"Danny don't be such a dick! I trust him! In fact why don't we take a vote on it then. I vote team Mike." Says Alexander heroically. Melody ch… moreimes in, "I vote team Mike." Danny gives Melody a dirty look. "I vote on behalf of getting rid of him!" Announces Danny. "Gloria, it's up to you. Gloria stays quiet. She looks at Danny, then at Alexander. "I- I, um, sorry Danny, but i'm going to have to vote for Mike, he seems like a nice guy, and has done no harm." Danny feels disgusted and heads back to his room. Later that night... Gloria knocks on Mikes door. He answers awkwardly, with a blush. "Um, hi? What brings you here." Gloria smiles, and also begins to blush. "I just wanted to apolagize for Danny's behavior, he's just not good with guests you know, one other time we let someone in, it didn't end well... but i'm not going to get into that." Mike chuckles, and the two begin flirting for nearly 10 minutes before Gloria ends the conversation, "Well … [view original content]
"You motherfucker." Danny snarled. Mike, realizing what was going to happen, jumped up at Danny. Danny pulled the trigger on his gun. It hit Mike straight in the chest, sending him flying four feet into the wall. "Motherfucker." Danny spat. He opened the door and walked out the door. Outside, awaiting Danny, was Melody and Alexander. Both stared at Danny. "Alexander," Melody said, "go get your mom." "Okay," Alexander murmured. He ran to his mother's room.
Melody took Alexander's revolver out of her pocket and shot Danny in the arm. He dropped the rifle. "Fuck!" He shouted. Melody said,
[A. That's what you get, asshole!]
[B. Had to be done, Danny.]
[X. I'm sorry.]
[Y. ... ]
"I'm, sorry, I just... What have I done..." Alexander and Gloria come running over. "Alex, what's wrong- Danny! Danny are you okay?" Danny tries to fight through the pain and smile, but couldn't the pain was to unbearable. Gloria looks over at Melody. "Did you do this?!" A tear runs down Melody's face. "I-I didn't mean to. I had to because-" Gloria interrupts. "There is never a reason to shoot a man. Danny come on, we got get your arm fixed up." She picks Danny up and helps him walk. "Mom! Wait!" Gloria glances back. "He shot Mike." Gloria gasps and let go of Danny. Danny goes crashing to the cement ground. "Is he alright?!" Danny looks back in dis belief of what he has just heard. "Bitch, i'm the one who needs help over here!" Gloria turns around, completely disgusted by Danny's behavior. She, and everyone else ignores Danny. "Come on Mike is in here." The 3 walk into Mikes room and see the lifeless body of Mike. Gloria, runs over to his body. "No, no, no.... Why did he do this?!" She begins to cry as she kisses him one last time and closes his eyes. She rests her head on the now lifeless corpse, when it begins to reanimate. "Mom look out!" Gloria looks at his face. "AHHH!" She try's to get up but wasn't fast enough. It digs it's teeth straight into her arm. Alexander picks up Danny's rifle and shoots Mike in the face. Melody and Alexander are in disbelief. Melody exchanges a look with Alex. "I'm gonna go grab the ax, were gonna have to try to cut her arm off but we have to hurry." Alexander begins to cry, as he leaves the room. "Hey shit head, get over here my arm needs a fixing." Alexander looks at Danny, and yells. "THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT! Mom's going to die because of you!"... "Huh?" Alex calms down a bit. "Mike somehow came back, he wasn't even bit.... He bit mom." Danny looks down at the ground. "My god, it's- it's all my fault... What have I done-" He is interrupted by the screams of Gloria. "I think Melody's begun to cut her arm off...I have to go-" Danny interrupts. "Listen Alex, i'm sorry, i really am. I realized something, maybe you don't have to be bit to turn into those things." Alex just looks down, "I don't want to talk to you, okay?" Danny interrupts. He says,
CHOICE #12 {A.Mike tried to kill me.} {B. That bitch said he was going to kill your mother.} {C. I had to kill him.} {D. I was jealous, he and your mom were getting close, and I didn't like that, so I killed him.}
NOTE: A- Lie B-Lie even worse. C. Give your reason. D. Tell the truth
"Alexander," Danny said. "Mike tried to kill me. I didn't want to shoot him -"
"THAT'S A LOAD OF FUCKING BULLSHIT!" Alexander shouted. He punched Danny in the face. "You thought Mike was like Paul, didn't you? Mike could've been a good man. The only thing we know isthat my mom is bitten because of your bullshit!"
"I took a risk, Alexander. When you become a man, you'll know what I mean," Danny said sadly at Alexander and walked to his room. Alexander went to his room, crying and praying for his mother.
In the woods, three men, masked and armed with M-16's, observed the action at the Motel. "What do you think, Commander?" One asked. The Commander looked at One and said
[A. They're violent sons of bitches...]
[B. We've got ourselves a good catch.]
[X. Prepare for battle.]
[Y. ...]
