The Walking Dead: No Safety is over.

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  • What about Trey's brother?

    Oh shit indeed...

  • oh, he's back at the camp sleeping.

    What about Trey's brother?

  • edited November 2014

    Episode 1 Chapter 4

    Jake: Fuck, Fuck, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK!!! Where is she?!

    Trey: She Might be dead.

    Jake: Don't say that! DON'T YOU FUCKING SAY THAT!

    Melisa: Guys, Calm Down! We're in the middle of the woods! Your gonna attra--

    (walkers moaning)

    Jake: Fuuuck...

    Trey: Run!

    (they run through the woods)

    Jake: (pant) Ugh, you... think we... Lost em?

    Melisa: Yeah, I think so. (pant, pant, pant)

    Trey: uhh, Guys? The van...

    Nickolas: G-Guys!

    Jake: Nick! What the hell happened?!

    Nickolas: She-She just...

    Jake: What?

    Zara: Guys, Come here...

    Jake: ZARA, OH MY GOD!!!

    Zara: It-It's Fine... I had the supplies...

    Jake: How did this happen?!

    Zara: I was on a supply run with Nick, i got bitten, we had the car with us, He took the arm off fast. We had Meds so I'm gonna be okay.

    Jake: Alright, But we gotta go.

    Nickolas: Hey... Jake?

    Jake: Yeah?

    Nickolas: They still have the RV right? Because they're on the way here.

    Jake: What?!

    (David pulls up in the RV)

    David: Guys! In!

    Jake: Why? Wait, Wheres Wilson and James?

    David: Bandits attacked us! He Jumped in the way of a gunshot Heading for James! they were both kidnapped!

    Jake: Oh shit!

    End Chapter...

  • Damn, looking back on it, this chapter sucked, no decsions, forced action and drama, and i am so ashamed of that chapter...

    Episode 1 Chapter 4 Jake: Fuck, Fuck, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK!!! Where is she?! Trey: She Might be dead. Jake: Don't say that!

  • Name: Eva Kirschner

    Backstory: Eva was born in Frankfurt, Germany in a gamily of a teacher and a doctor. She had an older sister Joanna and a grumpy old black cat called Gloom. She always impressed adults and other kids of how smart and cunning she was. Eva studied very hard so she finally attended a university of a hotle business, but eventually she became interested in stealing so she became a part of a big and noble criminal organization. They were quite successful and they all decided to move to America to hit a jackpot. When the apocalypse started, the half of her gang died and she had to run for her life. Currently she's just a lone wolf that tries to forget her past.

    Age: 27

    Skill: She can pick locks, she's very agile and fast, she can use her intellect to make good plans

    Relationships: Eva has parents and a sister back in Germany so she doesn't know their fate and she misses them.

    Personality: Crafty, insidious, dexterous, smart, imperious, stubborn, sublime, faithful, moral (she doesn't want to kill), untrusty

    Appearance: Tall, pretty slim but muscular woman with wheat blonde hair and greenish blue eyes. Wears a red jacket, jeans and hiking boots.

    Alt text

    Something About Yourself: Eva still can rob and steal from people, but she doesn't want to kill unless it's out of mercy or in a self-defense; since she was in a big gang se believes in loyality and always have people's back though she barely trust anyone except close people; has a sofr spot for animals and likes cats

    Weapon of Choice: A pistol and a machete (though she can handle any weapon)

    Gender: Female

  • Okay eva! We'll fit you in to the story sometime! thank you!

    Name: Eva Kirschner Backstory: Eva was born in Frankfurt, Germany in a gamily of a teacher and a doctor. She had an older sister Joanna a

  • Nah, it didn't suck. Not all chapters have to have a choice. I actually thought it was good.

    Damn, looking back on it, this chapter sucked, no decsions, forced action and drama, and i am so ashamed of that chapter...

  • Leo is 15

  • GOD DARN IT ALL. Sigh. ok, i will change that, anymore details about leo?

    Leo is 15

  • Calm down lol, well he is very jealous of Trey and he has a lot of resentment towards him.

    GOD DARN IT ALL. Sigh. ok, i will change that, anymore details about leo?

