Walking Dead: Great Follies (Fan FIc)

edited September 2013 in The Walking Dead
This is a Purely Original Story set in the Walking Dead universe. So yes. it is Fan Fiction.

Do expect a few characters from the game. (maybe some from the comic?)

On any Note. Here's some of the Story. I'll stop at each -Major choice- for Laughs. See which Choice gets the Most Votes. (i May or May not use the most popular vote. Depends how i feel)

here it is anywhoo.

This game series adapts to the choices you make.

The story is tailored by how you play.

TIME-WASTERS UNITED

Presents

In association with

My apparent immunity to Carpel Tunnel

THE WALKING DEAD: GREAT FOLLIES
Episode 1: Home Run
Day 4


Liam Dentlee Was Sleeping on the Coach while his House Phone Continued to Ring.Walkers were Outside, Either Trying to eat his Window or trying to bust through, There was a Note on the Door and The television was still on, it was on the news Channel, Reporting Numerous Incidents involving What appears to be a Undead Epidemic. And How you should Steer Clear from anyone you suspect to be Infected.

"Bites Appear to be what mainly Causes The Infec
tion to spread..." RING RING "(AAAH!) (GET IT OFFA ME!!!) I...I need to be going now. WABE wishes you as much luck as the-AARGH!NNNGH!GRRAA!!"

Liam Sprung Up.The Scream from the News Reporter Ringing in His Ears, (RING! RING!)

(o) Look at the TV
The TV currently displayed an empty Blue Screen that News reporters always stand behind.Liam Shuddered at the Screams from the TV before It turned to Static. Liam wondered as to why he had the TV on in the first Place, It wasn't like (RING! RING!) he watched it that Much, Guess his parents ignored him and put the NEWS on while he was asleep and forgot to turn it off.

(o) Look at Remote
The Remote was laying on the Table near a Smoke Tray and Empty Cola Bottle. Liam Remembered that it was Universal, Too bad he didn't know any of the Codes.

(o) Pick up Remote
Seeing it as pointlessly Lying there, Liam Picked up the Remote. The Television was nothign but Static,

(o) Turn of TV with Remote
]Liam Aimed the Television Remote and Pressed the Off Button. Nothing Happened, Batteries Run out. Liam Guessed, He got off his Chair and Turned the Television Off Manually (RING! RING!). He Stood up after Turning it Off, and Lept back in suprise as he saw his Neighbour's Grandma, all Rotted and Bleeding from the Mouth, without a Arm, Trying to Climb over the Fence.

"What the...?" Liam Asked. Walking Backwards and Nearly Tripping over a Video Cassette he lazily Left on the Floor Earlier. (RING! RING! RING! RING!)
"We're sorry, you're call cannot be taken at the moment. Please leave a message, after the Beep. BEEP!" Liam's Answerning Machine Went.
"Sue, Sue Honey, This is James! I'm Calling from Macon, Things are, Things are really out of control! The Things you've heard on the News, they're Real! In fact, They ate my Boss! Things are getting really-Really Bad here. Take Liam and Cindi and get far away, Get far-aaaaagh!!!" BEEEP!

Liam stood still, As the Message Continued, allowing him to hear all the ungodly sounds occuring as his dad was eaten alive by some strange creature. he heard raspy breathing from the Kitchen. He looked in, the undead Grandma from next Door suddenly Jumped at him. Trying to get a Good shot at his Neck. Her Hands On his Chest, Liam Put his Hands in front of her and tried to Pull away

>>>>>>>>Q<<<<<<<<
Liam Pulled His Hands Furhter away from his Chest, Consequently Giving him some Space away from her. "GET OFF ME!" He yelled in panic, wandering what the heck happened to her

[E]

Liam Pushed her Right off him giving him enough time to make a run, But the Fallen Zombie Grabbed his Leg, but she fell and accidentally let Go. Liam Backed up a bit, Standing up again

(o) Look at Undead Neighbour
His Neighbour Was Horribly Rotted, She had No Arm, And No Eyelids either. It Looked like Something ate Half of her Face and All of Her Arm, She was Crawling along the Floor with One arm.

" What Happened to you!?"

The Undead Granny got even Closer

[/press S to back away /]
>>>>>>>>S<<<<<<<<<<

Liam Tripped over the Video Casette, The Granny approached.

(o) Look at Video Tape
It was a Video tape Of Hellboy Liam never Knew why they kept the Video when they had the DVD as well. He Picked it up

(o) Throw Video Tape at Neighbour
Liam Threw the Video Tape at his Horribly Rotted Neighbour, it hit her in the Head and she fell back. She Wasn't Dead yet. Liam used this Chance to get up, While the Undead Granny Tried to Get back to it's Feet

(o) Pick up Phone
Liam Picked up the Phone while the Zombie Managed to get itself up somewhat, Leaning on the Coach that Liam was Sleeping on less than 3 Minutes ago.

(o) Slam Phone on Neighbour
Liam Slammed the Phone Hard against his Undead Neighbour. She Shrieked and Fell down, Liam Hit her with it again. She Moved her Arm abit, Her Blood splayed on the Sofa she was leaning On. Liam hit her One more time. There was a Dent in her Head and She wasn't moving. "God..." Liam Murmured. Looking her Over. The Old Lady looked like she'd been eaten alive. But Whatever had eaten her had Stopped halfway Her Arm was Gone and Blood was seeping out of her Brain Area, As well as the dent, this was likely caused by Liam Managing to smash it's head in with a Telephone.

