I vote B in the last major choice, so I guess B took the vote this time..
Ahem ahem:
"I didn't dream" Alex says "I would've known if it was a dream, almost every dream since shit hit the fan has been a nightmare, at least there if someone dies I don't have to mourn him.." Gloria then says with a concerned look on her face: "I know it's been very hard for you, but we have to stick together and get through this mess, it's just you and me left, and I need you, especially now with my "disability" ". "look mom, this is serious, a guy tried to shoot me in the head, we need to inform everybody about what happened. It looks like we have some company.."
-SCENE SWAP-
knock knock "Danny? it's me, Alex. I need to speak with you, it's really important.", there's no answer. he checks the door, it's locked. "The hell?"
he starts yelling "DANNY? CAN YOU HEAR ME?? IT'S NOT FUNNY!! OPEN UP!!!", no answer. "I'M BREAKING THROUGH!" he then takes a step back and leaps forward, BOOM!, he falls down on his shoulder "SHIT that hurt!", he then gets up and tries again, BOOM!, he hears a little crack, similar to wood snapping, BOOM!, the door collapses into the floor of the room, and Alex right after it, face on into the hard floor. he glances up and freezes. "What happened sweeti-" Gloria freezes right after him, as if they just looked at Medusa and turned to stone, David's lifeless body was sitting against the wall, with a deep cut down his left arm. "He... oh god.." tears start to flow down Alex's face "Oh my god! w..why?!" Gloria barley can speak those words before she turns around and start's to cry. "There's a note.." Alex says,
"Alex, I hope it's you who finds this because I have to say some things to you, first of all, don't lose hope, i lost it, and I don't want you to do as well, since that Mike came here I couldn't bare looking at him, and when she flirted with him, I couldn't even think of the possibility of someone else being with her, so I shot him. When I saw her eyes, when she rushed to help him, I was already dead inside. I'm sorry I had to do this, I know you needed a father figure, and I'm sorry I couldn't fill that part in your life. You're a good kid Alex, don't let anyone make you think you're not, Protect your mother at all means, she's all you have left, and always remember what I told you, Hold it, look down the sights, hold your breath and...BAM"
When he finished reading it he turned to his mother and said..
CHOICE #21:
A) He... couldn't take the pressure.. He couldn't handle the thought of living without you... C) He lost his marbles...
NOTE: I'm really sorry for the wait and the length, but here it is.
"I'll kill that fucking piece of scum!" "Stop moving! you'll ruin the stitches!" Samuel said while doing his best to treat the Commander with the little amount of medical supplies they had. he was actually doing really good. Samuel was a nurse, he was one of those male nurses that everyone made fun of.
"I still can't belive that you are a nurse! Did you also grow a pussy at the time?" Quincy says
CHOICE #22
A) "I'm trying to concentrate here!" "Better than being a no good, washed up hunk of shit!" C) punch him
"He couldn't handle the thought of living without you..." Alex quietly says to his mother. "I was mad at him, you know, but I still liked him... to think we were finally starting to get along again..." his mother stays quiet, and begins to speak. "Alex, I'm sorry... I.. I have no words. I think I.. I think I loved him. Not in a relationship way but..." she begins to cry. When Melody interrupts. "Guys, the cow is missing, get over here." Alex stays in Danny´s room, reading the letter over and over. Meanwhile Gloria and melody find the area where the cow used to be. "Alex was right." Gloria says. "About what?"...."He said guys were here last night, shooting at him. At first I didn't believe him, but I just found a bullet casing on the ground over here. I need to go talk to him." Gloria goes back to the room to find Alex missing. When all of. Suddenly she hears a gunshot from the balcony above her. BAM!
"Oh God, Austin! Austin, are you... are you okay?" He picks up the unconscious Austin and runs to the gate of the motor inn, Matt begins...
(A. "The fuck did you shoot for?") (B. "Help, don't let him die.") (C. Let me in! My friend needs bandages!")
AWESOME0, don't worry bro. We've gotta to go school and work and stuff. The story will still get written unless people get disinterested, and I hope that don't happen!
[NOTE: Randomz and I made two posts replying to the same post, so we decided to combine our scenes.]
"Guys the cow is missing, get over here." As his mom goes off with Melody, Alexander stays back and rereads the letter Danny left him. Then there was the last part. Hold it, look down the sights, hold your breath and...BAM" Then all of a sudden he sees two people coming their way, off in the distance. He acts fast, grabs the rifle that Danny shot himself with, and ran up to the balcony. BAM! He shoots as the one man falls down. "If only you were still here Danny, you'd be proud." After he shoots, he looks down to see his mother. She gives him a, What the hell did you just do. Kinda stare. The one man picks up the shot one, and runs their way. He stops at the gate and says. "Let me in! My friend needs bandages.
