Walking Dead: Great Follies (Fan FIc)

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  • edited September 2013
    Hmmmmm...oh, boy.

    Clem (seriously, if we have to take care of her again in S2, ohhh boy)
    Liz (Hardly even know anything about her, or care)
    Jamila
    Adam
    Carl (STAY IN THE F**KING HOUSE)
    Sophia (Comic version's cool, TV version's an idiot)
    Noah
    Ben
    Duck
    Travis
  • edited September 2013
    Shoot Clem, let Lilly live.

    Jesus, I'd never thought I'd say that.

    Lilly will probably suicide anyways after all she's lost. Clem was about to do it in the ending too (and boy, I wish she did).
  • edited September 2013
    Carl's better than Jamila.

    She needs to pipe down then, doesn't she.
  • edited September 2013
    Oliver.

    If you could Kill Jamila or Clem.

    Which one would you kill?

    The annoying girl who keeps asking you questions?

    Or the one who constantly needs you to look after her?
  • edited September 2013
    Clem.
  • edited September 2013
    Ben Paul wrote: »
    Clem.

    There has to be someone you hate more. Who!?
  • edited September 2013
    No one.

    Now get out of here before I chop you up!

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  • edited September 2013
    Oliver....

    Fine, Olvier, Okay! I'll have less Jamila in the next few updates of the story, More Oliver!

    Seriously, Jamila was right. Oliver does need to be in a straight jacket.
  • edited September 2013
    Clem!
  • edited September 2013
    I am here today, to announce the Shortest Addition in existance.

    (?) You didn't react in anyway whatsoever
    "iiiin...staa...in......interrer.....Interrerieriergation?" Jamila asked.

    "Interrigations" Sally said.

    "Ah, That" Jamila Smiled. "And....No. I don't think anyone else is coming along. Do you want to go?" Jamila asked.

    "No" Sally answered.

    "So....What should i do now?" Jamila asked.
    [Jump off a Cliff]
    [Find a Toy and play]
    [Bother someone else]
  • edited September 2013
    [Jump Off A Cliff]

    (o) Push Jamila off the cliff.
  • edited September 2013
    Ben Paul wrote: »
    [Jump Off A Cliff]

    (o) Push Jamila off the cliff.

    I'll be honest. I added that option there just because of you, Oliver.

    And she's based of my sister.
  • edited September 2013
    "Jump of a Cliff" Liam said.

    (?) You Told Jamila to Kill herself
    "...If you didn't want me around. Just say so" Jamila said, Holding in tears. She stomped off.

    "LIAM!!" Sally yelled. "Dont.Ever, do that type of thing again. She was annoying you, But that really hurt her feelings! Apologize Immediatly!"
    [Yes]
    [Later]
    [No.]

    "Later..." Liam said.

    Sally just Coughed. "Just because someones annoying you...She's only 7, She doesn't know right or wrong."

    "I Will when i can" Liam said. Looking aside.
    Sally Looked away. "Apologize"
    [Yes]
    [Later]
    [No!]
  • edited September 2013
    [No.]

    (o) Push Sally off the cliff.
  • edited September 2013
    Goddamit ben! You're always first to comment!!!
  • edited September 2013
    Ben Paul wrote: »
    (o) Push Sally off the cliff.

    :mad:

    They're in the Middle of a Road, No Cars, no Walkers, no Cliffs. :D

    Say the Option you want too Moustache
  • edited September 2013
    (o) Cut Sally's face off and eat it.
  • edited September 2013
    [Yes]
  • edited September 2013
    "Okay" Liam said Sally Turned to Look at him

    (?) It took [2] Times for Sally to get you to Apologize
    . He walked over to Jamila. Who was Sobbing." Sorry" He said.

    "...G..Go away..." She Cried.
    [I Didn't mean it]
    [You just need to leave me alone Sometimes]
    [Okay]
    [....]

    "I Didn't mean what i said. You were just bugging me is all" Liam said.

    "....How?" Jamila asked.

    "What?"

    "Why am i so annoying?" Jamila asked standing up. Liam looked at her, She had really Been crying."Honestly,Neccesary. I can stop it, I just Want to be your friend...With Adam gone and..."
    [You don't leave me alone]
    [You're weird]
    [I just don't Like you]
    [You keep Asking me questions.]
    [I Don't hate you]
  • edited September 2013
    [I just don't like you]
  • edited September 2013
    [You keep Asking me questions.]
    FIRST!
    EDIT:well, fuck
  • edited September 2013
    Haha you failed again mustache!
  • edited September 2013
    Ben, why do you honsetly hate Jamila?
  • edited September 2013
    Because she's "gonna die anyway. We gotta think about livin'!"
  • edited September 2013
    Ben Paul wrote: »
    Haha you failed again mustache!