  • i was calm, i was just kidding. ok. well i will make sure his personality is fit in.

    Calm down lol, well he is very jealous of Trey and he has a lot of resentment towards him.

  • edited November 2014

    Ok lol

    i was calm, i was just kidding. ok. well i will make sure his personality is fit in.

  • I'm taking a break, I will post the next chapter tomorrow i hope.

  • edited November 2014

    Episode 1 Chapter 5

    (In the RV)

    Trey: So, What the hell do we do?

    Leo: Hey, Calm Down Trey.

    Trey: How can I?!

    Leo: Just Chill the Fuck Out! This isn't Helping!

    Jake: Shh. Shh. It's Okay, It's Okay...

    Melisa: (Sobbing) It-Its My fault, My screaming Must have led the towards us...

    Jake: Hey, Hey. Calm down, You'll be okay, don't worry. Hey, Dad, Where the Hell do we go?

    David: We need 5 People to find them. So we have to choose, The rest will camp out somewhere. What do you guys Think?

    [Choose 5 Group Members to Look For James and Wilson] [Give Up on them]

    Meanwhile...

    Wilson: Ugh... Oh fuck... James? Oh shit, JAMES!

    James: Get off me you mother fuckers!! Agh! OFF ME!!!

    Bandit: Shut Up!

    Wilson: Ugh, Fuck, My shoulder. Damnit, what the fuck should i do?!

    [Find Exit] [Save James] [Wait]

    Meanwhile...

    Eva: I Think i spotted them, In an RV.

    Walkie Talkie: So, Approach them, They might need help.

    Eva: Okay, Hang on.

    [Wait for a Better Time] [Approach Friendly] [Approach with Gun]

    Chapter END

  • sorry it was so short, I have a way better plot coming up.

    Episode 1 Chapter 5 (In the RV) Trey: So, What the hell do we do? Leo: Hey, Calm Down Trey. Trey: How can I?! Leo: Just Chill

  • This is too much , what the hell is going on
    sorry James but:
    [Find Exit]

    Episode 1 Chapter 5 (In the RV) Trey: So, What the hell do we do? Leo: Hey, Calm Down Trey. Trey: How can I?! Leo: Just Chill

  • Also could you please guys give up on Wilson and James , please

    supersagig posted: »

    This is too much , what the hell is going on sorry James but: [Find Exit]

  • I do not know who to pick in the first decision.

    [Save James] Why not?

    [Approach Friendly] Better not do shit

    Episode 1 Chapter 5 (In the RV) Trey: So, What the hell do we do? Leo: Hey, Calm Down Trey. Trey: How can I?! Leo: Just Chill

  • Hmm. Sounds Like you don't like james, also, We don't know yet, maybe James is okay, and maybe They all make it out if they save him, maybe the opisite, Only i know though. so it's you guys choice.

    supersagig posted: »

    Also could you please guys give up on Wilson and James , please

  • Well, this is setting up the future, i just wanted to get it out of the way.

    supersagig posted: »

    This is too much , what the hell is going on sorry James but: [Find Exit]

  • edited November 2014

    Nah , just want a reason to have Wilson pushing Trey again xd

    Hmm. Sounds Like you don't like james, also, We don't know yet, maybe James is okay, and maybe They all make it out if they save him, maybe the opisite, Only i know though. so it's you guys choice.

  • i should vote on everything or only on the mine one

    Hmm. Sounds Like you don't like james, also, We don't know yet, maybe James is okay, and maybe They all make it out if they save him, maybe the opisite, Only i know though. so it's you guys choice.

  • XD okay, your vote, it's cool

    supersagig posted: »

    Nah , just want a reason to have Wilson pushing Trey again xd

  • Vote on everything else too, we need the votes, your votes count too!

    supersagig posted: »

    i should vote on everything or only on the mine one

  • well then
    [Give Up on them] A reason to push Trey xd
    [Find Exit] This is too much for me
    [Approach with Gun] Why not?

    Vote on everything else too, we need the votes, your votes count too!

