Walking Dead: Great Follies (Fan FIc)

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  • edited September 2013
    It was pretty much like the Doug or Carley choice. Carley had a walker on her which we thought she would kick off her leg while Doug was being grabbed by 10 walkers.
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    [...]
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    first time different people have ever chosen different options to this....What number am i thinking of?

    Also, Ben. i did state Jenny couldn't get it off.
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    "She was gonna die anyway! We gotta think about livin'!"
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    that is not the number i was thinking of.

    this means i'll use [...]
  • edited September 2013
    first time different people have ever chosen different options to this....What number am i thinking of?

    Also, Ben. i did state Jenny couldn't get it off.

    I changed my mind, I want Ben's one :p
    And, number 4?
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    Okay. I'll yse [...]
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    Here's a Short bit.


    Liam Looked up at Sally, His Expression Tense. as Wallace Kicked the Truck into Gear, going through the Garage door he opened before hand and following the Station Wagon.

    (?) Sally was disturbed by your silence
    "So?" Oliver asked, Taking the Picture of his Brother out of his Jacket Pocket "Who's up for some Beer?" He asked.
    [Umm...]
    [Sure]
    [Nope]
    [...]

    "Umm..." Liam started to Say, Before Sally Interrupted

    "Why do you want beer at a time like this?" Is what she asked.

    "Beer? I didn't even ask about beer, I was asking if you thought my Brother was Smoking." Oliver Laughed.

    Sally just looked at him. Confused.

    "Let's get going"

    It was a Few Hours before the Group had Stopped Driving. It was Nighttime, They Got out in the Woods, and Started up a Little Mini Camp while Mackie tried to decide who'd share out the Rations. Unaware of the Fate of Jenny.

    "So?" Oliver asked, Sitting on the Opposite side of the Fire than Liam, Sally and Liz. The Rest of the Kampman's were talking to Luciel about this not changing anything, and this only meaning kicking her out won't kill her. While Adam played with Jamila. Wallace was Sitting on top of the Truck, Keeping watch.

    There was a Silence.
    [Oliver, you killed Jenny]
    [Sally, You okay?]
    [Liz,What do you think?]
    [...]
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    [...]

    Keeping to the silence.
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    (?) You Didn't Break the Silence
    Liz Looked at Liam

    "Y'Know guys....What happened to Jenny?" Oliver asked, Breaking the Silence.
    "Dunno, Liam didn't tell anyone" Liz Replied.

    "Liam!" Mackie Called out.
    [Yes?]
    [What?]
    [You left Jenny behind]
    [...]

    "Yes?" Liam asked, Walking over to Mackie.

    "You Likely just Hesistated when it Came to Saving Jenny." Mackie said, Holding a single Jerky, two Apples, and some Cheese. "Is there a Reason you saved me?"
    [You're Stronger.]
    [You're Older]
    [You had 9 walkers on you]
    [...]
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    [You had 9 walkers on you]
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    "You had nine Flippin' Walkers on you" Liam said. "Jenny only had one"

    "I See, Jenny was never that physically strong, I was handling myself Fine. But You're a Kid, You thought I Needed more help. I understand that." Mackie said, before standing up and Handing the Rations to Liam. "How about you Try making better choices and decide who needs teh Food most." Mackie said.
    "But-" Liam said.

    "It's alright if you don't want to, But you should have one of those Apples, Kids need their Strength. also..." Mackie pulled out another Strip of Jerky, and a Biscuit. "Incase feeding all the youths and yourself leave none for teh Adults"

    [I don't want to]
    [...Okay]

    "I Don't want to" Liam murmured

    "Kids need to learn how to handle responsibilities and see who needs help the most. In the case of the one who picked the Strong man who had everything sorted over the Weak Girl who hasn't shown a sign of physical strength. it goes double. It's alright. take as much time as you need. that's 6 pieces of food"

    (?) Six pieces of food for 12 People: Liam, Liz, Tess, Robert, Adam, Oliver, Nicholas, Jamila, Sally, Wallace, Luciel and Mackie
    (?) Liz,Adam,Jamila and yourself are kids
    (?) Who is your Friend?
    (?) Who needs it most? Nicholas without a Hand, or Luciel who lost her Group? or some one else
    (?) This choice is the most varied. fill in the Brackets below.

