It was great, really great. Almost made me think of the ending of 'Armageddon' for a moment. I loved the ending and really can't wait for S2. " 9/10 great story, Mr.quality™"
The Mission Finale
After the rest Xavier and Roland keep walking,until they see the crash area
R-Holy shit...Its almost over...
The… morey run towards the helicopter
R-Let me grab the data, then we can all for help!
X-Alri-
A shotgun blast goes off, throwing Xavier across the room
R-Shit!
???-Not so fast captain...
A rough young soldier with a shotgun walks out from behind the helicopter
R-Who the fuck are you?!
???-Officer Jeremy, only survivor of this wreck.
R-What...Xavier...
J-Sorry, that datas not going anywhere.
R-WHY! We can end this!
J-This world is corrupt, before and after the apocalypse...
R-We cant let it end, we can all survive!
J-No, theres no going back...
R-Please, we came so far, lost so many...
J-I dont care... Jeremy loads his shotgun
Suddenly one pistol bullet goes through his shoulder
X-Fucker...
Roland punches Jeremy and takes his shotgun, he then procedes to pu… [view original content]
X-Alri-
A shotgun blast goes off, throwing Xavier across the room
FUCK.
X-No, No! Try the little paperclip that always … morepopped up on mine, he helped, when the son of a bitch wasnt annoying me!
I lol'd. Again.
-Sarge watch out!
Suddenly undead Jeremy hops up and fights Roland to the edge of the roof, then pushes him over
X-NOOOOOO!!!
Roland falls, while he does, he thinks about his life, accompli- SPLAT, Roland hit the pavement, head first, dead
NOOOOOOOOOO!
Madison wakes up in a room, its dark, cold, nobody else. Suddenly the door swings open, Violet comes running in
V-Shit, shit, Madison!
M-Wha...
V-I dont have time...
Violet runs over to Madison and tries to get her bindings off
M-Wha...Whats going on?
V-Okay, your cowboy friend shot and killed Zane after an argument. Now some crazy guy is shooting up the fucking place.
Suddenly yelling comes from the hallway
V-Shit...Stay quiet...
Jack comes running in with a community guard and Tim
J-Unlock her!
???-Okay!
The guard unlocks Madison and then Jack shoots the guard
J-Hey there sweet thing, miss me? Well I dont care, your coming with me!
Violet jumps out of the shadows with a knife, she cuts Tim's neck. She lunges at Jack only to stab him in the shoulder, he takes the knife and cuts her throat
J-Bitch!
Violet falls to the ground and he shoots her, Jack grabs a now crying Madison
J-Its time to end this...
Main character switch
R-God damn it!
S-Calm down!
R-Its been two days and weve done jack shit! Im ending this!
S-Youre going to get someone killed!
R-Yeah...I am...
Randy grabs a hand gun and walks out
Randy walks towards the gates of The Community, two guards point their rifles at him
???-Stop! Put away your weapons and come with us!
R-Fuck.That.
Randy shoots both of them, one falls and Randy takes his grenade and blows up the gates. He takes one of their rifles and starts walking in.
R-Lock and fucking load,assholes...
Randy starts shooting everyone while walking towards the main factory, dual wielding pistol and assault rifle
Randy reaches the factory and walks inside, he drops his rifle. Inside is Jack holding Madison at gun point, everyone is standing still
The Hunters Chapter 15
Madison wakes up in a room, its dark, cold, nobody else. Suddenly the door swings open, Violet comes running in
… more V-Shit, shit, Madison!
M-Wha...
V-I dont have time...
Violet runs over to Madison and tries to get her bindings off
M-Wha...Whats going on?
V-Okay, your cowboy friend shot and killed Zane after an argument. Now some crazy guy is shooting up the fucking place.
Suddenly yelling comes from the hallway
V-Shit...Stay quiet...
Jack comes running in with a community guard and Tim
J-Unlock her!
???-Okay!
The guard unlocks Madison and then Jack shoots the guard
J-Hey there sweet thing, miss me? Well I dont care, your coming with me!
