Do ANY of you actually know what a plot hole is?

Plot hole: A gap or an illogical inconsistency in a story that creates a paradox that can't be fixed with any explanation. Example:

- The eagles in Lord Of The Rings that could have saved Frodo and Sam so much time and misery by just flying them to Mordor in the beginning of the first movie

The plot in this episode is about Clementine and her group being brought to Carver's camp and later trying to escape.

All of you claiming these so called plot holes in In Harm's Way really don't get it. Unless a character's backstory is relevant to the plot, it doesn't matter if it's brought up or not. Alvin killed George when he escaped Carver's community, and Carver retaliated by beating him to a pulp. What more do you want to know? How does Alvin's history with this George affect the story in any way?

And Nick and his Mom? Who cares? He already had his moment in All That Remains anyways, so why does it matter if it's brought up or not in this episode? It's a sad backstory but that's all it is. If Carver doesn't bring it up, then so what? It has nothing to do with the plot at all.

And the 400 Days characters? I've said this before, and I'll say it again. Excluding Bonnie, Clementine doesn't know these people and saw them as a threat, so it makes sense for her to not just walk up and talk to them about their lives. And even if she could, what did you expect them to say? How they got to Carver's place? We already know that. Or the people who played 400 Days do.

Seriously guys, if you're gonna call out the writers for making stupid mistakes and errors, at least know what you're talking about first.
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  • Yeah, they're not plot holes like everyone is saying, they are just not giving us specific details.
  • edited May 2014
    Agree with you 100% I really liked the episode and didn't find any plot holes either. You're reasoning is fantastic!
  • edited May 2014
    Nah Nicks mom magical disappearance is still a loop hole. I went full retard with this i know you can flame me :(
  • How?

    Nah Nicks mom magical disappearance is still a loop hole. I went full retard with this i know you can flame me :(

  • No it's not. He didn't want to talk about it. His mom got bit by a walker. And seeing how long Luke and Nick have known each other, it was probably near the beginning of the apocalypse before the group went to Carver's camp. Explaining why no one know's Nick's mom from there except Luke (and Pete)

    Nah Nicks mom magical disappearance is still a loop hole. I went full retard with this i know you can flame me :(

  • She didn't disappear, she died. Before Season 2 began.

    Nah Nicks mom magical disappearance is still a loop hole. I went full retard with this i know you can flame me :(

  • How is it a magical disappearance? It said Nick had to kill his mom

    Nah Nicks mom magical disappearance is still a loop hole. I went full retard with this i know you can flame me :(

  • edited May 2014
    My apologies to everyone i went full retard I'll make sure it never happens again.

    How?

  • Thank you Tyler.
  • How do you know she was with them at Carver's community?

    My apologies to everyone i went full retard I'll make sure it never happens again.

  • You don't know how to read.

    My apologies to everyone i went full retard I'll make sure it never happens again.

  • No need to thank me. But I appreciate it :)
    Deceptio posted: »

    Thank you Tyler.

  • SaltLick305SaltLick305 Banned
    edited May 2014
    Most people are just angry they didn't get what they wanted so they go ahead and repeat what the rest of them are saying. Seriously, don't take it personal. A lot of fans have no clue what they're saying whatsoever.

    Hehehe, can't wait for a fanboy to get the jump on me. Maybe one of those who wants the episodes releasing every two weeks just so he can complain about how rushed it feels. Gotta love fanbases.
  • Thank you Tyler! Probably the only person with actual writing/story knowledge.
  • Not exactly taking it personal. I'm just trying to show people what an ACTUAL plot hole is.

    But yeah, I feel ya. You probably might not want a fanboy getting to you. When they argue with you, they're so stubborn and intent that they're right. It's just not worth wasting your time arguing with them.
    SaltLick305 posted: »

    Most people are just angry they didn't get what they wanted so they go ahead and repeat what the rest of them are saying. Seriously, don't t

  • Oh stop it, you're making me blush!

    But seriously, thanks.
    JonGon posted: »

    Thank you Tyler! Probably the only person with actual writing/story knowledge.

  • There was never a mention she was at Carver's community. It's more likely she was bit way before because no one knows her there or asks about her.

    My apologies to everyone i went full retard I'll make sure it never happens again.

  • edited May 2014
    I agree. And some of the "plot holes" people are talking about are completely opinionated, like asking why a character did a certain thing even though not all people think the same way.
  • edited May 2014
    Its official I went full retard i wont go full retard all of you guys are right i went and re did that conversation with nick and at no point did they say that it happened Recently you guys have all the right to flame me.

    How do you know she was with them at Carver's community?

  • You're Completely right :D
    WhatTheDuck posted: »

    You don't know how to read.

  • Because we have some of the worst fans who don't appreciate Telltale.
  • Agree, thank you Tyler :)
    Also when is the next part of the 16 month fan-fiction release?
  • Saltlick, you so sassy :3
    SaltLick305 posted: »

    Most people are just angry they didn't get what they wanted so they go ahead and repeat what the rest of them are saying. Seriously, don't t

  • I know right! I'm like a fucking mind reader in this bitch.

    You're Completely right :D

  • Yeah. What if Nick's mom wasn't at Carver's community. As they were escaping they passed by Nick's mom's house and found her there.Carver wouldn't know her.
    Omid posted: »

    There was never a mention she was at Carver's community. It's more likely she was bit way before because no one knows her there or asks about her.