Liam Wordlessly Turned around, Hearing the Thumping of Numerous Walkers smashing themselves into his window. They had Yet to Make a Dent but Liam wasn't taking any chances. he took Steps back, and looked around to make sure nothing else got inside. Nothing did.

(o) Look at Back Door
"Back Door's Open" Liam said to himself. Noting how there wasn't a single one of those Creatures in the Back Yard, His Dad's Woodchopping Axe was laying lazily by the Door. It would be seemingly easy to get His hands on it.

(o) Pick up Axe
Liam Cautiously Crept over to the Axe, And Grabbed it and Yonked it Out of the Garden. It was actually really heavy. There was no way he'd be able to hold this for Long without accidentally dropping it on his Toe. Liam Dropped it. There had to be a Better Weapon Somewhere...

(o) Look out Door
The Garden was clear of all Insects, Birds, and More importantly; Scary Undead Things, His Garden was a simple one. It had a Swing for his sister. And a Greenhouse, There was a Garage at the other side. Leading into the Car Park that went right around his Neighbours House. It would be the Perfect way to get out. There was a Table near the bush with two benches Either side of it, The Closest Bench to Liam had a Shovel Resting against it.

(o) Look at Garage
Liam hardly ever Went in the Garage, But from the times he did. He remembered walking out and finding himself in a car park that was good enough as a shortcut to the closest Supermarket.

(o) Look at Shovel
"My Dad's Shovel..." Liam Said, Still Shocked, he could still hear noises from the scene over in Macon as the Undead got His dad while he was on the phone, and they apparantly don't know how to turn phones off. He never knew why his Dad had that shovel. But it had something to do with him being a Gardener before meeting Liam's Mum. Liam Walked over to it and Picked it up.

Liam Walked Back inside. And then Noticed the Walkers outside his Living Room window, he Turned around to hear Munching sounds on the other side of the Garden Fence. And possibly some from the Car Park The Windows were Being Banged on by tons of Walkers, They were probaly leaving the Door without a second thought. It didn't look like any were going through the Garage. Some people were probaly using Cars to barracade the Way out. Liam could always climb over and then continue or something... Nothing at the door to the front, Quicker way out through the Back...

[Go Through the Garage, Or the Front Door?]

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question: which door would you pick?
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  • edited August 2013
    GO through the garage!
  • edited August 2013
    Through the garage!
  • edited August 2013
    Due to popular opinion (or just common sense)

    ----

    [Go Through the Garage, Or the Front Door?]
    [The Garage]

    [The Front Door]

    Nervously, Liam Made a Run for the Garage, He Attempted to Open the Door.
    "Who in there Right mind would lock a Garage!?" He asked himself in frustration. the Answer either being his Dad. Liam could tell by the Deadbolt being on the Outside. It was rare for a Building to do that. But Liam's Dad attached the Deadbolt himself. Not just That, it was one of those Deadbolt Things with a Code. Lovely.
    Liam Heard Noises Resembling Eating from the House to his Left.

    (o) Look at Coded Deadbolt
    Liam never Liked Deadbolts. And he never did bother Asking his dad what the Code was. He probaly wouldn't need to Do that Though, This Deadbolt was Installed by Hand, a Unprepared Hand. Indeed, There was a Loose Screw, Liam checked his Pockets for Something he could use to Loosen it. Nothing.

    "Damn" Liam Murmured in his Head. As he Walked back inside. Looking in the Living Room, there was a Crack on his Window. He'd need to find a Screw Driver. and he'd Need to find it fast. Liam Went back in the Kitchen. Ignoring Gunshots from Outside the Window.

    (o) Look at Kitchen Table
    The Table had Numerous Bits and Bobs On it, Liam Looked at each and every Thing. The Only Item Liam Found that Remotely Resembled a Screw Driver was a Knife, which was way to Big to use as a Screwdriver Substitute.

    (o) Look at Piggy Bank
    Liam Remembered That someone on the internet told him a Coin is a Good replacement for a Screwdriver. So He opened up his Sisters Piggy Bank and Took out a Coin. At that Moment. The Zombies made their Way through his Window. Two Fell down and Hit their Head, Not enough to Hurt, and then Went to eat the Walker Liam knocked earlier.

    Liam Yeeped. As he Ran Away from the Hoard and Tripped over The Curb and Fell down on the Floor, Accidentally Flinging the Coin and Shovel a Few Feet Away.

    (o) Grab the Penny
    Liam Got Up to His Feet and Bent Down to Pick up the Penny, He Turned round and Fell down, Holding the Walker -who he couldn't recognize due to Having His Legs, Left half of Face, and Most of Neck eaten- By it's eyes. Pushing it away.

    >>>>>>>>Q<<<<<<<<<<
    Liam Pushed Further and Further, Accidentally Reaching in to the Walkers Brain and Gouging out the Right eye. At Some Point, The Walker stopped and fell down, dead. Liam Looked at his Non-Coin Hand and Found some part of the Guys Brain stuck on his Fingers. He Resisted the Urge to Puke.

    (o) Grab Shovel
    Liam Went Down and Grabbed the Shovel. 4 Walkers were there, One of which Liam Recognized as his Godfather, and another as the First Undead he killed's son.