    Liam just looked at the Food. then at the Group.
    [Give the Apple to...
    [Give a Apple to...
    [Give a Jerky to...
    [Give the Cheese to...
    [Give the Biscuit to...
    [Give the Jerky to...
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    [Give the Apple to...Jamila
    [Give a Apple to...Sally
    [Give a Jerky to...Oliver
    [Give the Cheese to...Wallace
    [Give the Biscuit to...Nicholas
    [Give the Jerky to...Mackie
  • edited September 2013
    God no, this choice messed with my mind for so long in episode 2, not again.
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    Ben Paul wrote: »
    [Give the Apple to...Jamila
    [Give a Apple to...Sally
    [Give a Jerky to...Oliver
    [Give the Cheese to...Wallace
    [Give the Biscuit to...Nicholas
    [Give the Jerky to...Mackie

    I would change Wallaace to Adam, other than that, I agree.
  • edited September 2013
    I'm not feeding the Campman family because "they're all gonna die anyways, we gotta think about livin'!"

    And I just hate Luciel for no particular reason.
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    Who did you guys feed in E2?

    I fed Mark, Duck, Clem, and Kenny (Lilly was so pissed)...
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    Clem Duck Kenny Carley.
  • edited September 2013
    God no, this choice messed with my mind for so long in episode 2, not again.

    Yeah, I thought ok I can decide, and then there was information you have ONLY 4 food pieces foe 10 people. That was messed up.
    Edit: I fed kids, Kenny and... Lilly.
  • edited September 2013
    I thought you couldn't feed Carley/Doug. I tried to feed them but then Katjaa was like "I NEED MY SPACE" and shot me in the back of the head.

    In memory of Lee Everett...
    A New Day-Starved For Help
  • edited September 2013
    here's the food sorting out. with what Ben chose.

    Seriously ben, you're more of a Oliver than a Ben.

    [Give the Apple to Jamila]

    Liam went over to Jamila.

    "Hey" He said.

    "Hello" Jamila said, looking at the Floor, Liam handed her a Apple. "Wow, Thanks!" Jamila smiled, "I'd like Chocolate next time" she smiled, as she Took a bite, then another. Liam looked at Mackie, who was Smiling approvingly.
    [Give a Apple to Sally]

    "Sally!" Liam called out, Sally Hopped over the Log and Walked to Liam.
    "What is it Sweetie?" She asked.

    "Your 'Rations'" Liam said, acting as if he didn't like the word, he Smiled as he handed Sally the Apple

    "That is so Sweet, Liam" She smiled. "Thank you so Much. But...Aren't you going to Eat?"

    "Later" Liam smiled.

    "Very well then..." Sally smiled. as she walked back to the Log next to Liz.
    [Give a Jerky to Oliver]

    Liam walked over the Oliver. "H-Hey..." He murmuerd.

    "What is it Bro?" He asked

    "Here!" Liam Quickly shoved the Jerky in Oliver's direction. "Food"

    Oliver Looked at it, Then Snatched it out of Liams hands and started Scoffing it like a Savage.

    "Um...." Liam murmured, as he took a few steps away.
    [Give the Cheese to Wallace]

    Liam took a Look upwards at the Truck, Seeing Wallace sitting there with a Machine Gun, Looking for any Walkers.

    "Wallace!" Liam called out.

    "What is it, Kid?" He asked, Looking Down.

    "Want some Cheese?" Liam asked, Holding the Cheese up.

    "Sure. Love Cheese." Wallace said, Reaching down and Taking the Cheese. "I'm going to save it til' later." He said.

    "Alright then" Liam murmured. Walking away.

    "Hold on, Hold on" Wallace Said, Lifting his Gun. He shot.

    "What was it?" Mackie asked, from where he was sitting.

    " A Bandit. Can tell because of the Sales Lot Jacket" Wallace said.

    "Saves Lot" Mackie corrected, as Liam took a Look at the 2 Pieces of Food left.
    [Give the Biscuit to Nicholas]

    Liam Looked at Nicholas, Sitting in a Chair near the Station Wagon, he had fittingly Adapted to Life without a Right hand. He did state to be Left Handed Previously. He walked over to him.