Melody went to go open the gate. Alexander yells to stop her. "No, don't. Don't let them in." Melody looks at him. "What do you mean, don't let them in? They need help. For crying out loud Alex, you shot the guy!" Alex just stares. "No." Gloria looks up at him. "Alex, would Danny want you to do this?" Alex stops staring, and his expression begins to fade. It went form angry to sad in an instant. He begins to cry. Meanwhile, Melody was letting the two strangers in. "Come on in, i'll try to help your friend out."
-SCENE SWAP-
"Better than being a no-good, washed up hunk of shit!" Samuel replied. "Quit being a bunch of little faggots and fix me for Christ's- AGH that motherfuckin'- AAAGG! Shit! You through yet, asshat?" "Almost, sir," Samuel said. "Get your faggot ass working! And Quincy, get me some damn whisky!" "Yessir," Quincey said gruffly. He found the whiskey in a tattered red backpack. He gave it to The Commander, who chugged almost the entire bottle. The pain was dulling. The Commander quickly passed out. And Samuel could now finish his operation.
--SCENE SHIFT--
"I'm sorry about Alex here, he just lost someone close to him..." Melody goes on, and on. She begins to do all she can to help Austin. When all of a sudden he begins to groan, and nearly bites Melody. "AHH!!" She screams loud. At the same time a tear is falling down the face of Matt. Alex comes running in and wastes no time to shoot the dead Austin in the face. Matt looks up at him. "We have a problem." Matt says.
"What problem?" Matt explains, "There's another group out there, mean sons of bitches, they slaughtered all of my group, 8 people, I barely got away.. we need to prepare to strike them, because they're comin' for you, well, for Austin at least.." "That the guy who just tried to gnaw on my face?"
Melody asks. "Yeah. and it wouldn't've happened if this itchy triggerfinger hadn't shot him beforehand!" Matt cries out. "As I told you, we just lost a friend, he was like a father to him, he didn't know what he was doing." Melody tries to calm the situation. "Well, nothing we can do now.." Matt reluctantly says. "As I said, they're comin' for us, are you up to it or not?"
"What problem?" Matt explains, "There's another group out there, mean sons of bitches, they slaughtered all of my group, 8 people, I barely go… moret away.. we need to prepare to strike them, because they're comin' for you, well, for Austin at least.." "That the guy who just tried to gnaw on my face?"
Melody asks. "Yeah. and it wouldn't've happened if this itchy triggerfinger hadn't shot him beforehand!" Matt cries out. "As I told you, we just lost a friend, he was like a father to him, he didn't know what he was doing." Melody tries to calm the situation. "Well, nothing we can do now.." Matt reluctantly says. "As I said, they're comin' for us, are you up to it or not?"
MAJOR CHOICE #25
A) Yes. No. C) We take no side in this.
NOTE: Cast your votes!
"What problem?" Matt explains, "There's another group out there, mean sons of bitches, they slaughtered all of my group, 8 people, I barely go… moret away.. we need to prepare to strike them, because they're comin' for you, well, for Austin at least.." "That the guy who just tried to gnaw on my face?"
Melody asks. "Yeah. and it wouldn't've happened if this itchy triggerfinger hadn't shot him beforehand!" Matt cries out. "As I told you, we just lost a friend, he was like a father to him, he didn't know what he was doing." Melody tries to calm the situation. "Well, nothing we can do now.." Matt reluctantly says. "As I said, they're comin' for us, are you up to it or not?"
MAJOR CHOICE #25
A) Yes. No. C) We take no side in this.
NOTE: Cast your votes!
"There we go! All stitched up" Samuel says. Quincy looks at the commander then back at Samuel. He laughs and begins to speak. "Don't you have to stitch someplace else?" Samuel confused asks, "Huh? I stitched up the ends to his fingers." Quincy laughs again. "I'm talking about below the belt." Samuel sighs. "I don't really have to do that do I?" Quincy looks back up at him. "Yes, yes you do." Samuel who is gagging pulls down the commanders pants and manages to throw up all over where his private parts used to be. "Nice one shithead you puked all over him." Samuel, who's temper can only go so far, punches Quincy in the face. It doesn't effect Quincy as mush as Sam would have wanted it to, but Quincy goes right back on the attack, and tackles Samuel.
Zack interrupts. "Quincy stop!" The attack is so loud he doesn't hear Zack. "Get off of him you asswhole." He is still being ignored, when Zack looks down at the bloody meat cleaver. He has a big decision.