  • You're probably gonna hate me for this, but when we can use bullet points and post pictures again. I know, I can just post the story right now, but I'm a real stickler when it comes to proper reading format.

    But I promise you won't be disappointed. I have no intention of stopping now.
    iHeartTWD posted: »

    Agree, thank you Tyler :) Also when is the next part of the 16 month fan-fiction release?

  • SaltLick305SaltLick305 Banned
    edited May 2014
    Why thank you my friend.

    I'm just letting everyone know how I feel. I couldn't care less if people like or not.

    By the way, it's very nice to meet you.
    That1Guy posted: »

    Saltlick, you so sassy :3

  • "you guys arent really explaining anything anyways just saying that its not a loop hole in the story."

    You clearly didn't read my post, did you?

    When Luke and Nick tells Clementine about what happened to Nick's mom? Are you sure about that? Are you SURE he said recently?

    Its official I went full retard i wont go full retard all of you guys are right i went and re did that conversation with nick and at no point did they say that it happened Recently you guys have all the right to flame me.

  • That's Cool.
    WhatTheDuck posted: »

    I know right! I'm like a fucking mind reader in this bitch.

  • Don't worry about it. Just, like I said to a lot of people, think about what you say before you say it.

    Its official I went full retard i wont go full retard all of you guys are right i went and re did that conversation with nick and at no point did they say that it happened Recently you guys have all the right to flame me.

  • Your right i went full retard my bad.

    "you guys arent really explaining anything anyways just saying that its not a loop hole in the story." You clearly didn't read my post,

  • Yeah,, same to you! I've been mostly just watching the forum recently and not replying, so that's probably why we've never met haha
    SaltLick305 posted: »

    Why thank you my friend. I'm just letting everyone know how I feel. I couldn't care less if people like or not. By the way, it's very nice to meet you.

  • Oh no don't worry I don't hate you XD
    I understand, can't wait till the next chapter comes out :)

    You're probably gonna hate me for this, but when we can use bullet points and post pictures again. I know, I can just post the story right n

  • I'm not as active as I once was due to work and stuff but whenever you see me around don't think twice before saying Hello.

    Don't worry, I'm not always this rebellious.
    That1Guy posted: »

    Yeah,, same to you! I've been mostly just watching the forum recently and not replying, so that's probably why we've never met haha

  • edited May 2014
    Excuse me for incorrectly using the term "plot hole", but none of these points change.

    "Alvin killed George when he escaped Carver's community,"

    When was this confirmed? I don't remember hearing anything like this in the episode. Was I supposed to get that initially?

    Bonnie also said Carver wasn't always like this, yet I don't recall an explanation on what he was before and what changed him - welp, he's dead now, so it doesn't really matter.

    Also, the river massacre and Pete's head shot were ignored. River Massacre for two episodes now and Pete for one, unless we assume it was Carver, but there's a problem: we have to assume what happens, and you should make it clear in your story. When I write my stories, the reader shouldn't have to assume what happens because there is no clear explanation unless it is used as a plot device. I may just be an amateur writer, but I think I wont care who shot Pete in the head all the way in Episode Five, because then I lost interest in finding out who did it. Swept under the rug.

    "It's a sad backstory but that's all it is"

    No, it's not: it's part of the universe, it's part of the world created. In the game, this isn't some typed up bio for Nick: this actually happened to him and those around him. It was an experience, but again, it wasn't explained to it's entirety: we know what happened to her, we know how it happened, but we don't know WHEN it happened. Did it happen before Carver's Community or after Luke's Escape? That is what is important: when it happened. Since that information wasn't clear, we have to ASSUME again! Assumptions are for theories and predictions, not in game experiences.

    I hate it when things are not explained to their entirety when there are opportunities to do so.
  • dojo32161dojo32161 Moderator
    edited May 2014
    If you give yourself up in episode two, when Carver grabs Alvin you'll actually hear Carver confront Alvin about murdering George. As opposed to if you went with Kenny then you can't hear Carver talking to Alvin.

    Excuse me for incorrectly using the term "plot hole", but none of these points change. "Alvin killed George when he escaped Carver's co

  • Great. Another contrarian who likes to put himself up on a pedestal to talk down to the rest of the fanbase he finds so beneath him.

    IN HARM'S WAY had its strengths, but it also had its flaws, and as consumers we're entitled to comment on them. No matter how you want to justify it, the lazy use of most of the 400 DAYS characters was very disappointing in the context of the story. Whether or not they're "plot holes" is a whole other topic, but this kind of dismissive attitude doesn't help matters.
  • Hey, I'm not complaining. There's nothing more entertaining than sassiness :3
    SaltLick305 posted: »

    I'm not as active as I once was due to work and stuff but whenever you see me around don't think twice before saying Hello. Don't worry, I'm not always this rebellious.

  • I'll admit, I'm not sure why I said Alvin killed George during the groups escape.

    Why exactly is it SO important for us to know when Nick lost his mom? Her death adds relevance to his character but not to the overall story.

    Excuse me for incorrectly using the term "plot hole", but none of these points change. "Alvin killed George when he escaped Carver's co

  • That doesn't tell me anything. That tells me that Alvin murdered someone named George: not when, how, why, or where.
    dojo32161 posted: »

    If you give yourself up in episode two, when Carver grabs Alvin you'll actually hear Carver confront Alvin about murdering George. As opposed to if you went with Kenny then you can't hear Carver talking to Alvin.

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