    (o) Smack Undead Godfather
    Liam Smacked his Undead GodFather right in the Head, Killing it again.

    (o) Smack Undead Neighbours Son
    Liam Shoved His Shovel Right up The Undead Neighbour's Son's Nose, then Yoinked it out. He fell down

    (o) Smack Undead
    Liam Slashed his Shovel Right across the Closest Walkers Forehead, It didn't Kill, He Slashed again.

    (o) Slash Undead
    Liam Smashed the Undead Right from Above, They were all Down.

    (o) Use Coin on Deadbolt
    Liam Anxiously Unscrewed the Screws, The Deadbolt fell off. Liam Opened teh Door, Ran in, Then Slammed the Door shut, Using the Shovel to barracade the Door behind him.

    He Looked around, Honestly Surpised that the Garage Door was opened. Sure enough, There was a Group there. A Family of Four, a old Man, and a Ginger Lady.

    The Family of Four caught his attention.

    "LIZ!" He yelled.

    "Oh. Hi. Liam" Liz Called out, Waving from near a Fence. She was Near a Younger boy about 8 or so. And two adults, presumably her Parents. "This is my Brother. Adam" She said, Pointing to her Bro,

    "Hi, Are you her Boyfriend?" Adam asked.
    [What?]
    [No.]
    [What's it to you?]
    [...]

    Liam Smirked a bit.

    Adam Merely Grinned while Hopping up and Down "I Knew it! I knew it!"
    "Shut up" Liz Flatly Joked, Before Turning to Liam. "I'm so Glad to see you've made it"
    [Yeah. Me Too]
    [I didn't have to go far...]
    [I killed a Undead Granny]
    [...]

    "We are Standing on the Other side of my Garage" Liam Blankly Pointd out.

    "...You live that close to the car park?" Liz Asked.

    "Hello there" The man that was With Liz said. "Liam? Huh?"
    [And you're Name?]
    [Yep]
    [so?]
    [...]

    "That's my Name" Liam Said. "So what's yours?"

    "Well, my Wife is Tess. I'm Robert" Liz's Dad said. "...I hope that this gets sorted out soon."

    "Have you talked to everyone else yet?" Tess asked. "He's Mackie" She Smiled, Pointing at a Older man. "And her Name is Jenny" She Pointed at a Ginger Lady.

    "We might be here a While. So..." Liam Heard from the other side of the Car park, It was Mackie.

    "Are you kidding? The Mall is probaly Over-Run, There's no way we'll be able to get anything out of there!" Jenny Yelled.


    "Don't Worry...I think that's Normal" Robert Sighed. "They've been at this for a while."

    Liam Just Sighed, Before Walking off from the Family

    Liam Looked as a Asian Man with Glasses and unusally slack Shoulders Hopped over the Barracade.

    "And he's Back" Liz Pitched.

    "Oh, a New Guy. Nice to meet you" Oliver smiled. "I'm Oliver
    [You too]
    [Yeah]
    [ Can't say teh Same thing]
    [...]

    "Nice to meet you too" Liam Smiled, As the Two Shook hands. "And It's Liam."

    ----
    Note: I didn't end on a Major Choice this time. Because i'm hitting writers Block. Things would've played out very differently if Liam went through the front door. I'll probaly have the next one with the next major choice tomorra.
  • edited August 2013
    I was tinking of saying something anti-this, but with the "Real Monsters" story on here, that proves that these can be done eloquently, this may have a chance of being good... Plus, saying this'll be bad before anything even happens is impatient on my part...
  • edited August 2013
    Harpadarpa wrote: »
    I was tinking of saying something anti-this, but with the "Real Monsters" story on here, that proves that these can be done eloquently, this may have a chance of being good... Plus, saying this'll be bad before anything even happens is impatient on my part...

    in all honesty i don't really care what people think. I'm just doing this for fun anyway.

    Yeah, It is a slow Starter i agree.
  • edited August 2013
    shit, double post.

    Apparently a weird, late double post.

    Regardless, I was saying it has a chance of being awesome.
  • edited August 2013
    OH NO! :eek:

    I've just worked out who this is about :rolleyes:
  • edited August 2013
    Do you see why I was a bit sketchy at first glance?
  • edited August 2013
    OH NO! :eek:

    I've just worked out who this is about :rolleyes:

    who? :D
  • edited August 2013
    Campman, of course.
  • edited August 2013
    Harpadarpa wrote: »
    Campman, of course.

    well, Campman is in it. ( i just picked a random name out of my head for him. didn't know his real name) He's not the focus though.
  • edited August 2013
    No one knows his name. Campman is just what he's listed as in the files. Also, I'm guessing Liam? The character that you've set up as a protagonist?
  • edited August 2013
    Harpadarpa wrote: »
    No one knows his name. Campman is just what he's listed as in the files. Also, I'm guessing Liam? The character that you've set up as a protagonist?

    guessing Liam is what?
  • edited August 2013
    Who this is about.
  • edited August 2013
    Harpadarpa wrote: »
    Who this is about.

    yeah, basically.
  • edited August 2013
    I just caught that, I like this already.
  • edited August 2013
    I just caught that, I like this already.