CHOICE #24&25
A. Grab the meat cleaver and hit Quincy, not hard enough to kill him.
B. Do the humane thing to do, and keep yelling.
C. Start attacking Quincy with Zacks small fists.
D. Kill Quincy, kill him with the cleaver.
Okay i have a suggestion. (Of course, I can't confirm this since i'm not the creator of the thread but..) What if every 25 posts we have 2 major choices in one. (That would also clear up the confusion in the last post..) So you can vote on this post as well as the post by AWESOME0, but if Clementinecultist disaproves of this idea, then we can erase the votes, until then please vote.
"There we go! All stitched up" Samuel says. Quincy looks at the commander then back at Samuel. He laughs and begins to speak. "Don't you have … moreto stitch someplace else?" Samuel confused asks, "Huh? I stitched up the ends to his fingers." Quincy laughs again. "I'm talking about below the belt." Samuel sighs. "I don't really have to do that do I?" Quincy looks back up at him. "Yes, yes you do." Samuel who is gagging pulls down the commanders pants and manages to throw up all over where his private parts used to be. "Nice one shithead you puked all over him." Samuel, who's temper can only go so far, punches Quincy in the face. It doesn't effect Quincy as mush as Sam would have wanted it to, but Quincy goes right back on the attack, and tackles Samuel.
Zack interrupts. "Quincy stop!" The attack is so loud he doesn't hear Zack. "Get off of him you asswhole." He is still being ignored, when Zack looks down at the bloody meat cleaver. He has a big dec… [view original content]
"What problem?" Matt explains, "There's another group out there, mean sons of bitches, they slaughtered all of my group, 8 people, I barely go… moret away.. we need to prepare to strike them, because they're comin' for you, well, for Austin at least.." "That the guy who just tried to gnaw on my face?"
Melody asks. "Yeah. and it wouldn't've happened if this itchy triggerfinger hadn't shot him beforehand!" Matt cries out. "As I told you, we just lost a friend, he was like a father to him, he didn't know what he was doing." Melody tries to calm the situation. "Well, nothing we can do now.." Matt reluctantly says. "As I said, they're comin' for us, are you up to it or not?"
MAJOR CHOICE #25
A) Yes. No. C) We take no side in this.
NOTE: Cast your votes!
"There we go! All stitched up" Samuel says. Quincy looks at the commander then back at Samuel. He laughs and begins to speak. "Don't you have … moreto stitch someplace else?" Samuel confused asks, "Huh? I stitched up the ends to his fingers." Quincy laughs again. "I'm talking about below the belt." Samuel sighs. "I don't really have to do that do I?" Quincy looks back up at him. "Yes, yes you do." Samuel who is gagging pulls down the commanders pants and manages to throw up all over where his private parts used to be. "Nice one shithead you puked all over him." Samuel, who's temper can only go so far, punches Quincy in the face. It doesn't effect Quincy as mush as Sam would have wanted it to, but Quincy goes right back on the attack, and tackles Samuel.
Zack interrupts. "Quincy stop!" The attack is so loud he doesn't hear Zack. "Get off of him you asswhole." He is still being ignored, when Zack looks down at the bloody meat cleaver. He has a big dec… [view original content]
btw, Randomz you can vote on my choice also an we'll just have this one time 2 major choices as an exceptional, since both plots have come to the "big decision" part.
I vote A as well, he need's to be stopped.
btw, Randomz you can vote on my choice also an we'll just have this one time 2 major choices as an exceptional, since both plots have come to the "big decision" part.
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it's okay, I also caught up with them and now i can write aswell
Ok guys, I guess i'll take over now.
I'm writing guys, should be out in 10 min
I vote B in the last major choice, so I guess B took the vote this time..
Ahem ahem:
"I didn't dream" Alex says "I would've known if it was a dream, almost every dream since shit hit the fan has been a nightmare, at least there if someone dies I don't have to mourn him.." Gloria then says with a concerned look on her face: "I know it's been very hard for you, but we have to stick together and get through this mess, it's just you and me left, and I need you, especially now with my "disability" ". "look mom, this is serious, a guy tried to shoot me in the head, we need to inform everybody about what happened. It looks like we have some company.."