Violet jumps out of the shadows with a knife, she cuts Tim's neck. She lunges at Jack only to stab him in the shoulder, he takes the knife and cuts her throat
J-Bitch!
Violet falls to the ground and he shoots her, Jack grabs a now crying Ma… [view original content]
The Hunters Chapter 15
Madison wakes up in a room, its dark, cold, nobody else. Suddenly the door swings open, Violet comes running in
… more V-Shit, shit, Madison!
M-Wha...
V-I dont have time...
Violet runs over to Madison and tries to get her bindings off
M-Wha...Whats going on?
V-Okay, your cowboy friend shot and killed Zane after an argument. Now some crazy guy is shooting up the fucking place.
Suddenly yelling comes from the hallway
V-Shit...Stay quiet...
Jack comes running in with a community guard and Tim
J-Unlock her!
???-Okay!
The guard unlocks Madison and then Jack shoots the guard
J-Hey there sweet thing, miss me? Well I dont care, your coming with me!
Violet jumps out of the shadows with a knife, she cuts Tim's neck. She lunges at Jack only to stab him in the shoulder, he takes the knife and cuts her throat
J-Bitch!
Violet falls to the ground and he shoots her, Jack grabs a now crying Ma… [view original content]
The Hunters Chapter 15
Madison wakes up in a room, its dark, cold, nobody else. Suddenly the door swings open, Violet comes running in
… more V-Shit, shit, Madison!
M-Wha...
V-I dont have time...
Violet runs over to Madison and tries to get her bindings off
M-Wha...Whats going on?
V-Okay, your cowboy friend shot and killed Zane after an argument. Now some crazy guy is shooting up the fucking place.
Suddenly yelling comes from the hallway
V-Shit...Stay quiet...
Jack comes running in with a community guard and Tim
J-Unlock her!
???-Okay!
The guard unlocks Madison and then Jack shoots the guard
J-Hey there sweet thing, miss me? Well I dont care, your coming with me!
Violet jumps out of the shadows with a knife, she cuts Tim's neck. She lunges at Jack only to stab him in the shoulder, he takes the knife and cuts her throat
J-Bitch!
Violet falls to the ground and he shoots her, Jack grabs a now crying Ma… [view original content]
The Hunters Finale
(Choice-Surrender)
R-Fine...Dont hurt her.
Randy puts his gun on the ground
J-Fool...
Jack shoots Randy in… more the heart
M-Noooooo!
Randy falls to the ground dying
J-Good riddan-
Madison bites into Jack's thumb, harder and harder till she rips it off, Jack throws her
J-You FUCKING BITCH! You ripped my thumb OFF, what the FUCK is wrong with you!
Jack aims at Madison and shoots, he misses and she tackles him. She claws at him, soon ripping his eye out.
J-What the FUCK ARE YOU!
He flips her on the ground and he grabs his knife trying to kill Madison
J-Just FUCKING DIE!
A single bullet goes through his head, Madison looks over and sees Savior
S-Are you okay?
Savior runs over and hugs her
M-How-how did you get in here.
S-Pet walkers...Wheres Randy?
Savior looks over to see a dead Randy
S-Shit...Look away.
M-Why?
A single gunshot goes off
M-I understand...
S-H… [view original content]
Comments
I mean shot with a shotgun and left alone.
He needs a savior.
Still got the Hunters and Finale.
I think we all see where this is going....
Yes, yes we do. I think I'm having to much fun doing the credits though.
Or do we...The Hunters ending is based on you...
Do I just submit a character here? Do I choose a group? Is it too late?
Too late but theres season 2 coming Soon.
Just enjoy the story, theres still a couple chapters to write.
I'll just start reading at the beginning of Season 2. See you then!
You will miss a lot of- and hes gone...
FUCK.
I lol'd. Again.
NOOOOOOOOOO!
Annnnd for Xavier being alone?
Shit...
Lol it's ok, I got him on Steam xD
RIP More Golden comments. Dayum.
Me?
Your choices... XD
...Ima gonna kill a main character...