"I'm, sorry, I just... What have I done..." Alexander and Gloria come running over. "Alex, what's wrong- Danny! Danny are you okay?" Danny tri… morees to fight through the pain and smile, but couldn't the pain was to unbearable. Gloria looks over at Melody. "Did you do this?!" A tear runs down Melody's face. "I-I didn't mean to. I had to because-" Gloria interrupts. "There is never a reason to shoot a man. Danny come on, we got get your arm fixed up." She picks Danny up and helps him walk. "Mom! Wait!" Gloria glances back. "He shot Mike." Gloria gasps and let go of Danny. Danny goes crashing to the cement ground. "Is he alright?!" Danny looks back in dis belief of what he has just heard. "Bitch, i'm the one who needs help over here!" Gloria turns around, completely disgusted by Danny's behavior. She, and everyone else ignores Danny. "Come on Mike is in here." The 3 walk into Mikes room and see the lifeless body of Mike. Gloria, runs over to his body. "… [view original content]
"They're violent sons of bitches, that for sure," The Commander said. "Can't tell if they got anything good. They got guns, but that ain't enough to justify going in guns blazing." He turned to the other two. "We wait. See if they got anything worth taking, and see if we can handle them."
(So... There's a choice now? I'm still not sure how this works exactly. Feel free to ignore this if you guys like.)
(Eh, I'll try I suppose.)
"They're violent sons of bitches, that for sure," The Commander said. "Can't tell if they got anything good. They… more got guns, but that ain't enough to justify going in guns blazing." He turned to the other two. "We wait. See if they got anything worth taking, and see if we can handle them."
(So... There's a choice now? I'm still not sure how this works exactly. Feel free to ignore this if you guys like.)
Again, the thing with the characters not feeling like my own. Since you introduced some new characters, figured I'd try.
I usually do a lot of stuff like this with my friends on our own site, even some Walking Dead based things. Though, usually we work on a system of everyone writes from the perspective of one or more characters, that way we have our own characters, and collaboratively write a story that way.
The two longest are both mine, Dead Zone(Horror Survival thing with zombies, similar to The Walking Dead, but a little different with the stories focus), 45 pages, and Gunpoint(Neo-Noir Sci-fi Crime Drama about spies, assassins, and corporate terrorism), which is 64 pages. I really enjoy doing this kind of stuff, it's just a different set-up than what I'm used to.
Long story short; sharing characters still feels weird, but I guess you can count me in.
The bandits wait the night, stalking the group with there every move.... Danny knocks at Alex's door. "Hey, Alex i'm really sorry for what happened last night. I was wondering if you wanted to help me milk the cow." Alexander stares. "Well, I guess, but not because I want to, I just haven't had milk in ages." Danny smiles. "Great."___________"Did you guys see that cow? Those two guys are going to milk it or something.".. "Yeah it's kind of a smart idea if you think about it."___________ Gloria, is just coming out of her sleep, when she glances down at her arm. She gaps. Melody looks over. "I'm sorry, I cut it. We had to." Gloria begins to cry. "I'm not the kind of woman who should be arm less.. I've always been a tomboy. Never really liked girly things, I was always that odd one out, the one who was in the mud getting dirty, at the shooting range, hunting. Now what can I do? The most I really can do is shoot a revolver, I'll- I'll never be the same." Melody opens her mouth and was about to speak, but couldn't find the words to do so. _________ "I'm going to go bring mom some milk, alright Danny?"... "mhm" Alex was about to knock on his moms door, when he glances in the window and sees her sobbing, he had never seen his mom cry before. He sets the milk outside the door and heads back to his room._______ The sun has now came down and everyone falls asleep easily._______ "They all asleep yet?"... "Yeah, all asleep now, let's go." The three bandits make there way to the motor inn and sneak right in. "Grab the fucker." "It won't budge" "pull it harder you dumb a$$." They try to steal the cow, but it won't budge. The cow has begun to be to noisy. "Shut it up, it'll wake the whole group up."
CHOICE #13 {"Pull harder!"Continue pulling the cow, and risk waking the group up} {"Fuck it!" Leave, and stay on the safe side.}
Again, the thing with the characters not feeling like my own. Since you introduced some new characters, figured I'd try.
I usually do a lot… more of stuff like this with my friends on our own site, even some Walking Dead based things. Though, usually we work on a system of everyone writes from the perspective of one or more characters, that way we have our own characters, and collaboratively write a story that way.
The two longest are both mine, Dead Zone(Horror Survival thing with zombies, similar to The Walking Dead, but a little different with the stories focus), 45 pages, and Gunpoint(Neo-Noir Sci-fi Crime Drama about spies, assassins, and corporate terrorism), which is 64 pages. I really enjoy doing this kind of stuff, it's just a different set-up than what I'm used to.
Long story short; sharing characters still feels weird, but I guess you can count me in.
"You dumb fucks!" The Commander whispered angrily. "Leave it alone! It's not worth being caught. Stop pulling it." The other two let go of the cow, and it quieted down. The Commander looked at the rooms, through the windows. As far as he could tell, they hadn't woken anybody up.
"What do you want to do now boss?" The one closer to the cow asked.
"What we do now? We find another another way to deal with this. One way or another, we're getting this cow back to base." He scanned the parking lot once more. Couches were set up, and there were two cars inside. All in all, there wasn't much outside. He turned back to the two. "Look around, quietly. Try and find rope, a lead or something. That'll make this easier." They nodded and went off to do as they were told.
The Commander thought he saw something near the stairs to the upper levels. Something shining. He went over to look, conscious of the survivors sleeping in the rooms. There was a metal box, the light from the moon had been reflecting off of it. He opened it as quietly as he could to find a bunch of crap. After sifting through it though, he found some rope that they could use.