-SCENE SWAP-
knock knock "Danny? it's me, Alex. I need to speak with you, it's really important.", there's no answer. he checks the door, it's locked. "The hell?"
he starts yelling "DANNY? CAN YOU HEAR ME?? IT'S NOT FUNNY!! OPEN UP!!!", no answer. "I'M BREAKING THROUGH!" he then takes a step back and leaps forward, BOOM!, he falls down on his shoulder "SHIT that hurt!", he then gets up and tries again, BOOM!, he hears a little crack, similar to wood snapping, BOOM!, the door collapses into the floor of the room, and Alex right after it, face on into the hard floor. he glances up and freezes. "What happened sweeti-" Gloria freezes right after him, as if they just looked at Medusa and turned to stone, David's lifeless body was sitting against the wall, with a deep cut down his left arm. "He... oh god.." tears start to flow down Alex's face "Oh my god! w..why?!" Gloria barley can speak those words before she turns around and start's to cry. "There's a note.." Alex says,
"Alex, I hope it's you who finds this because I have to say some things to you, first of all, don't lose hope, i lost it, and I don't want you to do as well, since that Mike came here I couldn't bare looking at him, and when she flirted with him, I couldn't even think of the possibility of someone else being with her, so I shot him. When I saw her eyes, when she rushed to help him, I was already dead inside. I'm sorry I had to do this, I know you needed a father figure, and I'm sorry I couldn't fill that part in your life. You're a good kid Alex, don't let anyone make you think you're not, Protect your mother at all means, she's all you have left, and always remember what I told you, Hold it, look down the sights, hold your breath and...BAM"
When he finished reading it he turned to his mother and said..
CHOICE #21:
A) He... couldn't take the pressure..
He couldn't handle the thought of living without you... C) He lost his marbles...
NOTE: I'm really sorry for the wait and the length, but here it is.
we need to get more people here. it'll make things much easier, anyway, anybody wants to start typin'?
ok, I'll give you something to work with:
"I'll kill that fucking piece of scum!" "Stop moving! you'll ruin the stitches!" Samuel said while doing his best to treat the Commander with the little amount of medical supplies they had. he was actually doing really good. Samuel was a nurse, he was one of those male nurses that everyone made fun of.
"I still can't belive that you are a nurse! Did you also grow a pussy at the time?" Quincy says
CHOICE #22
A) "I'm trying to concentrate here!"
"Better than being a no good, washed up hunk of shit!" C) punch him
Guys not trying to be a jerk here but if someone sees this, please join the writing, I don't want to keep the plot going myself..
You're not waiting long enough. Not everyone is on all at the same time you know.
Yeah.
"He couldn't handle the thought of living without you..." Alex quietly says to his mother. "I was mad at him, you know, but I still liked him... to think we were finally starting to get along again..." his mother stays quiet, and begins to speak. "Alex, I'm sorry... I.. I have no words. I think I.. I think I loved him. Not in a relationship way but..." she begins to cry. When Melody interrupts. "Guys, the cow is missing, get over here." Alex stays in Danny´s room, reading the letter over and over. Meanwhile Gloria and melody find the area where the cow used to be. "Alex was right." Gloria says. "About what?"...."He said guys were here last night, shooting at him. At first I didn't believe him, but I just found a bullet casing on the ground over here. I need to go talk to him." Gloria goes back to the room to find Alex missing. When all of. Suddenly she hears a gunshot from the balcony above her. BAM!
"Oh God, Austin! Austin, are you... are you okay?" He picks up the unconscious Austin and runs to the gate of the motor inn, Matt begins...
(A. "The fuck did you shoot for?") (B. "Help, don't let him die.") (C. Let me in! My friend needs bandages!")
It's ok, I just mentiond it (I waited about 7 hours but it's ok, I'm not rushing anything
AWESOME0, don't worry bro. We've gotta to go school and work and stuff. The story will still get written unless people get disinterested, and I hope that don't happen!
My post is now a part of the post below this one, I did the motor inn scene.
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We posted at the same time...
Oh crap! Really?
So, which one should we go with?
I say, (My opinion) go with my motor inn group scene. And your bandit group scene.
That's the best plan, IMO. Let's get to work on it.
[NOTE: Randomz and I made two posts replying to the same post, so we decided to combine our scenes.]
"Guys the cow is missing, get over here." As his mom goes off with Melody, Alexander stays back and rereads the letter Danny left him. Then there was the last part. Hold it, look down the sights, hold your breath and...BAM" Then all of a sudden he sees two people coming their way, off in the distance. He acts fast, grabs the rifle that Danny shot himself with, and ran up to the balcony. BAM! He shoots as the one man falls down. "If only you were still here Danny, you'd be proud." After he shoots, he looks down to see his mother. She gives him a, What the hell did you just do. Kinda stare. The one man picks up the shot one, and runs their way. He stops at the gate and says. "Let me in! My friend needs bandages.