    I did tell you to expect characters from the game.
  • edited August 2013
    I know, I was just not expecting Campman to be one of them.
  • edited August 2013
    (o) Talk to Mackie and Jenny
    "Hi" Liam Said, Walking over to the two Bickering People

    "Yes, Hello" Jenny Droned.

    "If you've got something to say we're a bit busy, Liam, Was that it?" Mackie Said in a Reasonable Manner.
    [What are you arguing about?]
    [How did this Happen?]
    [Why are you two here?]

    "What are you yapping about?" Liam asked.

    "Watch your Tone Kid" Jenny Sighed.

    "We're 'arguin' about the possibilities that This might not get sorted out in time for all of us here to live. And i think we need more Supplies and Ammo" Mackie Explained

    "I'm Fine with the Ammo, It's reasonable and we've only got a Sledgehammer, You're Shovel -Which is one of two barracades here-, and Oliver's Hunting Rifle." Jenny Pitched in.

    "Is that what it's actually called?" Liam asked.

    "Not sure. I'm not a Gun expert" Jenny admitted

    "It's a Sniper Rifle, Actually" Oliver butted in.

    "Shut up" Jenny hissed.
    (?) Jenny didn't appreciate you prying into affairs
    [How did this Happen?]
    [Why are you two here?]
    [Supplies and Ammo]

    "Do you Know how this Happened?" Liam Asked
    .
    "How are we going to know that?" Mackie asked

    (?) Mackie and Jenny doubt your Intelligence.
    "Okay. Dumb Question" Liam Admitted
    [Why are you two here?]
    [Supplies and Ammo]

    "Why are you in a Car park of all Places?" Liam asked.

    "a Walker Got the Jump on us and Nearly Bit me. We ran to the First place we found that was not over-run." Jenny explained.

    "Okay then" Liam responded.

    "...I wonder..." Mackie Pondered.

    "What?" Liam asked.

    "...Now that you ask. Why did this all happen?" Mackie asked.
    [Supplies and Ammo]

    "About you're Supplies and Ammo...?" Liam was going to continue.

    "What?" Jenny interupted.

    "Where are they?" Liam Asked.

    "Well, Food could be got from the Mall...But according to Jenny It's Likely to be Over-Run" Mackie murmured.

    "That's because it's a Mall. Besides, it would be better to go to a Grocery Store, or a House or somethign!!" Jenny snapped.

    "And Ammo is easy to find. We'll just need more because there is not a auto-reload in the real world" Mackie Continued.

    "And it is...?" Liam got him to Continue

    "Forsyth County Pawn and Gun" Mackie Replied.

    "That's in Cumming" Liam Murmured.

    "Well... Some Walkers are sure to have left Loaded Guns lying around somewhere" Jenny Said Aside "Why are you asking anyway?"

    "I'd like to look for them." Liam Guessed.

    "Sure, I don't really mind which, there both Dangerous though" Jenny Openly Said

    "I'll be happy to Look after him While on the Road looking for Ammo" Oliver Smiled.

    "And My Houses Cupboard is packed full of food we could have" Robert Piped in.
    [I'll go with Oliver to find Ammo...]
    [I'll go to Robert's to get food"]

    Yep, today's Major Choice. Go with Oliver to get Ammo, or Go to Campman's House to collect the food.

    Remember that this is only Day 4. and i guess around this time Lee had just Woke up from his Car Accident.
  • edited August 2013
    I've decided that this story is set in forsyth. So if anyone has any trivia about places and how long it takes to get to get somewhere i'd like to know.
  • edited August 2013
    [I'll go with Oliver to find Ammo...]
    [I'll go to Robert's to get food"]

    "I'll go to find Ammo. No Offense Rob," Liam said.

    (?) You Chose to Search for Weapons with Oliver
    "Alright, I Know my Way around" Robert Murmured "I'll be fine to get the food myself"

    Oliver Walked up to Liam and Shook His Hand. "You'll need you're Shovel.

    Mackie, Find something else to barracade the Door" Oliver Smiled, as Mackie went to Liam's Garage Entrance. "Also. Forsyth Gun and Pawn's in the County"

    "Come along then" Oliver Said, As Liam Went up the Ladder on the side of the Car Barracade, Oliver followed.


    The Walk was A Unusually Silent One, Despite them Shooting of Numerous Walkers or Smashing them With Shovels. It was about 10 Minutes before Oliver spoke up.

    "If you do have a Question" BANG! "You're Free to ask it."
    [What's you're Story?]
    [Got a name for these things?]
    [Can't think of Anything]
    [...]

    "Got a Name for these...Things?" Liam Asked. As He Smacked the Zombie that was once his History Teacher.

    "Walkers" Oliver replied. "Got the Name from a Website, some person from Atlanta mentioned them"

    "Atlanta?" Liam Asked.

    "Yes. you know, about a Hours Drive from here. What's you're Story anyhow?" Oliver asked.
    [Lie]
    [Truth]
    [Tell me yours First]
    [...]

    "I woke up with the News on. Then i got a Call from my Dad about how we should run somewhere far away. I dunno where my Mum and Sister are. I went to look in the kitchen and got attacked by my next door neighbour" Liam explained.

    (?) Oliver learned you have a Sister
    "Sister?" Oliver asked.

    "Yeah, Cindi, Still in Primary. there was a note on the door, but i didn't read it." Liam Explained.