He went back to the cow and called his guys over. "Hey, get over here, I found something." When they got back to where the cow was resting near the wall, he handed the length of rope to one of them. "Put this around it's neck, maybe it'll make less noise if we use the lead instead of just pulling on it."
"Are you sure boss?" He asked.
CHOICE #14 {"Yes, we need it." Still make noise, maybe a little less} {"No, I guess we can't risk it" Leave it}
There's like, three versions of it. I'll give you the link to my two, and then to the adaptation my friend Kenzie made of it(from her characters perspective).
"No, I guess we can't risk it, they'll notice this rope missing." The shortest of the three bandits chimes in. "Boss, either way, they'll notice something gone." The boss hovers over the little one. "Austin, did you really just back talk me? Little freaking pip squeak." Austin tries to stay quiet but cannot. He accidentally yells. "I'm tired of you always calling me names!" The boss crouches down, "Shut your fucking mouth!" Austin now whispering says, "Yeah I guess I should quiet down. Last time someone didn't agree with you, you killed him remember? Do you remember Stanley? huh?" The boss now hovering over top of Austin begins to speak. "You say one more word i'll kill you-" His voice is interrupted by the closing of a door from the upper level. "Shit..."
Alexander was in the middle of a great dream, there was no zombies. Except this dream is interrupted by the sound of the cow making noises. "Huh?" He tries to sleep through the noises, but couldn't. He eventually starts to hear a yelling voice, thought it was to faint to tell what it was saying. Alex gets up and opens his door. "Danny you out there?" There is just silence. "Danny, I see you, what are you doing-" BAM! A gunshot barley misses Alex's face, "Huh? Shit!" He manages to get back in his room and slams the door shut. He locks it and tries to push the dresser in front of the door.
"Zack, Why the hell did you shoot?"... "He, he, i don't know, I was scared alright?!" The boss gives him a look. "Well we got two options here, we can either, get the hell out of here, or try to fight back. He doesn't have a gun though, so we might still have a chance of taking the cow, and they still have no idea that we know where they are, so, what is it boys? Plan A, or plan B.
MAJOR CHOICE #15 {A. Get the hell out of there. _There is still a chance of taking the cow.} {B. Try to fight back.}
NOTE: I think if we play our cards right, we can make this whole bandit scenario fit into C at the top of the page. "C. A bandit group plots to overthrow their charismatic, sociopathic leader."
The reason is because I think it would be interesting with the motor inn group not knowing about the bandit group. (Danny might even convince Alex he was dreaming through it or something)
"No, I guess we can't risk it, they'll notice this rope missing." The shortest of the three bandits chimes in. "Boss, either way, they'll noti… morece something gone." The boss hovers over the little one. "Austin, did you really just back talk me? Little freaking pip squeak." Austin tries to stay quiet but cannot. He accidentally yells. "I'm tired of you always calling me names!" The boss crouches down, "Shut your fucking mouth!" Austin now whispering says, "Yeah I guess I should quiet down. Last time someone didn't agree with you, you killed him remember? Do you remember Stanley? huh?" The boss now hovering over top of Austin begins to speak. "You say one more word i'll kill you-" His voice is interrupted by the closing of a door from the upper level. "Shit..."
Alexander was in the middle of a great dream, there was no zombies. Except this dream is interrupted by the sound of the cow making noises. "Huh?" He tries to sleep through the noises, but c… [view original content]
There's like, three versions of it. I'll give you the link to my two, and then to the adaptation my friend Kenzie made of it(from her characte… morers perspective).
http://roleplayforever.boards.net/thread/127/dead-zone (The new version)
http://roleplayforever.boards.net/thread/23/ (An adaptation of the story from one characters perspective)
http://roleplayforever.boards.net/thread/9/9788-dead-zone (The original, which ended due to lack of participation We've only got maybe 10 active people, which sucks)
Unfortunately, the new one is kind of dying as well.
"No, I guess we can't risk it, they'll notice this rope missing." The shortest of the three bandits chimes in. "Boss, either way, they'll noti… morece something gone." The boss hovers over the little one. "Austin, did you really just back talk me? Little freaking pip squeak." Austin tries to stay quiet but cannot. He accidentally yells. "I'm tired of you always calling me names!" The boss crouches down, "Shut your fucking mouth!" Austin now whispering says, "Yeah I guess I should quiet down. Last time someone didn't agree with you, you killed him remember? Do you remember Stanley? huh?" The boss now hovering over top of Austin begins to speak. "You say one more word i'll kill you-" His voice is interrupted by the closing of a door from the upper level. "Shit..."
Alexander was in the middle of a great dream, there was no zombies. Except this dream is interrupted by the sound of the cow making noises. "Huh?" He tries to sleep through the noises, but c… [view original content]
"No, I guess we can't risk it, they'll notice this rope missing." The shortest of the three bandits chimes in. "Boss, either way, they'll noti… morece something gone." The boss hovers over the little one. "Austin, did you really just back talk me? Little freaking pip squeak." Austin tries to stay quiet but cannot. He accidentally yells. "I'm tired of you always calling me names!" The boss crouches down, "Shut your fucking mouth!" Austin now whispering says, "Yeah I guess I should quiet down. Last time someone didn't agree with you, you killed him remember? Do you remember Stanley? huh?" The boss now hovering over top of Austin begins to speak. "You say one more word i'll kill you-" His voice is interrupted by the closing of a door from the upper level. "Shit..."
