale and for him to met the same faith as his victims.

    But his death should match him personality insane, random and over the top end on a badass high XD

    Maybe even become a walker as a twist and kill a few more before being killed for good XD

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Hey mark would you prefer Sparker died or was taken to Limbo?

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Well i think its gonna be a choice soon so get ready to vote then

    Markd4547 posted: »

    hmm great question I'd prefer him to die he killed so many people and created so much chaos I feel the readers deserve a conclusion to his t

  • Saltlick123Saltlick123

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 4

    Anathuisus Redbron

    AnathuisusOver Ear Piece: Hey 123, Got a present for ya

    Agent 123 Voice: Copy. What is it?

    Anathuisus: Have that mad scientist you mentioned earlier, Warren Roldan? He's gonna be coming with us

    Agent 123: Copy. Tanks are down and meet us up on the roof.

    Anathuisus: Will do.

    Constance Voice: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    Anathuisus: What's Constance up to now?

    Agent 123: He's just shooting some shit.

    Jacob

    Jacob: You skrub

    Harry: YOU NEWB!!!!

    Jacob: You BIATCH!!! Tazes Harry

    Harry: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AHHHHH

    Jacob: FOR CANADIAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keeps Tazing Harry

    Melanie: Oh Kewl Jacob, You actually took down a guy..... After tazing yourself in the balls by accident

    Jacob: You Saw? Why didn't you help?

    Melanie: If it makes you feel better, I actually had faith in you for once.

    PeGaSuTy 89240

    PeGaSuTy: Warren is a bad guy and will DIE, Shoves Explosive Device inside OKMHG810 You are Terminated......

    Explosive Device destroys them both

    Wilson Smith

    Zack was on top of me, And I couldn't get him off....

    Zack: Die you pussy!!!!!!! Starts Shoving Knife towards Wilson

    Wilson: AHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    Zack: Almost......... AHHHH Starts cutting Wilson's face

    Wilson: DO IT YOU SMUG SON OF A BITCH!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    Machete pops out of Zack's chest

    John: Seems like you had a "little" challenge

    Wilson: Let's go.......

    Lynne Bowen

    Diana: You Fucking Cunt, Go fuck with your friend what's his name? Jordan? I'll be sure to shoot his balls first

    Lynne: You Damn Bitch, This is your last chance, Give up or die.....

    Diana: I'm gonna enjoy killing YOU

    Lynne: In your dreams Punches Diana

    Diana: That's it? You hit like a Barbie Grabs Lynne by the Hair and knees her in the face This is how Pros fight Aims Pistol

    Lynne: Grabs Pistol and twists Diana's arm and puts her in an armbar then grabs her gun aims it at Diana's (You Know) And shoots 7 times.... That's how pros fight Spits on Diana's body

    Javier Mendoza

    Javier: C'mon Amigo! Hit me!

    Alex: Sure you chickenfuck Grabs Javier and throws him into the wall

    Javier: Yo Malo...... Alex Punches Javier across the room

    Alex: Get up shitbird..... Punches Javier again Aw, You're bleeding, Pain is weakness leaving the body you cunt Punches Javier again What? You got something to say!?

    Javier: Si..... Alex punches Javier again Ugh.

    Alex: WHAT IS IT YOU SHEEP FUCKER!? Starts Choking Javier

    Javier: Being Chocked by Alex Ughg, Ah, Ehhhhhh, I have my GUNZ Starts shooting Alex in the chest with his matching pistols

    Alex: You...... shit bah...... That's all ya got? Alex's body falls over

    Javier: I didn't shoot him in the head.....

    Audrey: You done yet chica boy?

    Javier: Oh, I was thinking about your lovely face THE WHOLE TIME!!!!! HaHa!

    Audrey: Let's just get to the chopper.

    Javier: Si Chica!!!!!!

    Jordan Wilkerson

    Sparker: Get up you shit, kicks Jordan

    Jordan: I'm gonna fucking kill you.....

    Sparker: You'll try...... But we don't need these do we? Throws Pistol

    Jordan: No.... We don't Launches up and punches Sparker

    Sparker: OH!!!! OH MY GOD!!!!!!! You finally grew a testicle! Too bad that kid Hopeless didn't.....