    " it's only fair that i tell you my story as well" Oliver Nodded.

    "Sure." Liam agreed

    "Me and My Girlfriend were out for a Drive when we hit one of those Things... she went to check him out and got injured. it was about a hour til she turned and Some Police got involved, trying to arrest her for assault. well....3 Guesses what happened to them"
    [They got Bit?]
    [Sorry about you're girl]
    [Those Cops must've been unprepared]
    [....]

    "Sorry about you're Girlfriend" Liam Solemnly Spoke. As Oliver shot another One, which Looked like she worked at the Supermarket down the Way.

    (?) Oliver appreciates you're Concern
    "I've gotten over it...I think" Oliver said, It would've Worried liam a bit but these two didn't really know each other. "That was yesterday"
    [So she was the One Here?]
    [I Don't believe you]
    [Don't you think we should focus on finding Ammo?]
    [...]

    "Don't you think we should focus more on Finding Ammo?" Liam asked.
    Oliver Looked Downwards " Yeah i guess."

    (?) Oliver understands where you're coming from
    "I guess...Some People were Probaly Eaten up while Holding their Weapons, Ammo would be another story. Maybe a Gun Shop is the Best way to go" Oliver Spoke to Himself. Shooting a Walker, and Running over to it. Oliver Looked the Walker Over.
    [What is it?]
    [He doesn't Look Dead]
    [You just said we should look for a Gun Shop]
    [...]

    "You just said we should look for a Gun Shop." Liam Smirked, Turning around to Find a Walker Right in front of him

    (o) Smash Walker
    Liam Smacked the Walker fatally in the Head.
    "Yeah but..." Oliver Looked in the Walkers Jacket pockets. "This Guy had some Ammo in his Pocket" Oliver noted, Walking away from it. "Now. Where's the Nearest Gun shop?" He asked.
    [Cummings?]
    [I'll look it up the next time i see a laptop]
    [No idea]
    [...]

    "Cummings?" Liam guessed.

    "Well...No. We're not in the County." Oliver Corrected

    "I Know that. I just don't know of any Gun Shops in Monroe!" Liam Yelled

    "No Need to yell" Oliver said. "A Shovel or a Blunt object of any kind is good enough"
    [Like a Pencil?]
    [Sure]
    [Guns do make more Noise]
    [...]

    "Like a Pencil?" Liam asked.

    "Not Quite" Oliver Replied, Getting back to scouting the Area

    (?) Oliver doesn't know whether you're dumb or a failing comedian.
  • edited August 2013
    "A Pencil is Sharp, or..Blunt, I Mean like a Hammer, or a mini-Statue, or Even a Rock. But, Pencil's are only good for causing splinters and stabbing people in the eye" Oliver Murmured. Walking other to A Already Dead Walker that had his Head Blasted off.

    Liam Froze.

    "What is it?" Oliver asked..

    "N...Nothing" Liam responded,

    "Well. If you find any discarded guns with ammunition still in them. or shotgun shells in general. Pick them up okay"

    (o) Look at Oliver
    Oliver was about 5'6. Which was notably Tall, His Hand was fairly Close to Liam's Eye Level. He Held his Hand out while Keeping the Other on a Name Plate in case he ended up Slipping. He had Short brown hair, Which had a Long Fringe. A Green Shirt under a Completly Brown unbuttoned Letterman Jacket. His Shoulders were un-naturally Slack, He had Blue Shorts and some Shoes Liam didn't bother to take note of. He was looking over the Corpse of One of Liam's Friends. Turning the Guy Over, Peeking into the Pockets. trying to find some ammo the man could've had on him.

    (o) Look at Nathan
    Nathan, One of Liams best friends from School, lay there, Hardly Rotted with his Head Blown off. His Guts were there for all to see, yet there were none at all. Liam took a step back. Trying not to look at his friend.

    (o) Talk to Oliver
    "Hey" Liam said, as Oliver looked up at him.
    [Find anything?]
    [This doesn't disgust you?]
    [Do you think things will be better?]

    "Find anything" Liam asked.

    "Not yet. a Picture of this guy and his Family. A Crunch Bar, and some Tidbits of amusement" Oliver replied.

    "Crunch bar?" Liam asked.

    "Yeah. We'll take it back with us" Oliver said, Before Flipping the Guy back round.

    "I'm suprised you're not disgusted by this" Oliver countinued.

    "I went through both Kill Bill films and half of the SAW movies without flinching once" Liam said, Proud. Not so proud that Oliver was Patting down the Corpse of one of his best friends though.

    "What about the Other half?" Oliver asked.

    Liam just Blushed.

    BANG! BANG! BANG-BANG-BANG-BANG-BANG-BANG!

    Numerous Gunshots came from across the Street, the Man wiedling the Gun had mowed down about 20 walkers before Liam and Oliver noticed him, He checked his ammo and the Walkers chasing him and Ran, a Walker Got him from behind and he fell on his back.

    "HEELP! SOMEB-Waaa..No! Stop it! Please!" a Man yelled. Oliver looked as he Dropped a Machine Gun as a Walker tore into his Guts, Oliver Shoot the Walker as soon as it disembowled The Man, Oliver saw the Bite mark on his Belly, and then shot his head
    [What was that for?
    [Take his Gun]
    [Waste of Bullets]
    [...]