Alexander was in the middle of a great dream, there was no zombies. Except this dream is interrupted by the sound of the cow making noises. "Huh?" He tries to sleep through the noises, but c… [view original content]
"No, I guess we can't risk it, they'll notice this rope missing." The shortest of the three bandits chimes in. "Boss, either way, they'll noti… morece something gone." The boss hovers over the little one. "Austin, did you really just back talk me? Little freaking pip squeak." Austin tries to stay quiet but cannot. He accidentally yells. "I'm tired of you always calling me names!" The boss crouches down, "Shut your fucking mouth!" Austin now whispering says, "Yeah I guess I should quiet down. Last time someone didn't agree with you, you killed him remember? Do you remember Stanley? huh?" The boss now hovering over top of Austin begins to speak. "You say one more word i'll kill you-" His voice is interrupted by the closing of a door from the upper level. "Shit..."
Alexander was in the middle of a great dream, there was no zombies. Except this dream is interrupted by the sound of the cow making noises. "Huh?" He tries to sleep through the noises, but c… [view original content]
"No, I guess we can't risk it, they'll notice this rope missing." The shortest of the three bandits chimes in. "Boss, either way, they'll noti… morece something gone." The boss hovers over the little one. "Austin, did you really just back talk me? Little freaking pip squeak." Austin tries to stay quiet but cannot. He accidentally yells. "I'm tired of you always calling me names!" The boss crouches down, "Shut your fucking mouth!" Austin now whispering says, "Yeah I guess I should quiet down. Last time someone didn't agree with you, you killed him remember? Do you remember Stanley? huh?" The boss now hovering over top of Austin begins to speak. "You say one more word i'll kill you-" His voice is interrupted by the closing of a door from the upper level. "Shit..."
Alexander was in the middle of a great dream, there was no zombies. Except this dream is interrupted by the sound of the cow making noises. "Huh?" He tries to sleep through the noises, but c… [view original content]
You can't fuck it up, it's a fanfic. Unless you do something ridiculous like the walkers spontaneously combusting for no reason. This fanfic isn't as popular yet, the more people the merrier.
"We gotta skeddadle, man!" Austin said. "Skedaddle?" The Commander asked. "You don't know what the fuck that means. Anyway, let's get moving with the Goddamn cow." Austin and Zach tied the rope around the cow and dragged it out of the motel. The Commander checked the surrouding area from time to time, remembering for a brief second his past experiences in Serbia and Bosnia. He remembered that poor little Bosnian girl with half her head demolished by some gang of Serbian men. And, for some reason, he though of that kid whom Zach nearly killed. "That man is gonna get a whoopin', I swear to God," The Commander muttered as he snuck his way ou of the motel.
When the Commander, Zach, Austin and Maybelle got back to Base, which was a group of old, worn tents surrounding a little Texaco gas station, he breathed a sigh of relief. "Zach," The Commander said. "Yessir?" He muttered wearily. "Get Quincey and Samuel Allison out here. I wantto speak to them. "Yessir."
The two came and, after briefly saluting the Commander, Samuel asked, "What's up, Commander?" "How'd things go down here?" Quinxey brushed a long piece of black hair before stating, matter-of-factly,
[A. Things went good.]
[B. Things went badly.]
"Things went good." Says the commander. "If you count good, as this asswhole screaming and practically ruining the plan." The commander mutters, "Oh yeah, I almost forgot," He punches Austin in the face. "You do anything like that, ever again. I will kill you, just like Stanley. You got it?" Austin stays quiet. The commander punches him again in the face. "I said, You got it?" Austin nods, as the commander punches him once again. Zack, interrupts. "Hey, don't you think this is a bit much, considering he may have saved our lives?" The commander gives Zack a cold stare. "The fuck you mean he saved our lives?" Zack continues. "Well you know, that kid may have had a gun, you never know." The commander backhands Zack. "I'm getting real sick and tired of your guy's shit." Quincy and Samuel stay quiet, for they don't want to get beat up also. The commander continues. "In fact, i think i'm done with your shit." He grabs his M16 from his back, and shoots Austin in the shoulder. Austin falls to the ground to what looks like to be his death. "The commander points his gun at Zack. "Now, you think i'm fucking around?"... "No sir!" They four walk away from the body of Austin, and make there way back to their tree house.
Seemingly minutes after the four walk away, Austin, is now coughing up blood. But he isn't dead, and he plans to get revenge on the commander.
{A. Go warn the motor inn gang.} {B. Sneakily follow the commander.} {C. Go in guns blazing at the Commander.} {D.Wait until the commander is sleeping and do bad things to him, like, cut his hand off.}
A. Logical plan B. Logical plan C. Unlogical plan. D. Brutal, brutal plan.
"Things went good, if you count good as this asshole screaming and..." -Skip to the after Zach is gone and Austin has been shot -The Commander sighs, swearing under his breath as he realises that he may have alerted one of the few raid-able places nearby of their presence.
"Well erm, we have a cow now... That's kinda cool!" Quincey optimistically replied.