Melody went to go open the gate. Alexander yells to stop her. "No, don't. Don't let them in." Melody looks at him. "What do you mean, don't let them in? They need help. For crying out loud Alex, you shot the guy!" Alex just stares. "No." Gloria looks up at him. "Alex, would Danny want you to do this?" Alex stops staring, and his expression begins to fade. It went form angry to sad in an instant. He begins to cry. Meanwhile, Melody was letting the two strangers in. "Come on in, i'll try to help your friend out."
-SCENE SWAP-
"Better than being a no-good, washed up hunk of shit!" Samuel replied. "Quit being a bunch of little faggots and fix me for Christ's- AGH that motherfuckin'- AAAGG! Shit! You through yet, asshat?" "Almost, sir," Samuel said. "Get your faggot ass working! And Quincy, get me some damn whisky!" "Yessir," Quincey said gruffly. He found the whiskey in a tattered red backpack. He gave it to The Commander, who chugged almost the entire bottle. The pain was dulling. The Commander quickly passed out. And Samuel could now finish his operation.
--SCENE SHIFT--
"I'm sorry about Alex here, he just lost someone close to him..." Melody goes on, and on. She begins to do all she can to help Austin. When all of a sudden he begins to groan, and nearly bites Melody. "AHH!!" She screams loud. At the same time a tear is falling down the face of Matt. Alex comes running in and wastes no time to shoot the dead Austin in the face. Matt looks up at him. "We have a problem." Matt says.
PLEASE CONTINUE
In a little bit, I'll edit mine out.I don't have the time.e right now
I'm writing now, you should edit the character bio because some characters died since.
Seen as though you look like the only writer in my time zone, I might join in to help you out. I need to read the thing first.
"What problem?" Matt explains, "There's another group out there, mean sons of bitches, they slaughtered all of my group, 8 people, I barely got away.. we need to prepare to strike them, because they're comin' for you, well, for Austin at least.." "That the guy who just tried to gnaw on my face?"
Melody asks. "Yeah. and it wouldn't've happened if this itchy triggerfinger hadn't shot him beforehand!" Matt cries out. "As I told you, we just lost a friend, he was like a father to him, he didn't know what he was doing." Melody tries to calm the situation. "Well, nothing we can do now.." Matt reluctantly says. "As I said, they're comin' for us, are you up to it or not?"
MAJOR CHOICE #25
A) Yes.
No. C) We take no side in this.
NOTE: Cast your votes!
no problem dude.
I vote A, this mean son of a bitch has to be erased for the equation.
A) Yes.
Okay i'll do that now, i haven't had much time to do stuff, i've been busy.
We only do major votes every 5th choice. #23 wouldn't work, because it would be off. #25 would work.
I just went and looked at prior posts, that would be #24
k then skip to the other scenery, make a choice there and then it'll be 24
np dude, take your time
Alright, here change the post number on this post to #25, and I will make #24 on the bandit scenario.
"There we go! All stitched up" Samuel says. Quincy looks at the commander then back at Samuel. He laughs and begins to speak. "Don't you have to stitch someplace else?" Samuel confused asks, "Huh? I stitched up the ends to his fingers." Quincy laughs again. "I'm talking about below the belt." Samuel sighs. "I don't really have to do that do I?" Quincy looks back up at him. "Yes, yes you do." Samuel who is gagging pulls down the commanders pants and manages to throw up all over where his private parts used to be. "Nice one shithead you puked all over him." Samuel, who's temper can only go so far, punches Quincy in the face. It doesn't effect Quincy as mush as Sam would have wanted it to, but Quincy goes right back on the attack, and tackles Samuel.
Zack interrupts. "Quincy stop!" The attack is so loud he doesn't hear Zack. "Get off of him you asswhole." He is still being ignored, when Zack looks down at the bloody meat cleaver. He has a big decision.
CHOICE #24&25
A. Grab the meat cleaver and hit Quincy, not hard enough to kill him.
B. Do the humane thing to do, and keep yelling.
C. Start attacking Quincy with Zacks small fists.
D. Kill Quincy, kill him with the cleaver.
Okay i have a suggestion. (Of course, I can't confirm this since i'm not the creator of the thread but..) What if every 25 posts we have 2 major choices in one. (That would also clear up the confusion in the last post..) So you can vote on this post as well as the post by AWESOME0, but if Clementinecultist disaproves of this idea, then we can erase the votes, until then please vote.
A Quincy deserves it for being such a asswhole!
A
no prob.
I vote A as well, he need's to be stopped.
btw, Randomz you can vote on my choice also an we'll just have this one time 2 major choices as an exceptional, since both plots have come to the "big decision" part.
I did vote on yours. Oh and I just updated the character bio.
good job dude, we should keep it for a long time for any newcomers to read, ClementineCultist can post the page number in the title.
Changed it.