    Liam didn't say a Thing, Oliver just ran over to the Machine Gun and took it
    "This things chock full of...3 Bullets" Oliver said. unhappily.
    There were numerous groans and Gargles coming from a House on the other side of the Road. Whatever was left of the hoard attacking that man from earlier (and a few new hoardes) were slamming into a House. Liam looked aside.

    (o) Pickup Shotgun Shells
    Liam ran to the Walkers the Man from Earlier mowed down, noting how the Bullets had went straight through their Heads. Liam picked them up.

    "Got about 18 bullets here" Liam said. waving to Oliver.

    "That'll do good"

    (o) Look at Walker Hoard
    a Hoard of Walkers were slamming up against a House. Trying to bust through the Barracades and Boards set into place.

    "Some Poor soul's life is giving us time" Liam noted aloud.

    "Maybe we should go over there when they've finsihed." Oliver guessed, Liam looked at him. "Well...We'll be killing any walkers we do find over there. If this last's more than a few days, We'll need all we can get They'll have cleared out and the people in there would probaly have some Weapons left over. and-"..Oliver stopped
    [It's not that far in yet]
    [No.]
    [Sounds fun]
    [...]

    "We're not that far into this yet. The Millitary will run through, gun these guys down. Find the cure, Pass shots out and the like. And everything will be the way it was 4 days ago" Liam Said coldly.

    "...Not saying we've need to. There might be people that survive that Little Siege of 43 Abelard street" Oliver said.

    "There's no Alebard street Here" Liam Said.

    " It's called sarcasm. Look, I'm just thinking of the future. We'll need all the Ammo we can get. Robert is at his House collecting Food, And i was only here for a week after the incident my Brother got involved in,.But i know that it's along this street. There might be people over there who managed to avoid the Walkers. We could take their weaponry or Just shoot off all the Walkers we can and smash the heads of the rest with you're Shovel.But...We don't have much weaponry left. It'd be best to wait till the Walkers cleared out. And, Theres a Chance that going in there is the same as suicide. We don't want to die now. We need to live, And get the Ammo. Thats why we're here"
    [/Attempt to save whoevers in the house from hoards of zombies with limited ammo, Or Wait so you can get the Scraps from the fight?/]

    [We're saving them Now!]

    [You're right. It's safer to stay here]

    Which one, Which one? Stay so you can go when it's safer, any survivors would be dead but you wouldn't die or get wounded in any way. Or Go in and save whoevers in there from the giant hoard, More survivors that way.

    Also, If anyone doesnt' know why theres so many walkers already. It's because So many in this town were already killed, and the rest migrated from other places.
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    which one would you pick?
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    [You're right. It's safer to stay here]
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    [/Attempt to save whoevers in the house from hoards of zombies with limited ammo, Or Wait so you can get the Scraps from the fight?/]

    [We're saving them Now!]
    [You're right. It's safer to stay here]

    "Yeah...We should wait here" Liam agreed.


    It was about a 13 minute wait before the Walkers had cleared out. a Few had been shot, Liam could tell from this distance. He looked up at Oliver

    "C'Mon man,Let's go" Oliver said. Liam got up and the Two walked into the house.

    It was a Big One, And there were still a Few Walkers out and About. None of them had noticed the duo as they walked in nervously. the Few walkers in the house were either dead or in other rooms, attracted by the noise of a Man screaming.
    [Kill them]
    [Lets get something done]
    [Can you hear that?]
    [...]

    "Can you hear that?" Liam asked.

    "Yeah" Oliver shivered. "Kitchen"
    [Check it out]
    [Let's just ignore it]
    [How can you tell?]
    [...]

    "How can you tell?" Liam asked.

    (?) Oliver took note of that
    "Because I can see the kitchen and can hear the screams from that room" Oliver answered

    "Oh...ye-EARGH!!" Liam yelled as a Walker Came out from the Door next to him, Liam Fell down, as the Walker tried to approach.

    (o) Grab Walker
    Liam grabbed the Walker and Held it away from him.

    BANG!

    Oliver shot it in the head. The Creature Fell on him. "You okay?"

    Liam Stood up, shaking
    [/That was Close..][Happy to be alive]
    [Scared]
    [....]

    "That was...Close" Liam shivered.

    (?) Oliver noticed that
    "...Yeah it was. Let's get going" Oliver said, as he walked into the Kitchen
    .
    "AAAAAARH!!" Said the Man in the kitchen. as Blood splattered on the table.
    Liam walked in. and gaped.
    [What's going on?]
    [Oliver?]
    [...That's just gross]
    [...]

    "Oliver?" Liam asked.

    "...Why would he do that?" Oliver asked. Liam looked at the Young Jamaican Adult Who just chopped his own Hand off.

    "Dude" Liam called out, The young Jamaican looked at him. "Why'd you do that?"

    "I was bit" the Man answered "I thought...That cutting off. Would....Stop the Infec..infect..or...I...Who are you people anyways!?"

    [I'm Liam]
    [We were waiting for the walkers to clear out]
    [You don't sound Jamaican]
    [...]
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    [I'm Liam]
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    fabi777 wrote: »
    [I'm Liam]

    for the record, this isn't a CYOA. i'm just stopping at times to see what people would say.