    "Oh. Hello" Nicholas Said, Looking a bit Glum.

    "Hungry?" Liam asked.

    "Yeah, Sure" Nicholas Smiled.

    "Well, here" Liam said, Passing Nicholas a Biscuit.

    "Wow, Thanks" Nicholas said in a Deadpan tone, as though he was somewhat dissapointed. "Liam, fun fact. Teenagers and kids alike still need to eat" He said, Yet to eat his Biscuit.
    [Give the Jerky to Mackie]

    Liam walked over to Mackie.

    "How's it going?" Mackie asked.

    "Alright." Liam replied.

    "You've still got one piece of food left. It for you or me?" Mackie asked. "You should keep your strength up anyway."

    Wallace Shifted his eyes, seeing two blurry siluhuettes in the distance.

    Robert Looked at Liam, With Saddened Eyes. Liam could tell he was thinking about Adam and Liz getting food.
    [I'll have it]
    [I think Adam should]
    [No. it's for you]
    [I Think i'll give it to Liz]
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    [No. It's for you]
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    Ben Paul wrote: »
    [No. It's for you]

    Goddamit Ben! Campman is sad because of you!
    [I think Adam should]
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    *in a Becca-like voice* They're all gonna die anyways, might as well feed the characters that have an unknown fate...
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    Ben Paul wrote: »
    *in a Becca-like voice* They're all gonna die anyways, might as well feed the characters that have an unknown fate...

    If I remember correctly, Adam went missing and they never found him. What if he's going to get revenge on Liam for not giving hom food?
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    Moustache,Ben, There's only one way to sort this out.

    Rock.Paper.TOMATO!!
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    He's a kid, I'm sure Liam can handle him.
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    "No. it's for you" Liam said, Adamantaly Holding the Jerky in front of Mackie.

    "Okay then" Mackie said, Taking the Jerky and he started to eat it "Hmm...Spicy" He added at the last second.

    Robert then Walked up to Liam angrily.

    "Liam. Adam didn't get any food." He said Grimly. "Why is that?"
    [Because he's a predetermined Fate]
    [Because Mackie didn't give me enough]
    [Dunno.]
    [...]
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    [Because Oliver possesed Ben] but that's not the option,so [Because he's a predetermined Fate]
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    [Because he's a predetermined fate. Also, you're an irresponsible douche that kidnapped a little girl in the near future]
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    Ben Paul wrote: »
    [Because he's a predetermined fate. Also, I'm Secretly Oliver. But i couldn't make a RP Account of myself since i'm a OC.]

    Fixed it for ya. no need to thank me.
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    "Because....." Liam said. Looking at Oliver, as Wallace stood up and aimed his gun. He then looked at a wall, he then Looked at Robert.

    (?) Robert didn't appreciate that
    "Mackie, How much food do we really have?" Robert asked.

    "About the Amount to last a full year." Mackie said, "That's including the Ones in the Base" He looked at Luciel "That someone made us lose."

    "Look. I didn't think a Ginger Asshole would decide to Interrupt me when i'm putting up a Barracade, Okay!?"

    "We're getting off-topic!" Robert yelled "How much do we have without the ones from the base"

    "Enough to last about 120 more days if we keep up like this 60 more days if we all eat" Mackie Said, Doing the Maths himself.

    " Then we find more Food, we've got some in the Wagon. So just give everyone else the FOOD!!!" Robert yelled.

    Tess looked at Robert, downright creeped out. as Did adam, and everyone else.

    Liam went into his Pockets, and pulled out a Half-eaten Candy Bar. He Gave it to Robert.

    "Very well then, Here Andy. The Nice person who totally didn't just try to let a kid starve" Robert Said "Gave you this" He handed teh Candy bar to Adam, who started eating..

    "His name is Adam" Tess corrected.

    "Sorry, slip of the tounge" Robert admitted.

    "STAY RIGHT THERE!!" Wallace yelled, pointing his gun outside the camp.
    "Wow,wow,wow" a Indian Male yelled, Holding his Hands up, the Lady next to him was as well.