I know how TT felt when they killed Luke...
TT: "Shock factor results: ...Shit."
Off topic, am I the only one that thought it was a good death? ;(
I just liked Luke...So im just upset, still.
Still going to kill a main character or two based on the next choice.
Oh, good. I thought you were talking about me.
The Hunters Chapter 15
Madison wakes up in a room, its dark, cold, nobody else. Suddenly the door swings open, Violet comes running in
V-Shit, shit, Madison!
M-Wha...
V-I dont have time...
Violet runs over to Madison and tries to get her bindings off
M-Wha...Whats going on?
V-Okay, your cowboy friend shot and killed Zane after an argument. Now some crazy guy is shooting up the fucking place.
Suddenly yelling comes from the hallway
V-Shit...Stay quiet...
Jack comes running in with a community guard and Tim
J-Unlock her!
???-Okay!
The guard unlocks Madison and then Jack shoots the guard
J-Hey there sweet thing, miss me? Well I dont care, your coming with me!
Violet jumps out of the shadows with a knife, she cuts Tim's neck. She lunges at Jack only to stab him in the shoulder, he takes the knife and cuts her throat
J-Bitch!
Violet falls to the ground and he shoots her, Jack grabs a now crying Madison
J-Its time to end this...
Main character switch
R-God damn it!
S-Calm down!
R-Its been two days and weve done jack shit! Im ending this!
S-Youre going to get someone killed!
R-Yeah...I am...
Randy grabs a hand gun and walks out
Randy walks towards the gates of The Community, two guards point their rifles at him
???-Stop! Put away your weapons and come with us!
R-Fuck.That.
Randy shoots both of them, one falls and Randy takes his grenade and blows up the gates. He takes one of their rifles and starts walking in.
R-Lock and fucking load,assholes...
Randy starts shooting everyone while walking towards the main factory, dual wielding pistol and assault rifle
Randy reaches the factory and walks inside, he drops his rifle. Inside is Jack holding Madison at gun point, everyone is standing still
J-Make.Your.Move.
(Choice-Insanely important)
http://strawpoll.me/2681772
where´s the link
Its up now
;P
Shooting is a bad idea in general.
He could move and Randy could shoot Madison...
Cliffhangers! Fucking cliffhangers!
Lemme guess, Golden.
You're comment is dead and you want to kill a main character now? XD
a question
What happened to Tim and Jack?
...Wait.Till.Next.Chapter.
Tims dead, Jack is holding Madison at gunpoint...
Did you even read? XD
Not the last to die...
I'd rather not.
I guess you wern't kidding, Violet bit the dust.
...
WAIT I WAS RIGHT! YEAAAAAAA xD
the words confuse me
XD its okay.
The Hunters Finale
(Choice-Surrender)
R-Fine...Dont hurt her.
Randy puts his gun on the ground
J-Fool...
Jack shoots Randy in the heart
M-Noooooo!
Randy falls to the ground dying
J-Good riddan-
Madison bites into Jack's thumb, harder and harder till she rips it off, Jack throws her
J-You FUCKING BITCH! You ripped my thumb OFF, what the FUCK is wrong with you!
Jack aims at Madison and shoots, he misses and she tackles him. She claws at him, soon ripping his eye out.
J-What the FUCK ARE YOU!
He flips her on the ground and he grabs his knife trying to kill Madison
J-Just FUCKING DIE!
A single bullet goes through his head, Madison looks over and sees Savior
S-Are you okay?
Savior runs over and hugs her
M-How-how did you get in here.
S-Pet walkers...Wheres Randy?
Savior looks over to see a dead Randy
S-Shit...Look away.
M-Why?
A single gunshot goes off
M-I understand...
S-Hes better now...
M-Lets get everyone and leave...
S-Agreed...
They both walk out of the warehouse
End of The Hunters
(The finale will release tonight)
Poor Randy...
But he can rest easy knowin Savior is looking after Madison.
I said I was going to kill someone.
And it seems the Forums got the message.
Your comment didn't disappear xD
Scare tactics XD