    Jordan: YOU SHITBIRD!!!!!!!!!! Punches Sparker

    Sparker: Oh Wow, That's it! Ha! Maybe it's because with all your strength, YOU HAVE NOTHING!!!!! Just like me..... You complete me.....

    Jordan: I complete your death Punches Sparker again

    Sparker: Oh Shit, I forgot.... I'm being too soft on you...... A boy gotta learn Headbutts Jordan

    Jordan: Fuck You Attempts to Punch Sparker

    Sparker: You missed, This is how you punch a guy Punches Jordan and pulls chain out pocket I said I wouldn't kill ya with a gun, Never said anything about this puppy Wraps Chain around Jordan's neck

    Jordan: AHHHHHHHGHGHGHGHH

    Sparker: I think it's time we finally wrap this shit up HAHA! Starts Choking Jordan This whole thing was fun while it lasted though MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAH Sparker falls over holding his shoulder

    Sparker: AHHHH, Fucking Bitch! How about you just LET US BE!!!

    Elsa: How about I let you go to the Tomb Shitbird Reloads Gun

    Jordan: unwraps the chain around his neck Ugh, Thanks Elsa......

    Elsa: No problem Jordan..... Gives him the gun Now let's send him to rot.....

    Sparker: No, No, No........ You know what Jordan? I think we're destined to do this forever....... I kill some of your people, you kill some of mine, and in the end we just end up repeating the whole damn thing HAHA! Eventually that cunt standing next to you will be on the ground fatally wounded cause she couldn't stay out of our business..... What do ya say? End this you pussy, Aim that little gun of yours at me, pull the trigger and end this..... Knowing you weren't man enough to finish me off without help from your Dairy Queen bitch right there....

    Elsa: He can be locked away.... It's what Hopeless would have wanted, It's what Arin would want, to see this bastard suffer for the rest of his days....

    Sparker: Sweetie, Didn't anyone tell you to mind your own business? FUCKING END THIS PUSSY!! HAHAHA!! END IT RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!

    Elsa: He wants to die.... Don't do what he wants, He's playing you......

    Sparker: YO BITCH SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!! Jordan.... We both know how this ends...... Fucking pull that trigger....... You wouldn't want to come off as a pussy to your friends

    Elsa: They want to lock him away too Jordan..... DON'T DO WHAT HE WANTS DAMMIT!!!!!!!

    Sparker: Bitch keep talking and karma is gonna bite you in the ass...... DAMMIT WILKERSON FUCKING DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Think you're the white knight? I've taken you already and turned you into the Dark Knight........ Now get this shit over with and end this.....

    Jordan: Kill Sparker OR Lock Sparker Away

    Tell me what you guys think! This is the choice I've thought of ever since Sparker was introduced..... This was fun making guys, Just one chapter left :)

  • NoHopeLeftNoHopeLeft

    Kill Sparker - It's time to end this.

    This is great! :D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 4 Anathuisus Redbron AnathuisusOver Ear Piece: Hey 123, Got a present for ya Agent

  • Markd4547Markd4547

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    May I ask you kind readers of this fanfic what did Sparker do beside kill a lot of people and destroy everything he touched NOTHING poor guy :'(

    Kill Sparker

    YOU cannot cage the beast either kill him or he will kill you SIMPLE HIT ME!!

    This is my favourite fanfic I ever read violence, bad language and it's hilarious this is perfection XD

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 4 Anathuisus Redbron AnathuisusOver Ear Piece: Hey 123, Got a present for ya Agent

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Lock sparker away

    I cant let you go man. I cant see another mark character die.....

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 4 Anathuisus Redbron AnathuisusOver Ear Piece: Hey 123, Got a present for ya Agent

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Hope dont do this to me bro. I cant stand to see Marks amazing characters die man. If he gets locked away maybe hell return.

    Hes already confirmed to cameo in Shadow of november if he lives..... Man cmon if you do me this i owe you a vote later pls vote Lock away.