-Scene swap-
"I'm tired of that old asshole's bullshit." muttered Austin "We all are, he's a dick!" "Yeah, Zach, don't get so worked up." replied Samuel. Quincy walked to his sleeping bag after returning from the Commanders private tent. "I'm gonna... Uh... Get some air." Austin says, he shows clear signs of nervousness, but the others shrug it off. "Oh look, the Commanders own little kissass is back.." Zach said in disgust, followed by a pained chuckle from Samuel. "What was that, you little shit?, and you're in no position to be laughing, Samuel, remember last time?." Quincy replied, storming towards Zach...
CHOICE #16 (A - Fight Quincy), (B - Back off)
A (Risky but brave plan, Quincy is a lot bigger than Zach. If you win, you'll get Samuel's respect) B ( Smart, but do you want to look like a coward infront of the two people who you trust? [Samuel and Austin])
FOLLOWING ON FROM RANDOMZ... Option D
I'm gonna make that son of a bitch pay, Austin thought to himself, while clutching his injured shoulder.
He stormed into the Commanders own personal tent. "He's asleep, perfect." Austin whispered to himself. He smiled maniacally as he saw the fresh milk from their new cow. He walked over a spat in it. What to do next, he thought, clutching his meat cleaver tightly.
Choice 17 ( A - Torture the Commander with your cleaver) ( B - Make his life horrible in less obvious ways ) ( C - Slit his throat, let him die slowly) ( D - Doom the Commander and the group by destroying supplies and taking the cow to the motel )
Sorry for the double choice, but I think it works well.
"Things went good." Says the commander. "If you count good, as this asswhole screaming and practically ruining the plan." The commander mutter… mores, "Oh yeah, I almost forgot," He punches Austin in the face. "You do anything like that, ever again. I will kill you, just like Stanley. You got it?" Austin stays quiet. The commander punches him again in the face. "I said, You got it?" Austin nods, as the commander punches him once again. Zack, interrupts. "Hey, don't you think this is a bit much, considering he may have saved our lives?" The commander gives Zack a cold stare. "The fuck you mean he saved our lives?" Zack continues. "Well you know, that kid may have had a gun, you never know." The commander backhands Zack. "I'm getting real sick and tired of your guy's shit." Quincy and Samuel stay quiet, for they don't want to get beat up also. The commander continues. "In fact, i think i'm done with your shit." He grabs his M16 from his back, and shoots … [view original content]
Oh man, i'm really sorry, like really sorry. I did not notice you say you were going to write. I just now seen your post. Maybe we can try to conjoin the two together. We could have, the whole tent scene. (Replacing Austin with Zack.) And maybe it will work? I'm really sorry though.
Oh man, i'm really sorry, like really sorry. I did not notice you say you were going to write. I just now seen your post. Maybe we can try to … moreconjoin the two together. We could have, the whole tent scene. (Replacing Austin with Zack.) And maybe it will work? I'm really sorry though.
You did good on writing. (lol, you put Governor instead of Commander, but I almost did it a couple times to though) And again, i'm really sorry on writing, maybe edit the top part of your post so it fits in with mine maybe?
[My first time writing, I hope it's okay.]
"Things went good, if you count good as this asshole screaming and..." -Skip to the after Zach i… mores gone and Austin has been shot -The Commander sighs, swearing under his breath as he realises that he may have alerted one of the few raid-able places nearby of their presence.
"Well erm, we have a cow now... That's kinda cool!" Quincey optimistically replied.
-Scene swap-
"I'm tired of that old asshole's bullshit." muttered Austin "We all are, he's a dick!" "Yeah, Zach, don't get so worked up." replied Samuel. Quincy walked to his sleeping bag after returning from the Commanders private tent. "I'm gonna... Uh... Get some air." Austin says, he shows clear signs of nervousness, but the others shrug it off. "Oh look, the Commanders own little kissass is back.." Zach said in disgust, followed by a pained chuckle from Samuel. "What was that, you little shit?, and you're in no position to be laughin… [view original content]
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B. Danny's becoming Lilly 2.0! (At 7:00 Central Time, I'll start with the majority-voted choice)
"You motherfucker." Danny snarled. Mike, realizing what was going to happen, jumped up at Danny. Danny pulled the trigger on his gun. It hit Mike straight in the chest, sending him flying four feet into the wall. "Motherfucker." Danny spat. He opened the door and walked out the door. Outside, awaiting Danny, was Melody and Alexander. Both stared at Danny. "Alexander," Melody said, "go get your mom." "Okay," Alexander murmured. He ran to his mother's room.
Melody took Alexander's revolver out of her pocket and shot Danny in the arm. He dropped the rifle. "Fuck!" He shouted. Melody said,
[A. That's what you get, asshole!]
[B. Had to be done, Danny.]
[X. I'm sorry.]
[Y. ... ]
A
Wow, this is escalating a bit quickly, isn't it?
