(Sorry, really short chapter with no vote - more of a tidbit, really, but don't worry, the next chapter is coming much sooner. As in 99% cha… morence it will come tomorrow. In the meantime, I hope this has no errors - I don't really have time to look over it! Sorry!)
[We should go to the supermarket.]
"The supermarket sounds like the right place to go to me," you tell her. "I don't think it'll be completely emptied out - and besides, if it is, we can just check somewhere else later." Zoey looks a little apprehensive, but she nods anyway, not disputing your choice. She wouldn't have a lot of room to protest even if she wanted to, considering she'd let you make the decision in the first place. Sorrel looks a lot more dissatisfied than Zoey does - but you aren't sure whether it's because of where you're headed or just her usual scowl in place. It's hard to tell with her.
Sorrel studies the map in Zoey's hand for a moment, then gives a jerk of… [view original content]
Your ears are still ringing as you drop to Zoey's side, shocked, taking in the growing puddle of blood she's now laying in. Her eyes are as … morewide as yours, and she's gasping, looking terrified, as blood spreads around her hands, which are frantically clutched at her upper torso, as if to try and keep the blood from spilling out. You can't tell exactly where she's been hit, shoulder or chest - but either way, it's bad, and she's losing blood fast. You're reminded of another time, a few weeks ago, when you were crouched next to someone else who was hurt like this. You shiver at the memory. Jack...
Before you can do anything to help Zoey, you're shoved roughly aside, where you tumble to the ground; picking yourself up, you see that Sorrel is in your place now, hurriedly trying to help Zoey stop the bleeding and mouthing things frantically to her as she does.
"Jesus Christ, Lloyd!" comes an angry shout, a female, and you turn to see a woman … [view original content]
Your ears are still ringing as you drop to Zoey's side, shocked, taking in the growing puddle of blood she's now laying in. Her eyes are as … morewide as yours, and she's gasping, looking terrified, as blood spreads around her hands, which are frantically clutched at her upper torso, as if to try and keep the blood from spilling out. You can't tell exactly where she's been hit, shoulder or chest - but either way, it's bad, and she's losing blood fast. You're reminded of another time, a few weeks ago, when you were crouched next to someone else who was hurt like this. You shiver at the memory. Jack...
Before you can do anything to help Zoey, you're shoved roughly aside, where you tumble to the ground; picking yourself up, you see that Sorrel is in your place now, hurriedly trying to help Zoey stop the bleeding and mouthing things frantically to her as she does.
"Jesus Christ, Lloyd!" comes an angry shout, a female, and you turn to see a woman … [view original content]
Your ears are still ringing as you drop to Zoey's side, shocked, taking in the growing puddle of blood she's now laying in. Her eyes are as … morewide as yours, and she's gasping, looking terrified, as blood spreads around her hands, which are frantically clutched at her upper torso, as if to try and keep the blood from spilling out. You can't tell exactly where she's been hit, shoulder or chest - but either way, it's bad, and she's losing blood fast. You're reminded of another time, a few weeks ago, when you were crouched next to someone else who was hurt like this. You shiver at the memory. Jack...
Before you can do anything to help Zoey, you're shoved roughly aside, where you tumble to the ground; picking yourself up, you see that Sorrel is in your place now, hurriedly trying to help Zoey stop the bleeding and mouthing things frantically to her as she does.
"Jesus Christ, Lloyd!" comes an angry shout, a female, and you turn to see a woman … [view original content]
Your ears are still ringing as you drop to Zoey's side, shocked, taking in the growing puddle of blood she's now laying in. Her eyes are as … morewide as yours, and she's gasping, looking terrified, as blood spreads around her hands, which are frantically clutched at her upper torso, as if to try and keep the blood from spilling out. You can't tell exactly where she's been hit, shoulder or chest - but either way, it's bad, and she's losing blood fast. You're reminded of another time, a few weeks ago, when you were crouched next to someone else who was hurt like this. You shiver at the memory. Jack...
Before you can do anything to help Zoey, you're shoved roughly aside, where you tumble to the ground; picking yourself up, you see that Sorrel is in your place now, hurriedly trying to help Zoey stop the bleeding and mouthing things frantically to her as she does.
"Jesus Christ, Lloyd!" comes an angry shout, a female, and you turn to see a woman … [view original content]
Your ears are still ringing as you drop to Zoey's side, shocked, taking in the growing puddle of blood she's now laying in. Her eyes are as … morewide as yours, and she's gasping, looking terrified, as blood spreads around her hands, which are frantically clutched at her upper torso, as if to try and keep the blood from spilling out. You can't tell exactly where she's been hit, shoulder or chest - but either way, it's bad, and she's losing blood fast. You're reminded of another time, a few weeks ago, when you were crouched next to someone else who was hurt like this. You shiver at the memory. Jack...
Before you can do anything to help Zoey, you're shoved roughly aside, where you tumble to the ground; picking yourself up, you see that Sorrel is in your place now, hurriedly trying to help Zoey stop the bleeding and mouthing things frantically to her as she does.
"Jesus Christ, Lloyd!" comes an angry shout, a female, and you turn to see a woman … [view original content]
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im too late to vote damn
"Fine. We'll stay here with you. But it doesn't mean we forgive you."
"Fine. We'll stay here with you. But it doesn't mean we forgive you."
Lloyd = Nick? Except the bullet didn't miss? :O
"Fine. We'll stay here with you. But it doesn't mean we forgive you."
"Fine. We'll stay here with you. But it doesn't mean we forgive you."
"Fine. We'll stay here with you. But it doesn't mean we forgive you."
Forums aren't working for Sardines, so there might be a while before the next part comes.
Get rekt
Forums aren't working for Sardines, so there might be a while before the next part comes.
Just to make sure that you guys know, but forums aren't working for Sardines, so there might be a while before the next part comes.
Just to make sure that you guys know, but forums aren't working for Sardines, so there might be a while before the next part comes.
Now they knooooooooooooooooow!
I'm pretty
I'm pretty sure that you guys didn't know this, but forums aren't working for Sardines, so you'll have to wait a bit before the next part is out.
You are you sexy beast.
Now kiss.
Just to make sure that you guys know, but forums aren't working for Sardines, so there might be a while before the next part comes.
I want her back, she has to continue with her story, I can't wait to se my character in
Bump
She's dead... Dead... Dead I say...
NO! THAT'S NOT TRUE. She'll come back... Right? ;_;
Ribs in peas.
Wait did she actually leave or something? I thought she was having problems with logging in. I miss this so much
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y9SUZGOOXkY
Our great writer will be back... some day...
Ouch, my feels.
HEY! IS ANYONE STILL INTERESTED?
SARDINES WILL ONLY KEEP WRITING IF THERE ARE PEOPLE WHO ARE INTERESTED
SO PLEASE
I'm always interested in any stuff Devyn does so I wish that she'll keep writing!
I'm still interested, it's Devyn after all.
So, there's the possibility that this amazing Fanfiction is going to be continued? Hell yes, I'm still interested!
Yep.
Devyn! You're back!
HOLY SHIT it's Devyn!
ignore this
(y)
YES!
So interested I died of interestingness.
Yay!