    But yeah, i appreciate knowing what you'd say.
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    "I'm Liam" Liam answered

    "Oliver..." Oliver Replied

    "Ye....Yeah well...I'd...I'd appreaciate...If..If you'd get the fuck out of here..." The Man shivered.

    "Look. We're looking for Ammo and Survivors" Oliver said, reaching out "We're getting settled in at a Car park nearby. If you've got any weaponry than can we have it, If you don't you can come along either way"

    "We...Well...My Daughter...Ja...Jamila...She's still..in that tree and...Oh god! oh.....why is this even happening!?"

    [We don't Know]
    [We'll gladly have you and you're daughter]
    [Do you have the Ammo or not!?]
    [...]

    (o) You answered Honestly
    "We don't have a clue what's going on" Liam Said "I only figured it out today when a Granny with half of her face eaten off jumped at me in the kitchen."

    "I knew one of the first to turn. Trust me, The Car park will be good until things go worse. " Oliver said.

    "...O...Okay...Bu...Just...I...*sniff* I'm not sure if.... Cutting off the limb.... what if it didn't work!?" The Man shrieked.

    "...What's your name?" Oliver asked.

    "Ni....Nicholas..." He said. Still Crying. "...Ja... Jamila! Come down!" He said, as, in the Backyard, a Little Girl Came down from the tree. "We've found some people who'll get us to a safe place..Okay..." He said.

    "...Where's your Arm?" Jamila Asked.

    "One of those Monsters got me, and i cut it off. in case..." Nicholas replied.
    Then, Walkers started to walk in from the entryway.
    [SHIT!]
    [We need to move!]
    [We could use that ammo now!]
    [...]
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    [We could use that ammo now!]
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    "We Could use that Ammo Now!" Liam Yelled

    (?) You Got Nicholas' Attention
    "Ah, Shi..Um...Right!" Nicholas Yelled, Throwing a Rifle in their Way " Fulla Bullets! I got more in my Closet, i'll get them!"

    (o) Catch Rifle
    Liam Caught the Rifle.

    "Wow man" Oliver Said, Shooting down 2 Walkers "You know how to use that?"

    "Nope" Liam replied.

    "Pull the Trigger after Aiming" Oliver said, Looking at Jamila and Nicholas.
    [Kay!]
    [Nick! Use my Shovel!]
    [Some Target Practise!]
    [...]

    Liam Threw his Shovel at Nicholas, who caught it.

    "It'sBlunt enough to dent their head, and sharp enough to stab them!" Liam explained.

    (o) Shoot Undead Headmaster
    Liam Shot the Walker who used to be the Headmaster at his school.
    "Get Out of here! Oliver Yelled, as Nicholas grabbed Jamila and Ran.

    (o) Shoot Undead Classmate
    Liam Shot One of those from his School who used to bully Him, He didn't want it to get to him.

    "Liam! Get out of here as well!" Oliver Yelled, Shooting a Stranger

    [Fine!]
    [You go First!]

    "Okay!" Liam Yelled as he Ran through the Back Door.


    A Few Minutes Later, Liam, Oliver, Nicholas and Jamila Ran straight For the Car Park, Oliver Climbed over the Car Barracade, as Did Nicholas who was Carrying Jamila on his Back.

    "Liam! Grab my Hand!"

    (o) Grab Oliver's Hand
    Liam Grabbed onto Olivers Hand. Oliver Pulled him Up and The Four Ran straight in the Car Park.

    "What's happening!?" Jenny Asked.

    "Where's that Man's Hand!?" Mackie Yelled

    "Liam..What's going on?" Liz Asked.
    [There's a Whole Hoard out there!]
    [ We need to get out now!]
    [Where's Robert!?]
    [...]
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    [Where's Robert!?]
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    I like this a lot, shame on whoever rated this 1 star.
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    "Where's Robert!?" Liam Freaked out.

    "Still Looking for Food" Mackie Responded.

    "There's A Whole Hoard of Walkers out there!" Oliver Yelled.

    "We need to get out now!" Nicholas Responded, Holding Jamila.

    "But Robert, We can't Leave Him!" Tess yelled

    "You are not Leaving my Dad behind!" Liz Yelled.

    "Well, Those Walkers will Bust through that Barracade at any Second!" Jenny Yelled.

    "We'll Get to Him after Busting these Undead Asshead's Down!" Mackie Yelled. "Now, Oliver. You got Weapons right!?"

    "Yeah" Oliver said. " 24 Bullets, a Rifle, and a Crunch bar"

    "That'll be enough!" Mackie Groaned, Dissapointed "Let's just pack in this Car and Ruin every other car on this block" He said, as he got in the RV they left there.

    Nicholas, Jenny and Oliver got in there.
    [Why is there a RV in a car park?]
    [Hurry up Kid!]
    [I'm Waiting for Rob]
    [...]

    Liam looked at the RV, confused, Before Jamila ran in.

    (o) Run into RV
    Liam ran into the RV.

    "We Need to get Going, Robert's House is Across the Road, Right?" Mackie Asked, as he Busted through the Barracade, getting Numerous Cracks on the RV and at least 5 Walker Corpses Splattered on the RV. 1 still moving around.
    "Where do you Live, Tess?" Jenny Asked.
    "21 Abernathy Street" She responded.


    "Thats not far away!" Mackie Yelled, as they Drove on.

    Liam Sighed, as he Sat down Next to Jenny.