"I'm, sorry, I just... What have I done..." Alexander and Gloria come running over. "Alex, what's wrong- Danny! Danny are you okay?" Danny tries to fight through the pain and smile, but couldn't the pain was to unbearable. Gloria looks over at Melody. "Did you do this?!" A tear runs down Melody's face. "I-I didn't mean to. I had to because-" Gloria interrupts. "There is never a reason to shoot a man. Danny come on, we got get your arm fixed up." She picks Danny up and helps him walk. "Mom! Wait!" Gloria glances back. "He shot Mike." Gloria gasps and let go of Danny. Danny goes crashing to the cement ground. "Is he alright?!" Danny looks back in dis belief of what he has just heard. "Bitch, i'm the one who needs help over here!" Gloria turns around, completely disgusted by Danny's behavior. She, and everyone else ignores Danny. "Come on Mike is in here." The 3 walk into Mikes room and see the lifeless body of Mike. Gloria, runs over to his body. "No, no, no.... Why did he do this?!" She begins to cry as she kisses him one last time and closes his eyes. She rests her head on the now lifeless corpse, when it begins to reanimate. "Mom look out!" Gloria looks at his face. "AHHH!" She try's to get up but wasn't fast enough. It digs it's teeth straight into her arm. Alexander picks up Danny's rifle and shoots Mike in the face. Melody and Alexander are in disbelief. Melody exchanges a look with Alex. "I'm gonna go grab the ax, were gonna have to try to cut her arm off but we have to hurry." Alexander begins to cry, as he leaves the room. "Hey shit head, get over here my arm needs a fixing." Alexander looks at Danny, and yells. "THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT! Mom's going to die because of you!"... "Huh?" Alex calms down a bit. "Mike somehow came back, he wasn't even bit.... He bit mom." Danny looks down at the ground. "My god, it's- it's all my fault... What have I done-" He is interrupted by the screams of Gloria. "I think Melody's begun to cut her arm off...I have to go-" Danny interrupts. "Listen Alex, i'm sorry, i really am. I realized something, maybe you don't have to be bit to turn into those things." Alex just looks down, "I don't want to talk to you, okay?" Danny interrupts. He says,
CHOICE #12 {A.Mike tried to kill me.} {B. That bitch said he was going to kill your mother.} {C. I had to kill him.} {D. I was jealous, he and your mom were getting close, and I didn't like that, so I killed him.}
NOTE: A- Lie B-Lie even worse. C. Give your reason. D. Tell the truth
Hell yeah.
BTW. shit. Sorry I didn't see and count your vote!
Shit happens I reckon.
That did escalate rather quickly.
"Alexander," Danny said. "Mike tried to kill me. I didn't want to shoot him -"
"THAT'S A LOAD OF FUCKING BULLSHIT!" Alexander shouted. He punched Danny in the face. "You thought Mike was like Paul, didn't you? Mike could've been a good man. The only thing we know isthat my mom is bitten because of your bullshit!"
"I took a risk, Alexander. When you become a man, you'll know what I mean," Danny said sadly at Alexander and walked to his room. Alexander went to his room, crying and praying for his mother.
In the woods, three men, masked and armed with M-16's, observed the action at the Motel. "What do you think, Commander?" One asked. The Commander looked at One and said
[A. They're violent sons of bitches...]
[B. We've got ourselves a good catch.]
[X. Prepare for battle.]
[Y. ...]
(Eh, I'll try I suppose.)
"They're violent sons of bitches, that for sure," The Commander said. "Can't tell if they got anything good. They got guns, but that ain't enough to justify going in guns blazing." He turned to the other two. "We wait. See if they got anything worth taking, and see if we can handle them."
(So... There's a choice now? I'm still not sure how this works exactly. Feel free to ignore this if you guys like.)
Nice! You should start posting more often.
Again, the thing with the characters not feeling like my own. Since you introduced some new characters, figured I'd try.
I usually do a lot of stuff like this with my friends on our own site, even some Walking Dead based things. Though, usually we work on a system of everyone writes from the perspective of one or more characters, that way we have our own characters, and collaboratively write a story that way.
The two longest are both mine, Dead Zone(Horror Survival thing with zombies, similar to The Walking Dead, but a little different with the stories focus), 45 pages, and Gunpoint(Neo-Noir Sci-fi Crime Drama about spies, assassins, and corporate terrorism), which is 64 pages. I really enjoy doing this kind of stuff, it's just a different set-up than what I'm used to.
Long story short; sharing characters still feels weird, but I guess you can count me in.
NOTE: If you see" _____" It means new scene.
The bandits wait the night, stalking the group with there every move.... Danny knocks at Alex's door. "Hey, Alex i'm really sorry for what happened last night. I was wondering if you wanted to help me milk the cow." Alexander stares. "Well, I guess, but not because I want to, I just haven't had milk in ages." Danny smiles. "Great."___________"Did you guys see that cow? Those two guys are going to milk it or something.".. "Yeah it's kind of a smart idea if you think about it."___________ Gloria, is just coming out of her sleep, when she glances down at her arm. She gaps. Melody looks over. "I'm sorry, I cut it. We had to." Gloria begins to cry. "I'm not the kind of woman who should be arm less.. I've always been a tomboy. Never really liked girly things, I was always that odd one out, the one who was in the mud getting dirty, at the shooting range, hunting. Now what can I do? The most I really can do is shoot a revolver, I'll- I'll never be the same." Melody opens her mouth and was about to speak, but couldn't find the words to do so. _________ "I'm going to go bring mom some milk, alright Danny?"... "mhm" Alex was about to knock on his moms door, when he glances in the window and sees her sobbing, he had never seen his mom cry before. He sets the milk outside the door and heads back to his room._______ The sun has now came down and everyone falls asleep easily._______ "They all asleep yet?"... "Yeah, all asleep now, let's go." The three bandits make there way to the motor inn and sneak right in. "Grab the fucker." "It won't budge" "pull it harder you dumb a$$." They try to steal the cow, but it won't budge. The cow has begun to be to noisy. "Shut it up, it'll wake the whole group up."