    "He's...Omar and I'm Amelia. Amelia Krauss. We don't want to hurt you!" the Lady called out.

    "DROP YOUR WEAPONS!" Wallace yelled. The Duo did, well, Omar did. Amelia didn't have any weapons. "What do you want?"

    "Just...Bandits raided our Camp. We were looking for a ride away from Macon." Amelia Let it out.

    "Bandits?" Robert asked.

    "Our cars only have room for ten" Luciel Said.

    "Our?" Oliver asked, looking very vicious, he suddenly turned polite "Besides that, standing on the roof isn't good at helping survival. and going into the Luggage is the worse idea in the world" He continued
    [Just let them come with us]
    [Find another car]
    [Tell us about these Bandits]
    [...]
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    [Tell us about these Bandits. We'll kick Luciel out of our group and let you two join us.]
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    "Bandits?" Liam asked.

    "From Save-Lots" Amelia replied "Drug-Doers"

    "Drug Doers?" Oliver Asked, suddenly intrigured.
    [That's what you're curious about?]
    [We do need to get moving]
    [We'll give Luciel to them]
    [...]

    "That's what you're curious about?" Liam asked.

    (?)Oliver picked up on that
    "Well, Drug-Doers can't be trusted." Oliver said, "I-It makes sense you'd be concerned about them"

    "YOU ASSHOLES!" A Something yelled, as a Arrow suddenly Flew from the Distance and Went right into Wallace's Elbow, She fell down and Flipped off the Car in Reaction.

    "holy SHIT!" Omar Yelled

    "We need to go, NOW!" Luciel Yelled

    "Everyone into their Cars!" Mackie Yelled as well, as He took Wallace into the Truck and Went in to Drive, Oliver sat Next to Him, Luciel made a run for one of the Back seats and made it. Sally and Nicholas holding Jamila then Ran for it Next, It only Got Sally a Arrow to the Shoulder, she Cried out in Pain and Fell, Nicholas got Jamila into the Truck. He Looked, Roberts Family had already Packed into their Station Wagon,

    Liam Looked.

    (o) Grab Sally
    Liam Ran for Sally and Picked her Up, He Assisted her Getting into the Truck.

    "Great, Now there's no Room for us!" Nicholas Yelled, Omar and Amelia went in for a Run.

    "We Should Try to get Into the Back!" Amelia Yelled, Trying to Open the Back door. Omar went to Help, as did Nicholas.

    (o) Try to Open Back Door
    Liam Ran to Help them, He saw Arrows starting to Get into the Station Wagon with the Kampman's In it.

    >>>>>>>>>Q<<<<<<<<<

    Liam kept Pulling and Pulling, Arrows started to Ram into the Truck and Station Wagon.

    [E]

    Liam and the Rest got the Back door open. Everyone Darted in. and Closed the Door.

    "We need to find something to Barracade this Door, QUICK!" Omar Yelled.

    (o) Look around Back-of-Truck
    There were Windows, Allowing Light. in it was Nicholas, Omar, Amelia and Liam himself. There was a Assortment of Random Items and Chairs, one of Which was a Big Cane.

    (o) Pick up Cane
    Liam Grabbed the Cane and used it to Barracade the Back door. Everyone then Calmed down.

    "You okay Back there!?" Mackie Yelled.

    "Yes!" Amelia Called out.

    "Good, we're...Hey, Robert, Where are you goign!?" Mackie asked.
    "We can't take this! Adam might die!" Robert yelled, there were Noises of cars driving off.
    [What's going on!?]
    [We need to drive!]
    [They just left us!!]
    [...]
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    [We need to drive!]
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    [They just left us!!] And I wanted to feed this asshole's son
    EDIT:Goddamit Ben!!! You win again.
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    [Let's drive to Arlen!]
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    [They just left us!!] And I wanted to feed this asshole's son
    EDIT:Goddamit Ben!!! You win again.

    here's the fact.

    Robert would've taken logner to abandon and actually feel remorse if i actually went with what you said.
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    It's all Oliver's fault.
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    It's all Oliver's fault.

    Oliver: * looks at you* how are you holding up, because you're a french fry! * goes in to eathim, only to end up hugging*

    That's oliver in a nutshell.
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