Collaborative Comic: Torpedo Rock: Detective for Hire
Basic rules, been done in most forums; I make a page of a comic, and then the next poster makes the next one continuing it. GO.
Oh, right. Here's the first one.
Yeah, yeah. I suck at art. GO.
Oh, right. Here's the first one.
Yeah, yeah. I suck at art. GO.
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You may want to restate your "sucking" at art sentence.
Here's an example on how to suck at art!
Hope I didn't ruien the art style much ^^; Also I really like drawing this character so I hope this continues.
Panel 1: Wide panel closeup of Torpedo face. Annoyed eyes. White text saying, "Don't say this is ANOTHER trap..."
Panel 2: Wide panel of the back of Torpedo looking at the whole view of the truck
There is a black puddle at the back with black ooze all over the walls and floor.
Panel 3: Torpedo crouches down and ponders the puddle.
Saying "Hmmm... this puddle looks deeper than what it should be"
Panel 4: Close up of Torpedo about to poke puddle with his finger
Panel 5: Puddle latches onto Torpedo's hand
Panel 6: In a panic Torpedo tries to pull his arm out
Panel 7: The puddle latches onto his leg and pulls him in even more
Panel 8, 9 and 10: begins sinking in a dramatic fashion, with finally his other hand poking out from the puddle.
Whaat? Are you kidding? It's awesome! Also, it's pretty fast! What software do you use?
EDIT: I drew a page based on your suggestion, but if you feel like drawing it yourself feel free. I kinda want to see your art style.
(Though if I had done it, it would have been a pencil doodle! XD (Not very good at drawing, plus I can't draw all too well on my laptop!)
Excellent follow up too, I'm already drawn in, and I really want to know what happens next!
(Once I get a few things sorted, I might give it a go later on at least)
WOW! This page REALLY sucks. I'll go slower next time
Also, this comic needs a title. What do you guys think it should be?
(Well, its a start...)
Also, we need a full page of those head guys launching Torpedo towards the "screen" incredibly fast, with Torpedo clutching to the edges of his bubble, screaming something like.
"I CAN'T HOLD ON MUCH LONGER!!!"
I like it
Couldn't help my self ^^;
...*Cough*
Aaugh. Sorry it's so sloppy. I'm using a smaller laptop which made it hard to draw. Also, I love your character design on Zachary Zaffius! What accent is that?
Oh god, theres a small blank space underneath, please please please don't tell me my browser glitched and you actaully made an awesome page I can't see
Hundred points for the person who can figure out where I got the Zaffius' middle names!
Anyway, I'm finding myself tweaking the image every few seconds. The more I stare at it, the more things I see that kinda bothers me. Also, I suck at writing German accents.
After you figure one out, I think it's pretty easy to figure out the others.
I post no page. I just *squee!*... Now if you'll excuse me...
*squee!*
I tried drawing the Fancy Man Club, but it didn't turn out well.
When I'm writing Goodeve's dialogue, I hear Cave Johnson's voice.
Every time he came over we had free toast!!
Lovely man. Silent type.
Shame he overheated a few years ago.
He will be missed.
Aww man. Okay, then. Though I kinda wish more people would participate.
Are you doing this stuff in paint, Tred ._.?
Yeah, I wish I have a tablet.