CHOICE #13 {"Pull harder!"Continue pulling the cow, and risk waking the group up} {"Fuck it!" Leave, and stay on the safe side.}
Can I read your Dead zone, story? Sounds interesting, can you give me a link?
"You dumb fucks!" The Commander whispered angrily. "Leave it alone! It's not worth being caught. Stop pulling it." The other two let go of the cow, and it quieted down. The Commander looked at the rooms, through the windows. As far as he could tell, they hadn't woken anybody up.
"What do you want to do now boss?" The one closer to the cow asked.
"What we do now? We find another another way to deal with this. One way or another, we're getting this cow back to base." He scanned the parking lot once more. Couches were set up, and there were two cars inside. All in all, there wasn't much outside. He turned back to the two. "Look around, quietly. Try and find rope, a lead or something. That'll make this easier." They nodded and went off to do as they were told.
The Commander thought he saw something near the stairs to the upper levels. Something shining. He went over to look, conscious of the survivors sleeping in the rooms. There was a metal box, the light from the moon had been reflecting off of it. He opened it as quietly as he could to find a bunch of crap. After sifting through it though, he found some rope that they could use.
He went back to the cow and called his guys over. "Hey, get over here, I found something." When they got back to where the cow was resting near the wall, he handed the length of rope to one of them. "Put this around it's neck, maybe it'll make less noise if we use the lead instead of just pulling on it."
"Are you sure boss?" He asked.
CHOICE #14 {"Yes, we need it." Still make noise, maybe a little less} {"No, I guess we can't risk it" Leave it}
(Sorry, but it's basically the same choice...)
There's like, three versions of it. I'll give you the link to my two, and then to the adaptation my friend Kenzie made of it(from her characters perspective).
http://roleplayforever.boards.net/thread/127/dead-zone (The new version)
http://roleplayforever.boards.net/thread/23/ (An adaptation of the story from one characters perspective)
http://roleplayforever.boards.net/thread/9/9788-dead-zone (The original, which ended due to lack of participation
We've only got maybe 10 active people, which sucks)
Unfortunately, the new one is kind of dying as well.
"No, I guess we can't risk it, they'll notice this rope missing." The shortest of the three bandits chimes in. "Boss, either way, they'll notice something gone." The boss hovers over the little one. "Austin, did you really just back talk me? Little freaking pip squeak." Austin tries to stay quiet but cannot. He accidentally yells. "I'm tired of you always calling me names!" The boss crouches down, "Shut your fucking mouth!" Austin now whispering says, "Yeah I guess I should quiet down. Last time someone didn't agree with you, you killed him remember? Do you remember Stanley? huh?" The boss now hovering over top of Austin begins to speak. "You say one more word i'll kill you-" His voice is interrupted by the closing of a door from the upper level. "Shit..."
Alexander was in the middle of a great dream, there was no zombies. Except this dream is interrupted by the sound of the cow making noises. "Huh?" He tries to sleep through the noises, but couldn't. He eventually starts to hear a yelling voice, thought it was to faint to tell what it was saying. Alex gets up and opens his door. "Danny you out there?" There is just silence. "Danny, I see you, what are you doing-" BAM! A gunshot barley misses Alex's face, "Huh? Shit!" He manages to get back in his room and slams the door shut. He locks it and tries to push the dresser in front of the door.
"Zack, Why the hell did you shoot?"... "He, he, i don't know, I was scared alright?!" The boss gives him a look. "Well we got two options here, we can either, get the hell out of here, or try to fight back. He doesn't have a gun though, so we might still have a chance of taking the cow, and they still have no idea that we know where they are, so, what is it boys? Plan A, or plan B.
MAJOR CHOICE #15 {A. Get the hell out of there. _There is still a chance of taking the cow.} {B. Try to fight back.}
NOTE: I think if we play our cards right, we can make this whole bandit scenario fit into C at the top of the page. "C. A bandit group plots to overthrow their charismatic, sociopathic leader."
I vote A
The reason is because I think it would be interesting with the motor inn group not knowing about the bandit group. (Danny might even convince Alex he was dreaming through it or something)
I may be interested in joining. Is anybody aloud to join?
Of course! We always need new people.
Especially now when it's just me and maybe 2 - 3 others.
We used to have another site with 50+ members, then we decided to move to another forum, and no one came except for all the admins and mods.
A, try to fight back and they wake everyone else up FOR SURE, that is, if they haven't already.
Also, they really need that cow.
A. Y'know, I was thinking the same thing about Option C, Randomz.
A. Sounds like the best choice to me.
Cool, so now we have put 3 the original scenario's into one.
Well, they're not headed to Rome yet, but still all 3, yeah.
So.. Is the vote over? Can someone continue?
You can probably continue, i would, but i'm not sure if there's a rule against going twice in a row.
I could write, if you guys aren't.
Eh, sounds interesting but I feel like I'd fuck up the storyline if I threw in any ideas.
You can't fuck it up, it's a fanfic. Unless you do something ridiculous like the walkers spontaneously combusting for no reason. This fanfic isn't as popular yet, the more people the merrier.
I'll wait for a bit, if no one else has continued, then I will. But for the moment, I'm worn out. My creative juices have been dried for the day.