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  • edited September 2013
    Ben Paul wrote: »
    Because she's "gonna die anyway. We gotta think about livin'!"

    you can't be too sure.

    Don't hate a 7 year old cause she'll die.

    You know How Duck was based on someone's Son? Well Jamila was based on my sister.

    She's unknown Fate.
  • edited September 2013
    keep in mind. The Fate of all characters at the end of this will be completly unrelated to anything that's happened so far.

    Don't expect Jamila to be a Rerun of Duck. she is not. We're approaching the end of episode 2. And half a ton of short Parts. this will all come back in some way, choose seriously and carefully.


    "You Keep asking me what you should do" Liam Said. "It's kind of bothersome. Do whatever. Or, ask Your Dad"

    " Okay. Stop asking you random questions. Okay, i can do that" Jamila said... Wiping her Eyes.

    "Yeah. Do that" Liam said, Walking away from the Girl as she tried to stop Crying.

    "Hey, Liam. Got a minute?" Luciel asked.
    [Go away]
    [Sure]
    [I just talked to a Crybaby, so no]
    [....]
    "Sure" Liam said, with obvious hatred as he Walked over to her.

    (?)You Decides to Talk to a Obvious Asshole (Luciel)

    "Look, First off" Luciel Said. "No Reason to be like this. Being a Ass to everyone. Chilvalry exists you Prick. Mackie was clearly handling himself, and you Left that Girl die."
    [There was a Hoard!]
    [I Panicked]
    [Hypocrit]
    [...]
  • edited September 2013
    [Hypocrit]
    She's Lilly's sister.
  • edited September 2013
    [Hypocrite. Go kill yourself]
  • edited September 2013
    Ben Paul wrote: »
    [Hypocrite. Go kill yourself]

    For once, I agree.

    Also, I won.
  • edited September 2013
    DAMN YOU, POTATO!

    You've won this time...
  • edited September 2013
    The end of episode 2 will be very choice heavy. First time i've done this type of choice. here it comes.


    "Hypocrit" Liam spat. Luciel Raised her Eyebrow.

    (?) You called Luciel a Hypocrit
    Luciel visibly Flinched, her Glass eye was showing anger."Difference between Me and You, Is i'm a Asshole with Standards, at least I don't Downright Badmouth and Ask a 7 Year old to Commit suicide. You decided i should be left behind" Luciel Smirked" Looks like I'm Staying"

    Liam Looked at her, Disgusted. He turned around, and saw the rest of the group.
    [(o) Talk to Mackie]
    [(o) Talk to Sally]
    [(o) Talk to Wallace]
    [(o) Talk to Nicholas]
    [(o) Talk to Oliver]
  • edited September 2013
    [(o) Talk to Oliver]
  • edited September 2013
    Luciel...:mad:
  • edited September 2013
    Ben Paul wrote: »
    Luciel...:mad:

    Fuck Luciel :mad:
  • edited September 2013
    now, the final Oliver choice of the ep.

    ----

    (o) Talk to Oliver
    Liam walked over to Oliver, who was sitting idolly On top of a Pile of corpses "Hey, Bud." Olvier said. "I've got a question"

    "Really?" Liam asked.

    "Yes or no? Now, I have reason to believe someones been reading my journal" Oliver smiled. "So. Tell me about my Brother. i need to make sure it wasn't you, Name first. the Last time I heard of him after"
    [Glenn, Last saw him when you went on a School trip]
    [Vince, Last saw him when on the Newspapers]
    [Turner, Last saw him as a Walker 'cross the street]
    [David, last saw him on Thanksgiving]
  • edited September 2013
    [Turner, Last saw him as a Walker 'cross the street]
    I have no idead what I'm doing.
  • edited September 2013
    [Turner, Last saw him as a Walker 'cross the street]
    I have no idead what I'm doing.

    you're talking to Oliver. there, it all makes sense now.
  • edited September 2013
    you're talking to Oliver. there, it all makes sense now.

    Thanks, it really makes sense now.
  • edited September 2013
    Thanks, it all makes sense now.

    also, there was a 400 days easter egg there.
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