The final hour

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  • Make a list of suspects

    It´s Jake

    Awesome Chapter!!!

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 3 Rick: I think it's Henry. Matthew: Me too. Then he elbows Henry in the face and Luke pins him to the table.

  • Make a list of suspects

    It´s Jake

    Awesome Chapter!!!

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 3 Rick: I think it's Henry. Matthew: Me too. Then he elbows Henry in the face and Luke pins him to the table.

  • make a list of suspects

    Rip Sydney. :'(

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 3 Rick: I think it's Henry. Matthew: Me too. Then he elbows Henry in the face and Luke pins him to the table.

  • Call the police

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 3 Rick: I think it's Henry. Matthew: Me too. Then he elbows Henry in the face and Luke pins him to the table.

  • Call the police

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 3 Rick: I think it's Henry. Matthew: Me too. Then he elbows Henry in the face and Luke pins him to the table.

  • Where's the next part?

  • Oh, sorry. I was busy with school, total drama island interactive fanfic, and Forum among us. The next part comes later today.

    finlander posted: »

    Where's the next part?

  • The final hour part 4

    I thought that calling the police would be what the killer excepted, so I decided to make a list of suspects.

    Rick: I'll make a list of suspects. We basically can only confirm that Luke and Henry aren't the killers. So, Matthew. You were closest to Sydney when the murder happened...

    Matthew: You think I did this?! Jake was closest to the lights BOTH TIMES, Sherlock!

    Rick: Good point.

    Matthew: No shit.

    Rick: Matthew, we still can't count you out.

    Matthew: Hmph.

    I walked over to Jake and get in his face

    Rick: SO. Jake... You were the only person who could have turned out the lights.

    Jake: This is bull shit, man!

    Rick: Face it, Jake. You did it.

    Jake: NO I--

    Then the lights turned out. We stood there and braced ourselves, for the light to turn back on. But nothing happened. We just heard a knife being picked up, and the sounds of fading footsteps of the killer.

    Mary: What do we do now...?

    Rick: Get him or Split up and hide. We're not safe.

  • Get him!

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 4 I thought that calling the police would be what the killer excepted, so I decided to make a list of suspects. Ri

  • Split up and hide. We're not safe.

    Awesome Chapter!!!!

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 4 I thought that calling the police would be what the killer excepted, so I decided to make a list of suspects. Ri

  • Thanks!

    supersagig posted: »

    Split up and hide. We're not safe. Awesome Chapter!!!!

  • Split up and hide

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 4 I thought that calling the police would be what the killer excepted, so I decided to make a list of suspects. Ri

  • Get him!!!

    Great chapter!

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 4 I thought that calling the police would be what the killer excepted, so I decided to make a list of suspects. Ri

  • It's a trap! Split up and hide. We're not safe

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 4 I thought that calling the police would be what the killer excepted, so I decided to make a list of suspects. Ri

  • The final hour part 4

    Rick: Split up and hide!

    Mary: You got it!

    They all spilt up. Mary and her group went one way, and Rick and his group went another.

    Mary's group

    Henry: I'll be right back. I gotta piss.

    Luke: Well, moron, you should know that you shouldn't leave the group.

    Henry: I really gotta go.

    Mary: Of course. Just go.

    Henry: OK.

    So Henry left. While he was walking, he heard a noise. He whipped around and got punched in the face so hard he lost a tooth.

    Henry: BASTARD! COME AND FIGHT ME LIKE A MAN!

    Then Henry got kicked, and Henry turned around and tackled him/her. He punched him, and the killer stopped moving. Henry got up.

    Henry: Well, won't they be pleased.

    Then Henry heard a noise, turned around, screamed, and then got stabbed in the eye. He died when the killer started chuckling.

    Rick's group

    Rick: What was that?

    Jake: It sounded like Henry! Should we go?!

    Go see Henry or Go back to hiding

    Tell me what ya'll think! I know Henry's death was stupid :P

  • Go back to hiding

    Awesome Chapter!!!!!

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 4 Rick: Split up and hide! Mary: You got it! They all spilt up. Mary and her group went one way, and Rick and h

  • Go back to hiding

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 4 Rick: Split up and hide! Mary: You got it! They all spilt up. Mary and her group went one way, and Rick and h

  • Go back to hiding

    Great chapter!

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 4 Rick: Split up and hide! Mary: You got it! They all spilt up. Mary and her group went one way, and Rick and h

  • Go back hiding

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 4 Rick: Split up and hide! Mary: You got it! They all spilt up. Mary and her group went one way, and Rick and h

  • Go back to hiding

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    The final hour part 4 Rick: Split up and hide! Mary: You got it! They all spilt up. Mary and her group went one way, and Rick and h

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