    (o) Look at Jenny
    Jenny Sat there, Looking down at her Legs. Whether she was bored, Or just trying to calm down, was up for debate
    .
    (o) Talk to Jenny
    "You alright?" Liam asked.

    "Yeah. I think" Jenny responded.

    (o) Talk to Oliver
    "Yo, Oliver" Liam said.

    "Yeah"

    "You okay?"

    "I think so. I've been dealing with this since day one, remember."

    (o) Look at Oliver
    Oliver was Standing near the Door, Looking up at the Skylights, He could see the Face of one of the Walkers that flipped onto their vehicle, it was all smashed in, and not rotted at all, unrecognizable.

    (o) Talk to Liz, Tess and Andy
    "Liz?" Liam asked.

    "Yes?" Liz replied.
    [You okay?]
    [We'll find you're Dad]
    [What do you all think about this?]

    "Are you all okay?" Liam Asked.

    "Adam's Not" Tess replied, Looking at her Son. Tearing up about what could be happening to his dad.

    "I don't think i am either. i mean, My Dad's probaly been eaten alive!" Liz Replied

    (?) They will remember that
    [We'll find you're Dad]
    [What do you all think about this?]

    "We'll Find your Da-WOW!" Liam Exclaimed, as the Van Stopped, "21 Abernathy Street" Mackie Said aloud. This Place was Crowding as well, Robert and Some Lady Liam didn't Know Ran towards the Van.

    "Let us in! Now!" The Lady Yelled. "Please!"

    Oliver Opened the Door and the two ran in,
    [Who are you?]
    [We need to get out]
    [Where are we going?]
    [...]

    "Who are you?" Liam asked.

    "I'm sally" Sally Replied. Standing up.

    Robert Looked at the Wheel, Slamming the Door shut and Blocking it with Himself "Are we going to move or what?" He asked.

    Mackie Put his Foot on the Accelerator and Sped Off.

    ----

    It had been 10 minutes, The Group were Driving Off on Forsyth Road, Hoping to Get to Macon, Because Mackie Had a Friend in a Millitary Base Near there.

    Sally was Taller than Mackie, Probaly the Tallest of the Group. She had Light Brown Hair with Blond Strands here and There. She wore a T-Shirt with Autumn Leaves Pattern with Grey Long Sleeves Under it, and Brown Trousers and Sandals. She Sat At the Back with Liam and Jenny, Reading a Book from her Backpack in Boredom.

    Jenny's Ginger Hair was Accompanied by the Same Red Hoodie Adam was wearing, just a different Size, she had a Turquoise Skirt and Black Leggings. She Just Sat there, Conversing with Oliver who was near the Door.

    The Entire of Robert's Family was There on the Chairs at the Side. With Adam Cuddled up with his Dad.and Liz trying to text her Friends.

    Mackie was Still at the Wheel. "We should be in Macon during the next half a hour" Mackie said. He wore a Blue Collared Shirt and Green Shorts. His Legs were very Hairy.

    "Macon's Only 16 Minutes away" Robert Said, Putting his Arm over Adam.

    Liam Looked around.

    "Liam?" Liz asked.

    "Yeah?"

    "Do you think Millitary will be able to sort everything out?"
    [Yes]
    [No idea]
    [Frankly, I don't think we should rely on them]
    [...]
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    so, what do you honestly think abotu this story so far?, Pro's and Cons. I'm curious. And i'll try not to take offense.
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    I like it quite a bit, it could use a little work in a few places but I am sure every Fan Fic needs a little work, I know mine does, it is very good.
  • edited August 2013
    now then, the Choice,

    from the above section of story
    [Yes]
    [No idea]
    [Frankly, I don't think we should rely on them]
    [...]
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    [Frankly, I don't think we should rely on them]

    The military never sort anything out in a zombie apocalypse, just make things worse.
  • edited August 2013
    [Frankly, I don't think we should rely on them] ^ right.
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    "I don't Know if the Army can actually help out" Liam said.

    (?) You Made Liz feel Uneased.
    "I hope they can" she responded.

    "I'm sure they'll be able to get everything sorted out soon, sweetie" Tess Smiled at her Daughter.

    "Are we there yet?" Andy asked.

    "No. another 15 minutes" Mackie Replied.

    (o) Talk to Sally
    "Hi" Liam said

    "Hello" Sally said, Smiling
    [What are you reading?]
    [Why are you so happy?]
    [What's your story?]

    "What are you reading?" Liam asked.

    "Oh, This, Just a Silly Romance Novel" She Laughed.

    "Not Twilight is it?"

    "No. Nope, and Nada. Do you want to read it?" She asked.

    "No. Not really"

    "You holding up?" she asked.
    [No]
    [I'll Manage]
    [I'm Doing Fine]

    "I'll Manage" Liam said.

    (?) Sally picked up on that
    "You're a brave Little guy aren't you?" She asked.

    Liam just Blushed
    [Why are you so Happy?]
    [What's your Story?]

    "Why are you so cheerful?" Liam asked.

    "Because Things will be better again. and we've got Kids here. You're a Teenager, But we've got two young ones, a eight year old, and a five year old. I'm keeping my hopes up for them" she answered
    [That's sweet]
    [Do you have kids]
    [Ms. Sally Sappy here]
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    [Do you have kids]
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