    PLS :(

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Kill Sparker - It's time to end this. This is great!

  • LiquidChicagoTedLiquidChicagoTed

    Whew, that was a great part! You had me at the edge of my seat when Alex started to choke Javier. Glad he made it! By the way, did he got the kill for Alex, or did Audrey steal it from him? And I'm glad Wilson got the help, because the kid really had it worse.

    Kill Sparker

    This is by far the hardest choice in the whole story. At first I actually wrote an explanation why locking Sparker away would be the better decision. And I still think that this would be better for justice and vengeance. Elsa is right when she said that Sparker would suffer for the rest of his life. Javier said that a few chapters ago. But then I thought, what if Sparker escapes somehow? The man is dangerous. Far too dangerous. And there is still his claim to have a contact in the agency. If that is true, he could actually escape the Limbo. And thinking about all the people he is going to kill then.... Just killing him is the right thing to do, for all the innocent people he could kill. The man is too dangerous to live, even too dangerous to get punished in any other way.

    Still, I would have loved to see a Sparky cameo in Shadows of November. Think about what would happen if Sparker meets Rambo...

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 4 Anathuisus Redbron AnathuisusOver Ear Piece: Hey 123, Got a present for ya Agent

  • NoHopeLeftNoHopeLeft

    Even Mark voted to kill him, sorry, but I'm not going to change my vote. ;P

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Hope dont do this to me bro. I cant stand to see Marks amazing characters die man. If he gets locked away maybe hell return. Hes already

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    :(

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Even Mark voted to kill him, sorry, but I'm not going to change my vote. ;P

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA
    edited December 2014

    And yet you vote to kill him?

    LiquidChicagoTed posted: »

    Whew, that was a great part! You had me at the edge of my seat when Alex started to choke Javier. Glad he made it! By the way, did he got th

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Well guys im sad i really liked sparker and now most want to kill him...:(

    Well..whanevs....im gonaa watch some Game of thrones maybe that will cheer me up...........

  • LiquidChicagoTedLiquidChicagoTed

    I'm sorry. But that guy is too dangerous to live, even if that life would be in the most brutal prison on earth. If anyone has the chance to escape this hell, it is Peterson Hunt. No wait, I mean Sparker. If anyone has the chance to escape Limbo, it is Sparker.

    Still, I would have loved the cameo... Damn it, but I won't change my vote, because if he escapes to wreak havoc either in Shadows of November or a potential Dark Angels Season 2 and kills Elsa or Javier, then I could never forgive myself.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    And yet you vote to kill him?

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    :(............man this whole thing brings back REALLY bad memories of Forum of the dead ( long story)

    LiquidChicagoTed posted: »

    I'm sorry. But that guy is too dangerous to live, even if that life would be in the most brutal prison on earth. If anyone has the chance to

  • supersagigsupersagig
    edited December 2014

    Lock Sparker Away

    Awesome Chapter!!!!!!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 4 Anathuisus Redbron AnathuisusOver Ear Piece: Hey 123, Got a present for ya Agent

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA
    edited December 2014

    NO DONT DONT super were friends dont do this please

    supersagig posted: »

    Lock Sparker Away Awesome Chapter!!!!!!

  • supersagigsupersagig

    I think this decision is what is going to decided if a DA S2 exist , but i don´t want it so....

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    NO DONT DONT super were friends dont do this please

  • GoldenPaladinGoldenPaladin
    edited December 2014

    Lock Sparker Away

    Really guys, this just makes it more...Fun. :P

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 4 Anathuisus Redbron AnathuisusOver Ear Piece: Hey 123, Got a present for ya Agent

  • supersagigsupersagig

    killing comingsoon?

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    ............man this whole thing brings back REALLY bad memories of Forum of the dead ( long story)

  • Lord_EAALord_EAA

    Forget if it does or doesent

    Im asking you AS A FRIEND please vote lock him up. Hes my favorite guy and every single one of my favorite guys DIES especially those i make. I want one to actually LIVE for once please man im begging you PLEASE

    supersagig posted: »

    I think this decision is what is going to decided if a DA S2 exist , but i don´t want it so....

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