No there's not a rule only everyone wants it, but I'll go and write now.
Illx carry on from your part, then.
Hey bro, you can do it. With your ideas, you might make it, like, totally tubularadical
"We gotta skeddadle, man!" Austin said. "Skedaddle?" The Commander asked. "You don't know what the fuck that means. Anyway, let's get moving with the Goddamn cow." Austin and Zach tied the rope around the cow and dragged it out of the motel. The Commander checked the surrouding area from time to time, remembering for a brief second his past experiences in Serbia and Bosnia. He remembered that poor little Bosnian girl with half her head demolished by some gang of Serbian men. And, for some reason, he though of that kid whom Zach nearly killed. "That man is gonna get a whoopin', I swear to God," The Commander muttered as he snuck his way ou of the motel.
When the Commander, Zach, Austin and Maybelle got back to Base, which was a group of old, worn tents surrounding a little Texaco gas station, he breathed a sigh of relief. "Zach," The Commander said. "Yessir?" He muttered wearily. "Get Quincey and Samuel Allison out here. I wantto speak to them. "Yessir."
The two came and, after briefly saluting the Commander, Samuel asked, "What's up, Commander?" "How'd things go down here?" Quinxey brushed a long piece of black hair before stating, matter-of-factly,
[A. Things went good.]
[B. Things went badly.]
"Things went good." Says the commander. "If you count good, as this asswhole screaming and practically ruining the plan." The commander mutters, "Oh yeah, I almost forgot," He punches Austin in the face. "You do anything like that, ever again. I will kill you, just like Stanley. You got it?" Austin stays quiet. The commander punches him again in the face. "I said, You got it?" Austin nods, as the commander punches him once again. Zack, interrupts. "Hey, don't you think this is a bit much, considering he may have saved our lives?" The commander gives Zack a cold stare. "The fuck you mean he saved our lives?" Zack continues. "Well you know, that kid may have had a gun, you never know." The commander backhands Zack. "I'm getting real sick and tired of your guy's shit." Quincy and Samuel stay quiet, for they don't want to get beat up also. The commander continues. "In fact, i think i'm done with your shit." He grabs his M16 from his back, and shoots Austin in the shoulder. Austin falls to the ground to what looks like to be his death. "The commander points his gun at Zack. "Now, you think i'm fucking around?"... "No sir!" They four walk away from the body of Austin, and make there way back to their tree house.
Seemingly minutes after the four walk away, Austin, is now coughing up blood. But he isn't dead, and he plans to get revenge on the commander.
{A. Go warn the motor inn gang.} {B. Sneakily follow the commander.} {C. Go in guns blazing at the Commander.} {D.Wait until the commander is sleeping and do bad things to him, like, cut his hand off.}
A. Logical plan B. Logical plan C. Unlogical plan. D. Brutal, brutal plan.
[My first time writing, I hope it's okay.]
"Things went good, if you count good as this asshole screaming and..." -Skip to the after Zach is gone and Austin has been shot -The Commander sighs, swearing under his breath as he realises that he may have alerted one of the few raid-able places nearby of their presence.
"Well erm, we have a cow now... That's kinda cool!" Quincey optimistically replied.
-Scene swap-
"I'm tired of that old asshole's bullshit." muttered Austin "We all are, he's a dick!" "Yeah, Zach, don't get so worked up." replied Samuel. Quincy walked to his sleeping bag after returning from the Commanders private tent. "I'm gonna... Uh... Get some air." Austin says, he shows clear signs of nervousness, but the others shrug it off. "Oh look, the Commanders own little kissass is back.." Zach said in disgust, followed by a pained chuckle from Samuel. "What was that, you little shit?, and you're in no position to be laughing, Samuel, remember last time?." Quincy replied, storming towards Zach...
CHOICE #16 (A - Fight Quincy), (B - Back off)
A (Risky but brave plan, Quincy is a lot bigger than Zach. If you win, you'll get Samuel's respect) B ( Smart, but do you want to look like a coward infront of the two people who you trust? [Samuel and Austin])
FOLLOWING ON FROM RANDOMZ...
Option D
I'm gonna make that son of a bitch pay, Austin thought to himself, while clutching his injured shoulder.
He stormed into the Commanders own personal tent. "He's asleep, perfect." Austin whispered to himself. He smiled maniacally as he saw the fresh milk from their new cow. He walked over a spat in it. What to do next, he thought, clutching his meat cleaver tightly.
Choice 17 ( A - Torture the Commander with your cleaver) ( B - Make his life horrible in less obvious ways ) ( C - Slit his throat, let him die slowly) ( D - Doom the Commander and the group by destroying supplies and taking the cow to the motel )
Sorry for the double choice, but I think it works well.
Sorry man, I already said I would. I can remove my post if you want me to.
Oh man, i'm really sorry, like really sorry. I did not notice you say you were going to write. I just now seen your post. Maybe we can try to conjoin the two together. We could have, the whole tent scene. (Replacing Austin with Zack.) And maybe it will work? I'm really sorry though.
No need to apologise, it was a mistake. Yeah, you've got more experience with writing anyway, so maybe you could incorporate my post into yours.
You did good on writing. (lol, you put Governor instead of Commander, but I almost did it a couple times to though) And again, i'm really sorry on writing, maybe edit the top part of your post so it fits in with mine maybe?