  • Hmm, your version of the story sounds very evil... I LIKE IT! But still, we have to see what everyone else says. we can't just vote for 1 person.

    supersagig posted: »

    well then [Give Up on them] A reason to push Trey xd [Find Exit] This is too much for me [Approach with Gun] Why not?

  • David, Jake, Trey, Leo, and Melisa to look for James and Wilson.

    Wilson waits to see if he can save James or not.

    Eva approaches friendly.

    Episode 1 Chapter 5 (In the RV) Trey: So, What the hell do we do? Leo: Hey, Calm Down Trey. Trey: How can I?! Leo: Just Chill

  • Okay. your vote will be put in.

    David, Jake, Trey, Leo, and Melisa to look for James and Wilson. Wilson waits to see if he can save James or not. Eva approaches friendly.

  • Wilson and Trey should fight.

    supersagig posted: »

    Nah , just want a reason to have Wilson pushing Trey again xd

  • Episode 1 Chapter 6

    [Give Up On Them]

    Jake: I, We just cant risk it. I'm sorry guys.

    Zara: No! Someone has to help them!

    Melisa: (Melisa runs out of the RV and looks for them)

    Jake: MELISA! WAIT!!!

    Jake: I've gotta ge--

    David: Stop! Stay here!

    Jake: NO! (Jake runs After melisa) MELISA! WAIT! COME BACK!

    David: Fuck Me...

    Nickolas: I'll Go. Stay Here.

    David: Okay, Hurry, be Careful.

    [Approach the RV Friendly]

    Eva: Um, Hello?

    David: (Points Gun at Eva) Who are you?

    Eva: Whoa, Whoa, Whoa. Chill out, It's Okay.

    Trey: Hello...

    Eva: My name is Eva, I'm With a Big group Not far from here, we're at Walmart. we have tons of supplies, Our leader, She is real friendly.

    David: Okay, What do you need from us?

    Eva: Our leader is taking care of a child, 5 Years Old To be exact. But he has A medical condition. It makes it hard for him to breath, We need Medicine. If you give us Meds, We give you shelter. What do you say?

    David: Okay, We'll come with you and give you meds, But we'll only stay for a couple of nights.

    Eva: Okay Lets G--

    David: But, We have to wait for the others.

    Eva: Okay, where are they?

    [Lie to Eva] [Tell Her the Truth]

    Meanwhile...

    Jake: MELISA! WAIT! COME BACK! PLEASE!!!

    Nickolas: (Nick drops to the ground) Wait...

    Jake: Nick?! whats--

    Nickolas: When i cut zara's arm off, I, was bitten.

    Jake: No... No. NO NO NO NO NO!!! WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL US?!

    Melisa: (stops) Huh? (walks to jake)

    Nickolas: Y-You gotta end it.

    Melisa: Oh my god...

    Jake: (Crying) Okay-Okay Uncle Nick, I-I can do it...

    Nickolas: Don't be sad kid. Hey, Give me a moment with the girl.

    Jake: Okay...

    Melisa: What is it?

    Nickolas: T-Take care of him, Okay? I see the way he looks at you. It's, The same way his father, Looked at his mom. H-He really likes you. and, I know, you like him... Too. Please, Keep him safe, For me?

    Melisa: Yes sir... (Tears start falling from her eyes)

    Nickolas: (Cough) Hey jake, Come Here.

    Jake: Ye-Yeah? (sobbing)

    Nickolas: be good... I love you.

    Jake: I love you too.

    (Jake shoots nick)

    Jake: No... (Starts crying and hugs Melisa)

    Melisa: Shh, Shh. It's okay, It's Okay. (She Smiles and Starts crying) (she says in her head) I do, like him.\

    Jake: Lets go back.

    [Go back] [Keep Searching]

    Meanwhile...

    [Wait]

    Wilson: I'll Just, wait for him...

    James: AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

    Wilson: Oh god...

    CHAPTER END

  • DAYUM. dis one turned out good for me.

    Episode 1 Chapter 6 [Give Up On Them] Jake: I, We just cant risk it. I'm sorry guys. Zara: No! Someone has to help them! Melisa:

  • New chapter out now, and damn was it hard to write.

