Regardless of what you thought about his character, you can't deny being shot down and devoured alive screaming in front of your daughter is not something you would wish upon anyone.
Overall, it was a surprisingly good poem, but next time I'd use enter a bit more. For example, instead of:
Carlos, at first you didn't … moreseem cool, I thought you were a complete fool...
You could instead do:
Carlos, at first you didn't seem cool,
I thought you were a complete fool...
It makes all the difference. But other than that, I really enjoyed it :)
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Respect.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=o0ZsjCv_02c
But seriously why must he die!!! :(