    Wilson and Trey should fight.

  • Wilson is going to the exit that motherfucking place now

    DAYUM. dis one turned out good for me.

  • [Lie to Eva] Why not?
    [Keep Searching] If there just 2 of them , yes

    Episode 1 Chapter 6 [Give Up On Them] Jake: I, We just cant risk it. I'm sorry guys. Zara: No! Someone has to help them! Melisa:

  • we shall see. remember, you have to make descions as a group. if the majority of the group says stay then you know that. But also, I promise you Wilson will not die, (In this episode... >:D)

    supersagig posted: »

    Wilson is going to the exit that motherfucking place now

  • it was 1-1-1 .¬¬. I voted for leave , theunkguy for saving him and kenny4president for waiting

    we shall see. remember, you have to make descions as a group. if the majority of the group says stay then you know that. But also, I promise you Wilson will not die, (In this episode... >:D)

  • I decided it was unfair to save him, and it was unfair to leave. so even though it was 1-1-1 i decided it would be fair just to wait.

    supersagig posted: »

    it was 1-1-1 .¬¬. I voted for leave , theunkguy for saving him and kenny4president for waiting

  • I am pretty sure that are either raping him or eating/torturing him

    I decided it was unfair to save him, and it was unfair to leave. so even though it was 1-1-1 i decided it would be fair just to wait.

  • Chapter 7 Episode 1

    [Lie to Eva]

    David: Oh, yeah, they went to find some things. Supplies and such.

    Eva: Oh, Okay! (eva smiles)

    Rebecca: H-Hi...

    Eva: Well hi there! I'm Eva. Whats your name?

    Rebecca: My name is rebecca!

    Meanwhile...

    [Keep Searching]

    Melisa: I'm sorry, We Have to find James and Wilson...

    Jake: Yeah... (Sniff) Lets go.

    (They continue through the woods)

    Meanwhile...

    Wilson: Fuck, FUCK! Ugh. AGH!!! (wilson stands up as the bullet wound opens up)

    Wilson: DAMNIT! (wilson falls on the table.) Ugh... Owww. Huh, an AK. This should help...

    (He sneaks through the area past the bandits)

    Wilson: Mmg... Ugh. James! what the fuck?!

    James: T-Th-They stabbed me, tortured me, Tried to get the info... I, Refused...

    Wilson: Shit, C'mon, we gotta get you the fuck out of here man...

    James: No... I'm, Gonna turn... Go...

    Wilson: NO! I'M NOT FUCKIN--

    James: NOW! GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE, TAKE CARE OF DAN AND BECCA! DON'T TAKE ME WITH YOU!!! GO!

    Wilson: Fuck No!

    James: GO DAMNIT!

    Wilson: O-Okay...

    James: Hey.

    Wilson: Yeah?

    James: Let me turn. I wanna rip these guys throats out...

    Wilson: Fuck yeah, Go ahead man...

    (The two shake hands)

    Wilson: Bye...

    (Wilson leaves)

    Meanwhile...

    (Jake and Melisa walk through the woods)

    Jake: I'm sorry you had to see me like that.

    Melisa: Shut up. You should be like that... It's Only Natural...

    Jake: Thank you... You, Look nice, now that you got cleaned up last night.

    Melisa: Thank you.

    Jake: It's Cool. I mean it though. You, look pretty.

    Melisa: Jake, I--

    Jake: Oh shit! Wilson!

    Wilson: Guys...

    Jake: Dude, Holy shit! Your shoulder! Are you okay?! You look petrified...

    Wilson: James, He's, He's Fucking Gone...

    Jake: Oh god...

    Wilson: Lets go...

    (They leave Together)

    (Arriving back at the camp, they explained everything)

    David: Oh my god...

    Eva: Eh hem. I'd Really hate to interupt, But we've gotta leave in about an hour, I'll take you back to camp.

    David: Yeah okay...

    They leave together. Chapter End.

  • Great Episode!!!!!

    Chapter 7 Episode 1 [Lie to Eva] David: Oh, yeah, they went to find some things. Supplies and such. Eva: Oh, Okay! (eva smiles)

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